FF...HumTum Part Imp.Announcement pg.28.

Hi guys...well I thought of beginning a fanfic. This a effort to keep you all entertained! Hope you ppl like this...

Presenting before you all a sincere endeavour of mine...An everlasting tale of love,an unfinishable verse of toghterness,an undeniable feeling of attraction, an undefiable emotion of belonging...an unfathomable depth of 'You & Me....Hum Tum...'

The first 10 parts are written by me and then the reamaining parts are gonna be continued by our dear nandoo di...

Hope you enjoy!

Part 1-Page 1

Part 2-Page 4

Part3-Page 8

Part 4-Page 11

Part 5-Page 13

Part 6-Page 15

Part 7-Page 22

Part 8-Page 23

Part 9-Page 25

Part 10-Page 27

HUM TUM....!!!!

The kite flying season had begun...festivity had kissed the air...celebrations and kites were showing off their ominpresence...
The smell of Punjab was delicious, the mud was sacred..filled with partriotism and josh, the trees were dancing to the rythms of the flirtatious breeze, the fields were sparkling with the beads of hadwork of the farmers fun and floric was a religion here...the freshness of life lingered here...in this realm of silky and satiny beauty of nature...

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Kites were competing to make each other sleep cosily on the ground and themselves continue the tryst with the zenith....


Bhatinda----A girl was running among the mustard fields, touching them with her soft and delicate skin...her eyes were like chandeliers reflecting emotions at different angles but continuously glowing with liveliness...the expression of cheerfulness was a permanent resident of her face...hers was a unision of classic beauty and lovliness...an image of innocence....a spark of pristine purity!!! She was holding a kite in her hand and laughing a crystal clear laugh...a melliflous melody blending with the nature. Her hair was tied in a loose plait and shining with natural lustre...
Her kite got stuck in a tree...and she was making efforts to release it from the grip of the branches

A voice,loud and loving voice boomed through the golden fields...where farmers dedicated their toil to reap a golden harvest....
"Heer!!! Kahan hai tu?"
The girl turned revealing her stunning beauty like a thunderbolt and voicing a reply ..."Ayi maa!"
Introducing Heer....

A clear sky sheathed the luxurious villa..
The smartly dressed helps were being given tips of quality services...today was a big day...Mr Lalit Chopra,the wizard of the business world and typhoon of successful ventures was coming for a brief stay in the villa..everything had been furnished with utmost refinement and superior quality of arrangements..
2 Minutes were left for his arrival...his punctuality was 'business world' famous.... A sleek limousine dragged into the gates...perfect timing. The chauffeurer killed the engine and got out.
A man dressed in a greyish suit stepped out. The lines on his face were friendly totally contradicting the image he was supposed to be having. Two more guys...blokes with impressive personalities and dashing looks made thir appearances...they were dressed in casuals both in tee-shirts,rugged coloured jeans and sports shoes....their over all look was...the "WE RULE!" type!
Introducing Prem Chopra

Inroducing Preet Chopra

Kaisi lagi? Well tell me now only if it is gud ...I wanna know wat u ppl think of this beginning....Plz feel free to give your suggestions and comments!

i really got dragged into the beginning about Heer... this is very gud, i really liked it.
would love to read some more especially bout the three dashing brothers, u know the 'WE RULE' type 😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: salma_786786

i really got dragged into the beginning about Heer... this is very gud, i really liked it.
would love to read some more especially bout the three dashing brothers, u know the 'WE RULE' type 😆 😆 😆

oye only two are der...after today's episode I got angry wid harman so i kicked him out of my chopra charming brothers!!!

I am glad you liked it!

yaar sowi didnt realise was hang up on Heer's part, it was sooo deep n enchanting .....yeh harman made me sooo angry 2day

MERE JANNU!! 🤗

I loved it! Will definatly keep up with it! Beautifly written! Love the pictures that go along with the story! 👏 👏 👏

Shabz

livelygal, first of all, you have amazing writing skills! I was hooked! You wrote so beautifully and descriptively about each character! Loved it!

I already loveee it livelygal!!!!!!1 👏 👏...it was really beautiful & I loved ur details...good job!!!!!!!! 😃

chalo I am happy dat u ppl liked it!!! waise shabo I am thinking about bringing shahid into this not as a role but at least like special apperance type!!! kya khayaal hai?
nandooo I am glad you like it...waise inspiraion abhi tu hi hai kyunki tune hi to bola tha FF shuru kar!!
Priya tumhari tareef sun kar dil garden garden ho gaya!!! Aise hi pashte rehna aur comment dete rehna!
shockalot...pehle to waah kya username hai aur phir lucky u to share SRK's bday!!! I am really glad that u r liking it!!! please continue reading!

chal hat palat,...
bahot badi badi phenki hai tune is ff mein..
oye tu mere bhaiyyu ko kahin cool dude arrogant rich brat to nahi bana raha na...
chal teri taarif karti hon..
pehle to totally faltu title./
phir to boring intro..
phir repeated entry..
aur sabse badi baat..
saare main characters to same hain..

haila tujhe jhatka to nahi laga na meri jaan....

haha sry yaar ..

ab kyya karoon tarif karke thak gayi aur ab koi shabd hi nahi rahe..main bilkul nishabd ho gayi isliye naya tarika aapnaya.....hope tujhe bura nahi laga.

bura na maano holi hai... haha hoho hehe hae hae..

chal i think u are the best judge..
and in one word
it's rocking...
yaaraan ab update to karo.
ho it's rocking.
oh ya it's rocking,........



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