Prem&Heer OS| Raat Ka Nasha Abhi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prem & Heer OS : Raat Ka Nasha Abhi

especially dedicated to AASUS (Athi) - Congrats on becoming IF-Sizzler jaanu 😳


Today could be thought like an ordinary day... a day like others... but this was not. Today was a very special day and Prem knew it. He knew that once his day at office over he will be back at home and will find HIS Heer. He was not concentrated at all at his work the only thing he wants is to be with his wife and spend some time with her.

He finished to check all his files, did all his meetings in hurry and once everything over, he took his car to come back at home.

Heer was at home. Today was an ordinary day for her. She checked the clock:

- Haii bagwaan 6.30 baaj gaye, Prem ane wala hai, bohot khaam abhi baaki hai, khana nahin banaya mein aab tak!!!

She ran to the kitchen and started to cook. She was really tensed today but she didn't know why.

Prem came.

-Heer, I'm back from office. tak gaya hoon Heer. lagta hai meri tabyeet theek nahin hai. kuch ajeeb sa feel kar raha hoon.

Heer, after hearing all this, came in hurry.

- Prem, kya hua, saab theek hai naa? aaj office mein kuch hua kya?

- Nahin, baas aisi, said Prem.

- Arey? aise kaise? kuch zaroor hua Prem.. please bataao naa.

- Heer tumhe pata hai aaj...

-Aaj kya?, said Heer scared.

-Aaj...

- Aaj?

-Aaj...

- Prem!!! Heer shouted. Tum bhi naa! Bataao naa abhi...warna mein jaa rahin hoon... you're always teasing me like this...

- Heer!!!

-Prem!!! Main jaa rahi hoon!!! you don't want to tell me...I'm going to the kitchen...jab maan karenge bataa dena.

- Arey? Heer itni udhaas kyun hogayi? Prem was a bit sad. Maine kuch nahin kiya. Lagta hai Heer bhool gayi ke aaj we met for the very first time...and from this time I fell in love with her hamesha ke liye... kyun bhool gayi?

After some time, Heer came with dinner. Prem was here and was waiting for her.

-Heer...

Heer didn't reply.

-Naraz ho tum hum se?

She was still ignoring him...

-Heer!!! Ab baas bohot ho chuka!!! Tumhe pata hai aaj...

Heer softly said with her sweet and adorable voice

- Aaj woh din, pehli baar jab tum aur mein mile the...

- Heer mujhe laga tha...

- Kya laga tha tumhe?

Both started fighting once again. But their cute fights were also a reflection of their strong and eternal love.

- Heer aab yeh sab choro...tum chalo mere saath.

- Lekin kahan Prem?

Prem gave those adorable looks and was totally mesmerized by his wife innocence.

-Prem khana thanda hoja hega...tum mujhe kahaan lekar jaa rahe ho?

-Aankhein baand karo aur tum chalo mere saath.

Heer was strongly holding Prem's hand. She was worried but not scared because she always knew that her Prem would be with her hamesha.

Both went to their bedroom. It was very well decorated. Roses and petals couldn't be counted. The soft and warm light was illuminating the room. Heer slowly opened her eyes and saw all this. She was stunned.

- Prem yeh sab?

- Tumhare liye... he gently kissed her on the forehead...Heer blushed.

- yeh sab kaise?

Prem kissed her on the left cheek...

-Prem...

He kissed her on the right cheek... and then he held her hands tightly but lovingly:

-Heer, I love you, you mean everything to me and from the first day we've met I can't imagine my life without you, tum meri saati ho hamesha ke liye...Heer...

Heer stopped the discussion by kissing him on the forehead...both hugged very tightly and were lost in each other arms...their heartbeats became once... Prem opened his eyes, Heer was still in the magical hug moment. He took her in his arms and laid her down on the bed. They come closer, closer and more closer...Prem cupped her face and kissed her on the lips.

THEIR LOVE IS ETERNAL...


I've tried for the very first time to write something and it didn't came as i was expecting guys 😭 wanted to make something more...well you know *evil look* 😈😆

Athi this is your gift hope you like it 😳 You said that I'm naughty naa? so i've tried writing an OS 😆

Everyone I'm really bad at writing first because of English and Hindi (still have to learn both languages) and i'm not a writer 😕 so my sentences don't have any impact you know... awww well I'll let you judge on that😃

feel free to give me advices 😃

note: I've got inspired from my other favourite show to describe some scenes.

hugs to all 🤗

Maria

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woah Maria omg 😲 wow I can't believe you wrote a PH OS
V cute couple.
😆 Prem actually thought His Heer forgot 😆 the frustration was nicely written.
Heer was a cool cat.
Wow Prem planned a surprise - wonder how he managed that :P he was in office and I assume Heer was at home. Hmm may be he had help 😳
V sweet Prem taking care of his soulmate celebrating their 1st meeting 😎

Thank you Maria🤗 banner is so beautiful and hot like PH.
On your v busy schedule you've taken out time to make us all smile.
Love you tons ❤️

You may be right about selection of words and its impact for certain emotions that you want to convey.
It really comes with practice. This OS may not be power pact with emotions like experienced writers however we can clearly see your love for PH.
Wish you all the best 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW .. u wrote an OS.. great

Loved it<3
Fantastic
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

Woah Maria omg 😲 wow I can't believe you wrote a PH OS

V cute couple.
😆 Prem actually thought His Heer forgot 😆 the frustration was nicely written.
Heer was a cool cat.
Wow Prem planned a surprise - wonder how he managed that :P he was in office and I assume Heer was at home. Hmm may be he had help 😳
V sweet Prem taking care of his soulmate celebrating their 1st meeting 😎

Thank you Maria🤗 banner is so beautiful and hot like PH.
On your v busy schedule you've taken out time to make us all smile.
Love you tons ❤️

You may be right about selection of words and its impact for certain emotions that you want to convey.
It really comes with practice. This OS may not be power pact with emotions like experienced writers however we can clearly see your love for PH.
Wish you all the best 👍🏼


athi what a lambe comment 😲
thank you so much 🤗 you're always making all of us smile with your encouraging comments 😳 and glad you liked my chota sa gift😳
mmm well i'm not satisfied with this i could have done better 😕 in a way i had to stop my badmash wala mind 😆
i might try to write more stuff if i'm not too much lazy 😆
awww and yeah you're right 😕 how Prem managed to prepare everything? 😲😕 IT WAS A BIG BLOPPER FROM MY SIDE 😆 I can't reply 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sadi-

WOW .. u wrote an OS.. great

Loved it<3
Fantastic


thank you so much Sadi 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow such a cute OS maria...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_28

wow such a cute OS maria...👏


thank you so much Kiran 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful OS maria ...loved it ...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveHarshAddit

beautiful OS maria ...loved it ...👍🏼


i've tried my level best 😃
thank you 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is really nice maria 😊 very cute and nicely written 👏
your sentences had impact on me and i believe everyone will understand what you are trying to express because we are all deshianz and we all are in love with premeer ⭐️
keep on writing more ❤️

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