FF...HumTum Part Imp.Announcement pg.28. - Page 6

Awessomeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! 😃 😳 👏

sonu hoye sun lo main aa gayi hoye ..
dil dil pe chha gayi hoye....
ek haath pe danda te duje haath pe jhanda...

lols yaar ab main kya kahon..main jo bhi ff padti hoon woh accha hi hota hai..lucky u tera ff main pad rahi hoon.....haan thoda bahot faaltu hai par chalega..thoda bahot besura hai pad chalega..thoda bahot ajeeb hai par chalega..poora ka poora krrazzy hai par dodega..

well dear jokes apart it's really fabulous..well as i always say u the beast[note that spelling error is not coincidental] judge so it's one of the best ff's so far..
with emotions humour values respect tradition one liners all intact..that shows how superb the writer u are..
i luved the line "from wetting panties to wetting eyes"really touchy but at the same time comical..luved preet bro's gift to llalu uncle.a well deserved one..loved prem bhaiyyu's caring attitude...everything's just perfect..

and ya u really making iqbal bhaiyyu enter this show..wow that's great am a big big fans of his too..really adore him too along with harshad bhaiyyu..
eagerly waiting for his entry....

and ya waiting for shahid's entry also ..u a deewani of his...

well dear wat more to say..

haan hai koi to wajah jo jene ka mazza yun aane laga..
yeh haawaon main hai kya thoda sa jo nasha yun cchaane laga..
poocho na poovho
mujhe kya hua hai tere ff ko pad karkar..
.........

yeh ff hai
baithe bithae ..
jaannat dikhae ho..
oo rama..
yeh ff hai..

see bro saare gile shikve maaf..hve filled in for replying extra late..though had my comment reserved in the secind place..
hve written the longest comment u received so far ...
to u also reply lil long..
and ya bro next update jaldi but longer..okie..

luv u pall bro...

jaldi update..
and wanna see all dhamakedar entry's okies..


ooooooffffffff need to stop..

luv atop

oye meri behena waah waah itna lamba chauda commnt mara!!!
Hai main majawa...and topping it a song 4m jab we met!!!!I love you!!!
Yes dear I am too crazzy about Iqbal khan but his enry is gonna be after shahid's...
kyunki itni pyaar tumko karte hain hum kya janoge....
I am making the continuation maybe tomorrow I'll update!!!

Originally posted by: livelygal

oye meri behena waah waah itna lamba chauda commnt mara!!!
Hai main majawa...and topping it a song 4m jab we met!!!!I love you!!!
Yes dear I am too crazzy about Iqbal khan but his enry is gonna be after shahid's...
kyunki itni pyaar tumko karte hain hum kya janoge....
I am making the continuation maybe tomorrow I'll update!!!

i noe i noe..kyun accha laga na...
main aisi hi hoon
main hi hoon..
no worries will wait desperately for the entry...
dekh itna bada comment diya tujhe..agli baar mat expect karna..lols...
u happy na..

luv atop

Originally posted by: atop

i noe i noe..kyun accha laga na...
main aisi hi hoon
main hi hoon..
no worries will wait desperately for the entry...
dekh itna bada comment diya tujhe..agli baar mat expect karna..lols...
u happy na..

luv atop

Main khushi ke maar jhoom rahi hoon!!

Jhoom barabar jhoom barabar jhoom barabar jhoom....

Love ya lots behena...you made my day!!!

Originally posted by: livelygal

Main khushi ke maar jhoom rahi hoon!!

Jhoom barabar jhoom barabar jhoom barabar jhoom....

Love ya lots behena...you made my day!!!

mere super duper goody baady bro
chal it's good u happyy...
aaaawwwwwwww bro even u made my day by being happy..
,auja hi mauja..
mauja hi mauja..

luv atop

excellent... story so far.. continue writing it.. i loved all preet jokes.. and the shampoo funda.. it was funny.. don't kill us with confusion in the next update... lol.. i beg u.. no worries.. do confuse us and then blean would be coming your way.. jk... only on promise that you have some cute PH scene... hahaha
upate soon...

Hey guys jus wait ill tomorrow the updat is cooking will be served hot...well shabo dont miss 😉

Tazaa update hasir hai!

Heer and Meher stood on the road..chilly wind mercilessly biting their skin...They were given a teary farewell by their parents...and had started of in the car...little did they know that this little mechanical monster was gonna play games with them...Their car broke down on the way...and no help was available anywhere in vicinity.....
A car swooshed by and miraculously came to a halt.....A man..deadly handsome looking stepped out.

He came near them..
Man-Trouble?Can I help?
Heer-Haan hamari gadi kharab ho gayi hai...hame shimla pahaunchna hai!
Man-Hi I am Shahid.
Heer-Mera naam heer hai aur yeh meri choti behen meher hai...
She looked at meher for some reponse only to be greeted by the sight of meher's jaw threatening to touch the ground..(gravitational pull!!!!)
Meher-Kahin aap woh bollywood chidiya ghar waale shahid to nahi?
He said laughing easily...haan!! main wohi hoon!
Shahid-chalo main aap dono ko shimla tak chod deta hoon...
Heer-Aap taqleef kyun utha rahe hai?
Shahid-Main bhi shimla jaa raha hoon...tum dono ki company bhi mil jayegi...
Meher(aghast!)-Na baba na...hum aise waise ladki nahi hain..acch ghaarane se hain...hum kyun aapko company de?
Shahid-Main bhi aisa waisa nahi hoon...chalo pehle...tum mujhse dosti karogi?
Meher eyed his hand suspiciously....Then broke into a genuine smile..
"Abhi keh deti hoon bhari padega! Baad blame mat karna ki warn nahi kiya!"
Heer instructed the driver to repair the car and send it back home.
Shahid looked at both the girls...they were so childlike and innocent!!!
Soon Shahid,Heer and Meher were gluing together..under the influence of a heated Antakshari....

Prem and Preet were standing at the entrance of the camp...Preet looked up and read the arch which was glimmering with paint...It read "Mauj Masti Camp"
Preet-Kya happening naam hai...man na padga bhai aapki taste zabardast hai!!!
Prem-Jis din tu sudhar jayega main to shock ke maare mar jaunga
Preet-(really upset now) Just shut up bhai...marne ki baat bhi bola to main tumhara tamana poora kar doonga!
Prem(touched by his concern)-Theek hai..I am sorry.
He cutely crossed his hands and held his ears...Preet overwhelmed by love snatched prem into a lung-squeezing hug!
They walked into the camp and saw a man seated on a desk.They approached him and said
Preet-Hume yeh camp join karna hai..
The man looked up and as if evaluating them ...his peircing eyes were sort of calculating the damage the camp would undergo when preet was there...
Preet uncomfortable said-Hum terrorists nahi hai!
Man-ussi ka to shaq hai...yeh ladka(pointing at prem)shareef lagta hai...magar tumhara koi bharosa nahi..
Prem broke into peals of laughter while Preet flushed red.
Preet-Oye Mr. matlab kya hai tumhara?
Man-Kuch nahi...lagta hai shaq sahi nikal raha hai...shareef to nahi ho magar brains bhi nahi hai umhare paas...
Preet(infuriated)-Hey U loser tum hote kaun ho mujhe is tarah baa karne waale?
Man-Khair chodo...Waise Glad to meet you...
He said putting his hand 4ward towards Prem.
Man-I am Anurag Basu,Organiser of this camp!
He winked at an embarassed Preet..
Anurag-Chill buddy! Preet...that's ur name right?
Preet nodded like a dummy.
Anurag-Preet come on relax we will share a wunnerful rapport I see. You & Me!!!
Preet grinned and picked up his bags and said"Wow! Partner in mischief!!!"
Anurag-Hey but the deal is on in one condition...You will not tell my wife!
Preet-Sure...No obstecles in my fun!!!
Anurag-Prem you seem very quite unlike this atitude bomb...are you like this only or are you a shy guy?
Preet-Wow! you gussed rite...he is shamila type...
Prem-No way main sirf yeh dekh raha hoon ki business duniya ki badshah kitna down to earth hai!
Anurag-Bussiness is an addiction...but Fun is my passion! There is my little secret. Waise guys there are only 10 ppl coming to this camp....
Prem(puzzled)-Sirf dus?
Anurag-Haan! Meri patni chose the best 10 she felt and called them over..you guys are selected so you are here!
Prem-But why only 10?
Anurag-Oh! Well she felt that too many youngsters is not a good idea it means trouble!!!
Preet-Waise yeh camp kis liye hai?
Anurag-I wanted to hang around with youth to feel more youthful..so I called his camp..
Prem-(to himself)...very wierd!!! Yaar prem you have to focus on why you are here!!! So focus!!
Prem-Aap ka ek beta hai na?
Anurag-Haan woh nalayak kameena yahaan kahaan mazaa loot raha hoga!
Uska naam bhi prem hai...ek sakshat ram hai aur doosra poora ka poora ravan!!! Tum Dono ke naam ek jaise kyun ho gaye?
Prem- Uncle main usse mil na chahta hoon!
Anurag-Itni bhi kya jaldi hai? Pehle mere jailer ko mil lo...main to bechara qaidi ho kar reh gaya...aur phir freshen up ho jao..main tumhe sabse mila doonga!
Prem-Theek hai!
Suddenly he felt as if the wind was whispering sumone's arrival...He turned back to look at the entrance...
Heer smilingly said..."Prem main aa rahi hoon!" into the breeze....