nihaal enters n stop d mariage..updt on4

hey guys i just read the posts in which many of my frndz have written their predictions.. here is mine.. i just tried to write sumthing which can happen in mondays epi.. plz read and comment plz i ll be waiting..

nihaal found the truth that heer is real heer..(balrajs daughter)so he makes a plan.. he decides to be ash's bro instead of taking the side of premeer's love..

(remember.. dj noes nihaal as its wriiten in chahracter sketch that he is ash's bro..)
SCENE: Prem-ASH are standing at the mandap to take the pheras..Nihaal enters..

Nihaal: RUK JAO..(he shouts)
DJ: (thinks) nihaal yahan kya kar ra hai..ye yahan kaise aa gaya..
Nihaal: ye shadi nahi ho sakti..
(every1 is shocked)
DJ:kyun nahi ho sakti beta..
Nihaal: ma ye shadi nahi hogi kyunki prem heer se pyaar karta hai..
DJ:nihaal ab ye sab ka waqt nahi hai.. prem ki shadi ash se hi hogi..
Nihaal: thik hai ek shart pe..
DJ:kaisi shart beta..
Nihaal: heer ko bulaiye..
DJ: kyun heer ko kyun.
Nihaal: plz heer ko bulaiye..
(heer cums)
DJ:ab bolo..
Nihaal: (to prem) prem dekho heer ko..

(prem sees heer and has tears in his eyes..)
DJ:ye kya dekhna-dikhaana laga rakha hai beta..
Nihaal: ma plz..(to prem..) ab tum jis pyaar bhari aankho se heer ko dekh rahe ho kya ash ko bhi usi tarah pyaar se dekh sakte ho..
DJ:ye kya paagalpan hai..
Nihaal: ma chup ho jao..
DJ:par..

now lallu says:.. dj wo jo kar ra hai use karne do..
Nihaal: haan to prem kya tum ash ko usi nigahon se dekh sakte ho..bolo dekh paoge kabhi..
PREM: (he turns his face helplessly..)
Nihaal: (to lallu)dekha.. jab prem ash ko pyaar se DEKH nahi sakta to wo meri behen ko khush kaise rakhega..
DJ:mujhe yakin hai ash prem ke sath khush rahegi..
Nihaal: ma khush REHNE aur khush RAKHNE me zameen asmaan ka antar hota hai..
DJ:par beta..
Nihaal: ma plz meri baat ab tak khatam nahi hui..
DJ:ab kya bacha hai..
Nihaal: ma plz tum mujhe bolne dogi.(he shouts at her)
DJ:ok kaho..
Nihaal: (to prem) achha prem tum apne bauji ke kahe mutabik ash se shadi to kar loge, shayd use apne dil me bhi jagah de do ge.. par kya tum ash ke liye ro sakte ho jaise tum heer ke liye ro rahe ho..
lallu:nihaal bas karo..
Nihaal: kyun uncle sachhai bahut kadwi lag rahi hai na..aap to sirf sun rahe ho par prem aur heer to feel kar rahe hain.. sochiye unka kya haal hoga..

hey it waz just one part.. i noe i m not good writer but if u want more then plz reply me..i will b waiting eagerly for them...

PARTH----------------------------

haila no1 liked it.. 😕 😕 😕 sorry if i unwillingly wasted ur tym 🤢

hmm i didnt knw nihaal waz DJ's son!!! oooo r u sure???
n i dont think DJ would react soo peacefully!...
but nicely written... 😊

Originally posted by: kyphfanz

hmm i didnt knw nihaal waz DJ's son!!! oooo r u sure???
n i dont think DJ would react soo peacefully!...
but nicely written... 😊

ya i m sure bcoz its written in chahracter sketch..😕😕well thanks for the compliment.. and dj reacted peacefully bcoz nihaal is her son.. she reacts hard only wid heer and meher..😕😕😕

great continuee its toooo ggooooooddddddd keep it up!!!!its for u parth 👏 plzzz update karooooooooo im waiting for ur UD 😊 😉

Originally posted by: Meher 87

great continuee its toooo ggooooooddddddd keep it up!!!!its for u parth 👏 plzzz update karooooooooo im waiting for ur UD 😊 😉

thank u soooooooooo much for clapping for me.. and meher i m going to update it soon

yes parth plsdssss update karo jaldi 😭 😊

great start
continue soon
👏

ARE nahi mere cutie pie bro..u didn't waste anyone's time...it was damn good bro...hmmmmmmmmm u r very chuppa rustam...never knew that u write so good bro..behna ko to bata dete...

bro it was very nice..plz continue soon....will be waiting for u're part ...

accha ab jaldi muskarao and write the next part...
and bro rmber never ever feel dejected in your life...
promise me........

luv atop

Originally posted by: atop

ARE nahi mere cutie pie bro..u didn't waste anyone's time...it was damn good bro...hmmmmmmmmm u r very chuppa rustam...never knew that u write so good bro..behna ko to bata dete...

bro it was very nice..plz continue soon....will be waiting for u're part ...

accha ab jaldi muskarao and write the next part...
and bro rmber never ever feel dejected in your life...
promise me........

luv atop

i promise..😳