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Posted: 12 years ago




Chapter-20

Premeer in the car

Prem: Batao Heer, tumhara kahan jane ka mann hai'..beech, mall, restaurant etc etc'.

Heer: Lover's Point'..

Prem: Kya!!! Lover's Point'.tumhe wahi kyun jana hai???

Heer (excitedly): Actually wo kya haina Prem, maine na pehle se hi socha tha ki jab muje pyar hoga na, tab mae apne boyfriend ke sath Lover's point jaoungi. To ab jab pyar ho hi gaya hai to kyun na mera yeh sapna bhi pora ho jaye'..

Prem smiled.

Prem: Your wish is my command mam!!! Chalo Lover's point chalet hai.

After half an hour they both reach Lover's point. And they started walking hand in hand. Soon both get tired and then they decieded to sit under a small tree shed. Prem sat down under a small tree, pulling Heer down. He made her sit between his legs and Heer leaned on to his body. Prem hugged her putting his hands around her and pulled her closer. Prem nuzzling his nose to her earlobes.

Prem: Heer'.ek baat pochun.

Heer: ummm'

Heer asked him bringing her hand up to caress his cheeks. Prem caught her hand and started kissing her fingures.

Prem: Tum kush to ho na

Heer quickly turned towards him And cupped his face.

Heer: Tum aisa kyun poch rahe ho Prem???

Prem: Heer mae tumhari ankhon mae apne liye pyar dek sakta hun. Lekin phir bhi mae yeh janna chahata hun ki tum ne apni marzi se hi mere pyar ho apnaya haina. Isiliye to nahi na ki mera dil toot jayega tumhare inkar se'.

Heer smiled and caress his cheeks

Heer: Prem abhi tumne kaha ki tum meri ankhon mae apne liye pyar dekh sakte ho. To phir yeh sawal kyun???

Prem looked at her with full of love

Heer: I Love you Prem!!! I love you a lot. Or agar waqt ane par muje tumhare liye apni jaan bhi deni parde na to mae khushi khushi apni jaa''

Prem stopped her in middle by putting his finger on her lips.

Prem: Aisa mat kaho Heer. Tumhari zindagi bohot kimti hai. Ise please mere liye zaya mat karna, kyunki agar tumhe kuch ho gaya na to mae bhi jee nahi paounga.

Heer smiled in tears and hugged him tightly.

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On the same time, at the another corner of Lover's point

Priya (blushingly): tum sach keh rahe ho Kunal''.

Kunal: Ya sweetheart I love so much. Jab se maine tumhari ankheen dekhi hai tab se tumhari ankhon mae kho gaya hun mae.

Priya (blushingly): really Kunal

Kunal: Of course darling!!!!

Priya: Ek baar phir se kaho na that you love me.

Kunal (irritatedly thinks): Arre yaar yeh to full toss paka rahi hai'..

Priya: Kunaaalll bolo na!!!!

Kunal: Han jaan I love so much!!!!!

Priya got happy and tightly hugged Kunal

Priya: I love you too Kunal''.Oh Kunal!!!

Kunal (enjoying the moment): Oh Priya!!!

Priya: Oh Kunal!!!

Kunal: Oh Priya!!!

Priya: Oh Kunal!!!

Kunal: Oh Soniya!!!

Priya got shocked and furiously broke their hug.

Priya (angrily): Soniya!!! Yeh Soniya kon hai??? Mera naam Priya hai.

Kunal: ummm'wo' Priya..wo Soniya koi bhi nahi hai. Tu chordo nay eh sab aao pyar karen.

Priya (angrily): Bhard mae jaye tumhara pyar. Jaake us Soniya se pyar karo. Mae ja rahi hun. Huh!!!

Priya angrily walked away from there.

Kunal: Arre meri baat to suno Soniya, umm nahi Tina'Nahi Nita' are yar kya naam hai iska' haan Priya rook to sahi'

Kunal start following her.

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Prem: Acha Heer ek baat batao tumhe shadi ke baad kitne bache chahiye.

Heer blushed

Heer: prem tum bhi na. abhi shadi hui nahi hai or tum bachon ke bare mae abhi se sochne lag gaye'

Prem: Arre shadi ka kya wo to ho hi jayegi. Lekin abhi hum planning to kar hi sakte hai na. To batao ab.

Heer: ummm'muje sirf ek hi bacha chahiye or wo bhi bilkul tumhare jaise' mera junior Prem!!!

Heer said pulling Prem's cheeks cutely. And her The Prem Juneja gave her the most hilarious look.

Prem: KYA!!!! Sirf ek hi bacha!!!

Heer: Prem tum to aise heran ho rahe ho jaise tumne poori cricket team paida karne ki soch rakhi hai huh!

Prem: Han or nahi to kya!!!

Heer got shocked

Heer: Prem tum pagal ho kya? 11 bache??? Dimag to sahi hai tumhara???

Prem (innocently): Heer lekin 11 bache paida karne mae problem hi kya hai???

Heer's eyes got widened

Heer (angrily): Prem tum chup raho. Samjhe na tum' tum na bilkul antic piece ho huh!!

Prem: ok ok. Meri Jhansi ki rani ko gussa agaya. I give up. Thik hai madam ji jaisa ap chahengi waisa hi hoga. Thik hai Jaan.

Hearing this Heer cool down abit, smiled and again hugged him

Heer (smilingly): That like my sweet Prem

Prem smiled

Prem: Lekin Heer humare bete ka naam mae rakhon ga ok?

Heer: ok. Kya naam rakhoge tum

Prem: mae humare bete ka naam'.KUNAL!!!

Heer again turned to face him

Heer: Kunal'Prem mama ki kunal tumhara best friend hai lekin iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum humare bete ka naam Kunal rakhoge.

Prem: Arre nahi Heer. Mera matlab hai ki wo Kunal yahan par hai.. wo dekho.

Heer turned to look at the direction where Prem pointed. They saw that Kunal is running behind a girl and it seems that he is trying to pacify her. Both Premeer got worried.

Heer: Yeh Kunal yahan par kya kar raha hai?

Prem: Zaror apni 106th girlfriend ke saath aya hoga.

Heer: to ab kya Karen.

Prem: Karenge kya, bhago!!! Kyunki agar Kunal ne hume yahan Lover's point mae dekh liya to use shak ho jayega. Or agar ek baar use shak ho gaya to phir to wo humare baarein mae pata laga ke hi dum lega. Chalo Heer hume jaldi hi kahin chupna hoga.

Heer: han chalo!!!

They both got up from there and started running to hide themselves from the big problem named KUNAL!!!!

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Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
meee first
wow..awesome update kiran..👏
love it..❤️
premeer romance is..and loved premeer's future planning too..😆
hope they will suceed to hide from kunal😈
waiting for next update😳
thanks for pm😳
Edited by priyahmt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved heer's childlike exicement as she asked him to go to the lovers point❤️ haha kunal is such a flirt.. but love himm..

and prem and heer .. they are planning their future and their kids .. so cutee and lets see whether they will be able to save themself from being seen by kunal

loved the update.. awesome fabulous fantastic...



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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved the flow of the story hon👍🏼...i liked the first part..so so much!!🤗 🤗woh pyaar hi kya jisme kashish na ho😳...i loved how prem was trying to confirm his love😊..awww it was so emotional ...i clearly saw HC-AG talking!!! i miss them so much!! .😭...

and yeah i wanna se "hum dho...hamaare 11"🤣

awesome update hon...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update ...loved premeer scenes...
thanks for the pm ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear.
So cute
kunal was as usual so funny
premeer scenes was good and especially cricket team wala
and prem saying kunal for the name of child was hilarious
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesomeee too good very nice part waitinggg for next asap

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey kiran... i hust start reading ur ff... its fab... only read 3 chapis... but will read all and share my views... o.k...Good work...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: annokhi

hey kiran... i hust start reading ur ff... its fab... only read 3 chapis... but will read all and share my views... o.k...Good work...👏

thank you so much for taking time to read my ff. now eagerly waiting for your views 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priyahmt

meee first

wow..awesome update kiran..👏
love it..❤️
premeer romance is..and loved premeer's future planning too..😆
hope they will suceed to hide from kunal😈
waiting for next update😳
thanks for pm😳

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