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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dildaara….

Today was there 4th wedding anniversary and her husband didn't even remember this day. Surely he loved her more than anyone else had done to her even her parents her in-laws because at last he was her husband. But today she is definitely mad at him, its almost 8pm in the evening and still her husband has not yet arrived. She had planned a cute romantic dinner for him but he, work is more important. Who the hell works on their Wedding Anniversary? But not in his case he is the great Mr.Prem Juneja, India's best Business Tycoon. But today she won't forgive him after all she is also his wife Mrs. Prem Juneja.

Clock is moving forward slow but for her its seems to going fast. For the romantic dinner she had sent her son to her sister Meher's house to play with her daughter. On remembering about son, yes She and her husband had a cute little son who was 3yrs old, and they named his as Aryan. Meher was her Sister who had married her boyfriend Preet. They both had a daughter was 2 yrs old. She came out of her thought when suddenly the lights went off. She was always scared of dark from her childhood, but to her relief the room was dimly lit and then what she saw she couldn't control her smile and tears of joy, her husband Prem was standing there with a huge Bouquet in his hand a million dollar smile on his face looking extremely handsome in his Black and Maroon suit. Slowly he came forward and bent on his knees in front of her, yes his Heer, his life, his everything, who gave him the best gift he could have ever asked, his blood, their symbol of love, their Aryan. He bought the bouquet forward and said " Heer, I cherish this day, the day when we got married, the day when u became mine, the day I made love to you the first time. The day u made me a complete man, granting his all wishes and making his dreams come true! I would or could never forget this day Heer, I m sorry that I didn't wish in the morning because I knew you would have planned something for me and even I need to plan something special for my Heer, I Love you very much Heer, and today on our 4th anniversary I want to say that thank you for coming in my life and making everything prefect. I Love you." Saying this he bought the ring forward which he had bought for his Heer and slipped it into her fingers and kissed it, not breaking the eye contact. The second he completed his slipping the ring and kissing her knuckles, Heer couldn't control herself and hugged him as tightly as she could. "I Love you too Prem. Thank you for coming in my life, giving me the title of a wife, daughter-in-law and mostly Mother, for giving me the best gift our son, Aryan." Saying this both had a passionate Kiss. "Prem I want to gift you something special" she took his right hand and kept it on her stomach and said " Happy Anniversary Papa" On hearing this Prem couldn't control his joy and hugged her " you mean I m going to be father again, oh my god Heer this the best gift after Aryan you have ever given me. I Love you so much" " I love you too Prem"

This is my One Shot which is completed!

So guys do give your views! Bad or good and do HIT the LIKE button!

Luv... dIvYa..!!
Making a new Pm list, those who wanna be added PLZ buddy me on this profile o.OSYK_divzO.o This is my other profile from which i would send pm!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey divz... see its me...

yeah anyways...a oneshot??? seriously..m i dreaming???
hm...it was a full on cool..supercool..powerful one shot
and finally ph...awww...u made me reach in a dreamy land
it was super cute..

loved it
so premeer had a son...that's cool...
and one more baby???? wow yaar..superfast...

hmm..wedding ann... i thght prem actually forgot..but after all he prem...i mean the prem juneja...so no mistakes...

i loved it from the core of my heart..

thank u so much..for the update

love
vrushika..

and yeah do add me to the pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice yaar
loves it
well done
add me in ur pm list
actually i am the new reader
Edited by cute00ish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww such a cute OS!
gud job
MeraCheekuVirat thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Send Friend request to the above username u wil b added directly to the pm list!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I myself couldn't believe n i m literally shocked 😲!! U wrote an OS n thaf also without any force 😆!!!

Divyaaa thankooo very much for such a cute OS 😃!! I had a smile on my face while readin the OS
😊!! Premeer are awesumeee n loved both the gifts from each other 😉!!

Do write more plzzz!!! It was a splended n amazibg OS!!!

Loved it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cute os divya...
loved the concept...
do pm me next time when u write...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice os
its beautifully written
would love to read more of your works
loved how you described the emotions of them and how they are feeling you really described the essence of their character well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Aww . . . . .this is a really cute OS. I really liked it . . . . .😊
Loved the way Prem came to Heer and gave her the ring . . . . . . And the name of their son is really cute. 😳

Well, loved the OS. 😊

Thank you.

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