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GiyaJuneja

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Posted: 11 years ago

FINALLY .. my spamming got result

Pri, THIS IS SWEET one shot. i loved everything here. chota premeer and bada premeer both are cuties. theme is also fab. usually hero says they wont let heroin fall. but here prem is asking heer to fall..

i'm really proud of myself. and mind you, now post your other two OS too. i didnt forget about them. post it otherwise i will start my spamming again😈

ps : why only tomatto and chapapls for me?😭 everyone is throwing roses . i want my share from that😭

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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

mujhe laga tha ke priya + editing = superb combo BUT priya + writing= DEADLY COMBO 😲

now i want more WRITTEN stuff from you baby i got addicted while reading this ... this was so cute and adorable if harshiti come back then why not in this kind of story? CV's should read your perfect piece of writing...

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luv.Harshiti

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wah.. KYa baaat Kya Baat Kya baat..

Fnally Hidden Talent came out :D

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luvharshiti

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow priya... amazing os
Loved it... ❤️
Please priya dono os bhi post karo ...
😳

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Divya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beauty Priya di.

First start and its awsum.

Maybe we can demand more from you now. ;)

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ToobaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

Priya this is such a sweet OS🤗

Love the concept n the way u penned down the entire story is Fab

Its always fun to read on lil Premeer...they are adorable

they way grown up Prem is asking Heer to fall seems like the beginning of a new story.. <3

You have a talented writer hidden in you...do write more whenever you feel like

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juhi.harshiti

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome os priya...please write more.

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tarannum6

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Posted: 11 years ago

Woww its Fablous Priya di... Love it... :)
thanks for the pm...

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Ayesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesomesttt os
dis is d first premeer story i hav ever read
i just loved it ❤️
luvd d concept
do write more u write really well

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S.B.

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was so sweet ... lovely <3

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