New SS-Tu Hi Haqeeqat PART-13 on PG-87 NEW UPDATE!!! - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was amazing! Cant wait for the next parttt! Dont make ashlesha too good.. Hate her :/ love Premeer!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deshian4lyf

That was amazing! Cant wait for the next parttt! Dont make ashlesha too good.. Hate her :/ love Premeer!

thanks for reading 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you so much for liking the 1st part..i didn't expect that i would get this kind of response..it means alot to me...thank u so much 🤗
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Part-2

Teji asked Meher to bring Heer down. Meher nodded and left from there to bring Heer. Lalit and Balraj a start talking about their families'Lalit was continuously phrasing Prem...Telling him how he had done MBA from London..And how he's eager to join his family business etc etc tec'.Listening all these things Balraj, Teji and Daljeet was highly impressed by Prem.

Preet teasingly nudged Prem and Prem glared back to him.

Prem (thinks):- Hey bhagwan..yahan mae yeh soch soch ke pagal ho raha hun'ki is rishtey ko kaise tordun'or wahan bauji mere tarifon ke pul bande ja rahe hain..kuch to karna pardega'ki wo lardki is shadi ke liye khud hi mana karden'han'idea'mae uss lardki ko sab kuch sach sach bata dunga..ki mae kisi or se pyar karta hun'han yeh thik rahega'

Soon Prem's thought was interrupted Daljeet's voice

Daljeet:- Yeh lo humari Heer bhi agai'

Everybody looked toward the stairs and saw Meher was bringing Heer down who was wearing baby pink anarkali suit and she didn't apply much makeup. Lalit and Gayatri, Preet and Veera got impressed by her simplicity..She looked simple yet gorgeous. Prem wasn't able to see the girl's face as teji was blocking his view, who came towards Heer and smiled at her and whispered to her "bohat pyar lag rahi hai meri bachi". Heer blushed. Teji move little back which gave Prem clear view of Heer.

For a second Prem's heart stopped beating when he saw an angelic face. That innocence'that simplicity, that blush'just made his heart skip. Heer was being very shy'she didn't dare to look up at everyone's eyes. She felt an intense on her'and after realizing who might be'the butterflies started flying here and there in her stomach.

Prem was completely forgotten about the surroundings, he was looking at Heer like a "besharam".

Preet with a smirk on his face went near Prem and whispered in his ears "PB agar ap aise hi unhe dekhte rahoge..meri honewali bhabi ko ap hi ki nazar lag jayegi"

Prem came out of his wonderland when he listen the word "meri honewali bhabi" from Preets mouth.

Prem saw everyone was tried to hide their smiles at his reaction. He mentally kick himself for looking at ANOTHER GIRL like this'Only Ash has right to be looked by him like this'

Prem (scolding himself in his mind):- Dam it Prem'just control yourself'Ash ke ilawa how could you look at another girl likenthis'.remember you have to break this alliance'

Veera got enthusiastic like her soon-to-be sister-in-law'

Veera (excitedly to her mother):- Ma'muje Heer bhabi bohot pasand hai'ap jaldi se shadi pakki kardo bas!!!

Heer blushed at Veera's statement, as Balraj, Teji, Daljeet and Meher smiled at Veera's childish behavior. Prem got uncomfortable'

Everyone was settled down. Teji gave signal to Daljeet to call Ash. Daljeet nodded and went inside the kitchen with Meher. Heer sit beside Gayatri and Veera'Gayatri was asking some questions and Heer was answering it obidently'Prem saw how his mother and her baby sister was happy with Heer.

Soon Balraj started talking to Prem about his studies, his hobbies etc ..etc

In the kitchen

Daljeet was continuously dialing Ash's number but she wasn't picking it up.

Daljeet:- Hey bhagwan yeh lardki kahan chali gai'bahar kitni barish ho rahi hai or mehmaan bhi aa chuke hain..

Meher:- Don't worry chachi'ash di ati hi hongi..

Daljeet:- meher puttar tu ek kaam kar..jab tak ash ati hai'tab tak tu chai bande'thik hai

Meher:- ji chachi

Meher started making tea for the guests.

Ash was entering her society..she was finding very difficult to walk properly without putting her feet on mud. It was raining heavily.

Ash (irritatedly):- oh god hey barish kyun hoti hai'sari jagha kichard'ufff I just hate rain.

Suddenly ash losses her balance and she accidently putted her feet on mud'

Ash:- shit man!!!!! I hate you kichard!!!

After struggle about 10 to 15 minutes Ash manage to come near her house. She saw a black Mercedes benz infront of her house'

Ash:- Oh no'lagta guests agaye'shit I am late.

She was about to rang the door bell but stopped

Ash (thinks):- agar mae samne wale darwaze se jaoungi or un logo ne muje aise kichard mein lipte hue dekh liya 'to lardke walon ke samne mera kitna galat impression pardega..or ho sakta hai Heer di ke rishtey pe bhi asar parde'nahi nahi'muje piche ke darwaze se andar jana chahiye'

Ash got inside the kitchen from back door. Daljeet's back was facing towards the door'daljeet turned around and got startled seeing ash like this..

Daljeet:- Ash kahan reh gai thi tu'kab se tera phone try kar rahi hun..or yeh kya haal bana ke rakha hai'

Ash:- mom mere phone ki battery low thi or main jab snacks leke nikli or adhe raste hi pohochi thi ki barish shuru ho gai'or kichard se mera yeh haal ho gaya'

Meher:- Di ap mere room mein jake naha lo'mae apke kamre se apke liye apke kapre lati hun thik hai..

Daljeet:- Han meher bilkul thik keh rahi..agar tu apne kamre mein jayegi to'bahar lardke wale baithe wo sab kya sochen ge'tu meher ke kamre mein naha le..tab tak mein yeh snacks or chai..bahar mehmaano ko serve karti hun..

Ash went with Meher for freshen up..

Daljeet brings tea and snacks for juneja's'Heer was about stand to help daljeet for serving but teji stops her..

Teji:- Heer beta tum gayatri ji ke paas baitho..mein or daljeet serve kardenge'

After having snacks and tea Lalit asked Balraj

Lalit:- Balraj bhai sab'humne to Heer se baite karli or apne logo ne bhi Prem se'to kyun ab hum in dono ko ek dosre se baat karne ka moka den'ab humare samne to yeh dono kuch nahi bolenge'to agar ap sabko koi aitraaz na ho in dono ko thordi der ke liye akela chord dete hai'taki yeh dono baithe kar sake

Balraj smiled:- han han kyun nahi'isme aitraz ki kya baat hai'

Balraj:- Heer beta'Prem ko apna kamra to dekha do to'jao'

Heer :- ji papa

Preet (teasingly whispered to Prem):- Best of luck PB!!

Prem glared at Preet'he stood up from his seat and gave a fake shy smile to everyone'and went behind Heer'as she goes upstairs.

In Meher's room

Ash came out of the washroom'.she went near mirror and starts combing her hairs'

Meher (excitedly):- Di apko pata hai jo humare honewale jiju haine'wo itne handsome or dashing hai ki hayyyeee kya batao'seriously agar yeh rishta Heer di ke liye nahi ata na'to main hi unse shadi kar leti sachi!!!

Ash (smiled):- Meher tub hi na'sharam kar wo humare hone wale jiju'ab to bus bhagwan se yehi prayer kar'ki rishta jurd jaye'acha yeh to bata humare honewale jiju ka naam kya hai'

Meher:- unka naam Pr'

Teji's voice cutted meher

Teji:- meher!!!!

Meher:- oh god ab yeh meri mata shree ko kya hua..kyun bula rahi hai muje'di mae abhi athi hun ok

Ash:- han thik hai'

Meher left from there'

Ash (thinks):- ab tak to Prem us lardki ke ghar bhi pohoch gaya hoga'.kya usne humare bare mein us lardki ko bata diya hoga???

After thinking 5 minutes

Ash:- Prem ko call karke dekhti hun'

Ash took her phone off from charging and starts dialing Prem's number.

In Heer' Room

Heer opened her room's door and let Prem in'she switch on the lights.

Heer (slow voice):- aaiye

Prem uncomfortably smiled and moved inside her room'her room was on theme of white and baby purple color'.Prem got impress seeing Heer's beautiful and tidy room'

Prem:- You're room is really nice

Heer confidently smiled:- thanks'.

Prem looked at the big window'white curtains were flying due to wind from outside'Prem went near the window and stood there and starts looking outside'Heer came near prem and stood beside him

Heer:- ap ko pata hai'yeh mera fav spot hai'main jab bhi khush ya udas hoti huna'to main yahi aake kardhi hoti hun..or chand ko dekhti rehti hun'

Prem:-what a coincidence..me too love to stand near window'and look outside'

Heer smiled and Prem too smiled'but soon his smile got vanishes as he realizes the situation'.

Prem (thinks):- Damit Prem'whats wrong with you'tu hank hush hoke'has-has ke baatien kar raha hai Heer se'idiot'bhul gaya tuje Heer ko sab kuch sach sach batanaa hai'to ab pagalon ki tarha has-has ke baatien karna band kar'and concentrate on your "rishta tordo mission"'

Seeing Prem in his thought'Heer asked him

Heer:- kya hua???

Prem (coming out of his thoughts):- umm nahi'nahi kuch nahi'umm actually heer muje apse bohot important baat karni hai..

Heer:- ji kahiye'

Prem:- heer wo baat yeh hai ki'actually muje kuch confess karna'

Heer was waiting patiently for Prem to complete his talk'as he was dam nervous'Heer saw some sweat breads on his forehead'

Prem:- wo main yeh kehna chahata tha ki..main actually'main

Heer:- ji kahiye aap kya..

Prem:- han main ummm

Prem (thinks to himself):- Prem duffer tu to aise nervous ho raha hai jaise to Heer ko sachai nahi balki propose karne ja raha hai'c'mon Prem say it tu yeh shadi nahi kar sakta'tu ash se pyar karta hai'c'mon speak up!!!

Seeing his nervousness.

Heer:- Aap thik to haina'main pani leke ati hun..

Heer goes near the center table'picked up the jug and filled the glass with water'and bring that to Prem.

Heer:- yeh lijiye..pani..

Prem took the glass of water saying "thank you" and drank it llike he haven't drunk the water since ages'

After drinking water he gave the empty glass to heer..heer asked him

Heer:- are you ok..or pani laoun..

Prem:- Nahi..or pani nahi chahiye..Thank u'muje apko kuch batana hai.

Heer:- ji

Prem took deep breath

Prem:- Heer main yeh kehna chahata hun ki main yeh shadi na'.

But Prem was interrupted by his phone'took out his phone and look at his phone'Ash name was flashing on the screen'Prem looked at heer

Prem:- umm if you don't mind can I take this call

Heer:- Ya sure why not..

Prem:- Thank you

Prem goes at the another corner of the room and picked up the call

Prem (in low tone):- Han ash..

Ash:- Prem tum wahan pohoch gaye kya..

Prem:- han mein wahin hun..tum tension mat lo'mein bas us lardki ko humare bare mein sab sach batane hi wala hun.

Ash:- Kya..matlab tumne abhi tak us lardki ho humare bare mein nahi bataya???

Prem:- arre tum itna hyper mat ho..main bus usse batane hi wala hun..

Ash:- kab batoge Prem'shadi ke baad???

Prem:- ash relax'just cool down'ok..main usse sab batane hi wala tha ki tumhara call agya'tension mat lo jaan main sab thik kardunga..ok'main tumhe ghar pohoch ke phone karta hun ok..

Ash:- ok..bye'love you

Prem:- love you too baby'

Meher came near Teji

Meher:- ji ma apne bulaya'

Teji:- han beta..tu Preet or Veera ko ghar dekha do'or ate hue Heer or Prem ko bhi sath le ana..

Meher:- ji ma

Veer got excited

Meher, Preet and Veera left from'soon Ash also joined them..meher introduce ash to preet and veera..

Ash greeted them

Preet:- guys kyun na Heer babhi or PB ke paas chale..unki baatein sunte hai'

Ash got little curious hearing PB from preet's mouth.

Ash (thinks):- PB'yeh word maine kahin suna hai'

Ash (confusingly to preet):- PB???

Preet:- actually main mere bhaiya ko PB kehta hun'

Ash (thinks):- arre han Prem ne bataya tha ki uska chota bhai bhi usse PB kehta hai..lekin prem ne apne chote bhai ka kya nam bataya tha???yaad nahi araha'kahin preet hi to prem ka bhai or heer di ko dekhne kahin prem hi to nahi aya yahan..nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta..

Veera saw ash lost in her thought

Veera:- kya hua ash di'ap kya soch rahi hai.

Ash:- Umm kuch nahi bas aise hi'umm waise tumhare bhaiya ka naam kya hai..

Preet:- arre naam chordo..ap khud hi mere PB se milena..

Meher:- Ab ap sab yahin pe baatien karoge ya chaloge bhi un dono ke pass..

Veera:- Han chalo..

Ash got restless'but manage to hide infront of meher, preet anf veera'

In Heer's room

Prem:- I am sorry..wo call bohot important thi'

Heer smiled:- it's ok'I understand

Both got silent

Heer:- umm ap kuch kehne wale the..

Prem:- main yeh kehna chahata tha ki main yeh shad'

But again he was interrupted by some noise behind the door.

Heer:- main dekhti hun'

Heer opened the door and found Preet, meher and Veera with cheesy smile and ash was standing behind them with restless expression. Seeing their teasing smile heer blushed

Preet:- I guess hum logo ne apko disturb nahi kya hoga..

Heer:- nahi nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai..hum bas neeche ane hi wale the..

Veera:- arre wah iska matlab humne apko sach mein disturb nahi kiya

Preet (coming inside):- waise kahan hai humare PB

Prem (thinks):- oh no in logo ko bhi abhi hi ana tha'ap kaise bataon mein heer ko mere or ash ke bare mein'

Preet (teasingly):- kya baat hai PB'lagta humare ane se apko zyada khushi nahi hui'kyun veera

Veera:- han preet bhai'bhaiya ke chehre se to aisa hi lag rahaa hai..

Meher teasingly nudge Heer and heer gave a shy smile'

Ash's legs were trembling'she was dead scared to enter heer's room and found her Prem'.she was contonously chanting "Hey bhagwan wo lardka mera Prem na ho pls pls pls" in her mind'

Ash slowly entered Heer's room'she looked towards the window where Prem and Preet were standing. Prem's back was facing Ash'that is why she wasn't able to see his face..

Heer looked at Ash was standing near the door.

Heer:- Arre Ash tu wahan darwaze pe kyun khardi hai'andar aa na

Hearing Ash's name Prem got shocked'he immediately turned around and got the biggest shock of his life'Ash was too lost her senses..Now for her its really difficult to digest the truth'that her Prem was the same guy who came to see her heer di for marriage'.how could god be so cruel to her'.

[Here is the 2nd part of this SS..hope you'll like it...waiting for your feedbacks 😳 thank u 😃]

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
That was an interesting update
hmmm... so prem got lost in heer...
Finally ash and prem saw each other...
looking forward to know what is gonna happen now
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Woww Awosome part...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
Please update soon...
Thanks Alot for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
the situation is so critical. what will prem & ash do? 😕heer got trapped in between.
update soon plz.
for got to say what happened to prem when he saw heer???? 😉 😃
Edited by premeermania - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
lovely update..
can't wait for next...update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Woww Awosome part...

what happen next prem and ash see each other

eagerly waiting for the next part...
Please update soon...
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gr8 update kiran. . So finally ash knows that its prem only. . I wonder what is gonna happen now. Preet as usual cute and so meher. . Prem and heer <3 <3 thank u for the update and for the pm as well

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