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Post please...eagerly waiting😭

When r u going to update???😒

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CHAPTER 33

Heer anxiously knocked on the massive doors of Juneja Mansion. Trying to conceal her excitement, Heer knocked again impatiently, until she heard someone open the door.

"Heer babhi?" It was Preet who answered. Heer gave Preet a brilliant smile and engulfed him in a big bear hug.

"Arre...Aap bare ache mood mein hai" Preet said, grinning as he hugged Heer back. Heer entered Juneja mansion, eyes darting left to right...looking for her former childhood nemesis.

"I'm in a very good mood today. I figured it out...I figured it all out!" Heer replied, her voice holding excitement as her eyes searched for Prem.

Frustrated that she wasn't able to spot him yet, Heer turned to Preet, "Prem kahan hai? I really need to talk to him."

Preet's smile fell, "Woh...babhi..." He hesitated, not sure how to break the news...especially now since Heer finally looked so happy.

Heer's smile faltered as her heart sank...she got a bad feeling in the pit of her stomach. Seeing Preet's change in expression, Heer knew that the news was not good

"He's not here babhi...PB left last night..." Preet finally said the dreaded words, wiping the smile off of Heer's face.

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Prem refilled the water in Mischief's stall. He was large enough to have his own stall, but still young so Prem kept him close to Sweetheart, who was in the stall right next to Mischief. It was evening time at Juneja ranch and Prem dismissed the stable hands early. He wanted to be alone while he worked...and tirelessly he worked to keep his mind off his heartache.

Evening went into nightfall. After refilling Mischief's water, Prem walked to Raja's stall and started grooming him. He refilled the food for Raja and did the same for the other horses. He paid extra care to Layla, for she was now pregnant. Prem remembered the last time he was here...with Heer...as they watched Raja and Layla mate. The shooting pain pierced his heart...he missed her.

Trying his best to ignore the pain, Prem quickly finished replenishing Layla's food and moved on to another task. Sweetheart neighed in that moment and knowing that she was summoning Prem, he walked over to her stall.

The moment he reached the opening, Sweetheart stuck out her head and nuzzled Prem's shoulder. Her big brown eyes looked at him sympathetically. She was trying to comfort him...because she knew that Prem was hurting. Prem smiled at the sweet gesture. Animals had a way of knowing how you were feeling...and Sweetheart always had a special connection with him.

"I'll be alright girl." Prem said affectionately and caressed Sweetheart's neck. She neighed in response and bumped his shoulder playfully, causing Prem to chuckle.

There was a shift in the air and Prem's chuckle died out. He felt her before he saw her. That flutter in his heart every time she was close. Prem turned to face the entrance..and true enough...in walked Heer.

"Heer..." Prem breathed. She stood at the entrance, staring at him with those big eyes. They looked tired...but they didn't look sad. Prem covered his own heartache and casually asked, "What are you doing here?"

Right after Preet told her that Prem left, Heer panicked a little, afraid that she was too late and that she lost Prem for good. When she asked Preet where Prem went, he said that Prem didn't tell anyone. He just said he needed to get away for a bit. Heer felt helpless for a moment until she realized that Prem can only be in one place. She knew Prem well enough to know where he would be...and Heer drove tirelessly until she was finally standing in front of him.

"You know...if you wanted to hide...at least go to a less obvious place." Heer replied, walking further into the stables.

Prem turned away and pretended to work on something. "I wasn't hiding." He answered gruffly.

"No...you just ran away...coward." Heer poked, knowing that her words hit a nerve, as it was meant to.

"I did NOT run away." Prem snapped back, glaring at Heer.

"No?" Heer challenged, walking closer to Prem "...Admit it...you didn't want to see me get back with Manmeet."

Prem's eyes sparked, he masked the pain he felt in his heart with anger and clenched his fists. "Are you trying to start a fight?" Prem asked in a warning tone.

Heer smirked and stuck out her chin in a challenging gesture, "And what if I am?" Heer said, placing the bait.

"What if I told you that I called Manmeet really late last night?" Heer poked, seeing Prem clench his jaw in reflex.

Just a little more'' thought Heer. "What if I told you...that I was with Manmeet just this morning?" Heer pushed.

Hook...line...and sink.'' Heer thought when she saw Prem's control snap. He grabbed Heer's arms, colliding her body to his and crushing his mouth on hers.

He kissed her with fervor and she matched his need with hers. It felt like ages since he last kissed her...touched her...held her. But the moment Prem realized what he was doing, he pulled away and instantly put some distance between them. Heer saw the anger vanish from Prem's eyes and the pain remain.

"Agar Manmeet se pyaar karti ho toh yahaan kya kar rahi ho? Jao...uske paas...mein nahin rokunga." Prem said hauntingly, turning away from Heer.

Heer's heart clenched, knowing that her words were hurting him, but she continued. "Yes...I did see Manmeet this morning..." Heer said. She saw Prem close his eyes in pain, but she needed to get the words out, "...par sirf yeh bataane ke liye ke mein kissi aur se pyaar karti hoon."

Prem's eyes flew open in surprise as he turned to face Heer. "Yes...I love someone else..." Heer said, "...you might know him actually...he's handsome...charming...a fantastic basketball player...but an even better CEO." Heer said, and knowing that she had Prem's full attention, she continued, "He's so arrogant...always getting on my nerves...but probably one of the most caring...sweetest guys I've ever known...minus the chicken legs of course." Heer said.

Prem's eyes were full of emotion as he listened intently. And Heer's face turned serious. She took one step towards him.

"Do you remember when you protected me from that man at my Bachelorette party and you got hurt on your arm?" Heer asked, remembering that moment like it happened yesterday. When Prem simply nodded, Heer continued, "tab pehli baar laga...ke tum humesha mera saath doh ge."

Heer then took another step towards Prem, her voice filling with emotion, "Jab tumne mujhe woh haar pehna ya tha shaadi se pehle...tab ehsaas hua...ke humare beech ek ajeeb sa raabta hai..."

When Prem remained quiet, emotions reflecting on his face, Heer continued, trying to keep her voice steady as she felts tears forming, "Jab tumhe mujhe woh piano gift kiya tha...tab yeh patha chala...ke tumse acha dost ho hi nahin sakta...agar koi mujhe phirse muskurana sika sakta hai...toh woh sirf tum ho..."

Heer took another step towards Prem, "Karva Chaut ke din...jab tumne meri sari uthayi thi...tab patha chala...ke humare beech dosti ke saath izzat bhi hai. Jab tumhe chot lagti hai...yah tum udaas hote ho...toh mujhe bhi dard hota hai...yahaan..." Heer whispered, placing her hand over her heart. Her tears were flowing freely now, but she continued.

"Preet aur Meher ke sagayi ke din, jab tumne kul ke haasa tah...tab aisa laga...ke duniya ke saari kushi mere paas hai. Jab tumne mujhe uss raat pehli baar chua..." Heer whispered, she was only a foot away from Prem now. She could almost hear his heartbeat, "tab yeh dil phirse dhadakna shuru kiya...phirse pyaar mein vishwaas karna seeka..."

~Saiyyan...~

Prem couldn't resist any longer, he reached out and cupped Heer's face, wiping away some of her tears, his own eyes filled with emotion. "Jab tumne kal raat mujhse dur chale gaye teh...tab ehsaas hua...ke tum mujhse kitna pyaar karte ho...itna pyaar...ke mein tumhare aage har gayi..." Heer whispered.

She let out a little sob and titled her face into his hand, absorbing his warm touch. Prem's eyes were wet too as he caressed Heer's face. He felt his heart soar in that moment. She loved him back...she loved him back.

Heer wrapped her fingers around Prem's wrists. "Idiot...bathaya kyon nahin?" Heer scolded softly, "Mujhe roka tak nahin...?" Heer whispered, amazed at how selfless Prem was.

Prem let out a little chuckle amongst the tears, "Yeh bhi bathaana padega...tum khud yeh baat samajh nahin sakti? Freckle face..." Prem replied affectionately, causing Heer to giggle in return, even though her eyes remained watery.

~Saiyyan...~

Heer lifted up her face and let Prem kiss her again. This time...it was slow...and it was soft. Like they were savoring this moment...savoring each other. When they pulled back, they stared at each through heavy eyes, noses touching. "Let's try this again shall we?" Prem whispered.

Heer knew exactly what he meant and let Prem back her into an empty stall. They slowly undressed each other and laid down on the hay. This time...they knew that they were not going to be interrupted. This time...it was going to be just about them.

Prem lowered himself to Heer and kissed her again. He slowly trailed his lips down her neck and kept going. Heer moaned when he trailed over a sensitive spot. When he used his tongue on her, Heer lost herself completely. All she felt was Prem...all she knew was Prem.

Her hands caressed over his taught muscles and her nails dug into his back, encouraging him. There was a point when Heer moved on top of Prem and gave just as much as she took. When he finally filled her, it was like coming home. It was meant to be...and it was meant to last...

After Prem and Heer finished making love, they simply laid there, in each other's arms... listening to the sounds of the night. Heer was sprawled over Prem's chest as he softly caressed her slim back.

~ Heere moti...mein na chahun...~

Heer heard Prem's steady heart beat, and her own heart beat matched his in return. They synced together. She realized it then, that her heartbeat recognized Prem's love before she did. That's why it reacted every time he was around. Silly of her to not understand that until now. Heer lifted herself up and looked down at Prem, her eyes reflecting the unconditional love she felt in her heart. "Ek baat poochu?" Heer asked. Prem tucked Heer's hair behind her ear. "Bolo..." Prem replied.

"Agar mein wapas nahin aati toh? Toh tum kya karte?" Heer asked.

Prem rolled them over until he was ontop, "Aati kaise nahin? Tum par sirf mera haq hai." Prem replied seriously, his eyes piercing her soul. "Bachpan se tum par sirf mera haq raha hai...tumhari hassi par mera haq hai..." He started, repeating the words he has said to her before, "tumhare neend par mera haq hai..." he said and placed a kiss on her forehead, "...tumhare saanson par mera haq hai..." and kissed her cheek, "...tumhare dhadkano par bhi mera haq hai..." and kissed her other cheek, "aur tumhare rooh par..." He whispered, hovering his lips over Heer's.

"Sirf tumhara haq hai..." Heer whispered back, and captured Prem's lips with hers, sealing the promise with a kiss.

~Mein toh chahun...sangam tera...~

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THE END!

Don't go yet! There is an Epilogue that will be posted! 😛

I want to take this time to thank everyone who stood by this fanfic and gave it so much LOVE. you guys are the reason i kept going even when it was hard. I truly thank you from the bottom of my heart. Your comments are always so overwhelming. So THANK YOU!

I hope this fanfic left you with a wholesome feeling. Thank you again for the support and stay tuned for the Epilogue!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#96
feeling sad that the story ended
Pls start new start
I really enjoyed reading ur story
Nice update
Will be waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ahhh! Finally you have posted! It was so so so beautifully written. I love how Heer confessed her love to Prem. It was so wonderful👏 . The way you have described each and every emotion of PremEer in the stable scene was superb. And they had consumated again but this time not only with care and respect but also love for each other...true and unconditional love.
Though I wanted a longer update but it's ok, no problem as you have mentioned there will be an epilogue. Eagerly waiting for that.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey dear, post the epilogue please...waiting.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Please post the epilogue soon...eagerly waiting.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey dear please post the epilogue...it has been so long😭

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