ZINDAGI:The FF about LIFE-Part 15 on pg 54!!!!!!!! - Page 6

Parth Garewal wrote:

Prem:ya aaj jab mai bank gaya tha to ek ladki dekhi…she waz wearing a salwaar kameez… wo itni sunder thi ki meri aankhein us par hi tik gayi thi… wo pani puri kha rahi thi.. par itni pyaari lag rahi thi ki mai kya bataun…

aaj tak maine kai ladkiyaan dekhi...kissi ki aankhein sunder hain, kisi ki face sunder hain, kisi ke hath sunder hain par wo ek aisi thi jiski har chiz sunder thi… aankhon me aisi chamak thi jo duniya roshan kar de… smile aisi ki dead body me bhi jaan daal de… aur haath aise ki unhe thaam kar sari duniya ghum lu…

wow parth phaiya kya dialogues hai!!!! 👏 👏 i really liked this part!!!! i wish prem real mein yeh dialogues bolta!!!!

over all your FF was really good!!awesome work bhaiyu!!!!👏 👏 i really loved the rain scene n the conversation between 2 bro!!!!Keep up the Good Work Bhai!!!! 👏 👏

Originally posted by: pm rocks

i just finished reading second part...

hahah...first thing it was really funny...cuz in the show heer is siddhi sadi ladki who doesnt dance and here in ur ff she was dancing in rain...and bhai ho to preet jasa...he knows everything..lol n the dialouges in hindi when prem was saying how he meet heer to preet...wow..kya dialouge the...bohot ache thi👏

another thing i found funny was the shiv mandir..do they really wear yellow dresses? 😕 just loved it the way prem said that is there a mandir for yellow dresses.. 😆

i am lovin' ur ff bro..its really funny n loved the rain part..aww prem was shy...that was really cute tho...

continue soon next friday will be waiting..dont take too long bro..keep up the good work 👏

i rele dont noe but i read sumwhere that yellow dress is shiv bhagwaan's favr8 so ppl usually wear yellow while going to shiv mandir.. sorry if i m wrong..😃and who told u that boys didnt feel shy.😳.ya they feel shyness too..i noe its weird but its d truth.. 😆😃thanks for d lovely reply...hope u ll like the next part too...😳

Originally posted by: nandini90

wow...prem bhayyu blsuhing huh??.....thts sooo cute of him......lols...i loved this parth bhayyu....awesome.......wow...cant wait for next friday now.......gosh........loved it totally....ur to gud at it......why did yu hide ur talent for soo long??...huh??....i shud hav asked yu t start one looong b4 i suppose.....

luv nans

thanks allooootttt for ur encouraging words sis.. what do i say for ur taarif u r too gud in appreciating any1..😃.

Originally posted by: Alina Zaidi

Parth Garewal wrote:

wow parth phaiya kya dialogues hai!!!! 👏 👏 i really liked this part!!!! i wish prem real mein yeh dialogues bolta!!!!

over all your FF was really good!!awesome work bhaiyu!!!!👏 👏 i really loved the rain scene n the conversation between 2 bro!!!!Keep up the Good Work Bhai!!!! 👏 👏

thanks alina.. and i want to tell u that ye dialogues likhne me mujhe 1 hour laga gaya tha.. and i rele liked ur reply too.. thanks alllloooootttt... u alll are tooo gud in appreciating..thanks allooottt my all sisters....and brothers.....


PARTH

Originally posted by: Meher 87

yeah parth bro it was really v.amazing part hope next part will be alsoo amazing hhmmmmmmm good job keep it up if u don't want to do job in ekta's industry then u should go another industry for become a writer u r fantastic u can easily get the job and no one tell to u that u r bad if any one tell to u that then i will kill him. 😆 .u r amazing u roxxx bro i loved each n every part of ur ff i will be waiting for ur next UD or FF.till then byee 👏 ohhh i forgot to do clap for u 😃 .u deserved that.till then byee n keep it up. 😃 😃

thanks sis.. i m tooo gr8ful to u that u clapped for me😃..thanks alot..and i promise i ll never disappoint u..never ever.. and plz dont kill any1 who tells me my mistakes after all i need to improve too...and how ll i improve if i dont noe my faults...😉😃
thanks for standing up for me..u r very sweet..

ur bro..
PARTH

Promo 4 3^rd part…

Prem sees heer in mandir and their 1^st talk happens…and heer's dupatta flies on prem's face…

Heer needs to work as she needs money to live so she goes to an office for d search of job and its prem's office... Prem sees her and she gets d job too but she refuses to work...because…read 3^rd part and find out…on Friday…😉

Thanks aaaallooootttt for ur replies… thanku... ur replies force me to post my part updation as soon as possible…😉🤗

umnmmmmmmmmmm why she refuses to work will be waiting to red
thx parth bro foe the promo

hey thanks alot for the promo bhai!!
i can't wait to see their first talk!!
n i know why she rejected that job!! 😉
waiting for the update!!

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

umnmmmmmmmmmm why she refuses to work will be waiting to red
thx parth bro foe the promo

i m glad that u ll be waiting..and read and find out on friday....😉and i m tooooo thankful to you that u replied me..😃

Originally posted by: Alina Zaidi

hey thanks alot for the promo bhai!!
i can't wait to see their first talk!!
n i know why she rejected that job!! 😉
waiting for the update!!

hey sis.. u dont have to say thanku to me for d promo.. and hope u ll like their first talk..and now i want to noe that what u have guessed..so plz pm me what u have guessed...i ll wait too...😉😉😃

thanku sooooo much guys for ur repies and my request to others...

plz dont be kanjus to reply me yaar..plz i m still waiting...😛

PARTH😊

bhaiyya muahh muahh...marr dala allah aaapke ff ne maar dala..wow it's too good ..too good..omg u write so well bhaiyya waise wen u are my elder bro u need to be perfect after all u are my bhaiyya plz see am pressurising my bhaiyya..hehe jokes apart ...it's fab bahiiyaa.need to take some tips frm u.....

and bhaiiyyaa keep writing early..looking forward for the next part..write jaldi jaldi.

u're lil sis is waiting..

and and am sowiiee i replied late...u noe na i was not here that's why..lotherwise aisa ho sakta hai ki choti behna reply na karti.....

okie now enuf of my bak bak..u must have got bored..but u noe na amm not kanjoos in replyimng am very dildaaar..heh..

bhaiyya keep writing fabuously....

may god bless u with wisdom and happiness..ameen..

luv atop

lovely, awsome waiting for 3rd part
luv iqra