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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
Niti...kahan hai??? update I mean.... 😳
Waiting for the next part...jaldi kar 😡 😃 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
sorry cudn;t update 2day....had an outing wid my family...well will surely update tomorow
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
^^looking forward to it niti 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24

Part 2

everyone was bak home...everyone wer happy as they had won the match...back home everyone headed towards their room to fresh...prem preet wer at prem's room..prem had freshed up and was in a towel..he had hurt his shoulder..

"PB don worry mom frst aid lekar aa rahi hogi"

"worry mein nahi tu kar raha hai"

"mein kya karu PB i love u so much"

"chal zyada maska mat maar"

at that time heer came with the first aid..and PP thought it was their mom and asked her to cum in

she came in and saw prem..

"tum..heer ..yahaan..woh"

"PB aap haklaana chodiye..remember u r only in a towel."

"woh mein bahar jaai hu..aap change kar lijiye"

she went out and started laughing thinking abt prem's reaction..

at that time gayathri came

"beta tum apne aap has kyon rahi ho?prem ko first aid diya"

"nahi aunty woh.."

and she naraated the incident..both of them wer laughing ..at that time preet came out

"heer..u can go in..ab bhai dressed hai"

'ok'

she went in

"mom in dono ka chkkar chalega kya"

"tu mujse kya pooch raha hai?apne PB se pooch.."

"PB ki dil ki haalat toh mein jaanta hoon"

"tune kuch kaha"

"no nothing"

in prem's room

"tum apna shirt utaroge"

"huu"

"woh umm first aid"

"aa theek hai"

he removed his shirt and she started cleaning his wound and pt bandage and they wer ocassionally stealing glances at each other

after she put the bandage..

"toh mein chalti hoon"

"ek ..baat poochni thi"

"poocho"

"tum aaj late kyon ayi..meine tumse kaha tha na waqt par aane ko"

"woh..mein.."

"agar tum na ati toh shayad mein khel nahi paata"

"aisi koi baat nahi ..woh mein meher ke saath thi..aur tum bhi jaante ho ki mein tuhara match kabhi miss nahi karungi"

"hmm pata hai..woh bahut dino se main tumse kuch kehna chahta tha"

"kaho na"

"woh..umm..i.."

at that time preet entered

"PB kitni der laga rahe hai aap"

after seeing heer

"woh..umm sorry..shayad galat time par aa gaya"

"aisi koi baat nahi hai preet"

"mein chalti hoon"

"PB did u propose her"

"what??"

"mujse kuch mat chupaiye muje sab pata hai .."

"ab tak toh nahi"

"hen go ahead bro.."

"fine"

***

little later

someone was near the security fighting with the guard...

arre meine kaha na mein lalit uncle ko jaanti hoon"

"hum aapko andar jaane nahi de sakte"

"par.."

then she took out some money and gave it to guard..

"ab toh jaane do"

"jee theek hai"

a girl came in dressed in jeans and sphaggeti top..she was looking cool...

she had a big bad wid her

maans and juneja's wer at their living roon

she opened the main door and shouted "surprise!!!"

lalit-"NIVI!!!!!!!!!!"

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that's all for now...thanx to all those who commented

hope u liked it..please do comment...

nivi is not a charecter from serial.. a fictionous charecter

love

niti😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
great part niti..update soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
aww..that was romantic..."tum apna shirt utaroge"...I wish I was there to see him! 😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx karen and priya....

more comments plzzzzzzzzzzz...silent readers plzz comment 😃

niti

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Posted: 17 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: liya16

thanx karen and priya....

more comments plzzzzzzzzzzz...silent readers plzz comment 😃

niti

Ur totally welcome yaar but what's ur name??? I should know the person's name who writes these awesome FF😆 and u wrote really good ones in SZ as well!!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: liya16

accha bekaar mein pakati ho 😆

😆😆 Yup..that's what I'm all about!!😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
woow.tht was great.plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa

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