nihaal enters n stop d mariage..updt on4

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Rahela

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

wow very realistic please continue

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Parth Garewal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

hey thanks alot guys its so nice of u to reply me such gud compliments.. u noe i waz flying on high sky while reading ur replies.. they are very encouraging ... thanks allot meri sari beheno aur bhaiyon ko jinhone mujhe itne sare compliments diye..thankuuuuu soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much guys🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

so here is next part...

continued from 1st part..page 1....

lallu: nihaal maine apne dost ko jo wada kiya hai wo wada nibhane se mujhe koi nahi rok sakta prem ki shadi mere dost ke beti se hi hogi..
nihaal: to aap unse hi apni betiyon ki shadi karayiye na..meri behen ki zindagi kyun kharab kar reh ho..

(dj lost her temper when he was abt to say heer's name then she slaps nihaal..)

dj: apne bado se aise baat karte hain nihaal.. aur hum jo kar rahe hain achhe ke liye kar rahe hain samjhe aur tum isme ek lafz(word) aur nahi bologe..
nihaal: but ma wo mai..
dj:basbahut sun liya maine aur bahut bol liya tune ab ek word aur nahi bardasht karungi mai..

lallu:dj ye shadi hogi kyunki maine apne dost ko VACHAN diya tha..
nihaal: vachan??? ya rite vachan..
lallu:kyun vachan se kya prob hai tumhe..

(heer listens all this and finally decides to say..)

heer:kaun se vachan ki baat kar rahe hain aap..wo vachan jo aap canada jake bhul gaye the..
lallu:kya..
heer:haan usi tute hue vachan ki baat kar rahe hain na aap..jo aapne mere bauji ko mere bachpan me diya tha ki aap meri shadi prem se karwange..
lallu:kya tumhari shadi..????????
heer:haan meri shadi HEER MANN ki shadi PREM JUNEJA se..
lallu:tum ye sab kaise janti ho aur ye kya bak rahi ho..
heer:mai bak nahi rahi hu sach keh rahi hu..mai hi heer mann hu balraj maan ki beti..

(dj sees all this and gets and idea..)

DJ (to lallu): praji ye na is ladki ki chaal hai ye bhi shayad prem se pyaar karti hai aur use paane ke liye ye sab jhooth bol rahi hai..
lallu:par isse balraj aur heer ki shadi ke baare me kaise pata hai???

heer:wo aise ki mai hi heer hu..
dj: iski baat mat maniye praji ye apna naam heer hone ka fayada utha rahi hai.. aur rahi iske balraj praji ke baare me janne ki..to ye baat to poore ludhiyana me famous thi ki heer ki shadi prem se karne ka aapne balraj praji ko vachan diya hai.. shayad yahi jaan ke ye ye sab khel khel rahi hai..
lallu:par ruko dj..(to heer) kya tumhare paas koi sabut hai heer hone ka..
heer:haan hai na.. wo shadi ka card jo aap logo ne print karwaya tha wo aaj bhi mere paas hai..

Dj (thinks): oh god aaj ye bhigi billi sherni kaise ban gayi.. ye to aaj tak chup thi phir aaj apna muh kyun khol diya isne..?????
lallu:(to heer) lao wo card lao..
heer:haan mai abhi lati hu..

(heer brings it)

heer: ye lijiye yahi hai na wo card..(to dj) shayad ye card sirf aapke(lallu) aur mere bauji ke paas hi ho sakta hai kyunki us samay iske sirf do hi print karwaye the..
lallu:haan ye to wahi hai..
heer:mil gaya mera sabut..

dj: abhi kaise tu ek card dikhayegi aur hum kya teri shadi prem se kara denge.. nahi aisa nahi hoga aur koi sabut to nahi hai na..
heer:chachi ye aap aisa kyun kar rahi ho..
lallu:dj thik keh rahi hai.. aur koi sabut hai..

(nihaal thinks of giving the bag to lallu now..)
heer:aur koi sabut??? (she thinks..)
dj: aur koi sabut to nahi hai na.. to tu heer kaise hui..

nihaal shouts: aur sabut hai.. mere paas hain..
dj: (thinks)ab ye kya karega..
nihaal: aur sabut chahiye na aapko uncle to sabut is bag me hai..

(lallu sees everything and understands that heer is real heer and mm is not gud..)

nihaal: kyun uncle ab aap chup kyun ho gaye..
lallu:nihaal ye bag kaha se mila tumhe..
nihaal: wo mujhe ye............................ (Nihaal tells everything that how does BT's aciident occurs and they give this to give their daighters)
lallu:itna bada DHOKA..
nihaal: haan aur mujhe sharm aa rahi hai ki ye dhoka meri ma ne kiya hai..chhi...
lallu:kyun dj ye sab kya hai..(angrily)

dj: wo bhai sab wo...wo...
Lallu: wo.. wo.. kya hai sach sach batao itna bada dhoka kyun kiya tumne..
DJ: (she gets scared and speaks out every thing)wo taki meri beti ki shadi is bade ghar me ho sake..
lallu: sirf isliye ki ash ki shadi ameer ghar me ho tumne heer ki zindagi barbaad karne ki koshish ki..
dj: wo bhai sab wo..
lallu: BAS AB SA DJ.. ab tum kuch nahi bologi.. BAS,,,(to himself) arre mai is aurat(dj) ke behkawe me aake apne bete ki shadi uski marzi ke khilaf kar raha tha.. he bhagwaan kitna anarth karne ja raha tha mai..(to prem) beta mujhe maaf kar de maine tere pe bahut zulm kiye tujhe samajh nahi paya mai..
PREM: bauji do zindagiyan(perm n heer's) barbaad hone se bach gayi.. soch lijiye aapko maafi mil gayi..
Lallu: beta tu nahi jaanta ye aurat(dj) jab tak yahan rahe gi kuch na kuch hota hi rahe ga mai ise abhi police ke hawale kar deta hu..

gaya3: uski zarurat nahi hai maine already police ko phone kar diya hai..
lallu: gaya3 tum prem ki sauteli ma hoke bhi prem ke dil ko kaitne achhe se samajh li par mai uska saga baap hoke bhi nahi samajh paya.. kitna andha tha mai jo apne bete ke ankho me heer ke liye pyaar nahi dekh paya..(ya u were a bloody blind..) par mujhe khushi hai ki ab ye sachhai sabke samne aa gayi aur (to heer) beta ab mai apna vaada zarur nibhaunga.. mai tumhari shadi prem se karaunga..

(then poloce enters..)

COP:mrs. gaya3 juneja ne hume phone kiya tha kya wo yahin rehetin hain?
lallu:ya inspector wo yahin rehtin hai aur aap isko arrest kar lijiye (ponting finger on dj's side)
dj: ye mat samajhna tumne mujhe hara diya heer.. mai wapas aaungi tumhe barbaad karne ke liye..

(listening this prem stands infront of heer and says in a highly protective manner)

Prem: achha aisi baat hai to HUM sab tumara wait karenge aur heer ko chhune se pehle tumhe mujhse guzarna hoga..

(heer feels as she is i protective hands now..then lallu stands for prem)

lallu: aur prem tak pahunchne se pehle tumhe mujhe maarna hoga..
nihaal: mai aap logo se apni mum ki taraf se maafi mangta hu..
lallu:nahi bete isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai balki tumne to hume ek bahut bada gunaah karne se rok diya..
prem: haan nihaal agar aaj tum nahi aaye hote to mujhe mera pyaar nahi milta..thanks
nihaal: arre sir aap mujhe thanks kyun bol rahe hain..aaj mai jo bhi hu wo aapke wajah se hi to hu..
lallu:ab yahi khade rahoge ya shadi bhi karoge..
Prem: nahi bauji mai ye shadi nahi karunga..
lallu: par prem kyun nahi..
prem: bauji mai ye shadi kaise karun jab is shadi me mera bhai preet nai hai..
lallu: haan maine uska dil bhi bahut dukhaya hai mai usse leke aata hu..shayad wo bhi mujhe maaf karde..
preet:aapko kahin jaane ki zarurat nahi hai dad preet aa gaya hai..
lallu: preet mujhe maaf karde re.. tu humesha apne pb ko samajhta aaya hai par kya aaj tu apne is baap ko maaf karega..
preet: dad aapko to mai zindagi bhar maaf nahi karunga.. par apne eid ke chaand se kaun naraaz reh sakta hai bhala..
lallu: eid ke chaand ke bachhe ruk jaa..

(and they again start their cat n mouse fight..and prem stops them)

prem: now stop it u 2.. aaj meri shadi hai aaj to mat lado..
gaya3: aise kaise shadi ho jaye gi dulhan to ready hi nahi hai..mai abhi ise dulhan bana ke lati hu..

(every1 waz waiting.. and finally heer came as dulhan and prem's eyes were locked on her.. preet says to him..)

preet:bhai aise mat dekho warna aankhein niche tapak jayeingi..
prem:preet tu bhi na..(he blushes..)

(then shadi happens.. warmala tym.. when heer tries to put mala on prem preet says)
preet:bhai jhukna mat aaj jhukoge to zindagi bhar jhukna padega..
prem: heer ke aage to mai waise bhi har waqt jhukne ko taiyar hu..(and he puts his head down and heer puts d mala..)
then pandit says to take pheras.. and they took it .. while they were taking it there waz a rain of flowers..and they took every1's aashirwaad too..

how waz it if it waz bore do lemme noe.. and plz dont hesitate in telling me my mistakes..i ll wait for ur comments..

reply me if u want more..😉

PARTH

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Parth Garewal

@Parth Garewal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: cuteprincess03
hey parth...bro..it ws tooooooooooooooooooo gud 😊 ,n atop ur rite..ye janab to sachh me chupe rustam hai..waise itna achaa likhna kaha se sikha bhai??...i m jst waitin 4 da nex part... 😊 ...continueee...plzzzz.... 😊

thanks for d lovely compliment sis..thanku soooooooooo much..it rele incouraged me to write more..🤗

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Parth Garewal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Alina Zaidi
Hey parth bhaiya its really superb!!! 👏 👏
u r 2 good at it 👏 👏
plz plz bhaiya jaldi continue karo i cant wait more for it!!!!

hey alina i updated it and waiting for ur replies..😃
ur bro..🤗
PARTH

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Parth Garewal

@Parth Garewal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Alina Zaidi
Hey parth bhaiya its really superb!!! 👏 👏
u r 2 good at it 👏 👏
plz plz bhaiya jaldi continue karo i cant wait more for it!!!!

hey alina i updated it and waiting for ur replies..😃
ur bro..🤗
PARTH

Originally posted by: nandini90
wow parth bhaayi....tht was mindblowing...actually very much diff....i loved the way yu took nihaal on dj's side...loved it yaar......gosh.....plsssssss cont asap...i just cant wait....for ur next updt and monday...lols......

luv nans

thanks nans.. thanks allllloooootttttt for ur compliment i rele feeled like in flying high while reading ur reply thanks allot..🤗

Parth

Originally posted by: Faima_PremHeer
wow very realistic please continue

thanks...see i updated it..😉

Originally posted by: shradhu
yezz. plz continue ur nice n lovley story..... 👏 😆

thanks shradhu.. thanks allott....😊

Originally posted by: ashmii
awwwwwwww yhh do continue its wikkkidddddddd
😃

thanks yaar.. its awsum to read such gud replies thanks..
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and i want to thanks alll of them who replied me.. thanku alllooooottt from the bottom of my heart....thanks..a BIG hug to alll of u...
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Parth Garewal

@Parth Garewal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

sorry double post..😃

Edited by Parth Garewal - 17 years ago

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Meher

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

woww great story keep it up
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send we want more UD send its great m waiting ohkkk 😃

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Parth Garewal

@Parth Garewal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Meher 87
woww great story keep it up
👏

send we want more UD send its great m waiting ohkkk 😃

thanks allllllllllloooooooooooootttttttt meher for clapping for me .. thanks once again😃

Edited by Parth Garewal - 17 years ago

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tanya

@tanyaaaa26

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

very nice parth bhai behane intezaar karengi jaldi karna ab mujhe dekhna hai ki shaadi ke baad prem ka behavior kais rehta hai 😆 😆

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Nandini

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Posted: 17 years ago

#30

wow...wow...wow..wow..wow...aur kya kahoon main??!!!.....bhaayi...aapne aaj....lols....i was visualising each and every scene bhaayi....and trust me....it was soo real......am totally out of words......gosh......kya likha hai aapne.....huh?!!....how cum u havnt started ur ff??!!.....yu know wat.....aap iss forum mein mere liye sabse spl ho....coz ur the only boy in here......and u r soo much........i love yu bhaayi.....love yu loads........muuuuaaahhhhhh....i read ur predicition some 5 times....and stil.....aaaahh..........am out of words.....

luv nans

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