jiya na jaye...secret of heer

JIYA NA JAYE PIYA......
CAST:
PREM HARSHAD
HEER:ADDITI
ANGAD:ANGAD(BIDAII)

prem and angad r brothers while heer is prems college friend who due to some reasons living with prems family

story:
ANGAD:aaj mein bauhat khush hu.aaj mujhe manasvi milgae jise mena barsoon se chahan tha.
prem:bhai baaz dafa hum jise chahte hein woh hum se bauhat duur hota hai aur humko chahne wala bahut kareeb leken hum use dekh nahin pate (he went)
IN THE ROOM
HEER:(khayaloon mein gum,sitting on rocking chair)
PREM:(darvazee pe khara apne aap se kehta hai jaanta hu tum angad ko buhat chahati ho aur angad manasvi ko phir bhe use chahati ho)he went
HEER:kaha ja re ho, apne dost ka haal dekhna ayye the!
PREM:jaante ho yeh haal tumhara kis ke wajah se hai
HEER:nahin!
PREM:tumahare dil ke wajah se, tumhare dil ne tumhe andha kar diya hai
HEER: har bar yehi keh dete ho
PREM:phir bhi tumhare samajh mein kuch nahin aata,(prem went)
ANGAD:(on phone)mom aapka beta jald shaadi karne wala hai
HEER:(listening through window)
mom:kis se
ANGAD:manasvi se
HEER:shocked!(she went to her room)
IN THE ROOM
HEER:(woh apne haath ko glass ke sheesha se zakhmi kar leti hai aur glass tor dalti hai aur behosh ho jati hai)MOHABBAT KE HUM BHE SITAM JEE RAHE HAI played at background{this song is from HUMKO DEEWAANA KARGAI}
PREM:HEEERRRRR
IN THE HOSPITAL
PREM:(heer se)is dunya mein bahut chahne wale log hai par tum to apni dunya mein gum ho.( he went)
HEER:(on bed) PREM ki diary...........
TO BE CONTINUED................

kind of confused but very intresting
please continue

oh no! only one reply i hv written this fiction with great effort, it will gona be very intresting ppl but i think u people didnt like it

wow yaar nice story...........i think prem loves heer in ur story......m i rite???????????????

no no continue its very nice hope u will update soon

why u ppl r getting confused when i will sent the next part u will understand but i need more of ur replies to continue

very nice plz continue fast
plz i am begging you dont get any villains (i am sick of them in the serial)
but if you do thats also ok
anyways
GOOD LUCK

prem:(on sea),walking
song played at background( jag suna suna lage )
heer:prem tumne sach kaha tha hum baz dafa apne aas paas ke logon ke ehsasaat aur jazbaat ko bhool he jate hain
prem:(shocked to see heer)
heer:mein bhi kitni budhu hu jo shaks mujse itna pyar karta hai aur mere itne kareeb hai usko mein kabhi dekh hi nahin paye
prem:tum kis ki baat kar rahe ho, kon hai woh
heer:TUM
prem:(shocked)
heer:yeh sach hai ki mein angad ko buhat chahati hu leken tumhari diary parhane ki baad andaaza hua ke pyar ka maqsad sirf pana hi nahin hota
prem:meri diary
heer:(hath mein liya hua)sorry!
prem:(musqarate hua)its ok!
(just then both of them hug each other)
AFTER THREE MONTHS OF MARRIAGE OF heer and prem
prem:meri tie kaha hai?
heer:mere paas hai
prem:do na
heer:paas ayo ge to doon ge
prem:(paas ate hua)janab buhat romantic mood mein hai
heer:(tie pahnate hua)nahin aise baat to nahin hai
angad:premmm....heeerrr
heer:apne bulaya(prem bhi saath mein hai)
angad:mom meri aur manasvi ki shaadi ki date paki karne aa rahe hain
prem:thats great!
heer:(little sad)
IN THE ROOM
prem:tum khush nahin ho
heer:nahin, mein soch rahe thi ke rishtey asmanon par bane hote hai phir bhi insaan........
prem:mein tumhe samajh sakta hu but dont feel guilty.ok!
To be continued...........

oh yaar i m biggest fan of ur story........gr8 yaar gr8 👏