Meet FF: ||On a Journey with You|| NEW UPDATE CHAPTER 16- PAGE 30 - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago
Don't feel bad Athi...Nikhad has so many Meet stories running at the same time that I too forgot "the incident" that made Meher leave 😆


I went back to chapter 14 to refresh my memory...they had a romantic eye-lock session and touched each other's cheek, and then Preet had put his arms around her waist and pulled her close to him...😳


Not sure if I would have left...considering they do live in 2 separate apartments...but then Meher is not as besharam as I am when it comes to Preet. ☺️


Poor Preet...a total "lallu" in the kitchen. 🤪 I would have ordered a pizza...if I was that bad.


I know you were trying to show him miss Meher...and feel at a total loss without her...🥺


But if he did attempt cooking...It would have been nice to see him succeed in at least frying an egg...because that's not so difficult. And then you could have had him not show any interest in eating it because it wasn't how Meher prepared it...or she wasn't around to share it...or be proud of his accomplishment.

It would be more realistic that way, since guys who live independently often do manage to learn to cook. (Just a little bit of constructive criticism there..from one writer to another 🤗)


Okay but here's the good part...Preet realized his feelings for Meher. 👏


I'm glad he told Ash, because she quickly cleared up any misunderstanding he may have had about Gaurav. 😆


Ooo...and Preet is fast..he called his PB and told him...and Heer knows too 👍🏼


Let's see how he proposes to Meher.

If it is in Preet Juneja style...it should be very interesting 😎


Waiting for the next update. 🤗

Edited by Fatima_Q - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fatima 🤗 oooh I c. I was preparing for topics and didn't get to read yet. tnkooo ❤️
ya lets see how the proposal is like.
lob u
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sherma

Love u fr d updatw😊 finally preet realise his love ,nw waiting fr him to propose mehrr.so excited.thnks fr pm do cntinue soon


Awww thank you so much di. I love you too and hehe let us wait and see what happens next ❤️🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

oho Nikhad ha I sadly skipped or skimmed through😒 the falling part so forgot the detail. I'll go back and read like good girl 🥳

Awwh haha Athi it is all fine darling. Moreover, take your time. You can read anytime you want ❤️🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q

Don't feel bad Athi...Nikhad has so many Meet stories running at the same time that I too forgot "the incident" that made Meher leave 😆



I went back to chapter 14 to refresh my memory...they had a romantic eye-lock session and touched each other's cheek, and then Preet had put his arms around her waist and pulled her close to him...😳


Not sure if I would have left...considering they do live in 2 separate apartments...but then Meher is not as besharam as I am when it comes to Preet. ☺️


Poor Preet...a total "lallu" in the kitchen. 🤪 I would have ordered a pizza...if I was that bad.


I know you were trying to show him miss Meher...and feel at a total loss without her...🥺


But if he did attempt cooking...It would have been nice to see him succeed in at least frying an egg...because that's not so difficult. And then you could have had him not show any interest in eating it because it wasn't how Meher prepared it...or she wasn't around to share it...or be proud of his accomplishment.

It would be more realistic that way, since guys who live independently often do manage to learn to cook. (Just a little bit of constructive criticism there..from one writer to another 🤗)


Okay but here's the good part...Preet realized his feelings for Meher. 👏


I'm glad he told Ash, because she quickly cleared up any misunderstanding he may have had about Gaurav. 😆


Ooo...and Preet is fast..he called his PB and told him...and Heer knows too 👍🏼


Let's see how he proposes to Meher.

If it is in Preet Juneja style...it should be very interesting 😎


Waiting for the next update. 🤗


Fatimaaa! Haha yeah I have three stories running now. Probably I am too much crazy about Meet to stop lol.
Awww, I totally welcome the criticism my love. This is what will help any writer to develop. But I I want to say that, I potrayed Preet like that because I wanted to show that he had not learnt a thing about cooking as Meher was always there for him. He had never lived before all by himself and then when he had to Meher was always there to cook for him. Moreover, yeah of course I wanted to show that his life is much messed up without Meher.

Hehe yeah Ash is a great friend, isn't she? Then yeah Preet had to inform his PB before taking one of the biggest step of his life. He is more comfortable now as Heer also knows.

Let us just wait to find out how the proposal scene unfolds.

I love you my Meet soul sister. Thank you so much. ❤️🤗
Edited by Nikhad003 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
woww Awosome update Nikhad 😃
love heer prem and preet scean 😃
Preet kitchen scean was cuteee
thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love the update😳
wow preet realise his love for meher 😳
now waiting how he porpose to meher 😆
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tarannum6

woww Awosome update Nikhad 😃
love heer prem and preet scean 😃
Preet kitchen scean was cuteee
thanks for the pm :)



Awww my tara baaji, thanks a ton :D Hehe I am so glad to get such a cute feedback from you. Preet is the cutest for me lol, Meher too :3 Prem and Heer is as always evergreen. Love you ❤️🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sana.harshiti

Love the update😳

wow preet realise his love for meher 😳
now waiting how he porpose to meher 😆
update soon



Awwwie, look who is here. This is totally amazing *_* I am so happy to see you commenting Sana, love you... Thank you so much. I will try to update soon, let us see what happens hehe. ❤️🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
This update makes me goo awww...like really somethingg good is happeningg!! wow wow wow...i m literally soo much happy for them !! now eagerly waiting to know wat will b meher's xpressions when preet will propose her...also how preet is going to confess his love <3 nikhad u have done amazing job!! sorry i m very late in reading it..how can i delay reading soo beautiful love story :* and when is going to b the next update?? tell me soon ...luv u

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