yes the update is here ppl...the place and the rasme are fictious alryt??? go ahead read....n comment
PART TEN
everything was set. the whole family left for ramnagar...and reached after nearly 4 hours.
"woww... kitna pyaara farmhouse hai", meher exclaimed as shubh and heer nodded.
the elders had camped here together long back. prem, preet and aastha were regular visitors to the village.
the house was huge with large gardens. the place was a natural beauty full of dense trees and little lakes... it was difficult to find such a place. the junejas have so far looked after the place that the forests dont get cut and the place is not used for industrial purposes. for that reason too, the villagers there loved the juneja's.
the house was completely cleaned and that was actually a feat considering the fact that there were at least 20 bedrooms in there. the halls were huge and sunlight peeped in through long windows. there was a shade even at noon.
preet and aastha got permission to take the others outside and show them the beauty of the village. soon, they were split in couples. prem, preet and aastha knew the place by heart. prem and heer walked off together, aastha with shubh and preet with meher and aslesha. meher was giggly about this and preet was sour.
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prem and heer...
both held hands and walked upto the main market place. prem was telling about the village to heer about how they used to come there during vacations.
at the market place, prem met a couple of old men who blessed prem and heer. prem caught up with some of his childhood village friends too as heer looked on. as they walked furthur, prem saw an old lady and ran upto her pulling heer with him.
prem: dadi... kaisi hai aap???
she looked up at him and broke into a delighted smile.
dadi: prem beta...kitne din ho gaye tumse mile hue... ye kaun hai???
prem: dadi... meri shaadi ho rahi hai... ye hai mera pyaar...heer
heer folded her hands in a namasthe and touched the feet.
dadi: jeete reh beti... sada sukhi raho dono saath me
prem and heer smiled at each other.
dadi: yaha jis jiske bhi shaadi hoti hai, unko humaare thareeke ke rasme karne padthe hai... aur prem beta, tum isi gaav ke hi ho.. tumare hone waale biwi ko bhi ye karna padega
heer looked confusedly... prem smiled again
prem: pata hai dadi...
dadi looked at heer: beti, tum nahi chahti toh...
heer interrupted: aisi baat nahi hai dadi... main karoongi.
she smiled.
dadi called out the women, and there were quite a crowd by then. all women were dressed in traditional bright colored, heavily mirror worked dresses. some of the women took heer to one of the small houses and made her change.
she came out in deep orange and black choli with assorted silver jewellery. she looked really like a "gaaon ki gori"... the other women lined on both the sides leaving a narrow space enough for two peeple to walk. prem stood at the other end.
heer was given 3 pots one over the other. dadi explained that heer had to keep these three pots on her head, one over the other and walk barefeet upto her husband without letting the pots fall. it was supposed to show the efficiency of the new wife. dadi dint tell her that the path to the husband was filled with large stones here and there. prem was kind of anxious about how heer would manage. heer was having problems balancing the pots. but she looked across at prem and she got a kind of spirit in her to do it.
she slowly walked biting her lips as the hot stones bore into her legs. she was tripping now and then but she managed halfway through... she felt exhausted...it was a longer walk than she had anticipated. but she looked upto prem again and saw the twinkle in his eyes that were beckoning her. she collected her energy and walked over everything. there were barely few steps distance between them and in the haste to reach prem, heer tripped on a large stone and almost fell but was rescued by prem at the right time. heer held on to the pots and none of them fell.
the women all applauded the young couple and their love.
dadi: tumari shaadi shudha zindagi khushiyo se bhare honge.. jab ek phisal jaaye toh doosre sambhal lenge...tum dono ne apne pyaar ko nibhaya... mera aashirwaad hai ki tum dono saath janmo tak aise hi pyaar karte rahe...
heer and prem lowered their head and touched her feet. heer changed back into her own dress and turned to leave, but she was gifted the attire she had worn earlier as a token of love.
they walked away...and sat near a small thicket of woods where there were shade. heer was unusually silent.
prem: kya hua??? itni chup kyu ho???
heer: bas... kuch nahi
prem: kuch toh baat hai...bataao
he took her hands and caressed them. heer looked into his eyes. tears formed in her eyes. prem was startled.
prem: ro kyu rahi ho???
heer: tum mujse kitna pyaar karte ho... aur tumare saath ke bina ek kadam bhi aage nahi bada paa rahi hoon main... agar tumne muje chod diya toh main mar jaaungi...
prem put his hand over her mouth and stopped her from talking.
prem: bhoolke bhi aisa math sochna...
heer had tears in her eyes. she pulled off his hand and hugged him... both of them lived the hug with closed eyes and broad smiles.
heer began singing "hume na bulaana" from hogi pyaar ki jeet.
Tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana
Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana
Wada kiya toh wada karke nivana
Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana
Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Hume na bhulana sajni hume na bhulana
Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana
Wada kiya toh wada karke nivana
Hume na bhulana sajni hume na bhulana
Aapna vi naseeba kya khub mela hai
Sabno se sundar mehboob mela hai
Teri khwab teri chahat meri jindegani
Akhon se dur dilbar na jana
Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana
Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana
Oh wada kiya toh wada karke nivana
Hume na bhulana sajni hume na bhulana
Banjanow dulhan main tu mera sajan ho
Mangun yeh duyaen jaldi se milan ho
Sahi jaye na ab mujhse sanam ye judaye
Aaow barat leke choro tarpana
Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Hume na bhulana sajni hume na bhulana
Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana
Wada kiya toh wada karke nivana
Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana
it rained at that time. heer and prem ran towards the trees and stood beneath a large tree.
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meher, preet and aslesha
they were walking through a forest like region. but it wasnt actually dense. ash was feigning that she was scared and clutched on to preet.
preet was really angry but he forced himself to be calm. he slightly pulled her hands off and said.
preet: ash, tume muje itni zor se pakadne ki zaroorat nahi hai..
ash: is jungal main koi jaanwar honge na???
meher was stifling her giggles. she could see that preet was getting irritated. he glared at meher.
preet angrily: haan...yaha gaavwale aksar sher ko dekne ke kisse sunaathe hai
the effect of this simple lie was drastic.... ash clutched onto him even harder and started whimpering...
ash: preet muje yaha se le jaao....le jaao le jaao....
ash was so scared that preet had to wind up his plan and go back home with meher and ash. he had expected that she would run off alone leaving him with meher. preet was in a grumpy mood but meher dint mind. she wasnt much of an outdoor person.
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shubh and aastha
they were having a pleasant talk as aastha showed him around the village. the places they visited were mostly deserted. shubh was more than happy about this. he could understand aastha had some vibes for him. he was waiting for a chance to flirt.
but before shubh could make a lead, aastha turned onto him with a serious expression.
aastha: tumare maa papa nahi aa rahe hai???
shubh's expression stoned...
shubh: jab main paida hua tha tab hi mere maa chal basi thi...
shubh was getting emotional in spite of himself. tears were forming in his eyes. aastha held his hands and she grew emotional too.
shubh continued: aur mere dad bahut workaholic the... unhone muje maasi ke paas somp diya... kabhi kabhi baat karte hai... par close nahi hai hum dono... mere parivar toh yahi hai
aastha: theek hi kaha tumne shubh...hum tumare parivaar hi hai
shubh wiped his tears and managed a smile. aastha felt as if she was melting.
aastha: tume pata hai,,,??? jab me choti thi mere mama aur papa ek plane crash me mar gaye the... muje un dono ke saath ke saal yaad bhi nahi hai... aur dekho... muje ek pyaar karne waale parivar diya hai rab ne
shubh smiled at her smile...
shubh: ek baat
aastha: kya hai???
shubh: agar tumne kisi se mere rone ke baare me kaha toh...
aastha folded her arms: toh???
shubh: toh tume bahut bhaari pad jaayenge...
aastha: achcha??? i wil try not to tell anyone...
shubh: bhoolke bhi tumare mooh se is baat nikli toh tume main dekh loonga...
aastha: theek hai baba
aastha stared at shubh...how innocent he was... she was starting to have feelings for him...she wasnt sure... but this could be love...but was shubh the guy she had been waiting for??? the dream man???
shubh noticed the look in her eyes...it was love, he knew it... how many times he had seen that look in his umpteen girlfriend's.
shubh: aastha tumse ek baat poonchu???
aastha startled at being caught by shubh. she looked down.
aastha: kya hai???
shubh: mere liye tumare andar kuch feelings hai kya???
aastha was shocked at his straightforward question. she dint know wat to say. truth was yes, but she couldnt tell it.
aastha: nahi toh...aisi koi baat nahi hai
she purposefully avoided looking into his eyes. shubh knew wat it meant.
shubh: achcha??? tum jhoot bahut aasani se bol lete ho... par main intezaar karunga...till you say...yes
aastha looked up at him.
shubh: ab hum chale??? mausam bahut kharaab hai
aastha nodded and they walked off befor the rain came out.
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prem and heer were stuck in the rain. even though they were under the shade of a tree, they were getting wetter.
heer's shirt was hugging her figure and were up at certain parts. prem was staring at her curves. he bit his lips for doing something so indecent and looked away but then a small voice in his head reminded him that heer was his fiancee and soon to be wife.
heer seemed unperturbed by wat was going on in prem's head.
prem approached her with slow steps. heer suddenly noticed wat was going on. his eyes told her the naughty stuff he was about to do and she edged backwards to get out of his way. she hit the large tree trunk and gasped. prem was just millimeters away from her.
prem whispered: us din ka kaam poora kar raha hoon
heer had a vivid flashback of soni's marriage reception wen he had done the same thing and kissed his mom.
heer: par....
but before she could say anything, prem clasped her on the shoulders and kissed her full on the lips. heer's eyes widened... then she closed her eyes and accepted the kiss and returned it. suddenly everything seemed so hot. prem's hands came down from the shoulders to the waist... they soon found the hem of the shirt and the way up through it...
heer was taking long and deep breaths by now...they broke apart and smiled at each other. it was as if they had been doing this forever. they dint feel much awkward as they normally would hav. the rain had subsided and they decided to walk back.
on the way back, they heard an ice cream cart coming with jingles. kids came running from all directions and heer started pulling prem.
heer: dekho prem... ice cream...
prem: dekh liya...ab chale???
heer: mazaak chodo... muje ek khareed ke do na
prem looked at her with sceptical expressions.
prem: tumara dimaag kharaab ho gaye ho kya??? abhi hum bahut bheege hue hai aur itni thandi me ice cream??? shaadi ke din tume bukhaar ho jaayenge
heer: main kuch nahi jaanti... muje lake do
prem shook his head hopelessly. she couldnt be won over in these cases.he bought her one and watched her eat it with enthusiasm like a three year old. he smiled at himself....they then went back home...
...to b contd....
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Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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