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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Agree with u @Athi...😊
@Kiran lovly meeting of premeer😆Luv this scene😛Luv ur edit or wowww like ur poetry 👏well done boss
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: AASUS

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Woot and update 🥳
Oh oh the sisters are lost 😲 😭 aw
Hehe Harman again phones his bhaiyya 😆
That's sweet.
Wow Prem must b exusted searching for the girls.
And she asks for help and falls on his arms 😲 oye
And what happened to the other sis y she is inside. Heer said she is safe - wonder what thier story is hmm.

PH met woohoo let's see what happens.

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Writing is a lil more clear Kiran. Ty and you even translated for ppl so kind.
Dialogues clarity is the impt part. You're getting lot better.
Keep going.

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Beautiful edit - 2nd Shiv Mandir meeting of PH in show or more like Gaurav Heer meeting as he was affected by amnesia that time.



yeah bro loves 😆 ...sigh curiosity little ...
working on it sweetie 😲 and edits treat for u 😆🤗❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: bhagyashri12

Wow such a sweet update

Finally premeer met
Great part kiran 🤗
Continue soon !!!!


thank u dear yeah finally 😉❤️ yeah sure 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Princex178

Wohooo so finally they met😛

What a great update 👏
Keep it up dear
Waiting for the next update
Let see what happend next &
How their love story starts 😳


thank u thank u as per ur demand 😆 they met
yeah sure ...HFTB 😉🤗❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Cutediary

Agree with u @Athi...😊

@Kiran lovly meeting of premeer😆Luv this scene😛Luv ur edit or wowww like ur poetry 👏well done boss


aww shoni 😉
thanks for ur feedback u lob the poetry 😆🤗❤️ ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: rano23

Wow so cute
Awesome


thank you 🤗❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
woohooo Amazing part And Awosome dailouges kiran Love premeer scean :* pls update sooon waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Aha beautifully done
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Episode 6

Hi ...lovelies firstly sorry for long wait but i have some eyes issues but our Premeer starts now ...


Prem: well dats good for you mein huna .. we ended our last chapter there..

in the next episode

Heer: what?

Prem:nahi kuch nahi now please tell me where is she ?

Heer: she 's inside the building

Prem : ok chalo ussko le aaye ...

Heer: with weird face hum ...uhmm okay

And heer calling her sister mahhi bahir aajao koi khatra nahi (everything is fine now)

Mahhi: ran towards heer hugged her mein bhut dar gai thi ... ( m afraid )

Heer: you're brave na dar kun rahi woh chale gaye see (they 're gone)

Prem: woh ...? who ...?


Heer: jab hum mall se bahir aaye tu kisi ne peecha kia mujhy shaaq hua or mein meher ko lekr bhaagne lagi taab ye building dikhi or hum yha chhup gaye (when we came out from the mall i felt like somebody chasing us then i started a run with meher then suddenly i see this building and hide meher here

Prem: with shocked face 😲must say you're strong girls but please b careful for next time

aur mein tu hun hamesha (and i'm here forever)

Heer : What .? what are you saying ? O well we 're fine hamein zaroorat nahi

Prem: suddenly turned and said to heer (mujhy hai) with smiling face

Heer: answerd him tum ajeeb hu (you're weird)


Prem: tumhare jesse (like you) Heer and prem start to watching each other

then mahhi came ...

Mahhi: mujhy maa baba ke pss jana hai (i wanna go to mom and dad)

Heer: haan mahhi bacha chalo (Heer yeah mahhi my baby lets go)

Prem: han woh pareshan hai pehle hii (Prem yeah they're tense already)

Heer: what..? Chalo phir (let's go then)

Prem: start the car and took along with them ..


Heer . Mujhy apka naam taak nahi pata aur hum aapke saath jaraye hain (I don't know about your name and we 're going with you ..)

Prem. Oh sorry madam my name is PREM and m here because your friend's hubby i mean hune wale hubby ka dost hai my brother and also wedding planner now you understood...

Heer: Well then okay bharosa kr leti hun ( i believe in you ) Prem ..thank you madam ... and start to grin internally ...

In the car
Heer : ask something to Prem ...

Prem do me favour ..?
Prem . haan bolona i do not tell to maa baba about this please they becomes upset please ... unko kehna ke tum hamein yha dargah hena waha mile please ...(tell them that you found us near to shrine)
Prem. Okay but you also promise me
Heer : what ? what promise ...Prem just take care of yourself and your sister too

Heer : O okay then promise and thank you Heer pass the smile to Prem

Prem : answered to heer in friendship then heer joined him no sorry and no thank you and they laughed together 😆


Heer. suddenly wait Surprisingly kaun dost ..?

Prem answered her hum or kaun. we're..?

Heer. U helped us m thankful to you
But i don't like much friends ...

Prem. Why ?


Suddenly Mahhi . Replied to prem di bhut ajeeb hai Heer stare to meher
Prem. please be cool and tells Mahhi hena high five to meher
Then heer. Said shutup 'mahhi' ...with angry face
And back to Mr. Prem focus on drive ...
Prem . Take your time .Heer and m good driver for you then smiled ...


..In hotel

Heer and mahhi entered to the hotel ...
Heer and mahhi's parents came and hugged them ...all people become emotional.

After sometime Mr.khanna asked to Prem khaa mili ye tumhein ...
Prem start to starring heer ...
Heer and Prem see each other .then Prem answered to Mr.khanna in temple ..

Mr.khanna . yelling on Mahhi what is this ? Even u didn't call us for info ...
Mrs.ganga (maa) tell to heer and mahhi's father aap bhi na bachiya aagai thanks to God .. baaqi baatein badmei ... we'll talk later on this..

Then Prem said ok sir ...now i have to go its too late now ...
Mr.khanna thanks to Prem for everything .
Prem. Said to Mr.khanna my pleasure and duty too caz u all our guests
Mr.khanna .. you r good boy Prem t.c goodnight bye ...



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In the parking side of hotel ...


Prem: Open the door and suddenly saw the sky and turned his eyes to room ...Heer stand there and prem says bye from his hand move
Heer .also up her hand for say good bye and pass her smile ...and sudden she realized that why she 's smiling and closed the window ...

Tumhari duniya apni hu rahi hai

ye ehsaas mujhy aab hu raha hai

kehne se kya huga aab

ju likha tha lakeerun mei

bs wahi mill raha hai


Prem . said internally ye larki mujhy maar dalegi from her cuteness...
Oh God help me then ... start the car and gone❤️ .

Chaal ju raha hai

tere hune kaa asaar

Laayega wo muqam

jaha sirf duniya hamari hugi


hope u all like the episode ...!!

Hit Like the button share your views in comments ❤️

and stay tuned with me



Edited by kksoap - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Excited Gona read when I'm home 🤗

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Edit add:

Superb update. ⭐️ There was still confusion with dialogues - who is saying what but I finally figured out by re reading the update.

Story and scenes are superb. PH convo was fab. They look cool while talking. 😎

Prem's already very protective and shows concern and Heer is so unaware of what Prem may be thinking. There was some eye contact hai na. Lets see where their relationship leads to.

So nice finally PH met and are talking. I am getting confused with Mahi and Meher. Is it two names for one girl or different ppl? 😕
Edited by AASUS - 8 years ago

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