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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Hey Khushbu 😃

pg 8 I so love the banner so sweet 😛
Sweet ch. PH getting married and celebrated 2nd anniversary too wow
Then Heer expecting a child and she was so anxiously waiting to break the news to Prem yay
Wow Prem surprised Heer by showing up suddenly while Heer was dreaming haha
Can't wait to read next part.
Thank you so much 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: LoveHarshAddit

Amazing update...
loved premeer scenes...
cant wait for next...
Please update soon...

Thanks u so much 😊 next part comining up
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Neha12345xxx

Khushbu...Nice name:)

Loved premeer scenes...Superb Narration...Waiting For next part ...Update asap

Thank u so much 😊 next part comining up
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: AASUS

Hey Khushbu😃


pg 8 I so love the banner so sweet😛
Sweet ch. PH getting married and celebrated 2nd anniversary too wow
Then Heer expecting a child and she was so anxiously waiting to break the news to Prem yay
Wow Prem surprised Heer by showing up suddenly while Heer was dreaming haha
Can't wait to read next part.
Thank you so much🤗

Thank u so much 😊 Aasum next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Last Part 8

She was about to say Heer came from her dream when her phone beeped again and she saw prem near her on the bed

Heer : prem!!!!!!!! aap yaha ... ( smiling )

prem : mmm!!!! meri sweetheart ke paas
Heer blushed at his comment and her
dream come true

Heer : Apne kahatha keh aap nahi
asakte

prem : surprise!!!! my love surprise

Heer : toh apne saab dekhrahathe jaab mene apki taswir se baate kar
hahithi tab

prem : nahi taab mein yaha nahi tha lekin muje pata hai jaab tum gussa hojati ho
toh esa hi karti ho Heer smiled to him and hugged him saying mene apko bohut miss
kiya prem hugged her very.tight, he moved her lilltle and after few minutes,
cupped her face they looked into
each other's eyes prem moved more
closer to her, his eyes saw her lips he
capture her lips on his within a second, he
kissed her passionately, Heer moan as
he deepen the kiss Heer responded to
his kiss with equal passion they didn't let they lips a part prem's hands moved under her top caressing her bare back. And
make her lay on the bed, prem was
on top of her kissing her lips forcefully, Heer's hands moved on his hair to pull him
more toward her , prem opened her.top buttons and moved her top from her body,
he kissed her shoulder and bit her neck she
moan in pressure, he moved from her neck to her chest kissing her
everywhere, she came back to her neck his hand losing her skirt, her hand move from
his hair to take off his shirt, she took off his
shirt, prem flip her on him Heer kissed
his bare chest and bit him on his neck, prem groan and his hand move
on her bare back, they kissed each other very deeply.and forcefully after few
minutes all barrier between them were removed, there was no space for air to pass between them, Prem kissed, nibbles her skin every where prem enter her and Heer moan little, they make love passionately,.they met again after a week, they.sleep side by side Heer's head lay on his bare chest

Heer : prem muhjse apse kuch kehna hai

prem : mmmhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! Kaho kya baat hai
caresses her bare upper arm Heer gave him a small baby picture which was
near the side table but.prem didn't
understand

prem : yeh kya hai Heer Heer then she took his hand shyly on her stomach , first prem didn't understand anything but then his smile widen

prem : really Heer ?

Heer nodded in yes.

prem : wow.. Heer i am so happy, We
are going to be parents. prem hugged
her tight in happiness. He broke the hug and asked nonstop.

prem : Did you go to doctor ? What doctor said ? Did she gives you any medicines ? How many month? Did she tell you about the diet ? Heer was pissed off by him nonstop questions so she kisses his lip and he too responded with same passion, he
flip her slowly and taking care to get heavy
over her, he kissed her neck and bit.slightly, she moan in pleasure

Prem : I love u sweetheart ... i love u u gave me most precious gift of my life

Heer: i love u too prem... ( tear roll
down her cheeks) prem kissed her
tears and then kissed her lips passionately not leaving her lips and he enter her again and they made love again He was very gentle this time so as not to hurt her taking
care of her.and their baby.night shaded leaving two people in each other's arm with comfortable over them and to face
new phrase of their life Heer prem
juneja .

He made me complete.

TH END



I HOPE FRIENDS YOU ALL LIKE MY OS.


THANK U SO MUCH FRIENDS LIKE AND HIT LIKE BUTTEN
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Lovely Ending...Hope you start new SS very soon...Pls pm me if u start anything new... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Hey Khushbu :)

Part# 8
loved the banner..PHedding siggie goes well with the update ⭐️
yaay!! PH are married now..Heer was so happy n excited for her wedding with Prem <33
they had a lovely time together post wedding but Heer wanted to spend more of her time with Prem which didnt happen but i know he wouldn't disappoint her
wow!! PH are gonna be parents soon 🥳
now Prem is back ..his entry reminded me of a scene from KDM where Heer waited for him anxiously n Prem surprised her...
cute update it was :)

Part# 9
the last part of this OS :(

Loved PH scenes as always
Prem's excitement on becoming dad again reminded me of an epi from KDM,his joy n excitement was out of the world 😎
loved the PH you portrayed in here <33
all in all a lovely update ⭐️

Plz keep writing more on Premeer..would love to read more from you..
whenever you write more on PH, pretty please send me a pm :)

It was a pleasure reading the OS
thanks for entertaining us :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Hey Khushbu 🤗

aww last part :( will miss the cutie pie PH in your SS.
Prem surprised Heer Yaay 😆 that was kind of funny.
Liked this scene and it was nice surprise for Prem too as Heer made him realize they're gonna be parents 😛 I thought it was really sweet that you wrote entire story on Heer's POV.
I loved your cute style of writing, adding cute humour in betw PH convo.
Really enjoyed every update 😃
Keep wiring in whatever interest you whether it's PH or anything else.
All the best and thanks a lot for entertaining us all 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
awesome ending ...loved it ...
please keep writing more ...

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