Os # Ek main aur ek tum

Aunty! Aunty, Aunty, meri piyari Aunty, kahan hain aap?" Prem ghar main enter hua, car park ki aur Gayatri ko aawazen dene laga.
"Uff! Prem! Ye tum 70s, 80s k filmi hero ki tarah mujhe kyun aawazen de rahe ho?" Gayatri room se nikal k puchne lagin.
"Aap ko kya pata 70s 80s k hero ka?" Said Prem.
"What? Mujhe nai pata hoga to kise pata hoga? Us waqt main jawan hua karti thi." Replied Gayatri.
"Arey wah Aunty! Aap filmen b dekhti thin? Hmm." Asked Prem.
"Of course! Filmen dekhne k liye hi banti hain. Tumhare Lalit uncle mujhe filmen dikhane le jate the." Answered Gayatri.
"Us zamane main aap k kitne mazey thay. Aap sweet 16 main uncle k saath movies dekhne... How romantic." said Prem.
"Choro! Tum ye batao k ghar main aate hi aunty aunty ka dhol kyun peet rahe the." Gayatri ne muskura k baat badal di.
"Aunty! Aap k liye gift laya hun." Prem muskurate hue bola.
Gayatri ne gift khola to us main se face pack, scrub aur dusre cosmetic ka saman tha.
"Is ko laga k aap phir jawan hojayengi. Aapki jhuriyan b nai dikhengi." Prem said with naughtness and run.
"Shareer! Mere saath mazak karta hai. Ruk abi batati hun tujhe." Gayatri run behind him but fail to catch him.
"Kya karun aap se romance nai kar sakta isliye mazak se kaam chalana parhta hai." Prem artifically disappointed.
"Be sharam! Abi tumhari haddi pasli ek karti hun." Gayatri angrily said.
"Aap butcher b hain? Wow, part time job haann... Lekin iski zarurat kya hai. I mean aapka business thek thak to chal raha hai." Prem make fun of her.
"Tum baaz nai aaoge. Tumhe to tumhari biwi hi aake sudhare gi. Aisi larki dhundongi k line ki tarah seedhe hojaoge." Gayatri warn him.
"Acha waise hi jaise aap ne Lalit uncle ko seedha kar k rakha tha, line ki tarah." Prem b apne naam ka ek hi tha, har baat ka jawab hai uske paas.
"Prem!" Gayatri sit on sofa and rest.
"Ji Aunty!" Prem politely said.
"Kyun pareshan karte ho?" ask Gayatri.
"Aapko nai karun to kise karun?" Prem slowly sit near Gayatri.
Door bell ring.
"Aap aaram karen main dekhta hun." said Prem.
Prem open door.
"Tum! Tum phir aagayen?" ask Prem.
"Han! Just take a side." Prem made way for her.
"Hello Aunty!" she said.
"Arey Heer! Aao, kaisi ho?" Gayatri look fresh after saw Heer.
"Main achi hun. Aap kaisi hain?" she said.
"I'm good." Gayatri smile.
"Kyun aayi ho?" Prem ask.
"Tum se matlab? Main aunty se milne aayi hun." replied Heer.
"Roz milne aati ho, ek din nai aaogi kuch hojayega kya?" Prem tease her.
"Prem!" Gayatri said.
"Aunty! Ye roz aap se milne kyun aati hai?" Prem ask innocently.
Gayatri quietly stand and move towards window.
"Fine! Main kal se nai aaungi." Heer angry on him.
"Mujhe dekhe bina tumhara din guzar jayega? Arey tumhara to khana b hazam nai hota mujhe dekhe bina." Prem saw her with naughtness.
"Han! Guzar jayega." Heer quickely reply.
"O han wo proposal hai na, kya naam tha uska...mmm...yah Arun mehta.. uske khayalon main din guzar jayega. Waise for change tum us se shadi karlo. Main tumhari chachi ji se keh dunga k tumhari shadi Arun mehta se kar hi den, thek hai?" Prem ne Heer k chacha k divorcy sir k proposal ka hawala diya.
(Heer k chacha k sir ka apni wife se divorce horaha tha. Heer k parents ki death fire accident main hogayi thi aur wo apne chacha k paas rehti thi jo Arun mehta k worker thay. Ab Arun mehta Heer k chacha se Heer ka haath maang rahe the. Agar Heer k chacha ji inkaar karenge to jobless b honge aur jo lakhon ka qarz hai wo b double kardiya jayega.)
"Tum to ho mere pakke dushman." Heer ne ghusse se kaha to Prem hansne laga.
Gayatri enjoying both convo and cut oranges. Prem like oranges that's why he brought any time.
"Han to phir kahun tumhari chachi se Arun mehta k liye?" naughty smile crip on Prem's lipr.
"Sir tor dungi tumhara." Heer ne taap k jawab diya.
"Tote sir wala dulha kaisa lagega? Tumhe hi embarrasement hogi." Prem smile.
"Prem!" Heer run to hit him but he left from door.
Heer quietly sit with Gayatri.
"Don't worry Heer! Sab thek hojayega." Gayatri give hope to her.
"Aunty! Agar chacha ji ki job aur qarzay muaf karwane k liye mujhe chacha ji k boss se shadi karni pari to main suicide karlungi." tears rolling in her eyes.
"Don't worry Heer! I'm there for you." Prem in head.
Prem enter with snacks.
"Arun mehta ki Mrs..." said Prem.
"Prem! Tumne phir uska naam liya to..." Heer cut sentence.
"To main us se shadi kar lungi. Hai naa." Prem snapped.
"Aunty! Main ja rah hun." said Heer.
"Arey! Main tumhare liye snacks aur boondi k pakorey laya hun, khati to jao." said Prem.
"Khud kha lo." replied Heer with anger.
"Tumhare bina maza nai aayega." Prem focus on her face.
"O.k lao." Heer snatch snacks envelope and run outside.
"Arey nadidi! Sab legayi. Mere hisse ka khaogi to dard hoga. Dekha aunty." said Prem.
Gayatri smiles.

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Prem Gayatri Juneja ki sister ka beta hai. Prem ki maa ko cancer hogaya tha jiski waja se Prem ka baap Prem aur uski maa ko chor k chala gaya. Prem ki mother ki death k baad Gayatri aur Lalit Prem ko apne ghar le aaye. Lalit aur Gayatri ki koi aulad nai thi isliye wo Prem ko apni aulad ki tarah chahne lage aur Prem b unhen bohat pyar karta hai aur unse bohat attach hai.

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Heer is worried coz uske chacha ji ne khud ko jobless hone se bachane k liye Arun mehta ka rishta accept kar liya tha. Prem came.
Prem: Mrs. Mehta! Kis k khayalon main khoi hui hain?
Heer gave angry look.
Prem: What?
Heer: Just get lost Prem.
Prem: O.k ja raha hun.
Prem jane lagta hai k uski nazar rat poison pe parhti hai. Prem picked.
Prem: Ye kya hai?
Heer: Tum se matlab.
Prem: Heer! Answer me.
Heer: Why? Why? Sab apne barey main soch rahe hain. Kisi ko mera khayal hi nai hai.
Prem: Rat poison yahan kya kar raha hai Heer?
Heer: Khaungi...! Kha k marungi. Mil gaya jawab. Now leave.
Prem poison ki bottle le kar chala jata hai. Heer zor zor se rone lagti hai.
Heer: Tumhen b mera khayal nai hai Prem...

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Shadi k din qarib aate jate hain. Heer ka darr din ba din barhta jaraha hai. She was praying for herself. Prem us din k baad se nai aaya aur Heer b us k ghar nai gayi.
Heer ko Mr. Mehta ne shadi k din subha call kar k airport bulwaya. Wo jana nai chahti thi lekin majboor ho kar usey jana para.

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On Airport:

Heer reach at airport. Mr. Mehta waiting. He came towards Heer.
Mr. Mehta: Acha hua Heer tum yahan aagayi. Mujhe tum se zaroori baat karni hai.
Heer: Ji kahiye!
Heer panic for a while.
Mr. Mehta: Heer! Main tumse shadi nai kar sakta. I'm sorry. Main apni wife ko divorce nai de raha.
Heer feel easy.
Heer: Thanx alot!
Mr. Mehta: Thanx ki koi baat nai. Main ghalti pe tha lekin kisi ne mujhe ehsaas dilaya tab mujhe ehsaas hua k main kitni bari ghalti kar raha hun.
Heer: Matlab? Kis ne?
Mr. Mehta told her.

Flashback:

Mr. Mehta POV:
"Main office main baitha tha k ek larka bina ijazat andar ghuss aaya. Maine us se kaha k wo is taraha kisi k office main zabardasti kaise ghuss sakta hai? Us main manners nai hain?
He replied: Aap b to kisi ki zindagi main zabardasti ghuss rahe hain kya ye manners aur attiqates hain?
Mujhe ghussa aagaya. Maine usey bahar jane ko kaha usne inkaar kar diya.
He said: Sharam aani chahiye aapko. Apni beti ki umar ki larki se shadi karne ja rahe hain. Kya hasil hoga aapko?
I said: That's none of ur business.
He yelled: It is! It is. It is my business. You doing wrong.
I said: Get lost now! Main jo kar raha hun wo sahi hai ya ghalat ye tum mujhe na batao.
He said: Agar mere chacha ji aapki beti se shadi karna chahen to aap kar denge?
I shout: Bakwas band karo.
He said: Why? Aapki beti k liye bakwas aur kisi dusre ki beti k liye perfect? Aap jaise business man ko business dealing hi suit karti hain relations dealing nai. Rishte nibhane k liye hote hain kharidne aur baichne k liye nai. Aap se shadi na karne k liye agar us larki ne suicide ki to aap zimedar honge. Aapki is shadi se aapki beti pe jo guzre gi us k responsible b aap honge. Us pe logon ki ungliyan uthengi, usey apne in laws se nazar milate hue sharam aayegi sirf aapki waja se. Apni khushi k liye aap us orat ko divorce de rahe hain jisne aap k liye kya nai kiya hoga. Aap ka ghar sanwara, aap k bache paley, aap k liye itne saal tiyag diye aur aap? Sharam nai aati aapko? Kisi k itne saal aap barbad kar rahe hain, ehsaas hai?

Ye keh ke wo larka chala gaya.

Main ek pal main apne aapko bohat chota mehsus karne laga.

Flashback Over.


Mr. Mehta: Aur tab mujhe ehsaas hua k main apne liye kitne logon ko taklif pohncha raha hun. I'm sorry Heer.
Tears in Heer's eyes.
Heer: Koun tha wo?
Mr. Mehta: Wo... (he pointing at Heer's back) Good bye. Have a bright future.
Mr. Mehta leave. Heer turn. Prem stand and tears rolling in his eyes.
Heer: Tum...
Prem: Han main! Plz is bare main koi baat nai.
Prem sit on his knee.
Prem: Marry me? Heer plz marry me. Mujhse aur koi shadi karne k liye tayyar nai hoti. Tum karlo warna main kunwara mar jaunga.
Heer place hand on his lips and smile.
Heer: You know what! Mujhse b koi shadi nai karna chahta. Abi abi ek shakhs reject kar k gaya hai. Tumse shadi nai karungi to buddhi hone tak kunwari reh jaungi.
Both smile.
Heer: Pehle kyun nai kaha?
Prem: Tumne b to nai kaha tha.
Heer: Main kaise kehti. Waise b larki zuban se nai aankhon se bolti hai.
Prem (naughty): really!
Heer: Prem! Main naraz ho jaon gi.
Prem: or main tumhen har bar manaon ga.
Heer: promise..?
Prem: promise.
Both hand in hand, they leave airport area. Heer place her head on Prem's sholder and they wake toward their happy life waiting.

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read n comment plz😃

Welcome back.😃 Wow this is an awesome gift yaar.

1st of all I wanna say the banner is beautiful.⭐️ I love it and saved in my album.

Title is v sweet and made curious what's it about.😛

I love all the characters. Very different - I never read anything like it before.👏

So Heer and Prem both lost their parents at a young age. Glad they both had kind people who took care of them. But Heer's uncle turned selfish and ready sell off Heer - to a older guy hmm. Sad.

G3 Prem scene is amazing.

Prem Heer scene - pulling each other's leg 😆 It was fun.

Woah Heer had rat poison in her room. 😲 Aw she was so depressed.🤗

I didn't realize what Prem was up to until the end. Wow.!

The flash back was v cool - I mean we get to know the details of how someone made Mr.Mehta realize his faults. Then we see it's Prem. The way Heer turns and finding Prem is a lovely scene. Woah proposal in the airport hehe😆 That's unique. 😛

Sweet ending. I loved your dialogues and I was able to imagine all the scenes.

Thank you so much for coming and for writing.

I would love to see more of your creations on PH / Kis Desh show.

I know ur multi talented 😆 I saw avs / siggies / vm / and stories.

Keep it up. 😎

lovely story dear... loved the nok-jhok of premeer.. gayatri is really a sweet heart.. and mr.mehta.. god.. how he can think about such thing.. phew.. prem made him realise his mistake..

so prem too loved heer all the way.. ahem.. i can imagine this nok-jhok ph doing all masti even as married couples..

do write more ya.. <3

premeer r soo cuteee n inocent

gaytri mom just love herr she is so sweet😃

love it 😊😊

waiting 4 nxt