New SS-Tu Hi Haqeeqat PART-13 on PG-87 NEW UPDATE!!!

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Hey deshian🤗..i am again with new story on my Premeer Hope you'll also like this story as you'd liked my other stories 😳

So here is the teaser...please read and give you suggestions...i'll continue only after seeing for feedbacks 😳




Teaser

Ashlesha:- Nahi Prem ab bohot der ho chuki hai'

Prem:- Der ho chuki hai matlab??? Ash koi der nahi hui hai'ab bhi kuch nahi bigarda hai'

Ashlesha:- kuch nahi bigdra??? Prem!!! Tumhare ma bauji' meri di ke liye tumhara rishta leke aayen hai'or tum keh rahe ho ki abhi kuch nahi bidgra'

Prem:- Han main janta hun ash..lekin dekho abhi sirf rishta hi to aya hai'maine ya tumhari behen ne abhi tak is rishte ke liye han to nahi ki na'hum abhi jakar humare ghar walo ko sab kuch sach sach batadete hai'.hum dono ek doosre se pyar karte hai'or muje tumhari behen se shadi nahi karni'chalo.

Prem starts dragging ash with him but ash forcefully pulled her hand

Ash:- Nahi Prem!!! Tum aisa kuch nahi karoge..

Prem:- Lekin kyun ash'hum dono ek doosre se pyar karte hai to yeh baat sab ko bata ne mein kya problem hai'

Ash:- Problem hai Prem'tumne socha hai ki jab humare ghar walo ko humare pyar ke bare mein pata chalega'to unhe kitna dukh hoga'

Prem:- lekin ash'

Ash:- nahi Prem bus maine keh diya'tum is bare mein kisi se kuch nahi kahoge'khaskar meri di se to bilkul bhi nahi'tum jante ho gharwalo ke sath sath meri dib hi kitni khush hai is rishtey se'.or main usne unki yeh khushi nahi china chahati Prem'bohot pyar karti hun main meri di se'

Prem held her by her shoulder

Prem (with hurt look):- or main??? Main tumhare liye kuch maine nahi rakhta kya'

Ash cupped his face

Ash:- nahi Prem aisa nahi hai'I love you a lot'lekin tum itne waqt tak mere sath nahi rahe jitna ki meri di mere sath rahi hai'tum jante ho mera koi bhai-behan nahi hai'or bachpan mein hi mere papa ki death ho gait hi...main or meri mumma kitni akele ho gaye the'lekin jab main or meri mumma barde papa ke ghar ake rehne lage'to unhone or meri bardi ma ne meri mumma ko sambhala'or di ne or meher ne muje'..or aise hi or bhi kitne ehsaan hai mere upar unke'.or agar unke yeh eshaano ke badle muje mere char din ka bhi pyar qurbaan karna parde na to main khushi khushi taiyaar ho jaoungi apna pyar qurbaan karne ke liye'

Prem:- to tumhare kehne ka kya matlab hai'main tumhari behen se shadi ke liye raazi ho jaoun???

Ash looked at Prem with tears

Ash:- Han!!!

Prem got shocked

Prem (angrily):-Kya'.tum chahati ho ki main tumhari behen se shadi karloun'.han pagal ho gai ho kya tum.

Ash:- Please tumhe aise karna hoga'

Prem:- Nahi Ash'main tumhari tarha itna mahan nahi hun'ki main apne haathon se apne pyar ka gala ghot dun'nahi'kabhi nahi. Infact main jake sabko bata deta hun ki main tumse pyar karta hun'or muje yeh shadi nahi karni'

Ash got shocked. Prem angrily tried to left from but Ash stopped him

Ash:- nahi Prem. Tum aisa kuch nahi karoge please'main tumhare age haat jordti hun please

Prem turned around and helplessly looked at her

Prem:- To kya karoun'han'main tumse bohot pyar karta hun'I love you damit..

Ash wiped her tears and looked at Prem confidently

Ash:- Prem tum pyar karte ho na mujhse?

Prem nodded his head

Ash:- to tumhe ussi pyar ka wasta'.yeh shadi ke han kardo'

Prem (shocked):- Lekin ash'

Ash:- Agar tmne yeh shadi nahi kin a to tum mera mara hua muh dekho ge

Prem got shocked.

Ash:- wada karo mujhse Prem'tum yeh shadi karoge. Meri di HEER MAAN se shadi karoge tm, bolo!!!

Prem (with tears in his eyes):- Thik hai Ash agar tum yehi chahti ho..to yahi sahi. MAIN KAROUNGA HEER SE SHADI!!!!!



Here is the link of my other stories


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Character Sketch

Maan's

Balraj Maan:- The typical middle class man'He lives in Delhi with his wife and his two daughters. For him his family is very thing to him and specially his elder daughter Heer Maan. He always adores her and never talks to her in a raised voice. He can do anything for her. And he's little strict with her youngest daughter Meher..Because of her carelessness. But he also lover her a lot.

Teji Maan:- Wife of Balraj Maan'a typical house wife..And an idol mother'She's very affectionate but on the same time very strict with her daughters. She wants her daughter to be perfect in everything like studies, especially in household work. She always gets hyper and worried easily with small-small things'she can't deal with tension'And at the last she respects her husband a lot.

Daljeet Maan:- She's the wife of Balraj's small brother Balwant who's dead now. She lives with Balraj and his family with her daughter Ashlesha. She loves Heer and Meher more than Ashlesha. She always support and save Heer and Meher with Teji's anger. And also respects Balraj and Teji a lot.

Heer Maan:- The eldest daughter of Balraj and Teji maan. She's very obedient child to her parents. Very intelligent and traditional and well educated girl, who always obey her parents without any question. Apart from Her parents she also gets pampered by her chachi Daljeet. She respects daljeet as her own mother. She loves her little sissy's Meher and Ashlesha, and can do anything for their happiness.

Ashlesha Maan:- Daughter of Daljeet and Balwant maan. She very sweet and caring person. She respects her barde papa (Balraj) and bardi ma (teji). She share a very cute bond with Heer and Meher especially with Heer. For her, her Heer di is an idol, everything. And she can do anything for her. She always adored by her barde papa and bardi ma and heer. Just now she came back from U.K after completing her studies. As you all had read in teaser she shares a past with Prem juneja who use to be her college friend and boyfriend.

Meher Maan:- The youngest daughter of Balraj and Teji Maan. Very cute and bubbly by nature..She loves to play prank on everyone. And also got pampered by daljeet, heer and ashlesha'but she's really scared of her parents. But Daljeet, Heer and Ashlesha was always there to save her from their anger.


Juneja's

Lalit Juneja:- The most famous business men in Delhi on the same time very down to earth person, who believes in honesty. He lives in Delhi with his wife Gayatri Juneja, her daughter Veera Juneja and His two sons Prem Juneja and Preet juneja. He loves his family a lot and always gave importance to them more than his business.

Gayatri Juneja:- wife of Lalit Juneja and an idol mother of Prem, Preet and veera. She's also very down to earth person. She gave respect to everyone and never judge anyone with their class and status. She love her husband and her children a lot, especially Prem.

Prem Juneja:- The eldest son of Lalit juneja and Gayatri juneja. Apple of his parent's eyes. Just now he came from U.K after completing his masters in business and now he's all ready join his family business. He is an obedient child to his parents and always obeys them, never cross his limits. He respects his parents. He always adores his siblings Preet and Veera. Again as you all had read he also share a past with his college friend/ girlfriend Ashlesha.

Preet Juneja:- The prankster of the juneja family. He always irritates his father with his antics. He loves to tease his lil sister Veera. But on the same time he loves his PB a lot. He even can give his life for his PB.

Veera Juneja:- the youngest child of lalit juneja and Gayatri juneja. She's very sweet and loving by nature. And always gets pampered by her Prem bhaiya.


Edited by kiran_28 - 11 years ago
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Edited by kiran_28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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you are going to continue this and that i want veru soon. i'm on this thread.😃
btw i'm wondering who will be the vilain here 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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intersting story kiran 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow u started new ss..awesome
it seems very interesting story
pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start ...
waiting for next part ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kiran

😲

I had to umm *rub my eyes* is it real 😆

Seriously

😲

1st I loved the title 😎 cool animated title is fab.
V colourful post. Love it ⭐️

Now here comes the shock!

Ash is kind and caring 😲 not just that her mom too 😲 hey the sun rose on west today. I was totally blown away. I was thinking its Prem's dream 😆

But u hv character sketch and it clearly states both are good. It's nice to hv a villain less story for a change. You may like to edit the sketch a bit : if I'm nt mistaken Meher is youngest in Maans and Veera is youngest in Junejas.

I'm v excited to read what you are gonna show. How Prem reacts after accepting the proposal. Also looking forward to see masti of Meher , Preet and how Ash and Veera get, along etc. awesome concept.

Thanks for it. All the best.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowww u start new ss m very very Happy :)
FABULOUSE START LOVED LOVED LOVED IT
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