ZINDAGI:The FF about LIFE-Part 15 on pg 54!!!!!!!! - Page 4

Originally posted by: Parth Garewal

sorry parth but my hindi sucks! dont know how to read n speak but i can understand it...but i still tried reading ur FF...good thing i didnt give up...its okay if its in hindi but make sure IMP parts are in eng... or alteast u translate them😳😆

about ur FF: wow..i am speechless...loved the meeting of prem and heer...love it taht prem cares about heer..lol...

ur FF writing style is just like mine..i tried writing one but then figured its not my thing so i gave up😆...but YOU keep up the good work!👏

yummyyyyyyy....pani puri..my fav..love it! especially mirchi ones are soooo good.already having water in my mouth..😆

cant wait till next part..wonder how their another meeting will be😍 i m already dreaming about it😆 continue soon...dont take too long okay...

bye and loved ur FF...😛

~~ Janki~~

Originally posted by: pm rocks

sure sis..(hope u dont mind me calling u sis😊) for u and my other sisters i ll try to write in english..😉 but there r sum dialogues which are meant to be in hindi only and which has its own importance when they r in hindi..i cant translate them😕 bcoz it might loose their effect on the readers.. but i ll translate the rest so i ll translate every thing else but except sum dialogues..😳so i hope u dont mind sum or important dialogues in Hindi 😳..and well thanku so much that u told me ur prob now onwards i ll try to write them in English... now u r happy na..😊..and thanku so much for ur compliment..👏👏

Parth😊

Originally posted by: mansi gandhi

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Parth G simply gr8 the premeer first milan my god i actually visualize the scene prem running with the water bottle and heer with that hot mirchi and going uhhhhh........... aahhh............ i m adding something with tears due to mirchi in his eyes and she watches prem coming toward her but she sees prem not clearly but dhoondhla face due to tears in her eyes
it is better than even the original premeer first milan scene i simply loved it

next part ke liye intazaar kar rahe hai 😍

Originally posted by: Meher 87

Weldone bro its was relly veryyyyyyyyyy NICE.
I LOVED it. 😳 😳 😳
Specially the scene when PREM came to bank & HEER"s eyes were locked on him hmmmmm toooo GOOD. 😛.
2nd scene i liked when HEER was having PANI PURI & PREM'S eyes also locked on her tooo GOOD Master Mind Guy 😆 😆 😆.
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Waitng for ur next UD ................
MEHER 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: Alina Zaidi

OMG!!!!!!its awesome bhai 👏 👏 👏
u rocks!!!really bhai once again i m saying that plz join Balaji!!!i m fed up of them atleast bhai aap ne kuch different story toh li!!!
ur story is awesome 👏 👏
n the characters which u have chosen are good 2!!! 👏 👏
i just love the main lead n villain as well!!!

waiting for the next part!!!

Alina

Thanks aloottt guys for appreciating me.. u all r ttoooooo gud.. thanks a lot…I gr8ful to all of u to appreciate me…

Promo for d 2nd part….

Prem is standing at his room's window… as its monsoon he sees a beautiful girl dancing in the rain and is rele amazed wid her beauty…and then he looks deeply and realize that it's the same girl... wid whom he met at pani puri shop..d none other than heer…and he rele stares at her and heer sees this and feels shy..

Hope u enjoy the new promo... do reply me…and don't forget to comment ok…😃 plz I ll be waiting…

IMPORTANT NEWS...

i have to say sorry to u all that i gave a wrong info that my villain's name is ARNAV...no his name is TAPISH.. actually it waz another character ...and i accidentally wrote arnav instead of TAPISH so now u all noe that manoj bohra's name in my ff is TAPISH not arnav..sorry for misleading u but i didnt did purposely..😳hope u all understand..😃 i ll change it in character sketch too...😊

Parth…