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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the update ...
amazing update ...loved it ...
cant wait for the next part ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 16

Ishan- Kya,,,?? u sure...??? Ok thanks... please come to my marrige.. i will be glad... !! note down the address...!! BYe hope to see u seen...!!!

Areee...!!! koi lights milawo please...!!!! - bauji with crowd...

Lights come... Prem sees his beautiful Heer on mandap with ishan...

Pandit says. abb agli phera lijye...!!! They are are now forwarding to take next fera... Prem is dead from inside... the tears are flowing...!!! he is moving back ward and slowly vanishes from the crowd.. he is walking lifelessly on road... with out having care of vehicles...

Teee teettt... Pooo pooo... areee andha hai kya? marna hai kya????? but prem isnt hearing sound of vehicls or person who were shouting on him.. he was just walking only.. when one taxi stops his way wen it comes in front... Prem confusingly looks at it and the driver inside says.. kaha jana hai .. betho andar...???
Prem sits and says.. SHIV MANDIR LE CHALO...!!!!

The wind is blowing Prem's hair is flowing... his eyes is syuck out the widow of taxi...

Prem- Heer .. Heer... !!! jaldi khana do mujh ko.. office jana hai...aaj meeting hai,,,

heer- laeee...! tum nuche kyun nai aaye breakfast ke liye...??? loh khalo...

Prem- Tumhe dekhee nai de raha... m busy.. yeh presentation hai jo submit karna hai aaj.. feed me with ur hand..??

Heer sits near by and starts feeding and prem eats cutely nt taking his eyes off the Laptop..

heer- aare,,, itni jaldi kyun.. waha pae toh submission date 6 days baad ka hai.. toh aaj hii kyun sabmit karna hai tumko?

Prem- ( looks towards heer) because 3 days baad hamari sadhi hai.. agar tumko yaad hai toh...!!

Heer- ( shly smils) hmm.. yaad hai... !1 lekin.. u can comple it in rest two days..after marriage..

Prem- Pagal ho gayi ho... tumhe hai lagta hai.. sadhi ke immediately baad mein kaam karne lag jaunga... ??

heer- phir...

prem ( goes near which makes heer heart beats fast. )- Sadhi ke baad toh hamara ROMANCE suru hoga na...? (puts his hand around her waist and pulls her close, heer cheeks are red and eyes are looking down and breath is on hold) Usske baad toh Honeymoon ke liye jayenge na... ( starts nuzzling her cheek with his Nose... !!!

heer- (giggles...) umm... chodo please... jane do... ( shyly)

Prem- Naaa... ( heading towards her neck where as heer was feeling his breath on her neck which was tickling her )

heer- ( Takes Heavy breath...) Prem... Prem...

AAGAYYYAAA>>>>> SHAB...!! shiv mandir...!!!! - taxi driver...

Prem comes back from his wonderful memo with Heer and gives his watch and moves inside the shiv mandir...Prem standing before shiv linG..!!!

Prem- Yehi woh jaga hai.. jaha tumne uuse milaya tha... yehi pe p[eheli baar dekha tha...!!! uss ek pal mein meine uuski aakho me sayad aapna kal dekh liya tha...!!! usske sath juud gaya.. pyar ho gaya uuse...!!! aapni aane wali zindagi uuske sath dekha lekin kya pata tha mujhe... ki tumne zindagi hii mujhe itni choti dee hai... sapne dekha ke uusko tod diya... ( kneels down an d cries hard after a while wipes his tears ) Lekin aab baas ek hii chezz magta huu tumse...baas heer ko aache se.. khus rakhna uue sath... woh hamesa heer ke sath khus rahe...!!! oh dono aapna ek safal married life jee paye.. dukh ka saya vi meri heer ko duur rakh na. Please…

He is shattered and cries with all his hearts…the moment which he had shared with heer have been coming in front of his eyes… !! after a while he open ups his eyes.. gets up to leave..!!

He turns around and there he sees heer coming towards him in bridal dress with Mala still hanged on her neck…

Heer comes near.. they look at eack other with out blinking…

Prem- Tum yaha..!!

Heer- tum yaha kyun aaye ho?

Prem- who mein

Heer- who mein yaha aapni nayi zinagadi ke liye bhawan ka aasiwad magne aayi thiii…!!! Lekin pata nai tha tum vi yehi ho….

Prem- (tears flows..) mein vi yaha umare nayi zinadagi ke liye hii….!!! ( stops) umm. Congratulations Mrs Heer Khanna now.. ( tries to laugh showing he is fine)

Heer- thank you so much .. ( tears flows)

MUJHE CONGRATULATE NAI KAROGE- ISHAN…!!!

Prem looks behind and sees Ishan coming towards him…!!!

Prem- TUMM yaha…??

Ishan- aur naitoh kya.. apni Heer ke sath mein vi asirwad lene aaya hu… ??

Prem heart pains hearing it…- Hmm.. yaaa..

Heer and prem looks at each othr and ishan stands besides heer…tears flows from Prem eyes seeing newly wed couples…

Ishan- Tumare liye ek tofa hai..!! hamari taraf se…

Prem- mere liye….??Kya.. ? tofa tog mijhe dena chaye… ( tries to laugh)

Ishan- who vi lenge hum.. pehele tum yeh lelo

Ishan gives a box with beautifully wrapped by wrappin paper…

Prem takes it.. and looks at him confusingly

Ishan- dekh kya rahe ho kholo…

Prem is confused bt opes it and shock….

Rest on next...


thank u for loving the last update and hope same with this. 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

i wish i could get into your ff and open the wrapping huh! if there is no drama in mandap then why arrangement of wedding? total mystery yaar! you like to keep me waiting ok fine! ( i know whose effect is this on you 😳)
feeling bad for this poor prem 😭
like kis desh in your ff too the flashbacks are tooo good and cute 👍🏼

will wait for the update ❤️
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: premeermania


i wish i could get into your ff and open the wrapping huh! if there is no drama in mandap then why arrangement of wedding? total mystery yaar! you like to keep me waiting ok fine! ( i know whose effect is this on you 😳)
feeling bad for this poor prem 😭
like kis desh in your ff too the flashbacks are tooo good and cute 👍🏼

will wait for the update ❤️
😊



yeah Muna... SANGAT KA AASAR HAI...!!! 😉

and my FF is full focus on Prem Heer...!! aab mandap me sadhi hii hoti hai na... abb uuske bare mein kyun likhna.. when prem moved out from there... 😃
and i thought u guys are intereted in PREM HER .. abb i didnt know u had plan to dance on ISHAN HEER marrige,,!! pehele bata na tha na.. i would have given details of their marriege.
Edited by luv.Harshiti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awasoem awasoem

know what ishaan give to prem ??

waiting for next update

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Posted: 12 years ago
Plsss update next todayy onlyy
Dying to watch what gift prem get from ishan and heer
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates
Loved it <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
i really dint get whats happening😕😕😕
pls update asap...cant wait...this waiting making me😡 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
I knw heer is nt married to ishan.coz premeer r one.no one can change the fact.nt even u ms.sanju 😉
lovely update.waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 17

Prem Open Up the box and takes it in hand.. and

Prem- Yeh kya hai?
Ishan- Khol ke dekh lo...!!!

he open it up and then.. the world around him is revolving round.!!

Prem ( in angry) - yeh kya mazak hai????
Ishan- Mazak to tumne kiya tha.. meine hakikat dekha dee..??
Prem- dekho ishan...
Ishan- meine sab dekh liya...??? tum dekho aavi.. aur samjho... yehi sach hai mr. prem juneja jo iss waqt tumare hath me hai..??

Prem felt the ground below him have swept away. he was looking at it again and again with shocked expression...!!!

ishan goes near to prem and heer is just standing there by looking ishan and prem convo silently without any moment..!!!

Ishan ( holds Prem's shoulder who is still in shock) - Prem, this is truth.. yeh jo report tumare hath mein hai... yehi sach hai... tume kuch nai hua hai... trust me...!!!

Prem- lekin yeh rep[ort tumhe kaha se? i mean mainse toh koi test nai kar waeee ?

Ishan- yehi petumse galti ho gayi.. with out any test and treatment how u assumed u have hole in heart???? huh?

Pre- yeh sayad mere reports nau hai...!!

ishan- tumare hii hai.. jo meine 2 days pehele kiya tha...

prem- do din pehele...??? ( shocked)

ishan- YUPS...!!! yaad hai na tumhe sar pe chot lagi thii... and woh heer ne tumko mara tha.. so that tum behos ho jawo aur hum tumara sare test aram se kar paye...!

prem- heer ne...??? ( looks at heer who is just standing there looking downward lifelessly with out a blink of eyes)

ishan- haaa.. Heer ne... ussko yeh sab yekeen hii nai ho raha tha ki tumhe kuch ho sakta hai.. so meine baas uuske yakeen ko as written me prove kar diya?

Prem looks at ishan again and tears are flowing..-lekin tumhe yeh sab kaise ... pata ...??? uummm

Ishan- mein aur heer bach pan ke kuch yese wase dost nai hai... best buddy hai... when i saw heer as the ladki which i m going to marry.. uuse waqt mujhe daal me kuch kaala laga... coz she in that house... and i knew her marriage was fix with balraj uncles fren.. toh.. mujhe bada confusion hua? saying yeh sab chal kya raha hai? Then yaad hai.. i had asked u her num and heer and i had gone to have dinner... tavi wohi pe i asked her... and she said me everything... she was realyy broken down... !! so we planned to take the real truth out...

Prem is all shocked and abashed to hear all this?

prem- lekin sadhi toh ho...???? ( tears rolls down)

Ishan- abb.. haa... sadhi toh... Hooo... umm.. hui nai hai...!! hahahahahahah...

Prem shocked again..

Ishan- aaree, i could i marry her.. when she loves u , i m her fren dushman nai... hahaha.. woh tumse pyar karti hai... bohut pyar...

Prem- ( not knowing wht to do>) - ghar pe...

Ishan- ghar pe vi sab ko sach bata diya... jab phere ho rahe thyyy tavi yeh reports aaye.. i got call and i gave him adress and the reports came to home.. ghar pe sab bohut khus hai... uunko uunka prem jo mil gaya... phir dekha tum waha nai thy.. so tumhe dudte dudte yaha poch gaye...

Prem is now totally shattered to hear all this.. his knees are weaken and he knells down and starts crying...

Ishan- Prem.. sambhalo aapne aap ko.. abb toh tumhe aapna pariwar sambhalna hai.. sab ko khus rakhna hai.. khusi ke din aaye hai..

Prem hugs ishan and cries- thank u.. thank u.. thank u... pata nai kya kahi tum ko mein...

Ishan- kuch maat kaho.. jo kehena hai,, heer ko kaho...??? woh tumse..( they both look behind where heer was standing bt...)
heeerrr...!! Heer kaha Gayiii???

Prem looks tensed- heerr...!! Heer...!!!
Ishan- Heer...!!!

and there Prem sees Heer running and going...

Prem- Heer.. woh rahi.. kaha ja rahi hai...?? chalo ishan...

Ishan- nai... abb mein nai.. tum jawo aur leke chalo aapni heer ko

Prem ( wipes his tears, smiles and hugs Ishan tight )

Ishan- Best of luck.. kyuki woh tumse bohut naraz hai.. waat lagne wali hai tumari... hahaha.. bhagwan bachaye tumko abb uuske gusse se.!!
Prem- Thank you... ( prem runs behind heer)- Heer...!!!

Prem runs and stops bt couldn't see Heer there. - Heer..!!! heer i am sorry...!!! please.. kaha ho...?? Heerrr...!!!

Runs again.. and finds heer's GOTA of her anchal on the road...- yeh toh heer ka hai... Heer...!!!

he keeps running...!!! and sees next her hair bindi fallen on road which way had gone inside the jungle...!!!

Prem shouts...- heer...!!! Heer..!!! kaha ho? ( he runs again bt stops when he sees heer sitting near the small pond , by taking support of tree... )

He runs there and goes near and sits and says- Heer...!!!
Prem- ( with tears rolling down the cheek)- Heer.. m sorry,... woh mein...!! tumne..??

heer isnt looking at prem, neither talking to him...!!!

Prem- Please mujh se baat karo.. Heer please... ur silence is killing me.. Heer please look at me ( makes her turn him and heer falls down in the Ground..!!!

heer... Heer... Kya hua... Heer...!!??? koi Hai...?? Heer...!!! heer aakhe kholo please. Heer...???

and there Prem shock to see HER EYES HAVE BECOME BLUE AND SOME STUFFS COMING OUT OF HER MOUTH... !!!

Prem - Yeh Kya hai...???? Yeh toh...? tavi hota hai jab koi... ZEHER...???? NAI NAI...?? yeh nai ho sakta...? heer.. get up.. open ur eyes... Heer...??? ( puts some water in her face bt also heer is lying on his arm lifelessly...!! Heer... Heer...!!! HEEERrr...!!!!!!!!! ( cries)

To be continued...

Sorry sorry marna maat now... 😲 !!!!

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