New SS-Tu Hi Haqeeqat PART-13 on PG-87 NEW UPDATE!!! - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tarannum6

Woww Superb update...
Waiting for the next part...
Please update soon...
Thanks for the pm... :)

thank u so much tara..keep reading 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heer_juneja

Wow awesome update..
Loved to see the detrmnt premm
now eagerly waiting for next part
pls update soon
thank u for the pm!

thanks heer 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbie-19

yaay i'm loving the climax of the story esp Prem's words :D

this is really getting interesting <3
Prem's heart broken but he'll be fine with passage of time
Heer already has some likeness for Prem
Eager to know what'll happen next
update soon

thank u tooba..glad u liked it..thanks for commenting 😳 keep reading 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Premeer_Diwani

lovely update kiran...i just loved last part of prem...kya revenge hai.. i hope this ash wont turn negative in future..

cont soon.. thanks for pm

thank u so much priya for reading and commenting...will try to update soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago






will try to update soon...may be end of this week or next week 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plzzz plzzz plzzz kiran update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago


Originally posted by: LoveHarshAddit

Plzzz plzzz plzzz kiran update soon.



updating 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-5

Next Morning at Maan's House

Heer came out of the washroom after taking morning bath wearing green-black churidaar...she was drying her hairs standing in front of the mirror. While she was drying her hairs...she saw in the mirror that prem was standing behind her and smiling at her. Heer got shocked and immediately turned around to see him but when turned around...prem was not there..Heer got confused but suddenly start smiling at her stupid day dream and slightly hit her head...

Heer:- control Heer control..yeh kya ho raha hai tuje..abhi to tu just Prem se mili hi hai...or tuje wo har jagha dikhai de raha hai...

After combing her hair...she took her dupatta from the bed ready to go to downstairs..But before she could reach near door..Meher entered her room with the bang holding Ash's hand..And started singing..

Meher (sang):- sun didi sun didi tere liye ek rishta aya hai..

Heer (shocked):- Kyaa ek aur rishta..kiska..???

Ash (trying to sound happy):- nahi di..meher wo..Prem ke..rishtey ke bare mein baat kar rahi hai..

Heer:- meher tu bhi na...muje pata hai ki mere liye rishta aya hai..so stop singing..

Meher (teasingly):-achaji..apko yeh to pata hai ki Prem juneja ka rishta aya hai...lekin apko yeh to nahi pata na ki...Prem juneja ne is rishtey ke liye...umm

Heer (worried):- is rishtey ke liye kya...bol na

Meher (teasingly):- kyaa baat hai di...apko bardi jaldi ho rahi hai..janne ki..Hmmm

Heer (blushed):- umm nah..nahi to..muje koi jaldi nahi hai..Main..To bus aise hi..

Meher:- ohh acha acha...apko koi jaldi nahi hai janne ki..aise hi poch rahi thi ap han...ok ash di ab di ko koi jaldi nahi hai janne ki to thik hai..hum unhe nahi batayenge..ki juneja's is rishtey ke liye raazi hue hain ya nahi...thik hai chalo di..

Meher held ash's hand went out of the room

Heer:- Arre nahi...meher sun to..

Heer too ran behind them...


At juneja's House

Lalit was on cloud nine when Gayatri told him that Prem has said yes to this marriage...He was happily dancing...holding veera's hand...and Preet was dancing with gayatri...

Prem was looking at them admiringly from upstairs..

Prem (thinks):-sab kitne khush hai..mere ek faisle ne sabko kitni khush di hai...or main..main kal kya karne jar aha tha..ek lardki ke liye main apni family ko itna barda dukh dene jar aha tha...wo lardki jiske dil mein mere pyar ki koi kadar hi nahi hai..but thank you so much ash..tume mere pyar ko thukrake...muje meri family ko bohot barda dukh dene se bacha liya...thank you so much...ab mere mann mein..tumhare liye nafart ke ilawa koi feelings nahi hai..ab muje tumhari koi parwa nahi hai...parwa hai to sirf apne pariwar ki unki khushi..or unki khushi heer mein hai...

Soon Prem came out of his thoughts when he heard Preet's voice

Preet came to him and hugged him tightly

Preet:- main bata nahi sakta..main kitna khush...mere PB ki shadi hone wali hai...I can't believe it bhai..

Prem smiled and caresses Preet's cheeks...just then veera too came there and hugged Prem

Veera:- congrats bhaiya...main bhi bohot khush...main hamesha se heer bhabi jaisi hi bhabi chahati thi..thank you so much bhaiya..muje heer bhabi jaisi bhabi den eke liye..

Prem smiled..Hugged her back and placed a soft kiss on her head...Gayatri and Lalit was watching their children admiringly...PRem came downstairs took blessings from gayatri and lalit..Lalit hugged him

Lalit:- thank you so much son...aj main garv se keh sakta hun ki tu mera beta hai...apni marzi ke khilaf tu mere to teri ma ke kehne pe kal heer se milne gaya or yeh hi nahi balki tu is rishtey ke liye bhi raazi ho gaya...I am so happy today...lekin beta ek baat bata..tu is rishtey ke liye apni marzi se hi raazi hua haina...

Prem gain remembered his last conversation with Ash and also remembered his promise to himself..

Lalit:- bol na prem..tu khush to haina na..

Prem smiled:- bauji..ap sab ki khush main hi meri khushi...or agar apki logo ki khushi heer mein hai to muje kya aitraaz ho sakta hhai..yeh shadi ke liye han maine apni marzi se hi ki hai..

Lalit hugged him again

Lalit:- yeh to bohot achi baat hai..

Gayatri:- maine tujhse kaha than a Prem bus ek baar tu us lardki se milega na to tuje samjh ajayega hum ne tere liye jo faisla liya hai wo galat nahi hai..or muje pooar yakin hai...heer bhi is rishtey ke liye raazi hogi...or wohi juneja khandan ki bardi bahu ban kar is ghar mein or tere zindagi mein ayegi..or teri zingadi khushiyon se bhar degi...kyun ji sahi kaha na maine

Lalit:-han bilkul..jo biwi kahe wahi sach hai

Prem smiled and everybody laughed..

Prem:-umm acha bauji muje office ke liye late ho raha hai...maine chalta haun..

Gayatri:- arre lekin nashta..nashta to karte ja..

Prem:- nahi ma late ho raha hai..main office main hi kuch kha lunga...main chalta hun

Lalit:- acha thik hai lekin aj sham ko jaldi office se ajana..meri balraj se baat hui thi..hume aj Heer ke ghar jana hai..roke ki date final karne thik hai..

Prem:- ji bauji..

Prem left from there


At maan's house

Heer (irritatedly):- arre koi muje batayega..yeh ho kya raha hai...

Heer said irritatedly because no one in the house is telling her what Prem's decision is...

Daljeet:- arre puttar..tu hi to keh rahi thi meher se ki tujhe koi jaldi nahi janne ki is rishtey ke bare mein to phir ab kya hua..

Daljeet teased Heer as balraj and teji tried to hide their laugh..and meher was continuously smilingly seeing the hilarious look on her heer di's face..and ash was giving a sad look...

Heer:- urgghh...ok fine I gave up...ab jaldi batao muje

Teji:- kya bataye??

Heer (nervously):- umm yehi ki..lalit uncle ka phone aya tha to kya kaha unhone??

Balraj:- zyada khush nahi..bus unhone yahi kaha ki aj wo sab humare ghar arahe hai..roke ki date final karne...

Heer :- acha roke ki date fina...(then she realized what balraj said) kyaaa roka...

Teji:- han roke

Heer:- kiske ka roka???

Teji:- yeh bhagwan kya karun mein is lardki ka. Arre obviously beta..tere or Prem ka roka...

Heer started blushing..Daljeet came to her and asked her

Daljeet:- tu khush to haina..

Heer blushed and immediately hugged daljeet everyone except Ash laughed at Heer's shyness

Ash was sadly smiling..Looking at how happy her heer di is...just than her phone started ringing...Seeing Prem's number flashing she got shocked..she went to her room to talk to him..

Ash (angrily):- Tumne phone kyun kiya hai?? Maine mana kiya than a...ki aj ke baad hum baat nahi karenge...to phir kyn..

Prem (teasingly):- arre arre relax..just calm down ash..or hum baad kyun nahi karenge..han..hum zarur baat karenge afterall hum rishta hi kuch aisa hai...to baat to karni pardegi na...

Ash:- humara rishta??? For your kind of information humara ab koi rishta nahi hai..

Prem:- arre aise kaise koi rishta nahi..tumhi ne to jorda hai wo rishta...jeeja-saali ka rishta...han..arre ab to main tumhara honewala jeeju hun..or tum apne honewale jeeju se baat nahi karogi..aise kaise...

Ash:- Prem..tumne yeh faltu bakwaas karne ke liye call kiya hai???

Prem:- arre nahi nahi..darasal main tumse pochna chahata tha ki MERI HEER kaisi hai...???

Ash (shocked):- tumhari heer???

Prem (smirked):- han MERI HEER...ab wo meri heer haina...to kaisi hai wo..bohot khush hogi na jab use pata chala hoga..ki USKE PREM ne shadi ke liye han kardi hai

Ash is now feeling really uncomfortable hearing MERI HEER and USKA PREM etc from Prem's mouth

Prem (smirked):- Ash kya hua..kuch bol kyun nahi rahi..chalo yeh chordo...tum ek kaam karo..muje MERI HEER ka number dedo..main use khud hi poch lunga...ki wo khush hai ya nahi..wo kya haina ek baar muje heer ka phone number mil jayega...phir muje tumhe phone karke time waste nahi karna pardega..main khud directly use baat karliya karounga...hello hello ash..are you there

Ash (controlling her tears):- han..han main Di ka number tumhe message kar dungi..abhi phone rakho bye...

She disconnect the call..Prem smirked..recall his recent conversation with ash..

Prem:- so sad...bura lag raha hoga na ash...ko acha..hai yeh to main chahata hun..yeh sirf shuruwat hai ash...age age dekho...hota hai kya...tumne abhi tak Prem juneja ka pyar dekha hai..uska revenge nahi...

BEEP!!BEEP!!!

He took his phone and saw Ash has sent Heer's number via SMS

Looking at Heer's number smiled

Prem (smilingly):-9999022211..Heer ka number..Interesting..ab ayega maza Miss Ashlesha Maan.


Precap:- Ash and Meher bring tea and snacks for juneja's. Seeing Ash coming Prem immediately held Heer's hand who was sitting beside him and stood up. Everyone especially Heer looked at him with surprise that he's holding her hand in front everyone...

Prem:- Balraj uncle agar apko koi aitraaz na hoga..kya main thorda time Heer ke sath spend kar sakta hun (looking at Ash with smirk) AKELE.!!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
The story is getting more and more interesting
loved the update
fabulous<3

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