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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks😃 for all the updates loved it
I understand you are busy same
pleasee update as soon as possible
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: harshitideewani

Thanks😃 for all the updates loved it

I understand you are busy same
pleasee update as soon as possible

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much for appreciating my work
thank you to those who comment, hit the Like button and all silent readers of this FF 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter-22




Next morning at Juneja Mansion

Lalit was giving an irritating look to preet, who was busy in writing some formulas os maths in his hand.

Lalit (irritated): Tu bus nalayak ka nalayak hi rahe ga. Sharam nahi ati tuje, apne baap ke samne cheating karne ke liye apne haath pe formulas likh raha hai. Besharam kahin ka!!!! Huh!!!! Arre Aryan bhi tujhse lag guna acha hai. Wo chota sa bacha teri tarha cheating to nahi karta apne exams mein.

Aryan, who was busy in colouring his drawing book sitting beside Lalit, looked at his nanu and gave him a proud smile to him after listening his 'tarif'

Aryan (cutely smilingly): Yes nanu!!! Or mae apni class mein hamesha first bhi ata hun.

Lalit (grabbing little Aryan in his hands): Han bacha, very good. Aise hi pardai karke hamesha first ana. Apne Preet mamu ki tarha bilkul mat banna.

Aryan (obediently): Ok nanu!!!

Saying this he again started doing his colouring.

Preet (thinks): Acha dad, abhi apki poll kholta hun mae mom ke samne.

Then Preet saw Gayatri coming from kitchen with his kuldi.

Preet (thinks): Wah Preet!!! Its right time now, "marde moke pe choka".

Preet (to Lalit): Dad!!! Ab cheating karke maine kya galat kiya. Ab itne barde barde formulas kon yaad kare. Or waise bhi mae cheating karke apne khandan ki parmpara hi to nibha raha hun.

Kulraj: Oye tu kehna kya chahata hai.

Preet: yahi kuldi ki, ab jab dad mom se cheating kar sakte hai to mae exams mein cheating kyun nahi kar sakta.

Hearing this Lalit got some clue that what Preet is trying to say and he got nervous.

Gayatri: Preet saf-saf bol.

Preet: Mom mae yeh kehna chahata hun ki kal jab ap Pummi Aunty se milne gaye the na tab dad kitchen mein'.

But Lalit interrupted him in middle

Lalit: Preet tu ja, tujhe college ke liye der nahi ho rahi hai ab. Ja!!!

Preet (smirking): Arre dad ruko na, mom ko batane to do.

Lalit (nervously): Kya batana hai, kuch nahi batana. Tu ja yahan se.

Gayatri: Ap kyun dant rahe hai use, Preet tu bol beta.

Lalit (nervously): Gayatri kya tum iski baat sun rahi ho.

Gayatri: Ap chup rahiye, Preet tu bol kya bol raha tha to.

Preet: Mom mae yeh bol raha tha ki kal jab ap Pummi Aunty se milne gaye the na tab maine dad ko kitchen mae rasmalai khate hue dekha tha.

Gayatri: Kya!!! (she looked at Lalit angrily): mae ne apko mana kiya than a, phir bhi ap'

Lalit: umm nahi Gayatri, wo rasmalai mae apne liye nahi balki Aryan le liye nikal raha tha. Uske khane ka mann kar raha tha. Usi ne mujhse kaha tha.

Aryan gave " maine kab kaha tha wala" look to his nanu

Preet (teasingly): Acha!!! (turned towards Aryan) really Aryan, apka rasmalai khane ka mann kar raha tha. Apne kaha tha nanu ko, hmmm.

Aryan (innocently): No Preet mamu, muje rasmalai bilkul pasand nahi hai. Nani mumma, maine nanu ko nahi bola ki muje rasmalai khani hai.

Gayatri (angrily): Apko sharam nahi ati, apna jhoot chupane ke liye ap bache ka sahara le rahe ho.

Lalit: Gayatri mae to wo'

But Preet interrupted lalit while giving him a teasing look.

Preet (to Aryan): Very Good Aryan. Hamesha aise hi sach bolna. Apne nanu ki tarha bilkul bhi jhoot mat bolna tum, ok.

Aryan (obediently): Ok mamu!!!

Gayatri: Apko pata haina ki meetha khana apki sehat ke liye bilkul bhi thik nahi hai. Doctor ne apko mana kiya hai na, phir bhi ap. Lekin ab bus, ab pehle jo apko chai mae sugar free milta tha na, ab wo bhi nahi milega. Or aj se roz subha sham apko karele ka juice milega. Samjhe ap!!!

Lalit (shocked): Lekin Gayatri'.

Preet: Apne bilkul sahi decision liya hai mom. Dad ki health ke liye yehi bohot acha hai.

Lalit (thinking angrily): Preet ke bache, tujhe to mae chordunga nahi.

Preet (thinking while looking at lalit): Don't u ever try to mess with me dad!!!

Gayatri called servants and order them to prepare karela juice for Lalit. Just then Kunal entered with another guy following him.

Kunal: Good morning everybody!!!!

Lalit (with dull face): kahe ki Good morning!!! Huh!!!

Kunal: kya hua Lalit uncle, apka chehra itni subha subha utra hua kyun hai???

Lalit: Arre Kunal beta kya bataoun tuje, yeh jo Preet hai na yeh'

Gayatri (stopped him in middle): A bap Kunal ke ate hi apni Ram katha shuru mat kijiye. Kunal, tu bilkul sahi time pe aya hai beta, nashta bus taiyar hi hai.

Preet: Kya baat hai Kunal bhai, aj itne dino baa dap yahan. Ap to is ghar ka rasta hi bhul gaye.

Kulraj: Han Kunal, Preet bilkul sahi keh raha hai. Tu to hume bhul hi gaya hai.

Kunal: Nahi kuldi aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai. Apko to pata hi hai ki maine dad ka business join kar liya hai, to bus ussi mein busy rehta hun ajkal.

Preet (teasingly): Dad ke business mein busy the ya phir kisi or business mein.

Kunal glared at Preet and then turned towards Lalit and Gayatri.

Kunal: Uncle-Aunty ise miliye, yeh Manmeet hai, mera dost. Yeh bhi mere or Prem ke sath college mae tha.

Gayatri (smilingly): Oh acha!!!

Manmeet took blessings from Lalit and Gayatri.

Lalit-Gayatri: Khush raho beta.

Kulraj: Arre tum log to aise kharde ho, jaise tum logo ko koi punishment mili ho. Betho na, tab tak mae table pe nashata lagati hun

Saying this Kulraj left from there. Both Kunal and Manmeet settled down along with Lalit, Gayatri and Preet.

Kunal: Aunty Prem kahan hai, dekhai nahi de raha hai.

Preet: Yeh lo PB ka nam liya or PB hazir.

Prem came downstairs in his business suit, all ready to go to office. He took the blessing from Lalit and gayatri and then hugged Kunal.

Prem: Hey kunal, kaisa hai bahi tu, aj itne dino baad darshan diye tune.

Kunal: Han bus yaar kaam mein busy tha.

Prem (thinks): Han beta mae achi tarha janta hun kit u kis kaam mein busy tha.

Prem smiled while thinking about Lover's Point encounter.

Kunal: Kya hua Prem tu smile kyun kar raha hai.

Prem: umm nahi kuch nahi, bus aise hi.

Then only Prem noticed that Manmeet is also there.

Prem: Arre Manmeet tu, what pleasant surprise. Kaisa hai tu.

Prem said while hugging manmeet.

Manmeet: Mae thik hun Prem, tu kaisa hai?

Prem: Mae bhi bilkul thik hun.

Kunal: Prem pata hai, maine or Manmeet ne socha hai ki hum log ghumne jayenge or apne purane college ke dinno ko yaad karenge. Tu bhi chalna humare sath.

Prem: Kunal yaar mae zaroor chalta lekin office mein bohot kaam hai.

Manmeet: c'mom Prem ek hi din ki to baat hai, chal na.

Prem: Yaar lekin mae'

Lalit: Prem agar Kunal or Manmeet itna keh rahe hai to chala ja na. tu office ki tension mat le, mae or Kiran haina, hum sab sumbhal lenge. Tu ja or enjoy kar.

Prem: Lekin bauji Heer bhi to'

Kunal: oho tu Heer ki tension mat le, hum use bhi apne saath le jayenge. Ab to chalega na.

Prem (smiled): Acha thik hai, chalet hai.

Kunal (excitedly): Yes!!! Ab ayega maza'.

[So guys I hope that you'll all like this part. Please do comment and Like. Thank you]

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
and now will the jealousy occurs...prem will be jealous watching heer n mamneet talking😆

but i hope manmeet is no danger to premeer love storyyy😛

update soonnn!!!

P.S: heeyyy kiraannn...sorryy yarr for not posting comments beforee...bt read awl the partsss...

but now will comment regulaly iA
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..loved the family and i think we are gonna see a very jealous and possessive prem now..looking forward to the next part...

Thanks for the pm and do continue soon
take care



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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think now here will b a track of possessiveness & jealousy😆 ...OOlala ... Let's c what our dear Mr. Prem Jueja does 4 his dear Heeriye😆 ... Light , camera & action😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update ...too good ...
thanks for the pm ...
please update soon ...

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