FF - Unconditional Love (Part 20 - Page 67) - Page 24

Ahh... so sorry shafaq, i thought I commented... but i didnt.. grr.. i hate my memory! Anyways it was an amazing part as always!

Ahh Prem climbed up the pipe again, and his line was so hilarious. "aaj darwaaze seh asakta tha lekin ab pipe charne ki aadat si hogayi hai." I loved that line, and I could feel his awkwardness. But I'm glad Heer didn't get to shy and they both got comfortable with eachother. Poor Prem had to leace Heer along then. I feel bad for the both, Heer's locked up in her house, and Prem can't even meet her.

After that I loved how Preet caught Prem's lie. The two brothers know eachother so well, and Preet.. tsk tsk, emotional blackmail. But i love how Prem took it seriously and assured him that no matter what happened in his life, he would always be his little brother, and he would love him as much as he always has. So sweet.. 😳

Omg, i can tell Dj's planning something horrid. I just had this really weird idea, what if she replaces the dulhann? Ahhhh no no no bad thoughts... Bad kimz get the bad thoughts out of your head. I just hope there wedding goes smoothly and DJ doesn't create a big scene.. And Ihope no matter what happens Prem's with Heer.. Ahh continue soon!! 😃

Awwww *hides muh* uff I have to hide my muh in all the posts and FF's I m replying so Maha late too..😳😆

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!👏

Originally posted by: salma_786786

Awww Shafaq its soo sweet of you to dedicate the update to me, Zainab & Nandini....it
means alot.... lubbbb you 🤗 Im glad everything is ok with your family now...

Great update hun, I realized something while reading this part... Each of the updates are
exactly how a episode will roll... maybe thats what makes it sound realistic...
*note to self* get Shafaq Ektaji number or email 😆

Soo Im taking a wild guess and saying that it wasn't Heer neck that Prem kissed oh so
passionately.... damn I think this is where DJ comes in... ohhh i doo hate that women... Hope
her plan fails tremendously cause they usually do... not very smart for a evil womennow is
she???? 😆

Prem & Heer were great once again, getting comfortable in each others company, their
wedding yaaaayyyyy finally and Prem and Preet... lubbbb them tooo...
I wonder what your next update will bring... a slap for DJ... hope soo...

Nice Work hun, keep it up..
Salma 🤗

You guys deserved it after all the lovely comments 😳 dear. I'm glad 😃 everything is okay as well allhamdulillah.

That's exactly what I try to do......make each update sound like a complete episode in itself so that its all realistic like you said. If you do get me her number I think I may be able to put her right 😆 and the show as well along with the help of a couple of other writers here.

You'll have to wait and watch to see if it was Heer 😉 or not.....I really can't say. But I can tell you wherever there's trouble.....DJ's involved for sure 😡. Who else can it be?

Prem and Heer are a lot more comfortable with each other now......I wanted it to be a gradual transition and not a drastic one like there usually are in shows. I'd love to have DJ 😡 slapped 24/7....if it was possible.

Thanks a lot 😊 for your comments Salma. I'm glad 😃 you liked it! I'll try my best to keep it up.

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Shafaq!!! Yay! They're getting married! I wish you hadn't stopped! but I can't wait to see DJ's
plan flop! Awww.... Heer and Prem are getting married!!!! 🥳At least they're getting
married SOMEWHERE. if not the show then at least here they are!

komz

Yep their getting married finally 😆 once and for all. I didn't want to stop myself but I had to create some suspense 😉. I'll be looking forward 😊 to your comments after my next update.

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
i liked the way prem came 2 meet heer it was very sweet climbing the pipe i can actually
imagine prem doing it
cant wait 2 no what daljeets plan is hope she doesnt do anything 2 drastic 2 stop the
marriage
preet and prem scene was really good
i liked the bond between the two brothers

Thank you 😊! The pipe idea was kimmu's. I'm glad 😃 you liked it though. You'll have to wait and see what DJ's 😡 plan is 😆. Preet and Prem and inseperable and that's what I was trying to show through that scene. Thanks for appreciating my effort dear.

Originally posted by: pisces26

awesome work no words 👏

Thanks 😊 a lot!

Originally posted by: heer?

Shafaq!😊

Your fanfic is absolutely amazing!
(and that's a huge understatement)
You're a great writer and I feel like I'm actually watching the show
while I'm reading your FF. If only the creatives thought more like you.
As for the next update please hurry! I can't wait to see(or read) what happens and I'm hoping their wedding
goes smoothly. Thanks for writing such a brilliant FF. And UPDATE SOON!

-heer

You're welcome dear but I should be the one saying thanks 😆.

Thanks so much 😊 Heer for your lovely comments 😳.....it really meant a lot to me. The next update will be up today.....sorry for the delay. I know I had promised quite long ago. Do keep reading!

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

omg awesome update!!
i wonder what daljeet is upto...well whatever it is i hope her plan fails
can't wait to read ur next update. plz plz plz continue soon😃

Thank you! You'll have to wait and see 😆 to find out what Daljeet is up-to 😉. Now I can't spoil it for you can I 😛. The next update will be up in just a while. Sorry for the delay once again!

Originally posted by: kimmu

Ahh... so sorry shafaq, i thought I commented... but i didnt.. grr.. i hate my memory! Anyways it was an
amazing part as always!

Ahh Prem climbed up the pipe again, and his line was so hilarious. "aaj darwaaze seh asakta tha lekin
ab pipe charne ki aadat si hogayi hai." I loved that line, and I could feel his awkwardness. But I'm
glad Heer didn't get to shy and they both got comfortable with eachother. Poor Prem had to leace Heer
along then. I feel bad for the both, Heer's locked up in her house, and Prem can't even meet her.

After that I loved how Preet caught Prem's lie. The two brothers know eachother so well, and Preet.. tsk
tsk, emotional blackmail. But i love how Prem took it seriously and assured him that no matter what
happened in his life, he would always be his little brother, and he would love him as much as he always
has. So sweet.. 😳

Omg, i can tell Dj's planning something horrid. I just had this really weird idea, what if she replaces the
dulhann? Ahhhh no no no bad thoughts... Bad kimz get the bad thoughts out of your head. I just hope there
wedding goes smoothly and DJ doesn't create a big scene.. And Ihope no matter what happens Prem's with
Heer.. Ahh continue soon!! 😃

Its okay kimmu 😊.....no worries at all. Don't hate your memory 😆....everyone forgets once in a while. I'm really glad 😃 you liked the part!

Yep Prem climbed the pipe once again 😳....it was your idea initially hehe 😆. Ab agar mujhe itna pasand agaya toh main kya kar sakti hoon. Now as you can see Prem and Heer are gradually becoming more and more comfortable with one another.

I wanted to show that Preet and Prem share an unbreakable relationship and I believe I've succeeded in doing so as well.

DJ''s always planning something horrible 😡.....there's no doubt about that! Replacing the dulhan.....hmmm nah not my type of idea but you never know 😛. All I can say is think positive kimmu! But I can tell you I too like you all want to see Heer and Prem together. DJ's 🤢 known to create big scenes dear......I can't stop her from doing so but who know's that sneaky little witch might lay low whilst carrying out her plan.

The next part will be up very soon. Sorry for the delay!

Originally posted by: -Faith-

Awwww *hides muh* uff I have to hide my muh in all the posts and FF's I m replying so Maha
late too..😳😆
Cholly Shafaq bacha *pakaring kaan*
And shoooooooo shweet of u to dedicate it to me too... Awww tho I was ghayab bhi..
How shweet..😳Thankoo🤗
And soo sorry to hear abt ur Mum's uncle..Innalahi wa InnalahiRaajeeon...May Allah bless his
soul..

I m sure that must have kept u preoccupied..

Coming to the last two updates!

WOW!! loved both the parts...
Hayee Prem climbing the pipe😆wicked idea Kimmu👏loved how u used it again and his line ..
And the scene in the office..loved ur description👏
Aww the Prem Preet scene was sooo cutee...
I always say I love ur simple and crisp yet sufficiently detailed style..

Aww and the endingI hope nothing bad happens...
Dj ka plan shudnt be successful

As always great updates...👏
Looking forward to the next part

You don't have to hide Di 😊.....better late than never right? And there's no need to say sorry either 😒....after-all you're like an elder sister to me.

You're welcome for the dedication! I dedicated it to you because you have always encouraged me to continue writing through your comments.

Thanks for your condolences and concern. It really did keep us busy for quite some time now.

I'm really pleased to hear that you liked the previous two updates. Prem climbing the pipe was kimmu's idea and so all the credit shall go to her as well. I just implemented it. Now like always you're too kind 😳 Zainu di....but still it means a lot to me when you appreciate my writing 😃.

DJ k plan successful hai keh nahi......you'll have to wait and see 😆!

The next part will be up in just a bit. I'm late once again......so sorry!

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!👏

Thanks 😊 dear. I'll be continuing in just a while.

Part
11

Hello to all my lovely readers 😊

This is the next part of this fanfic! I was meant to update earlier.....I know but I was really very busy 😳. I'd like to apologize for keeping you all waiting. I'll be waiting to hear from you all after this part especially 😉 😆. I know its slightly short this time.....I'll try to make the next update much longer.

Its dedicated to kimmu, Zainu Di (welcome back 😆) and Salma.

Shafaq 😊

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Prem finally took his seat on the Mandap looking absolutely gorgeous in a black Sherwani that had been designed especially for him. Now he was eagerly awaiting the arrival of his bride. His Heer! He had been literally swarmed by his in-laws at the entrance of the hall and the walk to the Mandap with everyone alongside him including relatives he failed to recognize matching his every step had felt like an eternity even though in distance it was actually merely nothing. They hadn't let him out of sight for even a second.....constantly trying to get his attention. Prem found it quite irritating but being the polite young man he was, he couldn't dare to complain.

Prem could smell the delicious food being laid on the tables close by. He could hear his brothers converse and his mother and sisters laugh away at his anxious state. But he could care less at the moment. His only concern.....only worry was for Heer. Was she in the same state he was? Was she all worked up and tense as well?

"Bhaiya....yeh lein rumaal aur apna paseena pohunch lein. Warna Bhabhi kya sochengi!" Veera taunted teasingly only to get an angry glare in return from her elder brother.

"Veera PB ko tang mat karo. Uski jagah thora kaam hi karlo. Kaam chor kahin ki!" Preet interrupted in an attempt to save his brother from any more embarrassment.

"MOM!! Dekha aapne. Humare saath Bhaiya ko tang karne ke bajaaiye yeh Preet unki hi side le raha hai." Veera complained to her mother.

"This isn't right Preet! Aaj toh iska haq banta hai. Karne do tang thora sa. Kya jaata hai. Aur waise bhi Prem ki halat dekhi hai. Kisi ka bhi tang karne ko dil kare."

"Maa.....aap bhi?" Prem asked shockingly. "Aap mein seh kisi ko meri halat par tars nahi araha kya? Agar Heer hoti toh kya aap bhi use itna hi tang karte" he added.

"Uske liye Meher hai na. Aur waise bhi Bhabhi aap seh toh betar halat mein hongi. I'm sure!" Veera stated assuringly.

Well Prem could see for himself what state Heer was in as soon after, she was brought down the stairs of the lavish hall with both her mother and younger sister by her side. She wore a beautiful but not too heavily embroidered deep-red Lehnga. It wasn't something that had been seen ever before. Heer looked splendid in it. She was worried yet was hiding it well unlike Prem. As she was made to sit next to her husband to-be he naughtily glanced at her as if checking her out taking her totally by surprise. She hadn't expected this of Prem but let it go with a light chuckle to herself. Heer observed her surroundings and examined all the guests most of whom she could easily recognize. Then Heer came accross her Chachi standing in a corner and that too alone looking rather peculiar. Her Chachi's gaze was fixed on someone......someone whom Heer couldn't quite make out from all the way over here. It appeared as if it was her father but then she let it all go once the Pandit spoke.

He asked everyone to gather around to witness the union of Prem and Heer. He then began chanting mantras continuously. After what felt like an eternity he invited Heer's parents to perform the Kanyadaan. They obliged and did so very emotionally. A tearful Heer noticed that many guests were also unable to control their flowing emotions. Almost everyone was if not in tears then near so. But Daljeet Chachi was looking rather bizaare to some degree. She looked puzzled.....confused yet annoyed at something and Heer couldn't help but wonder whilst her parents continued performing the Kanyadaan. Once that had been completed her parents moved aside allowing the Pandit to perform the remaining rituals with the couple involved.

Balraaj smiled through his tears as he witnessed his daughter being wed to Prem. All of a sudden though...he felt a firm hand on his right shoulder. He turned around to find a man whom he failed to identify. Nevertheless Balraaj politely asked what he wanted? In return the stranger asked him to step outside as it was urgent. Although Balraaj found it difficult to understand what could be more important than his darling daughter's wedding, he agreed and without informing anyone made his way towards the corridor, near the entrance where they could now talk in private. Seeing as it was urgent, privacy had to be taken care of after-all.

"Bhaisaab aap zara jaldi kijiye. Pheron ka time bhi hone waala hai aur main aise bahar theek nayi lagta." he explained in one breath.

"Aap seh zyada toh mujhe jaldi hai Balraaj Ji....aakhir is shaadi ko rokna jo hai."

"Kya? Rokna kyun hai? Bhagwaan na kare is shaadi mein koyi muskil aaye!" Balraaj questioned aghast.

"Aisi dua mat maange! Pehle yeh toh dekhlein." he said getting straight to the point as he handed over an A4 envelope to a still very confused Balraaj.

Balraaj took out its content only to get the shock of his life. The envelope contained photos of Prem and Ashlesha in an intimate position with Prem helping her tie her choli. Balraaj couldn't believe his eyes. How could he have been deceived so badly? Without thinking he shoved the envelope of photographs into his Sherwani pocket and rushed into the hall only to find Prem and Heer already married and now in the process of taking blessings of their elders. Before he could even object verbally let alone show any signs of objection, Balraaj unfortunately suffered from a severe heart attack and fell to the ground in no time. Everyone who had heard the loud crash against the wooden floor of the wedding hall hurried over to him. This included his family and newly wed Heer's in-laws. However Daljeet chose to stand back and watch the drama. Now that her plan had failed, she was furious. She had wanted Balraaj himself to stop the wedding in time and be the cause of his daughter's shame. Instead he had arrived much later and himself suffered from a heart attack. She couldn't believe it! Despite all her intense, careful planning Heer had married Prem and that too so easily. Nevertheless there was still some hope that Balraaj would break this recent marriage himself once he had recovered. Now weather or not he recovered was something only time would tell.

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its awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.

amazing part

Hey Shafaq..very beautiful..poor Balraj..and poor Heer..hope DJ's truth comes infront of her..and pls update us soon whenever u r free!!