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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
Awww Niti bery nice update👏....Loved the way u add in songs...
Looking forward to the next part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
hey Niti
jus catchd up quickly now....
my god ur very talented n ur song choices are realy gud
loved it...
plz do continue....
wat happens in Heer's room????? 😆 😆 😆
wel done 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
please update soon and please dun't forget to pm me... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
hey plz update fast
waiting to see what happens to Prem and heer
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
hii

jst finished reading all ur parts... ur ff is superb!!!

luking forward to the nxt part...

if possible plz pm me whenever u update

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
nitiii .......... kamal hai yaar i want more i want more. plz update soon. i think its the best ff ever.
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
OMG NITI ILY!!!!! 😊
to good girl!!!!
but u left us on a clip hanger 😛
update quickly
plzzzzz 😊

pawani
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58

Part 6

Prem placed Heer on her bed..

Heer-"ouch.."
Prem-"bahut zyada dard ho raha hai kya??"
Heer-"nahi …who…"
Prem-"jhot toh tumhe bolna aata hi nahi isiliye koshish bhi mat karna"
Heer smiled…She knew that he knew her better than herself…and she was in …
Prem took a balm from her cupboard…And while searching for it..she saw his pic in a frame and words written "I Love U prem-Heer"..He was very happy…but din show his feelings..
Prem-"apne pair dikhao"
Heer-"kyon"
Prem-"balm lagata hoon na warna"
Heer-"warna…"
Prem-"kuch nahi.."their eyes wer locked in an intense gaze…there was actually no need of words to be spoken b'coz their eyes spoke all their feelings..
Prem was rubbing her feet….Heer was looking lovingly at Prem…
AT that time Meher came in
Meher-"di aapko kya hua"
Heer-kuh nahi pair phisal gaya tha
Meher—pair nahi dil phisal gaya hai
Heer-tune kuch kaha
Meher-nahi toh ..arre prem ji aap jayyiye mein maalish kar dungi…bekaar mein kyon pareshaan ho rahe hai..aur di inhe takleef dene ki kya zaroorat thi mujhe ya nivi ko bulaliya hota
Prem reluctantly left the ple looking at Heer 4 sumtime…
Prem-to himself-kya khaak takleef hogi…itna accha romantic mood bigaad diya..
Nivi,preet,veera laughed on seeing prem..they wer watching all this and they had sent meher at the rong time…air unhe thoda toh tarsana hoga..
Next morning:
Gaya3-sab packing ho gaya kya ..arre use waha mat rakho….ramu kaka kya kar rahe ho…kal jaana hai aur ek bhi kaam thik se nahi hua ..aur bacche kaha hai…sab ne packing ki kya…aur aaj toh shopping pe jaana hai..hey bhagwaan mein kya kya dekhoon
Teji-parjaayi ji phikar mat kijiye saari packing ho gayi…meine dekha hai..aap shant ho jaayiye…haan bachon ki packing ho gayi aur baaki sab bhi ..ab aap taiyaar ho jaayiye hum sab shopping chalte hai..pata nahi yeh bacche waha par kitni der karenge..
Gaya3-aap ne thik kaha parjaayi ji ab
In the evening everyone had completed their shopping..Packing was done..Everyone was waiting for the marriage …many things wud be sorted there..kuch jodiyan banegi..kuch dosti..kuch jagde..noone knew that surprise awaited there in Ludhiana..everyone 's life wud change there
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Precap-
"main yaha nahi bhaitungi"
"toh jagahkahan hai"
"is lafange ke saath mein kaise bhaitu"
"par..tu sun na"
"prem-heer tum dono aage bhiato..mein bhi aage bhaitungi aur preet bhi,kul di aur veera 2 nd row par aur meher aur harman peeche"
"par aage paanch log??"
"agar preet chahe toh peeche bhai sakta hai"
"par-var kuch nahi"
the devil's mind had worked
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Awaitin for ur comments….
Thax 4 commetnig sorry for not replying individually i hav been very buzy eid my studies…
Thanx for commenting once agn..
Plsss tell me if u like it or not and how i can improve it…
Love
Niti
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
yes thats very nice bechaare premeer ka romantic scene hamesha spoil ho jaata hai
really nice dear do continue i will be waiting
its for u 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
awesome too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next with long part asap.

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