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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
thanchu so much..

but where r ju missing dis days yaar
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
Hey Niti..
I wonder how come I dint see this before...I went thru all of it in one go..
Was really cuteee and lubbing it..and its cute how u added a new character nivi..and there is no ash bhi....
Good Job!!👏 Looking forward to the next part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
gr8 part loved it... prem is soooo cute... hes sooo shy... jus 1 suggestion can u rite who is sayin wat dialougue, coz im gettin a bit confused!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
great update niti
update soon
this is my 2nd ff that i read and it is awesomeeeeeee.. 👏
i can imagine me the way prem is shy 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
It was awesome Niti!!!!!!!!!! 😃 👏...aww poor Preet!! 😕 😉 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: liya16

love u al for commenting

n I luv preet n prem. n ur ff😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
thanchu so much dat ju r upadetzing it 2day otherwise I was abt 2 tell preet dat ju dun lub him anymoreeeeee 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48

😊

Part 5
prem-pm,heer-he,harman-ha,nivi-ni,lalit-l
preet-pt,gayathri-g,veera-v,kulraj-kul,meher-m,teji-t,daljee t-dj,ashlesha-ash..
v="accha toh phir done"
pt-"done"
***
veera cuimng 2 nivi's room
ni-"kya hua??tu itni khush kyun lag rahi hai..kahin tera dil haath se phisal toh nahi gaya na?"
m-"chup kar na nivi"
v-"woh mein preet se milkar aa rahi hoon"
ni-"us lafange se"
v &m-"nivi!!!!'
ni-"acha sorry"
v-"woh keh raha tha jab hum dono ka maksat prem bhaiyaa aur heer ko milane ka hai toh hame aath mein kaam karna chahiye'
ni-"zindagi maien pehle baar usne akal ki aat ki hai"
m-"meri samajh mein teh nahi aata ki tum hamesha usse itna chidti kyun ho"
ni-"tum use thik tarah se janti nahi..woh na ekdum bondu hai"
v-"bas bas mere samne mere nhai ki burai ..mein bardasht nahi kar sakti..well humhe 12 baje chat par jaana hai"
***
it was 11:45 and hey were ready to go to terrace...
t-"heer tumhara duppata chat par hai use wahan se lekar aao .thik hai"
he-"jee maa"
prem too heard this one and followed heer to the terrace
preet,nivi,meher and veeraslowly walked to the terarace and found a place to talk
pt-"so kya plan hai"
ni-"well hum log kal yahan se nilkenge"
m-"do din baad haldi"
v-"uske baad mehndi aur ohir sangeet aur shaadi"
ni-"that's it sngeeth"
pt-"wt sangeeth"
ni-"hume sangeet functionmein kuch karna hoga"
v-"par sangeeth toh aurthon ka functionhai usme ladke allowed nahi hai"
m-"vera sahi keh rahi hai"ni-"umm..no probs..hum aisa karte aurton ka sangeeth subah rakte hai aur biji se jaakar ehte hai ki sab logon ke liye function shaam ko rakhe..usi bahane family gettogether ho jaayega"
pt-"well idea accha hai"
ni-"i know nivi ke saare ideas acche hai"
v-"par hum karenge kya"
ni-"woh mein tum logon ko samjha dungi"
***
on the other part of terrace heer was aking her duppata and prem was just watching her..
heer turned back
he-"tum yahaan?"
pm-"kyun meinyahan nahi aa sakta"
he-"aisi baat nahi hai..woh..."
pm-"woh mein..umm..tumse kuch kehna chahtha tha"
he-"kaho na"
pm-"umm...kyaa..tum..ummm mujse..umm..wohkul di ki shaadi ki shopping ho gayi"
he-thinking-"hay rabba yeh kab mujse apni dil ki baat kahega"
he-"ho gayi"
pm-to himself-"beta prem himmat rakh"
at that time as heer started to go back her leg twisted and she fell
straight
into prem's
arms..
she closed her eyes...and when she opened she was lost in those eyes
Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara

Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you … so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
I love u
I love u so
Baby i love u

Har dua mein shamil tera pyaar hai
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai
Dhadhkon ko tujhe se hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai rahtein
Tujhse hai chahtein

Har dua mein shamil tera pyaar hai
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai
Dhadhkon ko tujhe se hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai rahtein
Tujhse hai chahtein

Tu jo mili ek din mujhe
Mein kahin ho gaya lapata

(O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa ) ….. 2

(Kar diya Deewana dard-e-Kash ne
Chain cheena isqh ke ehsaas ne
Bekhayali di hai tere pyaas ne
Chaya suroor hai
Kuch to zaroor hai) ….. 2

Yeh dooriyan
Jeene na de
Hal mera tujhe na pata

(O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa) ….. 2

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you … so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
Baby I love u
I love u… .... type=text/javascript> ..
her leg was ok thankfully and prem put his hand forward for a dance..she was soo lost that she gave her hand and they started dancing...
Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya
Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya
Chun liya
Maine Sun liya

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin
Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin
Ek kar doon aasmaan zameen
Kaho yaaron kya karoon kya nahin

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke
Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke
Reh jaoon jaise main haar ke
Aur choome vo mujhe pyaar se

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
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at that time preet,nivi,meher and veera who were returnig back saw them
m-"woh dekho"
ni-"oh my god"
v-"hay rabba"
pt-'my gudness"
ni-"preeet tumhara mobile hai"
pt-"hann"
she snatched the mobile and captured the video..
after sum time heer' leg twisted still agan and prem lifted her in hes arms nd moved towards the exit..
the 4 f them his nearby as they din want to spoil the romantic moment...
and prem carried her down to her room
***
he made her lay down on her bed
and then
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story to be continued sooooon
hope u like d it
plzzz comment
love
niti
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
Hey just caught up with all the parts, very nicely written. Update soon.

shwetha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
excellent work so far...
continue soon!!!

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