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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok

My dear i cant press the linke button right New.. but this was just amazing...loved it how she knows hat he loves her..and the confession was perfect...

Ahhh the kiss was just a dream ..

You are amazing...

Waiting for friday


Oh!...Bennu I see you've become an IF-Rockerz too...


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Posted: 11 years ago
It's Meher's B-day, but I feel like I'm getting all the gifts.
Here's another Meet creation...this one is by Pratsy...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Yayayayay...they confessed...loved d confession..u rocked it gud..d best part was d kiss...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rhea_401

Yayayayay...they confessed...loved d confession..u rocked it gud..d best part was d kiss...


Glad you liked it Rhea.

Where have you been?

How about an update?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it! This has to be the most non-cheesiest proposal ever! It was just so Meet!
Waiting for both Meet moments in the next part!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Loved it! This has to be the most non-cheesiest proposal ever! It was just so Meet!
Waiting for both Meet moments in the next part!


Hi Nikita 😛

Thanks...for reading and leaving your feedback. 🤗
The big confession...and I've lost a big chunk of my readers to exams and stuff 😆

Non-cheesy? 😆

Well...leave it to Meher to beat a confession out of Preet.
Was trying to do something different from before. Glad you liked it.
Edited by ummesulaiman - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res 4 cmt

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Edit:

Ch 21. pg 137
😡 What ! Mr.Kashyap's no more.😭 ek's bhoot sure got inside u Fatima. Ugg
Arre this story could as well b about war - so many casualties already !

Gaurav is nice friend as always.
😲 We moved on to office party already.😆 Tears don't last long.😆
That's cool Sam is over and girls getting ready.
Red dress. How about u post pic of d dress in next ch?
Meher does all that Sam says 😲 Wow
Sam sure observed a lot of Preet's habits.😆 Nice if he changed for good.
Meher moving out but hesitate to update Preet about it. So Sam is a closer friend to her than Preet.
Haaiyeee Meher in red saree. I wish I saw her wear one. Y does she always wore Salwar in show :(
Hehe I knew she'd defend herself for wearing saree before Preet said anything.😆
Party dialogues with Rishab and Ash were interesting. I liked Meher in this.
Post party scenes interesting.
Glad Meher is getting herself settled. 👍🏼
Preet's all emotional - y'know it's kinda hard I understand how he must feel. ppl get used to living in same place and move out is not easy to adjust.
P-h-a-t dialogue I remember too fr k3g😆 I love that.
Precap is interesting.

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Ch 22 pg 141
Ok we get window ledge adventure again. :P I couldn't feel for the cat he was going to kill the bird.
Now Meher - I bet she wishes she is small and slender 😆 I'm afraid to imagine this - is she gonna fall.
Yaay cat is saved Meher is the heroine. Ooh now she is locked out darn. What a scene lol
Hahaha Meher made it to news again🤣 I dunno y but that cracked me up.
And Rishab delivering news is the best part ,oh man.
Preet has spare key😲 Wow
I thought inspector Khan will ask y she's living there or y they moved out. I guess not impt.
Wow shopping for paint was fun or not. So Preet didn't want her to live there and instead of saying it he does all these to distract her huh
Funnels and Madonna look ?
L word and lice - good one hehe
On LOL Sam and Gaurav left only to get disaster continue in apartment aw
I guess shower scene was accident really.
It was interesting Gaurav came back and found them. Phew I thought the disaster will continue. But it's nice Meher didn't lose her cool that much.
Chatting at the end was njce. So Meher is ok now.
Pics are going well with scene.
Preet is hesitating and feeling a lil sad he misses her.
Pre cap is interesting.


Ch 23 pg 144
Lol Preet is dramatic - talking about lil heart. That's cute too.
Wow Rajveer in the story interesting.
Hey this is interesting Fatima - liked walk down memory lane with respective fathers.
I didn't think u'd ever say anything +ve about Bauji 😆 But through Meher we get to hear what LJ is really like. Hm
Ok I know Meher said that to um well make Preet feel better. Some parents are really bad in real.
Ooh laddu scene cool I want one too. I'm bugging mom to make lol
Oooh aata fight too. Too good.
R u serious 😲 Preet really couldn't say I love u to Meher until she get it out of him. Oh man.
Ok it wasn't wild but different type of confession. It's nice to know both understand each other.
Pics are going with scenes.
Pre cap lers see what does post confession Meher Preet are like.

Done.
Thank you for all the updates. Keep writing.
Edited by AASUS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww. Fatima! 🤗
What an update!

I love the fact that Preet can't be away from Meher.
He needs her to be able to function on a daily basis, doing everyday things.
That is love! ❤️

Preet being jealous...so sweet.
The build up to the kiss, the actual kiss,
Once more, you surprised me with what happened after they kissed.
I love that about your story. We're always being surprised.

So Meet are officially a couple. 😊
I love them. Can't wait to see how their relationship unfolds.
Thanks Fatima. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS


Ch 21. pg 137
😡 What ! Mr.Kashyap's no more.😭 ek's bhoot sure got inside u Fatima. Ugg
Arre this story could as well b about war - so many casualties already !

I'm evil evil evil evil I tell you... 😈


No no...I hate the notion of war...but unfortunately the story warranted the deed. 😳


Gaurav is nice friend as always.
😲 We moved on to office party already.😆 Tears don't last long.😆

Well a few days have passed...and it was a friend of Teji's...not someone Meher was attached to.

That's cool Sam is over and girls getting ready.
Red dress. How about u post pic of d dress in next ch?
Meher does all that Sam says 😲 Wow
Sam sure observed a lot of Preet's habits.😆 Nice if he changed for good.

Sam, Gaurav and Preet were in coollege together...so she knows him quite well.

Meher moving out but hesitate to update Preet about it. So Sam is a closer friend to her than Preet.
Haaiyeee Meher in red saree. I wish I saw her wear one. Y does she always wore Salwar in show :(

I know I only saw her wear sari twice on the show.

Hehe I knew she'd defend herself for wearing saree before Preet said anything.😆
Party dialogues with Rishab and Ash were interesting. I liked Meher in this.
Post party scenes interesting.
Glad Meher is getting herself settled. 👍🏼
Preet's all emotional - y'know it's kinda hard I understand how he must feel. ppl get used to living in same place and move out is not easy to adjust.
P-h-a-t dialogue I remember too fr k3g😆 I love that.

I loved that dialogue too. 😆

Precap is interesting.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Ch 22 pg 141
Ok we get window ledge adventure again. :P I couldn't feel for the cat he was going to kill the bird.

Oh poor kitten...gets no sympathy from you...pakka vegetarian you are...😆

Now Meher - I bet she wishes she is small and slender 😆 I'm afraid to imagine this - is she gonna fall.
Yaay cat is saved Meher is the heroine. Ooh now she is locked out darn. What a scene lol
Hahaha Meher made it to news again🤣 I dunno y but that cracked me up.
And Rishab delivering news is the best part ,oh man.

Glad you found the scene funny...that was my intention.

Preet has spare key😲 Wow
I thought inspector Khan will ask y she's living there or y they moved out. I guess not impt.

Yes it is implied Meher gave him spare key for emergencies. Before this Inspector Khan saw them outside a building, at a police station, and at a local bazar only...he's never been to their home before so he didn't question the new place.

Wow shopping for paint was fun or not. So Preet didn't want her to live there and instead of saying it he does all these to distract her huh
Funnels and Madonna look ?

Have you ever seen some of Madonna's outfits...😆
L word and lice - good one hehe
On LOL Sam and Gaurav left only to get disaster continue in apartment aw
I guess shower scene was accident really.
It was interesting Gaurav came back and found them. Phew I thought the disaster will continue. But it's nice Meher didn't lose her cool that much.
Chatting at the end was njce. So Meher is ok now.
Pics are going well with scene.
Preet is hesitating and feeling a lil sad he misses her.

He loves her but is afraid to tell her. 😳

Pre cap is interesting.

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