jiya na jaye...secret of heer - Page 2

i dont know why ppl r not responding much,

oh come on i m responding naa......

AAKHIR AANA TO YAHIN THA......
PREM:tum mujse kuch kehna chahti thi
HEER:ha!mein MBA karne london jana chahti hu
PREM:london
HEER:bahir admissions open hain aur yeh buhat achi opportunity hai
PREM:mera dil tumhe abroad bhejna ko nahin chahta
HEER:sirf eik saal ki baat hai
PREM:ab mein kya keh sakta hu
HEER:thanks
AFTER TWO MONTHS
anonymous:is this mr PREM(on phone)
PREM:yes
anonymous:i s heer ur wife
PREM:yes
anonymous:i am sorry but she is no more
PREM:what rubbish r u saying
anonymous:its true ! she was suffering from a disease for last two and a half months
PREM:nooooooooo this cant happen
ANGAD:kis ka phone hai
PREM:bhai HEER ab is dunya mein nahin rahe
ANGAD:yeh kya keh rahe ho(listen to the phone)
PREM:(crying and crying)tum mujhe nahin chor sakti
ANGAD:yeh sab kaise ho gaya(phone pakre hua)
PREM:HEERRRRRRR
AFTER TWO WEEKS
SOMEONE ENTERED THE HOUSE
PREM:kon hai wahan,SONIA!(role os sonia will be played by sadhna of bidaii)
SONIA:(walking towards PREM)pehchan gay
PREM:tumhe kaise bhul sakta hu
SONIA:so HEER is now no more
PREM:shocked!
SONIA:heraan mat ho, tina ko mein takreeban do mahenoon se jante hu
PREM:HEER ne kabhi tumhara zikr nahi kiya
SONIA:par usne tumhara zikr kiya
PREM:tum usko kaise jante ho
SONIA:mein eik saal se london ke eik hospital mein doctor hu aur wahin par maine heer ka alaaj kiya tha. HEER jis bimari se suffer kar rahi thi usse uske bachne ke asaar buhat kam the
PREM:USNE MUJHE KYUN NAHIN BATAYA
SONIA:shid woh yehi chahti the KEH TUM YEH NA JANO
prem:kya
sonia:heer apni is bimari ko buhat pehle se jante thi aur MBA karna mehaz eik bahana tha
prem:mein kyun nahin uske taqleef ko mehsoos kar paya
sonia:(mobile par)prem eik emergency hai main tumse baad mein miloon ge
manasvi:heer ne to hame apna samjha hi nahin
angad:sahe keh rahi ho tum
prem:shaid bhabi hum hi usko samajh nahin paye, woh apnoon ko dukhi nahin karna chahti thi
manasvi:dukh to yeh hai ke uske zaroorat ke waqt hum uske saath nahin the
prem:(on mobile)sonia main tumse milna chahta hu
sonia :mujhe bhi tumhe kuch dena hai
To be continued...................

heer died so why did the lady say tina aur jab prem sonia se baat kar raha tha toh bhoomi kaun hai. 😕 😕 i am very confused.why did you have to kill heer. 😕

Creative mind yaar.Mind blowing story 👏 .plss continue........... [

ppl i really want to sorry many of u who got confused regrding bhoomi...tina, i actually i m writing many fan fic ,so sometimes i mix up the character ,again soorry

really nice yaar 😊

pls continue soon 👏👏

next day
prem:(cupboard se files nikalte hua,eik file girte hai)yeh kaise file hai,heer ke property ke papers
manasvi:agar yeh sub kuch such hai to heer ne humay bataya kyun nahin
prem:mein nahin janta yeh ladki kon hai jis ke naam heer ne apni property ka 20% kiya hua hai
manasvi:heer ko kum se kum is bare mein tumhe to batana chaiye tha
prem:kuch maloom nahin
IN THE HOUSE OF sonia
prem:tumne bulaya tha
sonia:are prem tum
prem:heran hota hu ke meri patni ki taqleef ke waqt mein uske saat nahin tha leken mere dost uske saat thi
sonia:heer bohat achi thi,aakhri waqt jo mein ne uske saat guzara woh mein kabhi bhool nahin paoon ge
prem;tum mujhe kuch dena chahti thi
sonia:(letter dete hua)heer jan gaye thi ke mein aur tum purane dost the is liya usne yeh letter tumhare naam mujhe diya tha
prem:(letter lete hua)
sonia:woh chahti thi yeh letter jald hi tumhe uske mot ke baad mil jaye
prem:(letter parhate hua)prem mujhe maaf kardena ke mein ne tumhe apni halat ke bare mein kuch nahin bataya,such to yeh hai ke mein tumhe dukh nahin dena chahti thishaid tumharwe pyar e mujhe kamzor kar diya tha
yeh khaat mere liye buhat kimti hai kyunki aaj jo baat mein tumse kehne ja rahi hoon woh buaht zaroori hai prem mein ne eik ladki ke naam maine apni property ka 20% naam bhi kiya hua haimujhe zindagi ne itna waqt nahin diya ke main tumhe is bare mein kuch bata pati is ladki ke bhai ne goa wale accident mein mere jan bachae thi leken do din baad mujhe pata chala ki woh is dunya main nahin raha aur uski aik behen hai is bachi ka koi nahin tha prem is liye main ne use adopt kar liya ab tum is bache ko yahan Mumbai le aoo take uske achi parwarish ho sake
tumhari heer!
sonia:darasaal heer khud bhi nahin jante thi ke jis taqleef se woh guzar rahi thi woh use zaada din jeene nahin de ge, warna woh tumhe zaroor bata te
prem:aaj mere dil mein tia ke liye izzat aur bhi bardh gaye hai
to be continued................