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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman


Oh!...Bennu I see you've become an IF-Rockerz too...





yes

thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Are you back from your trip?
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Posted: 11 years ago
normally dekha jaye to log pehle confess karte hai uske baad kiss...but han to pehle kiss then confession that too becoz meher bugged poor preet to say it 🤣
but they both are too adorable
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_28

normally dekha jaye to log pehle confess karte hai uske baad kiss...but han to pehle kiss then confession that too becoz meher bugged poor preet to say it 🤣

but they both are too adorable


Thanks for reading Kiran. 🤗

Hope your dad feels better soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi fatima

Finally my exams got over and so does my birthday and after that the first thing that I am doing is to come here and comment
Ok so lets start chapter wise

Chap 22

I dont beleive meher tried to be a superwomen for saving romeo
I mean in a way it is cute but practically who does that from a 10th or 12th floor of a building

And then again we get Mr. Khan I think till the time preet and meher are in mumbai his duty is going to stick around them only

And now coming to preet oh god meher will definitely give preet a heart attack matlab har baar bechara tv on karega aur saamne meher ko dekhega
This have really become hilarious
Well preet shouting at meher and their hug was really sweet
Preet trying his stupid antics to stop meher was real fun

Chap 23

Well at the start only you proved the saying " think of the devil and the devil is here" correct what I mean to say is gaurav have just mentioned about someone coming in meher's life and here comes the entry of mr. Rajveer.
You know what I just love to see preet jealous and I am sure he must be thinking what kali jabaan does gaurav have but thank god unlike aadha ishq you did not made preet sulk around with jealousy for 2 to 3 chaps
Ohh and the kitchen fight from kis desh was perfect adaptation for this situation

Now coming to the kiss it was just so perfect and came just at the right time and the cofession was superb and unique

But one thing for which I will have to praise you is that you have written so many stories on MEET and each one of them have a different style of confession all are diff from one another like the 2 times confession in aadha ishq where 1 actually sounded like an insult and the other was out of fear and jealousy then in dus bahane where it was so sweet I mean it was a confession in which preet was scared and all your stories are so different like in this one you made meher to tell preet to admit that he loves her I mean he just kissed her and still kept quite I must say this was by far the best confession

Now I am done with commenting and from here my wait for the next part starts as I am really very excited to know how will preet and meher be as couple in this story and face the challenges together

Well I also want to say that I agree
with preet that in the start of this story who would have thought that they will fall in love I mean we all know that this is a meet story and eventually they have to be together and only because of that we were able to imagine them together back there otherwise there would have been no chance that anyone would think that they will be a couple just like kis desh


Edited by bhagyashree2011 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011

Hi fatima

Finally my exams got over and so does my birthday and after that the first thing that I am doing is to come here and comment
Ok so lets start chapter wise



Welcome back dear...and ...




When was it?...do tell...we'll remember to wish you in advance next time.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011


Chap 22

I dont beleive meher tried to be a superwomen for saving romeo
I mean in a way it is cute but practically who does that from a 10th or 12th floor of a building

And then again we get Mr. Khan I think till the time preet and meher are in mumbai his duty is going to stick around them only

And now coming to preet oh god meher will definitely give preet a heart attack matlab har baar bechara tv on karega aur saamne meher ko dekhega
This have really become hilarious
Well preet shouting at meher and their hug was really sweet
Preet trying his stupid antics to stop meher was real fun


This was really stupid of Meher to do. It's definitely not something I'd do. 😆

But I was trying to do 2 things, show her fierce loyalty to things she loves, and also to create a comical situation to give Preet a push in the right direction. Each push would bring him closer to a confession.

Inspector Khan is pretty useless isn't he? 😆 He always shows up when after the real hero arrives.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011


Chap 23

Well at the start only you proved the saying " think of the devil and the devil is here" correct what I mean to say is gaurav have just mentioned about someone coming in meher's life and here comes the entry of mr. Rajveer.

Poor Rajveer...he's always the 3rd wheel in my stories 🤣

You know what I just love to see preet jealous and I am sure he must be thinking what kali jabaan does gaurav have but thank god unlike aadha ishq you did not made preet sulk around with jealousy for 2 to 3 chaps

That would have been unfair to the readers...I mean I stretched this get to the confession thing so far some of you were ready to give up on me...😆

Ohh and the kitchen fight from kis desh was perfect adaptation for this situation

I thought so too.

Now coming to the kiss it was just so perfect and came just at the right time and the confession was superb and unique

I so wanted it to be fun and different from what I had written previously.

But one thing for which I will have to praise you is that you have written so many stories on MEET and each one of them have a different style of confession all are diff from one another like the 2 times confession in aadha ishq where 1 actually sounded like an insult and the other was out of fear and jealousy then in dus bahane where it was so sweet I mean it was a confession in which preet was scared and all your stories are so different like in this one you made meher to tell preet to admit that he loves her I mean he just kissed her and still kept quite I must say this was by far the best confession

Arey Wah! Best confession...then I deserve a pat on the back. 😆

I try my best to present Meet in a new light in each of my stories...otherwise it's not fune...neither for me or the readers. I'm so happy with this comment of yours...because it tells me that I'm doing my job right. 😃


Now I am done with commenting and from here my wait for the next part starts as I am really very excited to know how will preet and meher be as couple in this story and face the challenges together

This FF is still a work in progress...though I haven't finished writing all of it...I have written several chapters ahead so...I can tell you that a lot of interesting things are coming up.

Well I also want to say that I agree with preet that in the start of this story who would have thought that they will fall in love I mean we all know that this is a meet story and eventually they have to be together and only because of that we were able to imagine them together back there otherwise there would have been no chance that anyone would think that they will be a couple just like kis desh

Sometimes we find our true love in the least expected places...or when we weren't even looking for it in the first place. That was sort of what happened with Preet and Meher in this story.

And there are so many more aspects of Meet I still want to explore, so I will continue to write.


Thanks so much for the feedback Bhagyashree...🤗
It always motivates me to keep on writing 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
What?!?! I'm finally on the last page of this thread...
Yay!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just want to say a special thank you to all my loyal readers.
You've all been so very amazing. I never ever thought I could write an FF...let alone start a 2nd one, or so many other stories.
I really and truly love Meet, but it's really all of the positive feedback that you guys give me that keeps me motivated enough to continue to write.


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