aik dil keh do tukhre premeer ff (Discontinued ) - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
ok dear will update it soon 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
wa8ng fr the update
update soon
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just very much eager 2 read
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Posted: 14 years ago
nyc!
wa8in! thx for d pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Heer: really sorry to hear about you mother! Hope you and your dad are doing well! We totally understand your condition right now so any delay in updating is understandable!

Hope everything goes well for you! take care
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Harshiti...

@Heer: really sorry to hear about you mother! Hope you and your dad are doing well! We totally understand your condition right now so any delay in updating is understandable!


Hope everything goes well for you! take care



aww *hugs * i know,i will try to update tomorrow 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
just came to know...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 16

it was preet and meher wedding anniversary and they decided that they would celebrate their anniversary in a grand manner.it was decided that preet meher wedding anniversary party will be held at their own hotel .gay3 says prem tu jaake heer ko inform karde aaj ki party ka,warna woh koi office keh kaam se na chali jaaye.jee maa says prem.preet decided to tease prem so says haan jaaye naa prem bhahiya bhabhi aapke phone ka kabse intezar karrahi hongi,intezar kya woh to app se baat karne keliye kabse tadap rahi hoongi.prem blushed at preet comment and says preet keh bache mein tujhe chordon ga na,tu bas aik baar mere haath lag jaa phir to teri khair nahi.saying this prem ran behind preet and finaaly after running behind preet prem caught him and after lot of persuasion from prem preet asked for forgiveness and prem forgave him.both brothers hugged each other.prem decided that he would inform heer about today's party now itself other wise heer would get busy so he goes inside his room and locked it from inside so noone could disturb him.prem called heer and says hi kya mein apni jaan se baat karsaktha hoon .heer says tumhari jaan bolrahi hai,kya kaam hai tumhe mujhse .prem says woh heer aaj preet aur meher ki wedding anniversary hai tu isliye aaj sham aik party hai hamare hotels mein ,to tumein invite karne keliye phone kiya hai.heer says ofcourse mein aaongi.prem says heer hamare bache kaise hain,i mean tum ne un se baat to ki hogi.haan prem woh dono bilkul teekh hain abhi todhi der phele hi phone par baat ki thi unse.acha prem main tumse shaam mein milti hoon party mein,actually abhi meri meeting hai to mujhe jaana hai ok bye says heer.haan ab tumhare liye meeting tumhare bichare pati se bhi ziyada important hai says prem making cute faces .heer on the other side giggled.prem says heer tumhe buhat hassi aarahi hai naa,hasso jitna hasna hai utna hasso lekin yaad rakhna aaj raat ko tumhe chordon ga nahi,says prem and gives heer a flying kiss through the phone.heer blushed and both says bye to each other.and cuts the call.
In evening at juneja's hotel,meher and preet were standing in a corner and were doing romance.preet wished meher happy wedding anniversary and kissed her on her forehead.meher wished him also and hugged him.heer enters in the hotel and sees preet and meher doing romance and moves towards them and coughed Ahem,Ahem.both preet meher broke their hug and blushed.heer wished both of them happy anniversary and preet says wah bhabhi aaj aap kya lag rahi hain,bhaiya to phele se aapke diwane the magar aaj to woh aapki khubsurti koh dekh kar pagal hohjayeenge kyun bahbhi teekh keh raha hoon na mein says a smiling preet.meher hit preet with her elbow and heer blushed.she goes toward kulraj and hugged her.kulraj says kitni pyaaari lag rahi hai tu heer,kaheen tujhe kisi ki nazar na lag jaaye.kulraj took some kajal from her eyes and put it behind heer's ear.heer went towards lalit and gay3 and took blessing from them and started to talk with harman and preet.prem who was working till now and came and says maa woh sab kuch hogaya hai agar kuch reh gaya hai to boliye... but before he could say anything he saw heer and was lost in her beauty.his mouth was opened and he was staring at heer,who was wearing a back less saree with sleeve less blouse and was luking like a princess.
heer moved toward prem and cornered him towards the wall and started to trace her finger on prem's face.slowly she came towards prem' s lips and kissed them.prem was shocked for a min


Precap:premeer telling juneja family about their children

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Posted: 14 years ago
it was really so sweet
loved premeer talks they were very cute
awsum update
supercool
update next part as soon as possible plz...asap
realky nice thnks fr pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsum! luved it!!!
premeer romance! was awsum! specially endin part!!
wa8in for nxt part for premeer scene!!!!!
update soon!
n thx for d pm dear!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 17

heer cornered prem to a wall and traced her fingers on his face.prem was shocked to see a different side of heer.she came closer to prem and kissed him on his lips.prem was shocked but was enjoying this different side of heer.he also kissed her back and heer who was in romantic mood kissed prem oh hi cheeks one by one and on his eyes.after kissing him she starts to move back but prem being prem gets hold of heer waist and pulled her closer and started to nuzzle on her nose.heer says prem tum kya karrahe ho koi aajayega.prem says apni biwi ko pyaar karraha hoon kyun kisi ko problem hai aur waise bhi galti meri nahi tumhari hai .heer says meri galti magar kaise prem .prem says kisi koi haq nahi hai keh woh itna khubsurat dekhe.kisi ki bhi niyat (intentions) kharab hosakthi hai.heer says premm tum bhi naa,din ba din badmash hote jaarahe ho ,chaht bilkul tumpe gayi hai.magar aditya mujhpe gaya hai.prem says ofcourse chahat mujhpe hi to jaayegi ,meri princess jo hai woh and dekhna jab woh mujhse mile gi naa to mein aur woh dono milkar tumhe tang karenge.prem brings heer so close to him that their noses r almost touching.he was about to kiss her when suddenly preet coughed ahem ahem.prem and heer were irritated and saw preet standing there watching them naughtily.preet says pb and bhabhi agar apka romance katam ho chuka ho tu kya aap chal sakthe hain,sab aapka intezaar karrahe hain,cake cut karne ka time hogaya hai.prem and heer were embarrassed and moved towards the hall quietly.
cake was cutted and preet and meher fed everyone.prem and heer decided to tell everybody about their kids.prem says maa bauji mujhe aur heer ko aap logon se kuch kehna hai,actually kuch batana hai.lalit says haan prem puttar bol naa.prem says woh bauji mere aur heer keh do bache hain aur woh is waqt london mein hain.lalit and gay3 r happy to listen about their grand children and everyone else was also haapy.both brothers hugged prem and congratulated him and kulraj,meher,veera and gay3 hugged heer.gay3 says to lalit mein dadi ban gai aur aap dada.lalit says han gay3 mujhe bhi isi din ka intezaar tha keh kab heer aur prem keh bache is duniya mein aayen aur kab mein unse khelon.preet says ab tu arjun aur gungun ko bhi company mil jayeegi magar bhabhi yeh to bataye keh aapke bachon ka gender kya hai i mean lardke hain ya lardhkiyaan.heer says mera aik beta aur aik beti hai.heer phone rang and it was sneha from london,she attended her calls and says haan,kaisi hai tu aur bache teekh haina ,says heer but heer didnt noticed that sneha was crying.sneha says heer woh chahat ko...but before sneha could complete her line heer shouts and says sneha kya hua meri chaht ko,woh teekh to ahi naa but line was disconnected.prema nd other were very worried to see heer in that state.she collapsed on floor and started to cry and says to prem,prem london se sneha ka phone tha ,kahin meri chaht ko kuch to nahi hua hoga naa.prem says hamari chaht ko kuch nahi hoga says prem.heer hugged prem

Precap :Dr Robert says Mr Juneja aapki beti chahat ko brain tumour hai.prem is shocked to know this and tears started to flow from his eyes.however heer is not able to bear this shock and faints.heer yelled prem
Edited by heer_varsha - 14 years ago

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