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kiran

@kiran_28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

Note:- Hey guys i'll be updating the next chapter on this sat or sun and dat too a short update not long sorry becoz nowadays i hardly get time to write. becoz of your guy's support and love i m continuing this ff. otherwise I've thought to discontinue this ff becoz of my studies.
But dnt wry i m going to continue this ff now only for u guys and my premeer 😃

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

glad that u didn't discontinues it.. and looking forward to the update

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lamha

@abhiyarockz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

hey kiran!😊

i was just read ur ff... its mind blowing...👏

love the way you wrote...👍🏼

all premeer scenes just awsome specially mall and office room scene...😳

plz when you update ur next chapter do pm me...😊

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kiran

@kiran_28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: abhiyarockz
hey kiran!😊
i was just read ur ff... its mind blowing...👏
love the way you wrote...👍🏼
all premeer scenes just awsome specially mall and office room scene...😳
plz when you update ur next chapter do pm me...😊

Thank you so much for taking time read my ff. i m glad that u liked it. next time I'll surely pm you 😃. Thank u once again...😳

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Seema sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Hi Kiran today is Sunday wills update today or not

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kiran

@kiran_28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Originally posted by: seema.sharma86
Hi Kiran today is Sunday wills update today or not

ya i'll be update today but it will be a short one 😃

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kiran

@kiran_28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

Ok guys as i have said earlier that the next update will be the short update becoz of my busy schedule, i hardly get time to write. so here is the short update...

Chapter-21

Kunal: Priya meri baat to suno yaar. Arre tum muje galat samaj rahi ho.

Kunal said while following an angry Priya. But suddenly he stopped in his track and looked back at the mango tree

Kunal (think): Kya maine abhi abhi Prem or Heer ko dekha!!! Lekin log yahan kyun honge 'Lover's Point' pe. Un dono ka yahan kya kam. Phir muje aisa kyun laga ki wo dono yahan the.
Uggghhh!!!!! chord Kunal, abhi to soniya pe dhyan de. Arre nahi nahi, kya naam tha iska han Priya!!!!!
Arre PRIYA!!!!! suno to sahi...Kunal shouted.

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On the same time behind the mango tree

Feww!!!! sighed Prem

Heer: Thank God Kunal ne hume nahi dekha.

Prem: Abhi to nahi dekha, lekin isse pehle ki wo hume dekhe yahan or use humare bare mein shak ho jaye, chalo yahan se.

They started running towards exit.
But suddenly Prem again grabbed Heer's arm and pulled her towards another tree.

Heer (screamed): Ah! Prem!!!

But Prem put his hand on her mouth.

Prem (whispered): Shhh!!!! Heer...Kunal sunlega.

Heer (whispered): Arre tumne achanak se muje khicha to mae darr gai.

Prem: Maine tumhe achanak se isiliye khicha kyunki wo dekho, Kunal or uski 106th girlfriend gate ke pass hi khade hain.

Heer: Yahan par koi dosra gate nahi hai kya Prem.

Prem: Jaan muje kaise pata hoga, mae to yahan pehli baar aya huna.

Heer: To ab kya karen?

Prem: Wait karte hain yahin par jab yeh dono yahan se chale nahi jate.

Almost after half and hour they saw that Kunal and her 106th girlfriend walking out hand in hand.

Heer: Prem Kunal to chala gaya,ab isse pehle koi or yahan pe tapak jaye. hum yahan se nikalte hai jaldi.

Prem: han thik hai chalo.

And they left from there.

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In Prem's car

Premeer silently driving back home but suddenly Heer started laughing.Prem got confused.

Prem (confused): Kya hua Heer, tum has kyun rahe ho?

Heer (laughing): hahhaha Prem aj hum pehle bar date pe gaye wo bhi Lover's Point or humare sath itni bardi tragedy hote hote reh gai and all credit goes to Kunal hahahaha

Prem (smiled): Han Heer tumne bilkul sahi kaha. yeh Kunal bhi na kabhi bhi kahin bhi tapak jata hai. Mae to use wahan dekh ke ek dum shocked ho gaya tha. Acha hua usne hume wahan nahi dekha warna pata nahi kya hota.

Heer: Han exactly!!!!!

soon they reach Maan Villa

Prem: Hmm chaliye mam apka ghar agaya.

Heer (smiled): Andar nahi aoge?

Prem: Nahi Heer aj nahi. ghar pe maa wait kar rahi hogi. Phir kabhi!!!

Heer: Ok ghar pohoch ke muje call karna.

Prem smilingly nodded and pulled her closer and place a caring kiss on her forehead.

Prem: Bye I love you!!!!

Heer smiled and kissed him on his cheeks

Heer: bye and I love you tooo.

Heer got down walked inside the house. Prem lokked at her for sometime and when he make sure that she is safely reached her home. He started his car and left from there.

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Ok guys this was the 21st chapter. Please do comment and Like Thank you 😃

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago