FF - Kuch Ankahe Rishte updtd pg 8 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
I think I need to speed up this fan fic..... will show the rest in flashbacks...what say...
three months later
- Lalit has got to know the truth about meher and heer and prem has got to know it was all daljeets plan. lalit and prem are both fuming and at heers insistence has let her stay on...he doesnt let daljeet know that he knows though
- prem and heer still stay away from junejas .....
- preet and meher have fallen in love and no body knows of their love story.
- Kulraks husband kuldeep has got a promotion and there is a party at home to celebrate the occassion....
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September 01, 2008.

the rays of the sun fall into the room and the first rays on a book shelf. The door opens and you see a man dressed in a white kurta pyjama.... A book falls and the man shakes his head. he goes to pick up the book and his eyes fall on a photograph, Its a photograpg he teasures for ever and its a photograph he holds very dear to his life. the man keeps on looing at the phtograph and tears well up in his eyes.
he feels someone put their hand on his shoulder. he loos back and up and sees his younger brother looking at him with mellow eyes...
Preet - aree tum, kan aaye.
Preet - jab aap is photograph ko dekh rahe the
prem - meher kaisee hai
preet - theek hai, par us sadme se bahar nahin aa pa rahee hai.. hamesha uskee paas jaati hai aur woh hai ki usse door hi bhaag rahee hain...
prem - woh sab se door bhaag rahee hai
preet - aap to theek hai na bhai
preem - haan bhi na bhi...
preet - matlab
- prem - kuch nahin, tum nahin samjhoge. meri life theek is kitaab ke paane ki tarah hai... khaali aur safed
preet - aur is kitab ke paane ko aapko bharna hai bhai.. you know bhai log kehte hai ki ek prem kahani ka ant ho gaya hai... par
prem - prem kahaniyan kabhi ant nahin hote.... koi kahani kabhi khatam nahin hota.. kisse bhi kahani ka ateet nahin hota...
preet - right ...kyun
prem - kyunki har ateet main ek kal chupa hai
preet = aur har kal, humhain ek naya saware dikhata hai
prem - shayad humare is kal main, ek naya saware chupa hai
preet - aisa sawera, jo humare zindagi roshni se bhar de, theek suraj ki kirano ki tarah...
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
That was a great part, can't wait till the next!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesomeeeeeee too good waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Prem looking out ...aisee kiran jo kabhi na dhale ...

Preet - aapko malum hai bhaiya, mujhe meher ki baut fikar hai.. theek hai, yeh dikhane ki koshish kar rahee hai... apni hassi main, apna gum chupanee ki koshish kartee hai... hamesha, yeh kehtee rehtee hai ki didi hamesha ke liye chod kar chalee jayegii...
Prem - Heer nahin jayegi ab, woh mujhe chod kar nahin jaa saktee...
Preet - Heer ka sab kuch yaad dilane ki aapke is koshish main main aapke saath hoon....aur mujhe malum hai, ki muje kya karna chahiye
Saying this... preet walks out,..
Prem - yeh to chala gaya, main bhi jaa hoon,.. heer ka uthne ka waqt ho gaya hai
Prem first decides to get ready so he goes and wears a white shirt with blue trousers... a naughty smiles comes on him as he wears the button of his shirt all ulta putta and just takes his tie around the collar of his shirt without actually wearing it....
Prem goes into the kitchen... he takes out the chai ko bartan, puts water in the bartan and hunts around for chai patti... he comes across the newspaper and after finding the chai patti, starts reading it.... he gets so engrossed reading the paper that he totally forgets that he has put the water to boil... its only when the water evaporates and he thinks he smells something burning that he realizes his mistakes...
he takes a cloth and loses control, the bartan falls as he burns his hand...
Un deterred, he washes the bartan and puts the water to boil again, this time more carefully... he puts chai patti and let it boil along with water... hunts around for dal cheeni, tulsi, saunt powder and elaichi and adds that... once this boil, he puts this in a kettle. takes a channi, puts it separately along with the kettle in tray....realizes he has forgotten to keep the milk, so takes the milk and warms it up...
once its all ready, he takes the tray and takes it to heer...
Heer looks at him and his shocked, as prem walks in - actually barges in to the room with a tray of tea and biscuits, wearing
unbuttpned shirt and just a towel drapped around him,...his tie around the collar of his shirt and his trousers on one of his shoulder....
Prem places the tray on the bed side table, goes to get ready, come out wearing his trousers, shirt still unbottoned the wtong way and tie still over his collar . As he comes out and realizes that heer has prepared two cups of tea. Prem smiles... He is about to go out when heer calls out to him and says chai... chai nahin peeyogee.. prem smiles and stops and goes towards her...
He takes a sip of tea and heer tells him, chai acchi hai... abd thinks to herself aur tumhe malum hai yeh acchi kyun hai.. kyunki - issme pyar chupa hai, woh pyar jisme mera koi hak nahin hai...
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesomeeeeee too good very nice waiting for next asap with long part asap.
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Heer looks at Prem and goes tiwards him, he unbottons the shirt buttons and fixes it ... then she takes the tie and makes him wear it.... eyes all very downcast...

Downstauirs door bell rings... tring trings...
Daljeet opens the door.... haan ji..
Guy - main kehta hooon ji, is ghar ke safedi mujhe yeh kehtee hai , ki ki..
Daljeet - ki..
Guy - ki aako suerf excel ki zroorat.... bilkul nahin hai....
Daljee - theek farmaiya hai aapna ... ap ab patli gali pakdi aur liklo...
Guy - aree aissee kaisee nikaloon.. aapki maathe ki lakeerin yeh keh rahee hai ki, is ghar main cheh jawaan ladkiyan rehtee hai,
Daljeety - huh
guy - haan aap to jawaan hai ... btw kaisee hai aap, mehmaan aaya hai, aur aap andar aane ko nahin kehtee hain..
daljeet - areee kahan jaa rahe ho tum, as the guy barges in , thaking her...
Meanwhile, prem and heer hear some commotion doenstairs... heer and prem wonder whats it all about... come out and see daljeet breaking her head over a guy..
Preet , gayatri , Lalit are trying hard to cntrol their laughter, so are harman, beeji, daijaan, beeji, kulraj and veera...
the guy is playing a guitar singing allah ke bande and insusting that daljeet dance kathak to that song.. Balwant - aree nachle le, pata nahin kaun hai, agar tere nachne se yeh moosibat yahan se chala jaata hain to kyun nahin,
Daljeet - Moosibat, nahin yeh to toofan hai, shaitaan hai...
Balwant - is liye kehta vich...nach le
Daljeet - aisee kaisee naach loon. kyun naachoon, kahan main delicate si, miss universe... naachna mujhe atta nahin, logon ko naachna, mera kaam hai...
Guy - looking up... and taking daljeets hand and making her dance as he sings ... those were the best days of life... summer of 69... guy making daljeet dance a kathak dance .... as meher and heer look bewildered along with balwant and ashlesha and the others are trying their best to control their laughter as daljeet is dancing away,....with high heals, wearing dark glasses....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome too good very funny part waitinggggggg for more.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry, i missed the update!
They were both great parts, and Prem was so cute in them!!!!

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Continue soon!
Sunayna

Edited by .xganga.x - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lovely update dear! Sorry I'm late as I was busy this weekend. I look forward to your continuing soon.

Love,
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