||~Magic of premeer~ kccreations || - Page 2

Originally posted by: sana.harshiti

wow congo for ur first topic🤗

Great start & intro kiran 🤗

waiting for premeer milan 😉

Please continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: AASUS

Kiran this is a huge surprise O MG 😎 wow I can't believe it.

But hey ur just cool like that and we know it.😛

I always admire the way your brain works - I mean ur on fire 24/7 ideas just springs off all the time.

So nice you decided to use the creative potential into writing.

This is competely a different style you have and let's see how it goes.

May I make suggestion : most people here are overseas fans incl u 😳 their 1st language isn't Hindi

So add as much English possible in the writing for their benefit.

Creations you made for intro for PH are too good. I just love them. Saved also.

V v nest and cute.

Story character sketch is v sweet. Looking forward to find out about all the cast 👍🏼

Lots of love and bit overwhelmed by ur surprise for us.

Rock on! Pls continue what you started.

Originally posted by: tarannum6

wooohooo Kiran 😃
Congrooo aap ke first FF ke liye
yaaay I'm sooo excited
azing Start Kiran
Bohat aacha intro diya sab ka loved it 😃
waiting for next update plsss update sooon 😃

Originally posted by: Trisha510

Wohoo... Congrats n itz beautiful

Originally posted by: lazychick.maria

dherr hui lekin main finally ayyiii!!!!!😃😆

WOW!!!!! Congratulations on opening your first thread! Wishing you loads of success!!!!!🤗

Your concept of writing is totally different from what I've read before on IF, it really looks like we're watching, ohhh sorry reading a a show😃 (sounds weird I know 😆)

Lovely start and fab siggies!!!!!!!This is a fab start!!!! You've introduced the characters! YEEEAHHH!!!! Waiting for Premeer to meet!

I agree with Athi, many of us don't have hindi as 1st language, it would be great if you could put translations (in another color for example), I know it'll take time to translate everything but if you have time and enough energy left, plz try your best to translate. 😳😉😃

Your hindi is fantastic, I'm definetely going to learn more of hindi thanks to your story!

Can't wait for next epi already!

All the best!

🤗

Episode 2

Next morng prem bauji aap walk pr hamesha saath sirf mujhy hii kun le jaate hain ..? Bauji kun ke beta tum mujhse zyada fast bhaagte hu prem (laugh) bauji ye tu hai ... ..hmmm

Well but... what about Preet or Hermon .. ?

Bauji beta woh mujhse daarker peechy hii bhagte rehte hain prem bauji u r so smart ...haan beta tabhi tu tum bhi smart hu Prem smiled bauji ..

In Bhopal ...

Heer ... where is my tea ...?

Heer's fathers likes the tea but just of heer hands 😊

(Maan Khanna) aka Baba ... beta ek tu hii hai ju mujhy saab time per deti haai ...Heer staring ...sachi ?
Haan theek hai your mother too ... heer smiled ...

aab jab se tum bachy bare hugaye tu tum meri sabse achi bachi hu baba (laughed) ...heer baba chaai ke liye m always here ... baba paased the smile tum b naa...bachi kamal hu aww baba i know...

Mahhi ... heer di give me tea ...? heer aai maahi tu b kuch khud bhi kar lia kr ..

Mahhi krti tu hu ...heer what ? Maahi apse pyaar Heer O haan chal ab jaldi kar we're late for university ...mahhi O haan ...chalo di bhaiyan hamein aaj apne wapisi pr shopping kraani hai ..Veer. for what ...mahhi for marriage bhaiya veer.. shocked kiski baai

... Heer bhaiya aap bhi naa hamein delhi jana hena...O haan Heer asked from... Maa aapko kuch chaiye ?

Maa haan tum sab time pr aajana mere late latif kids heer smiled Maa mahhi ke hute ye hu sakta hai kyaa impossible but we'll try bye ...

...

In Delhi

preet beta aaj tumhara exam hai final ...Dil lgaaker likhnaa Maa aap preshan ni hun your love with me so everything will be okay ...

Prem ..enterd in the room haan bai serious bachy acha likhte prem ( laugh) Maa ... tu phir aab mat shuru hujana ..

Hermon m with mom in ths ...serious preet ko koi taang ni karega (everybody laughed) chalo aab jaldi se jaao preet ... Hermon maa mom i'm also going aaj mere design select hune hain or collage mein aek dost ki wedding hai usske clothes woh chahta hai mein design krun for his wedding ..prem what ... ? bechara dulha ...

Hermon bhaiya with shocked face ...Prem o don't be serious mujhy pura bharosa hai tum aek good designer huge in future Hermon G bhaiya high five Maa theek hai sb jaraye hain tu mein payal ko bulaa leti hun ...

Esske dost ki wedding mein hum bhi invited hain tu tayari tu karni hugi
Prem what .. ? ... mein b jaaonga ..? PREM ...Maa g beta g aap b jaaynge ...

Prem maa but mein waha kya krunga .. ? ...Maa replied him apni dulhan dhundlena (what bride)...

Maa please not again my dream girl jab mili pehle aapko btaonga promise but aese nhi.. Maa..theek hai bubaa pr tumhe jana ye pakka hai Prem ..maa and he's started to think about wedding.. ...

after sometime bauji called him Prem ...tum aate hu yaa mein jaon office

Prem replied ... O sorry Bauji m coming ...!!

hope u all like the episode ...!!

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