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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rhea_401

Just one more day to go before we get our update😳😛😛


What Rhea...no feedback on the chapter, no hitting the like button..and no update from you...why should I update tomorrow? 😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
hii fatimaa...!
o..loved this one..

what fun..😆
so typically like a young married couple...😳

just loving it..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
rheaa dear please comment, hit the like button and update your ff too😆
so that fatima can update😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Am sooo sorry fatimaaa...i thot i had commented..but better late than never...
Well loved the update ...the way he took her shopping...dat was really cute...not even a real hubby wud do dat all day long...but Preet iss shoo shweet...d best part was wen he shot back her dialogues wen de reached d lingerie section...

Okay n now please do update tomorrow...please...pretty please...*holding ears*


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fansush

hii fatimaa...!

o..loved this one..

what fun..😆
so typically like a young married couple...😳

just loving it..👏


Thanks Rasika 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rhea_401

Am sooo sorry fatimaaa...i thot i had commented..but better late than never...

Well loved the update ...the way he took her shopping...dat was really cute...not even a real hubby wud do dat all day long...but Preet iss shoo shweet...d best part was wen he shot back her dialogues wen de reached d lingerie section...

Okay n now please do update tomorrow...please...pretty please...*holding ears*



Emotional attyachar works...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting now for an update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago


pg 114 wow
😆
Ok 1st time I'm gonna call Meher this - idiot or acting idiotic.
Who in the right mind uses TODAY's news paper to clean😲 kitchen counter and book shelves? I'd hv killed the person on the spot w/o asking explanation. Preet's reaction was way too mild. True u can chk news online / tv / mobile app. But if he's subscribing hard copy and have it delivered I assume he likes to read. This did not go with how he usually behaves.

Driving lesson started off +ve. Overall experience was realistic. Written v.nicely.
I did get a shock when Preet slammed into windshield of the car.

Wow so going to mall was umm eventful - Preet's sarcasm :P librarian shows more skin and Meher's reply "I don't want to dress like prostitute" was wow. Preet's jaw dropped - mine too.😆
Wow there's more 😲 Meher took 20 mins to buy tomatoes - if my mom asks I spend 30 seconds or less on tomato isle 😎 I love the veg. but I'm nt in love with it to stare for 20 mins like Meher has done lol. I guess it's cuz she is from Farm and may be knows a lot about different types and was trying to decide what will suit for certain type of dish.
Wow wow Preet and intercom at the cashiers - I wonder if he could hv stepped aside and let other ppl move ahead while he wait for Meher. We do that all the time while shopping hm. For this scene we'll pretend this thought did not come to Preet.
Gaurav Preet were rocking in their scene- awesome dialogues.
Comedy is so your thing Fatima. - at least in this ch. it rocks. Laughed a lot from 1st line.
My fav is the stingy neighbor of Preet's - that scene where Preet goes out and get locked out is fab.
Cliche - Preet falling over Meher huh lol


Ty
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS



pg 114 wow
😆
Ok 1st time I'm gonna call Meher this - idiot or acting idiotic.
Who in the right mind uses TODAY's news paper to clean😲 kitchen counter and book shelves?

Meher only used it to clean the windows, and line the kitchen cabinets. It's a great odor remover for the fridge drawers too...these are all valid uses for newspaper. 🤓

Book shelf she attacked with a cleaning rag. 😆

Actually I was trying to show her in a bit of a crazy overzealous mood...she has nothing to do...and so acting a bit quirky. Preet realized that, and that's why he didn't get too upset about his paper .

I'd hv killed the person on the spot w/o asking explanation. Preet's reaction was way too mild. True u can chk news online / tv / mobile app. But if he's subscribing hard copy and have it delivered I assume he likes to read. This did not go with how he usually behaves.

Okay he works in advertising and newspaper, trade magazines, consumer reports, etc...although some of this is available online, it is not unusual for him to have hard copies lying around the house.

Driving lesson started off +ve. Overall experience was realistic. Written v.nicely.
I did get a shock when Preet slammed into windshield of the car.

That's because he didn't have his belt on 😆...see I'm trying to teach a good lesson here...always buckle up.

Wow so going to mall was umm eventful - Preet's sarcasm :P librarian shows more skin and Meher's reply "I don't want to dress like prostitute" was wow. Preet's jaw dropped - mine too.😆

She likes to dress conservatively 😆

Wow there's more 😲 Meher took 20 mins to buy tomatoes - if my mom asks I spend 30 seconds or less on tomato isle 😎 I love the veg. but I'm nt in love with it to stare for 20 mins like Meher has done lol. I guess it's cuz she is from Farm and may be knows a lot about different types and was trying to decide what will suit for certain type of dish.

Yeah I don't spend too much time on tomatoes...cherry and grape for salads, beefsteak for sandwiches, and roma for sauce and general cooking...😎

Preet is telling the story so he did exaggerate a little in terms of time. You know 5 minutes may have seemed like 20 to him.

Meher...actually she was stalling for time...because she really needed something more personal and was hoping to keep Preet busy elsewhere.


Wow wow Preet and intercom at the cashiers - I wonder if he could hv stepped aside and let other ppl move ahead while he wait for Meher. We do that all the time while shopping hm. For this scene we'll pretend this thought did not come to Preet.

Yes he was so embarrassed about the contents of his cart that the thought did not come to his mind.

Gaurav Preet were rocking in their scene- awesome dialogues.
Comedy is so your thing Fatima. - at least in this ch. it rocks. Laughed a lot from 1st line.
My fav is the stingy neighbor of Preet's - that scene where Preet goes out and get locked out is fab.
Cliche - Preet falling over Meher huh lol

I just had to throw that in there...😆

Ty


Thanks for reading Athisda...and for the feedback 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
friday

waiting with excitement

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