MEET ANNIVERSARY OS - Na Seekha Jeena Tere Bina Humdum- Pg 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
#21
SHORTIE#5

Thodi si Shararat:
"Bhai yeh Kriti Sanon na..badi hot hai...especially iski smile ...muah...", Preet exclaimed
" Preet voh...", said Prem

"Arey yeh voh chodiye bhaiyya isse dekhiye...Ankita lokhande...Hayye main marjawannn"

"Preet tu...", Prem tried again

"Kya PB aap bhi...aapse tareef ni hoti kya...dil bada thoda bada kijiye...jaise ki mainnn", saying so he turns around and stops mid-way as he came face to face with a visibly angry looking Meher and a very nervous looking Prem. Giving him a 'I tried to help' look, Prem decides to leave the couple alone

"Toh kya keh rahe the tum...?"

"K-k-kuchh nahi Meher..."

"Kuchh nahi haina...toh theek hai...aaj room mein tumhare liye bhi kuch nahi hai...enjoy the couch", saying so she leaves

"Yaar ye biwiyaan bhi na"

After a few days...

"Di, mujhe na yeh Manav bohot cute lagta hai...Iski na new movie aayi hai chalo na chalte hai...", Meher asked Heer at the dining table...Meher had not been talking to Preet since the last few days...Hearing her talk Preet's ears shoot up

"Kaun Manav, bhabhi", Veera asked

"Arey Manav Vij...He is so hot Veera...Pehla na TV pe aata tha...Par ab movies mein...What an actor...Chalo na..."

"Achha Meher ab tum itna keh rahi ho toh chalte hai...", Heer nudges Veera to get up

"Haan chalo let's get ready...I wanna look like really nice", Meher stands up excitedly...

She is about to follow the women...when a hand stops her and pulls her behind the staircase...

Before she shouts, Preet covers her mouth...

"Preet ...kya kar rahe ho?", she whispered

"Tumhe kya lagta hai", he said huskily...

"Shut up...kahi bhi shuru ho jaate ho yaar...leave me"...

"Ab tum itne time baad haath mein aayi ho...toh can't help "

"Preet hatto...I need to go...humaara movie ka plan hai..."

"Haan sunna maine...Par mere paas ek better plan hai...", he winked

"Jaise?"

"Jaise...ki tum main...", he whispered coming closer to her.."ek kamre mein band"...he pulled her face closer to him..."aur"...saying so he leans in to kiss her but instead of feeling something soft his lips hit a concrete surface...He opens his eyes to find Meher giggling on the right...

Seeing him sulk like a baby she steps closer..."Awww Preeet...", and tugs his cheeks ..."Tum jealous ho rahe ho na...?.."Of course Meher...tum apne pati ke saamne uss idiot Manav ki tareef pe tareef kar rahi thi...what do you expect?", crossing his arms he looks away...

"oho preet...achha suno ...", she says romantically

"kya..", Preet looks at her excitedly

"Vo mujhe kehna tha ki"

"Kaho na"

"APNA DIL THODA BADA KIJIYE...!!", she winks





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Posted: 6 years ago
#22
How sweet! 😆
And a very clever use of all the celebs too 😆

Thanks for the treat Rhea! 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q

How sweet!😆

And a very clever use of all the celebs too😆

Thanks for the treat Rhea!🤗



Thankss Fatima for the appreciation.. I feel you and I are the only Meet fans left on the forum. No one else seems to be interested!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
Rhea 🤗

You write so so well - never disappointing me. Always turn the plot do unexpectedly woah who would have guessed how Meet will be towards end. Amazing!
Awesome topic 😃

I sincerely appreciate this muwah lob ya
So amazed to see so many of your write up which I didn't read yet 😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25
Fatima you have equally talented Meet partner writer me ishhh happy 😆
She's always been this way but was inactive and now here with us all. Yay
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: AASUS

Rhea 🤗

You write so so well - never disappointing me. Always turn the plot do unexpectedly woah who would have guessed how Meet will be towards end. Amazing!
Awesome topic 😃

I sincerely appreciate this muwah lob ya
So amazed to see so many of your write up which I didn't read yet 😭


you have become seasonal dude...never around...i must say...aren't we the oldest members here?...expect some loyalty from you love...😉..hope you won't go away this time:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

Fatima you have equally talented Meet partner writer me ishhh happy 😆
She's always been this way but was inactive and now here with us all. Yay


hahaha..thanks for the compliment...but stick around...otherwise our hardwork goes down the drain...😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Since, I never really watched KDMHMD, there are certain aspects to the story that I am clueless about...especially the story of characters other than Meet, and i just realized that screwed up certain aspects after I had written this piece. So we will have to assume certain things- Premeer married like a few years prior to Meet and had a baby named Chahat.


Na Seekha Jeena Tera Bina Humdum


"Meher kal humaari shaaadi ko poora ek saal ho jayega", he whispers tracing her picture lying on his desk, with his finger


"Kabhi socha bhi nahi tha maine ke tum meri humsafar banogi..shayad vo uparwala mujh pe bohot meherbaan hoga jo usne tumhe mere liye bheja..." he smiles.. "But kya faayda, yeh sab main tumhe bata phi nahi sakta...Kyunki tum Harman bhai se...". He stops midway as the reality of their relationship hits him.



x----------------x-----------------x



"Pata nahi usse yaad hoga bhi ke nahi..mera pagal pati...kuchh phi karta hai".., the thought of him makes her smile as she tosses the vegetables in the wok...


"Jab se who mere zindagi mein aaya hai...life jaise badal is gayi hai...khubsoorat lagne lagi hai...uski woh cute is smile ...vo naughty eyes...uff kisi ko pyar kaise na ho..itna perfect jo hai...aur uski kismat dekho...mere saath atak gayi hai..."



x----------------x-----------------x



Next Morning



"Preet..preet.." Prem barges into Meet's bedroom..


"Kya hua bhaiya"


"Aish ne Chahat ko kidnap kar liya hai...she just called...vo factory mein hai"


"What?...let's go...", he glances at Meher, sleeping peacefully on her side of the bed. Deciding not to worry her, he leaves



x----------------x-----------------x



At the Factory


"Aa gaye tum dono", Aish says with a wicked smile plastered on her face


"Chahat kaha hai, Aish", Preet says


"Preet...itni jaldi kya hai...pehle thoda haal chaal toh jaan le...how have you been?"


"What the hell do you want, Aish?..Tumne meri Chahat ko kyun kidnap kiya", intervenes Prem


"Uffo Prem, mujhe apne ex se do minute baat toh karne do...vaise kamaal hain ...dono bhai hi mere exes ho!"


"Aish, I am sure tumne humein yaha tumhaari love stories discuss karne ke liye nahi bulaya hai...get to the point!"


"Of course Preet, woh love stories mein tha hi kya jo discuss kiya jaaye...par haan unki ending ne jitna mujhe dard diya hai...main chahti hun tum dono ko bhi uss feeling ka ahsaas dilaun...kisi apne ko khone ka gham..."


Saying so she draws the curtains behind her, unveiling a glass room with Chahat tied on a Chair


"Chahat..", both of them rush towards her only to realize that there is a bomb planted on her chair


"Papa", says Chahat sobbing


"Beta...papa aa gaye haina...ab rona band karo"


"What is going on Aish...yeh sab kya hai" , asks Preet angrily


"Mera badla...main chahti toh isse kab ka maar deti...but I want you guys to see her die"


"What nonsense Aish...tumhe humse problem haina...phir meri masoom si bachi ko kyun torture kar rahi ho...she hasn't done anything wrong!"


"Achha Prem puttar...jab Aish ko tum dono ne chhoda tab ki woh bhi kisi ki masoom beti hai...kya usse tum dono se pyar karne ki sazaa di tum logo ne..."


"Daljeet chachi...aap jaanti hai hum majboor", said Preet


"Majboor my foot...bohot Hero banne ka shaunk haina...kabhi bauji ki izzat bachane ke liye...kabhi bhai ko bachpan ka pyar se milwane ke liye...toh aaj bacha lo apni pyari bhatiji ko bhi..chal Aish"


"No...Aish, you cannot leave..."


"Preet...mujhpe apna time waste karne se better hai ...bomb diffuse karne ki koshish karo...uspe timer laga hua ...jo exactly aadhe ghante mein..."


"You b***** "


"I love you too, Preet", saying so she leaves


"Papaaa...bachao", cries Chahat. Prem rushes to her.


"M-main kya karun...Preet humein isse diffuse...ismein itni saari wires hai...meri beti ...Preet...Heer..I dunno...", stammers Prem


Preet kneels down beside him... Placing a hand on his shoulder he says, "Bhaiya, Chahat ko kuchh nahi hoga...", Inspecting the wires he comes up with a plan


"Bhai, aap bas mujhpe trust kijiye...aur jo main kehta hun waisa kijiye"


"Ok"


"Chahat beta...aap bilkul mat daro...Preet Chachu sab theek kar denge oka...ab main jaisa kehta hun...aap bas waisa karo"


He smiles as Chahat nods at him


"Beta, aap apne right leg ko left leg par rakho...no no aise nahi...umm jaise Maya chachi sit karte hai"


A scared Chahat tries to recall the way Maya sits and imitates her


"Haha...Good girl...", Preet goes near her and places himself in the vacant space on the chair and lifts her


"Bhai..isse pakadiye"


"H-haan, a crying Prem lifts her .Chahat..meri beti..." he says showering kisses all over her face as Chahat holds him tightly


He places her down and says, "Chahat beta, yeh lo keys.. Aap jaake car mein baitho...hum bas aa rahe hai...and lock the car ok?..."


Nodding Chahat rushes out... he turns to Preet and says - "Maan gaye Preet...kya idea tha Preet..achha yeh bata aage kya karna hai...konsi wire kaatni hai...kuchh sharp chahiye hoga na kaatne ke liye..."


"Uski zarurat nahi hai bhai"


"Achha, toh phir kya karna hai", he looks at Preet in anticipation


"Kuchh nahi karna bhai"


"What do you mean...bomb toh..." he stops midway as he realizes what Preet had done...Flabbergasted he continues "I- I thought you had a plan...What have you done Preet"


"PB, there was no other option...anyways ab bas 25 minutes bache hai..aap Chahat ko lekar yaha se niklo.."


"Niklo matlab...tujhe lagta hai main tujhe yaha chod ke chala jaunga"


"Bhaiya please...ek baar pehle bhi main aapko aapke parivar se alag kar chuka hua...let me redeem myself ...Heer bhabhi ko aapki zarurat hai..."


"Achha..aur Meher ka kya...main usse kya kahunga"


"Kuchh nahi", says a voice behind him...


Both are astonished to see Meher standing at the entrance



Dehleez pe mere dil ki

Jo rakhe hai tune kadam



"Meher..tum" , says Preet


"Haan, Heer di se pata chala...toh main yaha chali aayi...Jiju Chahat bohot dari hui hai aap please usse lekar jaiye"


"Are you guys crazy...Main apne bhai ko chod ke nahi jaunga"


"I need sometime with him jiju...Please..."


"Lekin..


"I might not get a chance"


Not knowing what to do...Prem hugged Preet and left.


"Meher...why the hell are you here?"


"Preet I"


"No Meher...I don't wanna talk...sirf 20 minute bache hai...you just leave"


"Preet"


"I don't wanna listen...just go"


"I am not going anywhere", she said flatly


"Meher bakwas band karo...jao main kaha"


"I am not leaving"


"Achhha PB...Prem bhaiya", he shouts


"Prem jiju can't hear you Preet"


"Meher just shutup...I am telling you leave..warna", he yells


"Warna kya?"


"Warna main...", Realizing he cannot even move..he eyes her angrily as she breaks into a smile...


"Meher it's not funny..." , he continues with a mellowed down voice... "Meher..try and understand..Tum young ho...tumhari poori life padi hai abhi...please don't do this...go live your life"


"I can't"


"Why?"


"Because, you're my life", she says



Tere naam pe meri zindagi

Likh di mere humdum



"Meher, yeh tum..."


Smiling she continues..."Kya timing haina humaari Preet..Itna kuchh kehna hai tumse...par...khair ab jo hai so hai...so let's cut short and come straight to point..." she says coming towards him


"Meher, please don't..."


"Shhh", she says placing a finger on his lips as she kneels in front of him.."Aaj humaare beech mein koi nahi aayega...tum bhi nahi...So, Mr.Juenja I know we do not have our whole lives ahead of us...in fact we practically have nothing to look forward to...maybe an after life that too if you manage to get entry into the paradise", she winks ..."but yet I cannot die without let you know that I love you Preet..."



Sachi si hain ye tareefein..

Dil se jo maine kari hai...

Jo tu mila toh saji hai

Duniya meri humdum



"Meher...I", he looks away trying to hide his tears "Go Meher...tumhe meri kasam"


"Ye kasam toh invalid ho gayi Mr.Juneja...kyunki aaj se theek ek saal pehle main tumse saath jeene aur marne ki kasam khaayi thi...", Cupping his face in her hands she makes him look at her, "Happy Anniversary Patidev"



Aasmaan mila zameen ko meri

Aadhe aadhe poore hai hum

Tere naam pe meri zindagi

Likh di mere humdum



Unable to control himself he pulls himself and tightly embraces her...Hiding his face in her hair as she hugs him back with the same amount of passion... "I love you Meher..."...Hearing him say those words she finally vents herself...Letting her tears fall freely as she buries himself in the crook of his neck


Breaking away he takes her face in his hands and wipes her tears..."So Mrs Juneja, Will you be marry in our next life?"


"No", she says naughtily as he wraps his arms around her again and covers her mouth with his


They knew that they were dying, but yet they were happy as they were together



Na seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena,

na seekha jeena tere bina humdum



Edited by Rhea_401 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
I have to say I was sitting at the edge of my seat...biting my lip nervously while reading this...it was gripping to say the least.
But...UUURRRGGGHHH!!!!
Rhea!!! Why do you do this to me girl?!?! 😕

You know I don't do tears so well...😭

Fab piece of writing though...👍🏼

Thanks...I think...😆


Happy Anniversary to Meet...you will live forever in my heart.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Happy anniversary to our beloved Meet🤗
Aww Kitna emotional story thi.
Loved the way meet confessed their feelings in their last moments
Awesome

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