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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part-4

In juneja Mansion

It was 12.45 A.M...gayatri was waiting for Prem to come..she was getting worried...

Gayatri:- yeh Prem pata nahi kaha reh gaya...aisa to kabhi nahi hua ki prem ko kabhi deri ho or usne muje inform na kiya ho...aj to bata ke bhi nahi gaya ki kahan jar aha hai...hey bhagwan raksha karne mere Prem ki...

Just then door bell rang..Gayatri hurriedly went to the door and opened it and saw Prem was there with swollen eyes as if he was crying...

Gayatri (worriedly):- Prem...yeh kya halat bana rakhi hai beta tune???

Prem looked at gayatri with his red eyes...and tried to control his tears. Gayatri cupped his face and again asked him

Gayatri:- bache kya hua bata na...

Prem plastered a fake smile on his face..

Prem:- kuch nahi ma...wo muje apse kuch kehna tha..

Gayatri:- han bol..kya kehna tha..

Prem:- ma..main..hee..heer se shadi karne ke liye taiyar hun...

Gayatri :- kya..Prem beta abhi itni jaldi nahi hai..to aram se sochle...koi tujh pe koi dabav nahi dal raha hai...tu pehle to sochle...or phir hum kal subha is bare mein baat karnege..thik hai

Prem:- Nahi ma...sochne ko kuch bacha hi nahi hai...or maine yeh faisla apni marzi se kiya hai...mu..muje heer pasand...or taiyar hun is shadi ke liye...

Gayatri got delighted...and kissed Prem's forehead...

Gayatri:- tu sach keh raha haina Prem..tune apni marzi se is shadi ke liye han ki hai..han

Prem looked down and nodded his head...

Gayatri:- aj main bohot khush hun Prem...Heer bohot achi lardki hai...or muje poora yakeen hai ki wo tuje bohot khush rakhegi...tuje bohot pyar degi...

Prem:- han ma..mai..main bohot thak gaya hun...main jaake aram karta hun..

Gayatri:- han thik hai beta...tu jaake aram kar..

Prem went to his room


In Heer's room

Heer was sitting on window pane...smiling and thinking about Prem..she was thinking the way prem was talking to her when they entered her room...she'd also notice the way prem was looking at her when she came infront of him and his family...she's have Goosebumps..Thinking about the intense gaze of him on her... She was lost in the thoughts of prem..just then she saw Ash entering the society gate...and one that she noticed is that she was crying...Heer got worried and immediately went downstairs...


Downstairs

Heer opened the door before Ash could ring the door bell..Ash got shocked seeing hee infront of her and that too with lots of questions in her eyes.

Heer:- Ash..yeh sab kya hai..tu itni raat ko akele bahar gai thi..or..or tu ro rahi hai??? Kya hua? Kya baat hai?

Ash (wiping her tears):- kuch nahi di..wo main..ummm

Heer:- Ash...main dekh rahi hun tu bohot odd tareke se behave kar rahi thi aj...and I am definitly sure..tu zarur kuch chupa rahi hai mujhse...dekh jo bhi baat hai jo tuje pareshan kar rahi hai...bata de mujhe..shayad mein teri kuch madad kar paoun..

Ash looked down

Heer (continoued):-Dekh tu yeh baat bohot achi tarah se janti hai ki maine tujh mein or meher mein kabhi koi farak nahi kiya...mere liye jaise meher waisi tu...chahe meher ho ya tu...main tum dono ko dukhi nahi dekh sakti, pareshan nahi dekh sakti...isilye bat kya baat hai..

Now ash couldn't control her tears..and hugged heer tightly and started crying her heart out.

Heer was trying her best to console her...She broke the hug and wiped her tears...

Heer:- chal aa mere sath...tere kamre mein chalke baat karte hai..chal..

Heer and Ash went to Ash's room


In ash's room

Heer and Ash was sitting the bed

Heer:- chal ab bata muje, kya baat hai..

Ash:- di wo..aj..apke ke liye prem ka rishta aya tha na..

Heer (confused):- han...lekin prem ka kya lena dena hai in sab se??

Ash:- di main wo ...prem ...main London mein Prem...

Heer (lil scared):- Prem se kya...ash please jaldi bol..muje dar lag raha hai..

Ash looked toward Heer and saw how scared she is right now

Ash (thinks):- Nahi ash..yeh kya kar rahi hai...tu di kuch nahi bata sakti...Di pasand karti hai prem ko, apni khushi ke liye tu di ka dil nahi tord saki...nahi...main kuch nahi batoungi di ko...

Heer:- Ash bata..Tu London mein prem.. kya bol rahi thi pls bata na...kya..kya tu prem phele mil chuki hai London mein??

Coming out of her thought and gave a weak smile to her

Ash (with fake smile):- umm han di...mein Prem se London mein mil chuki hun...

Heer (shocked):- Kya!!!

Ash:- um han wo meri friend haina anika...jiski family ke sath mein London mein rehti thi...to ek bar main anika or uski family ke sath ek business party mein gait hi...to bus wahi mein Prem se mili thi..

She lied...but still not convinced with her answer, heer asked another question

Heer:- wo thik hai, lekin tune yeh nahi bataya ki tu ro kyun rahi thi...

Ash got nervous..

Ash:- umm wo main...umm anika na yahan india aai hui hai apni family ke sath..to main uske dad se milne gai thi...Prem juneja ke bare mein pata karne...umm ki wo kaisa insane hai...etc..

Heer:- to kya pata chala??

Ash (weak smile):-umm anika ke dad ne batya ki Prem bohot hi ache insan hai...loving, caring and down to earth person..hai..

Ash said while trying to control her tears

Heer:-Ash..lekin muje ab bhi mere sawal ka jawab nahi mila kit u ro kyun rahi thi...agar prem ache insan hai to isme rone wali kya baat hai??

Ash:- di...achanak se apki vidai ka khyal mere mann mein agya to isiliye muje rona agya..

Now Heer took breath of relief and smiled

Heer:- yeh lo bus itni si baat thi...or ek pal ke liye mere dimag mein pata nahi kya kya khayal agye the...

Heer (while hitting slightly on her head):- tub hi na bikul pagal hai..ab to sirf rishta hi aya..or tu abhi se ro to aise rahi hai, jaise meri vidai kal ho rahi hai...pagal..

Ash gave a fake embarrass smile

Heer:- or han age se kabhi kisi se bhi milne jana ho...to din mein jaya kar..raat mein nahi...aj kal mahol thik nahi haina na..

Ash nodded and heer smiled

Heer:- chal bohot raat ho gai hai...ab so ja..hmm

Ash smiled as heer kissed her on her forehead

Ash:- Good night di

Heer:- good night

And Heer left the room leaving...leaving a depressed ash...


In Prem's Room

Prem was lying down on his bed...but he wasn't sleeping..He was thinking about Ash...how he met her first time, how he fell in love with her, how he proposed her and she accepted, how he came to know about that the girl with whom his parents want him to get married was none another than Ash's elder sister heer, how ash gave him her 'kasam' not to tell anybody, specially heer about their love..How she convinced him to get agree to get married to heer...

He stood up from his bed went near the window, then he remember heer saying that this is her favorite place in her room...

Prem (to himself):-Pata nahi mere sath hi aisa kyun ho raha hai...Ash ko lagta hai...ki agar mein heer se shadi karlounga..to heer bohot khush hogi...lekin ash yeh nahi samjh rahi hai ki main use pyaar karta hun, heer se nahi...shadi ke baad mein heer ko wo pyar de hi nahi paounga...jis pyar ki umeed wo mujhse karegi..Ab tak jitna mein heer ko jaan paya hun...heer bohot hi achi lardki hai...wo jiski zindagi mein bhi jayegi..wo insaan bohot lucky hoga..lekin ash yeh nahi samjh rahi hai...heer mere sath khush nahi reh payegi...and she deserve to be happy...

Then he remembers ash's word "agar unke yeh eshaano ke badle muje mere char din ka bhi pyar qurbaan karna parde na to main khushi khushi taiyaar ho jaoungi apna pyar qurbaan karne ke liye..."

These words made Prem angrier

Prem (angrily):- thik hai ash...tum apni behen ki khushi ke liye apne char din ke pyar pyar ko qurbaan karna chahati hona...to thik hai...ab main dil se na sahi lekin itna khush rokhunga heer ko, itna pyar karounga..jisse dekh ke tum tarasogi..uss pyar ke liye... pachtaogi..ki tumne kyun muje apni zindagi se jane diya...yeh mera wada hai tumse Miss Ashlesha Maan...


Please leave you comments 😳

Edited by kiran_28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the update ...🤗
awesome update ...too good
cant wait for next update ...
please update soon ...
thanks for the pm ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
The story is getting really interesting...
loving how it is going...❤️
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here ash is sacrificing her love for heer and prem also agreed to marry heer...just hope that something bad doesnot happen when heer will come to know about it
and curious to know how the story will procedd... and when will heer come to know about ash and prem... before or after the marriage????
do update soon
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
cannot wait for next part
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
you know what? i was thinking about irritating you for update. but now you are safe. 😛 😆
p.s plz update pyar ka asar too.

now this one. this is superb. 👏
this is how prem juneja should be. 😎 yes yes yes he should show ash how much he can love heer.
i'm being very impatient to see how it's gonna be. 😳

later if ash come in between knock her out please. 😉

thank you. next update soon plz. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the update ...🤗
awesome update ...i want premeer toghtr
cant wait for next update ...
please update soon ...
thanks for the pm ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Kiran 🤗

yaaay I was thinking of you yest. 😆 and you updated. Yaaay
Thanks ❤️ Purple font looks so beautiful. ⭐️

pg 18
aww Prem's distressed and crying huh. G3 was nice at least she was trying to be helpful.
wow I can't believe Prem actually said yes 😲 but so happy 😃 I mean for now 🤔 I hv a nagging feeling Heer's gonna suffer but not sure who will be the cause of it. :P
Aww Heer saw Ash enter the house - oh my at such later hour. Sweet sisterly bond, although Ash did blurted out some of the truth. Now the Q is - will she stay nice or not. We'll see.
I'm just worried and wondering if Heer will find out somehow bec. if Prem and Ash were close then, obviously their circle of friends would hv known this affair.. Ok I'll wait until you reveal it 😆
Prem's thoughts are dunno what to make of it. I hope he'll be able to form some kind of relationship with Heer at least they could start being friends. Looking forward to see how you'll take this further.
I love this story and it's lil different in the way you sketched character so please do continue.
Thanks for sweet ch.


Edited by AASUS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
❤️ awesome thanx for ur update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woww Superb update...
Waiting for the next part...
Please update soon...
Thanks for the pm... :)

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