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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok Lets start

In the Juneja house there is a party going on for Heer and Mr.Juneja is going to give Heer a present.

Mr.J: ap log soch rahe honge ki yeh party kis khushi mein di hain, well yeh ladki heer isne humare hotel ko barbadi se bachaya hain aur is ke liye main ise us hotel mein manager ki post apoint karta hun aur ek baat Prem ke saath Saath Heer aur manmeet ki bhi shadi hogi woh bhi ek hi din par.

Prem : (here prem cant take his eyes off Heer and when he heres that anouncement he is heart broken, he is about to leave when his mother stops him)

Mrs.J: beta kaha ja rahe ho abhi toh party shuru huee hain, (thinking: main tumhe aise nahi jane doongi beta jab tak mujhe us ladki ke bare mein kuch pata nahi chaal jata tab tak tum mere saath raho ge)

the party begins there are lots of dancing going on between H and M and P is staring with anger and tears in his eyes. on the otherhand P's mom is sort of getting the idea that maybe the girl is H but doesn't seem to admit it.

THe party is over and H is walkin in the house (in some sunsan area in the house), its very dark and the wind is blowing the curtains.
P sees her walking and remembers what the girl from the jail said to him and decides to tell H that he was the one who freed her and that he really loves her and cant live without her.

P: H HHHH meri baat suno. Ruko H (he pulls her by the arms and pushes her against the pillars, while they are staring into eachothers eyes the wind is blowing the curtains and the song ORE PIYA is playing in the backround )

they come out from the staring
P:H mujhe tumse kuch kehna hain

the rest i'll post later
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
if someone wants they can continue 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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P: Mujhe kuch kehna hain
H: aap... yaha kya kar rahe hain koi dekh lega
P: dekh ne do, aaj mein tumhe mere dil ki baat bata kar rahoon ga

just then Prems mom comes and sees them together and heres thier conversation and figures out that Heers the girl that Prem likes
Mrs.J: Prem kya yeh hain woh ladki jise tuh pyar karta hain
P: mom aap
Mrs.J: mere sawal ka jawab do
P: haan mom yehi hain

Heer is confused and is about to leave but Prem holds her hand in front of his mom

Mrs.J: Prem tum jante ho ki tum kya keh rahe ho, Heer ki shadi hone walli
H: Umm maji, kya aap mujhe bata sakti hain ki akhi aap sab mere bare mein kya kehrahe hain

prems mom takes P to a corner and asks if u told her how u feel about her. Prem says no, she tells him to tell her that before u guys get married and i'll talk to ur father about this

Prem gets happy 😃 and hugs his mom

on the other hand Heer gets the advantage and runs from there and when prem turns around he doesnt find her but gives his very cute smiles and says that i'll talk to u at work and finally i'll tell that I LOVE U 😳

PLZ tell me how it is and do continue from where i left off
Edited by Krishna100 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
AWESOME
love your story
plz update fast 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
its awesomeeeeeeee too good updte more plzzzzzzzzzz asap
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dude....itss cooooollllll n nice....plz update the next part soon...

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