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Posted: 17 years ago
u will on thx us or will update ur beautiful part for us too 😆 😆 😆
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Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

u will on thx us or will update ur beautiful part for us too 😆 😆 😆



itna der to interzaar kar hi liya na?? ab 10 minute aur,,,
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10 mins pakka ur premeer ke cut scenes chahiye mujhe warna 😆
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PART ELEVEN




that night...

it was really late and aastha wasnt asleep... she was thinking about wat shubh had said. she blushed. suddenly her cell phone buzzed. she startled as no one calls her late at night. she is known to be an early nighter. she looked at the identity of the caller....it was shubh... she smiled.

she picked up the call.

aastha: kya hai???

shubh: bas neend nahi aa raha tha...aur muje laga tume bhi nahi aa rahi hogi

aastha: achcha... tume kaise pata??? main toh so rahi thi

shubh: bataaya tha na... jhoot math bolna

aastha: theek hai theek hai... ab phone rakho... muje sone do

shubh: nahi

aastha: kyu???

shubh: nahi rakhoonga...bas

aastha: rakh do na... kal bahut kaam hai

shubh: theek hai...ek sharth par

aastha: kya hai???

shubh: mujse abhi kaho ki u love me

aastha was shocked.

aastha: pagal ho gaye ho kya??? main nahi kahoongii

he was silent for sometime...

then suddenly shubh started singing... "dont u love me" from chura liya hai tumne

--MALE--
Dil ki lagi mein dhadkanon pe ikhtiyaar nahin hota hai
Ishq voh jalwa hai jo pardanashi nahin hota
(Teri ada, teri nazar
Teri hansi, teri umar yaara
Kehti yehi, poochho dil se
Don't you love me baby?) - 2

--FEMALE--
Teri ada, teri nazar
Teri hansi, teri umar yaara
Kare dillagi, raat hai aadhi
Just go to sleep, baby

--MALE--
Teri ada, teri nazar
Haseenon ka har tevar sachcha nahin hota
Ikraar karke izhaar na karna achha nahin hota
Hey, la la la la la la la la, la la la la la
Aisa bhi kya humse gila

--FEMALE--
Anaari sanam mujhko mila

--MALE--
Jo bhi kaho, paas aane do

--FEMALE--
Mm, aayi badi neend, so jaane do

--MALE--
Neend to hai ek bahaana

--FEMALE--
Kadam na aage badhaana

--MALE--
Lagega darr akele mein

--FEMALE--
Phasaao na jhamele mein
So jaao tum, milenge hum sapnon ke mele mein

--MALE--
Teri sharam, teri haya
Teri saansein, teri dhadkan yaara
Kehti yehi, poochho dil se
Don't you love me baby?
Teri ada, teri nazar

--FEMALE--
Maana intezaar ka aalam bada sakht lagta hai
Lekin kya kare, dil ki baat zubaan pe aate aate waqt lagta hai

--MALE--
Samjha karo, tumse ishq hai

--FEMALE--
Sambhalke raho, is mein risk hai

--MALE--
Koi gham nahin jo bhi ho sila

--FEMALE--
O, besharam ho tum kitne bhala

--MALE--
Ek nazar dekho to idhar

--FEMALE--
Deewane kyoon ho is kadar

--MALE--
Khidkiyaan dil ki khol do

--FEMALE--
Hamein tum tanha chhod do
Yun na udo khayaalon mein tum, raahon ko mod lo
Teri zubaan, teri vafa
Teri aarzoo, teri justjoo yaara
Kare dillagi, raat hai aadhi
Just go to sleep, baby

--MALE--
Teri ada, teri nazar
Teri hansi, teri umar yaara
Kehti yehi, poochho dil se
Don't you love me baby?


aastha was liking it but she wanted him to keep the phone. just as he stopped singing she said.

aastha: shubh...bahut raat ho chuki hai... main rakh rahi hoon... phir se aaj phone mat karna...okay? goodnight.

and she cut the call... she was grinning from ear to ear and so was shubh. it wouldnt take much time for her to be in his arms...
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NEXT MORNING

at breakfast, teji and gayatri were having talks which the others heard.

teji: jaanti ho...prem aur heer ke shaadi ke mahurat bahut khaas hai... aise ek din sau saalom me ek hi baar aate hai... kehte hai as malaaye hi badal lo shaadi ho jaate hai

gayatri: achcha hua... humare bachcho ke pyaar aur mazboot ban jaayenge...

heer and prem looked at each other and grinned. under the table, prem caught heer's hand and squeezed it. heer glared at him and let go. preet and shubh sniggered at prem.

prem: kyu hans rahe ho tum dono???

preet: kuch nahi bhai...

shubh: lucky guy huh... saalom me khaas muhurat mili hai shaadi karne ko

prem grinned and tried to look smug about it as heer avoided looks from aastha and meher.

prem: itna jalan achchi nahi hai.. ek kaam karo...tum dono bhi kisi ladki ko dhoond lo aur shaadi kar lo usi din...

ash nudged preet when prem said that. preet looked at her expression and made a puking gesture.

preet: shaadi??? no wayyy

shubh winked at aastha.

heer: prem, kripa ne muje phone kiya tha aaj subah

prem: haan...main poochne hi waala tha...angad aur kripa aa rahe hai na shaadi me???

heer shook her head sadly.

heer: kya hai ki...naina aunty, angad ki maa un dono ke rishte se naraaz hai... angad se reh nahi gaya aur dono ne kal register marriage kar li. woh nainital jaa rahe hai aaj... shaayad hi humari shaadi me shaamil ho payenge.

prem: at least dono khush hai...

heer: woh toh hai

they dint get much time for romance for the day and the next day too. the mehendi function was solely for ladies and prem missed heer sorely. preet tried to sympathize his brother...but dint work. he was just grimacing the work load put on his head.
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THE SANGEET DAY

guests all hav arrived and the hall was filled. evryone was happily chatting... preet was talking to a guy he had just seen come in. shubh caught up with the two guys. preet looked at shubh.

preet: shubh...inse milo...mera bachpan ka dosth, lakshya.



shubh and lakshya looked at each other for one whole minute with mouths wide open and then hugged with a loud laugh.

shubh: lakshya, tum...???

lakshya: tum yaha kaise shubh???

preet: hold on... tum dono ek doosre ko jaante ho???

shubh: haan... humne MBA saath me ki di...

lakshya nodded...

the three guys shared a cute moment of get together.

prem and heer were brought down and seated at two ends. heer was in a brown and gold choli and prem in cream sherwani. aastha and meher ran upto heer and asked her to sing. she refused and whispered something in aastha's ears. aastha's face split into a grin.

she walked upto prem and told him to sing.
he shook his head too...

aastha: ye achchi baat nahi hai bhaiyya... aapko gaana hi padega... hum aapse gavayenge

she then walked off to preet and shubh. meher joined her and they planned to do something. suddenly all the lights dimmed and the dance floor shimmered with little lights.

meher and aastha started off with the humming along with a couple of other girls.

o ladke diwaane kaha se aaya tu
dulhan ko le jaane kaha se aaya tu
o ladke diwane kaha se aaya tu
dulhan ko le jaane kaha se aaya tu


shubh and preet came to the centre too. shubh caught onto aastha's hand and sang.{shubh's part in red and aastha's in green...}

chal pyaar karegi

aastha played along... she wasnt too embarassed now. the way he looked, she was sure he loved her... and she was happy...she smiled at him too.

haan ji haan ji

mere saath chalegi

she pulled off her hand from his in mock horror.

na ji naa ji

shubh folded his hands.

tu haan kar ya naa kar teri marzi soniye
hum tujhko udhakar le jaayenge...
doli me bitaakar le jaayenge


aastha danced too
hum ghar me kahi chup jaayenge
sang tere nahi hum jaayenge


chal pyaar karegi haan ji haan ji
mere saath chalegi na ji naa jiii


prem and heer were delighted at this jodi. so were the others.

gayatri whisperd to teji: kitni achchi jodi hai na???

teji: sach me... lagte hai ke ek duje ke liye hi bane hai

gayatri: kyu na hum prem aur heer ke shaadi ke baad dono ki baat chalate hai

teji: manzoor hai gayatri... dono bahut pyaar karte hai ek doosre se...

gayatri nodded and smiled.

prem took the lead now... he went to heer and held her hands and romantically looked into her eyes. {prem's part in blue and heer's in magenta}

o gore gore mukhde waali
o kaale kaale naino waali
maan mera ehsaan ke maine haan kar di
tu warna kunwari reh jaati
ye shaadi humari reh jaati


prem flashed a naughty smile as heer glared at him.

CHORUS- tu warna kunwari reh jaati
ye shaadi humari reh jaati

chal pyaar karegi haan ji haan ji
mere saath chalegi


heer stamped on his leg and sang na ji naa ji


heer danced with meher.... she moved around her mother and father and saas-sasur!

jaa main nahi karti shaadi waadi
mujko pyaari hai ye aazadi
main toh apne babul ke baaho ki bulbul hoon

bas tujse muje ye kehna hai
pinjre me muje nahi rehna hai

CHORUS-bas tujse muje ye kehna hai
pinjre me muje nahi rehna hai

chal pyaar karegi haan ji haan ji
mere saath chalegi na ji naa jiii


everyone were wishing the couple to be happy for ever. there were whispers, "rab ne bahut achchi jodi banaayi hai... aise hi bani rahe saalo"

prem left the joke aside now...he caught heer by the shoulder and looked into her eyes...

aankho se kaajal le jaayenge
zulfo ke baadal le jaayenge...


prem was lost in her eyes... he dint contine... shubh continued for him

hum aaye hai door se yu wapas na jaayenge...
hum apni sajaniya le jaayenge
hum apni dulhaniya le jaayenge


aastha blushed. all laughed and danced.

chal pyaar karegi haan ji haan ji
mere saath chalegi na ji naa jii
tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye
hum tujhko uthakar le jaayenge
doli me bitaakar le jaayenge


prem picked up heer in his arms and shubh did the same to aastha. the guests all applauded the couples. truely heaven-made. teji wiped tears of joy.

lakshya was eyeing shubh and aastha with a look of foreboding. he had known preet and aastha since childhood and shubh since last 4 years. aastha looked so happy with shubh. he cornered shubh the next second he got him alone.

lakshya: chakkar kya hai shubh???

shubh who was wiping his prespiration froze and looked at lakshya amused. he noticed lakshya's glances go till aastha and back. shubh just shrugged.

lakshya: main tumhe achchi tarah se jaanta hoon... muje bataao... bataao ki tum aastha ke saath wahi khel nahi khel rahe ho jo tum har kisi ladki ke saath khelte aaye ho

shubh put a hand on lakshya's shoulder.

shubh: you know lakshya... muje commitment achcha nahi lagta...

lakshya: dekho use... maine use itni khush kabhi nahi dekha... she is undoubtedly in love with you...

shubh: kya karu boss... har ladki mujpe fida hai

lakshya: tumhe ye mazaak hai... tum aastha ko nahi jaante

shubh: i know her all right... goodlooking, sweet, caring, understanding...

lakshya's mouth gaped at shubh mouth wide open.

shubh all confused: kya???

lakshya: kuch nahi mere bhai... aastha apni jaadoo kar rahi hai

shubh: kis pe???

lakshya: tum pe...

lakshya started laughing like a maniac. shubh got irritated and raised his hand to whack him.

lakshya: hold it...

shubh: seede seede bata baat kya hai...warna...

lakshya: socho... jab bhi tum kisi ladki ko milte ho, the only words of description i hear is HOT and SEXY... aur tumne aastha ke baare me jo kaha... muje lagta hai janaab ko pyaar ho raha hai... AT LAST!!!!!

shubh was thoughtful. he thought over it again and again... IS IT??? he shook his head...NO WAY...

shubh: chup ho ja... muje koi pyaar vyaar nahi hua hai, samje??? ab chal khaana kha le...

lakshya grinned... shubh did look confused.. and its the start... hats off to aastha...


...to b contd...
next is the much awaited premeer shaadi...

SUHAAG RAAT ke liye koi gueses?????hehe 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆 😆 😆 i am feeling shy now dont ask for suhaag raat u only think for that mere liy tuh shaadi he enough hai very nice yaar and thxxxxxxxxx

i will be waiting for next shaadi ummmmmmmm jaldi karna plsssss is keliye zaada wait mat karana 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

😆 😆 😆 i am feeling shy now dont ask for suhaag raat u only think for that mere liy tuh shaadi he enough hai very nice yaar and thxxxxxxxxx

i will be waiting for next shaadi ummmmmmmm jaldi karna plsssss is keliye zaada wait mat karana 😳



hehe... shaadi hi kaafi hai huh??? i wil censor the suhaag raat part then😉... wil update faster this time...no worry... i was out of station last 2 days thats y dint update...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.



sure dear....wil update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
sry sry sry jaaaaans...fo rthe very very very late reply....haha....well yu waited for me to updt naaaa...haha.....its ok.....

now for my comments.....this time no words...only emoticons..... 🤗

aur mein suhaag raat ki guess karoon??!!! 😉

waise...i enjoyed every bit of it...every character has its own uniqueness which i really love.....the story is moving unlike ekta shows...haha...loved it jaans...cont soon...

luv nans
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nandini90

sry sry sry jaaaaans...fo rthe very very very late reply....haha....well yu waited for me to updt naaaa...haha.....its ok.....

now for my comments.....this time no words...only emoticons..... 🤗

aur mein suhaag raat ki guess karoon??!!! 😉

waise...i enjoyed every bit of it...every character has its own uniqueness which i really love.....the story is moving unlike ekta shows...haha...loved it jaans...cont soon...

luv nans



haan... bl**** fool.... waited for ya... neways... i wana make the suhaag raat smthin spcl... afta all PREMEER SUHAAG RAAT... wil cont soon... agli baar time pe comments bejna...warna...

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