SS - Man Disposes God Proposes ~ COMPLETED!! - Page 13

Created

Last reply

Replies

159

Views

24.9k

Users

57

Likes

543

Frequent Posters

NIMMY thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
loved it
the truth is revealed...........
prem did that with heer because he wanted to touch a girl
heer did it because she had to save her mausi.......
but he does not loves her
but kept sindoor in her maang so tht no one calls her with bad name
now heer is angry on him
because he wants her to marry someone she loves........
heer is leaving
waiting 4 more
0577jj thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Marvellous update…..👏👏👏

Prem declaring Chahat as his own daughter….Heer also agreeing the truth to elders….

Prem enjoying life even he has strict & traditional nature of parents….

Heer's helplessness made her to loose her virginity to a playful mind…

but he posses sme kindful gesture & it reflected in the mng hug & thanks….good.

after death of mausi Heer reached Ambala with help of Janu…God's plan.

Ash & DJ got the perfect answers from Gayatri & Prem….

Gayatri very lovely mother who understood his son's fault & Heer's troubles very well…

Good that Gayatri got the note from Heer & she secretly arranged DNA test…

Loved the words of prem to Ash which reflects his pure love to Heer…

Prem done the unexpected thing to Heer by placing vermillion on her maang…

Ash & parents lefet Prem & Heer adamant on her decision of not accepting Prem's love…

Teji's words to Heer & she obeying Teji…Prem assuring he will not disturb Heer…

Papa –daughty loved their interaction & Chaht qtn on dadi - loved it….

Prem stating his demands for Heer's good future& placing sindhoor box near Heer…

Heer with lot of qtns & decided to leave….hope Heer will not Prem…..😕

Continue the lovely work soon…⭐️⭐️⭐️Waiting…❤️ 😊
suryavni thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
hi selvi.....
1.....
2.......
3.......
4......Iam doing uthak baithak...so sorry for not commenting this long......but what to do yaar ....i was so busy that i couldn't find time to go through ur new ones......
and CONGRATS.....!!! for a fruitful year.......
you have made every moment of it worthwhile......
for this ff....i was shocked when Prem blamed heer and made her send out of his home.....but now he know the truth and i hope he would make it up with heer....
good work..!! keep it up!!
Daffodilee thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
hey selvy wondersul update yaar
i jsut loved it
the mystery solved.
i loved heer in this part
her angry is good worthy
poor prem he has to get his punishment
i dont want heer to give up so easily
thanks for pm
plzzz update soon
newt2007 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya

wa8in selvy...!!! plz update...!!

writing wirting and wtiting. oh i'm sorry typing.
MeraCheekuVirat thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: newt2007

writing wirting and wtiting. oh i'm sorry typing.

its k..😉.!! wil b wa8in....!!!😊😃
newt2007 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Shot 6

Prem is pacing up and down in his room. Gay3 and Laiit walked in. Lalit 'Prem, we are leaving to Canada now.' Prem is shocked 'why? Are you angry on me for taking the decision to accept Heer as my wife?' Gay3 'no Prem.' Prem is confused. Gay3 'Heer is little angry on you. If we stay here she will comfortably avoid you. if you are left alone with her and Chahat then she has to face you. that may bring change in her life.' Prem smiled thinking her plan. She is always great that is why today he got his family. Prem 'ma I want to clear one thing. I don't know how long Heer will take to change her mind. But I'm ready to wait for her until my death.'

Gay3 and Lalit agreed understanding their son's heart. They felt angry on him little bit when they heard the story for breaking all the tradition and cheating them. Now they are happy for his effort to pay for his mistake. Lalit and Gay3 left to Canada with a hope to see them together soon.

Heer went to Teji room to take blessing from her before leaving the house. She saw Teji sitting on the bed reading a book. She closed the book and smiled 'come in Heer.' Heer slowly stepped towards her and stood silently before her. Teji 'sit down Heer.' Heer sat in the edge of the bed, slowly 'Chachi, I lied to you.' she doesn't have strength to look at Teji face. 'I'm sorry. Now I have decided to leave this house.'

Teji is shocked. She is quiet for few seconds. Heer still looking down 'Chachi,' she touched Teji's feet for blessings. Teji with tears 'I kept you in my heart as my daughter. Daughters always leaves their mother house oneday.' He wiped her tears 'my blessings are always with you Heer. bring Chahat here. I want to see her face.'

Heer went to her room and returned with sleeping Chahat. Teji took Chahat in his hand and kissed her forehead with tears. Stroking her hair 'I loved you because I thought you will be with me always. But now your mother wants to leave this house. for the past 4 years you both filled my life with happiness. My own brother never cared about me. You both filled that empty space. Again I'll be alone in this empty mansion.' Heer took Chahat from Teji's hand 'you have your brother now.' Teji smiled scarcastically and sat in the bed 'he left to Canada with his wife. Prem is here not for me. he wants to be with his daughter. Just for you both he is here. he will also leave if you both leave this house.' she lyed down on the bed 'when I was young I didn't feel lonely as I was busy in field works. After you came I was happy. Now I don't have strength to sit alone in this house.' she took a deep breath 'I never got the happiness for long. First Balraj left me. then my parents left me alone. then my brother went to Canada. Then you came.' She paused 'now you too.' She closed her eyes. 'go beta.'

Heer felt like killing herself for taking such a bad decision. She placed Chahat beside Teji and cried 'Sorry Chachi, I made a mistake.' Teji opened her eyes and saw Heer with tears kneeling on the floor in front of her. Teji got up and kept her hand on Heer head. Heer 'Chachi, I won't leave you alone. I'll stay here for you.' Teji smiled unbelievably. Heer 'promise Chachi. I won't leave you alone.' Teji kissed her forehead and pulled her into hug. Teji is happy that her emotional blackmail worked well.

Morning, Prem came downstairs and saw Chahat eating her breakfast. She greeted him 'Good morning papa.' Prem kissed her forehead 'good morning beta.' He settled next to her. he looked around and whispered 'where is mamma?' both where whispering to each other. Chahat pointing kitchen 'inside.' She rolled her eyes 'very angry.' Prem 'why?' Chahat 'I told her papa is also coming to school for children day.' Prem 'don't worry papa will manage.' Chahat shook her head.

Prem 'Heer, my breakfast.' After few seconds Heer emerged from the kitchen and placed a bowl on the table with a loud noise. Prem and Chahat leaned back in fear. Prem 'morning anger shoots up blood Pressure.' He started eating his breakfast. Heer gave an angry look to Prem and went in. Prem shouted for 'Ramu'.twice. Chahat 'papa, Ramu kaka went village with Chamba kaki.' Prem 'who gave leave to him?' Chahat 'Dadi ma.' Prem 'why?' Chahat 'they will return as 3.' Prem confused. Chahat 'papa how is it possible papa? only 2 going but how they will return as 3.' Prem 'who told you this?' Chahat 'Dadi ma.' Prem understood as Chamba is pregnanat, they will return after her delivery with baby. 'they will come with their baby.' Chahat 'where is it now?' Prem rolled his eyes .

Luckily Heer came there to save Prem from his daughter. Heer 'Chahat did you finished your breakfast?' Chahat shook her head 'no mamma.' Heer scolded her 'then why are you talking? Finish it fast. You are getting late for the school.' Prem and Chahat ate silently. Heer went to her room and changed. She returned after few minutes. By that time Prem and Chahat are ready to go to school.

Prem opened the front passenger seat for Heer as Chahat got into back seat. Heer ignoring him sat in the back. Prem smiled. He called the driver. A driver came there. Prem 'drive us to Chahat's school.' Driver got into the car. Prem got into back seat. Chahat giggled looking at her father's clever behavior. Prem silently looked at Heer with a teasing smile. Heer turned her face away and looked outside. Prem is busy attending the call. He is postponing all the appointments. He switched off the mobile.

In school, Chahat happily got out of the car. She held Prem and Heer hands. She was jumping and smiling until they reached her class. Teacher who is busy instructing student for some work looked at Chahat coming with Prem. she know he is Lalit's son but she is confused about his realtion with Chahat. Chahat 'good morning ms. He is my papa Prem Juneja.' Teacher thought as Teji is a kind heart lady may be she must have asked her brother son to marry Heer. She greeted Prem and Heer with a smile. Prem asked about Chahat's performance and she gave a very good report about her.

Chahat went to class to get ready for the programme. Prem and Heer walked towards the auditorium. Heer is smiling and exchanging greetings to many who passed them. Prem hands inside his pocket walking beside her silently. They sat in a place from where they can see the stage clearly without any disturbance.

Headmaster of the school came to Prem. 'Mr. Prem, please come to the front.' Prem 'no sir. Its okay. I'll stay here.' HM 'sir, the chief guest couldn't come due to his illness. Please you be the chief guest.' Prem 'I came here to see my daughter's performance.' HM 'your grand father helped us to start this school. So we will be happy if you come to the front.'Prem without making much scene got up. He looked at Heer. She too got up from her seat and followed him to the front. They occupied the front seat.

Chahat performed in group dance. She is happy to see her papa and mamma in the front. After few events, HM took Prem to the stage. Heer stayed in the front row. There were lot of speeches and announcements were going on. Heer couldn't move her eyes from Prem, when he gave a very short and sweet message to students. She unconsciously admired his every move. The way he distributed the prizes to kid. When Chahat came to collect her prize both behaved gently without showing up their relation. Heer wondered 'how it is possible for them to behave like that? Okay as a business man Prem may know that but how come Chahat.' she unconsciously smiled thinking 'she is exactly like her papa in every attitude.' Heer didn't notice that Prem is secretly admiring her facial changes.

Chahat came to Prem and Heer after the function. Heer kissed her cheek and wished her. Prem took her in his arms and kissed her cheeks several times. She too kissed him back 'papa you didn't tell me that you are coming to give prizes.' Prem 'i too don't know.' Chahat thought her father is hidding. she rolled her eyes 'pappaa.' Prem 'Promise beta. I didn't know. Ask mamma. Guest didn't come so your HM asked me to do that.' Chahat believed his words. Prem thought 'like her mamma, she is not believing me. I need to gain their confident.'

They came back home. Chahat ran directly towards Teji room to show her prize. Prem too followed her to his Bua. He watched Chahat exciting telling the entire event to Teji without missing anything. Heer came in with the food for Teji and Chahat. Teji 'bring for you and Prem beta. We all sit here and eat.' Heer agreed. Prem is happy.

A month passed, but no change in Heer's attitude. Prem didn't give up his hope. Heer went to work and avoided Prem. Prem spent time with Chahat. He helped her in studies. Chahat is more and more attached with Prem. Many night she sleeps on Prem's lap in the living room. Prem without

Heer permission doesn't want to take Chahat to his room. He doesn't want to hurt Heer. He always placed her in Heer's room. Heer prepared Prem's favorites as she did for others. She never sat with him in the table to have dinner unless Teji comes to have dinner with the family. Gay3 enquired Prem daily about Heer's decision but Prem always 'she is changing.' Gaya3 understood that Prem is telling lie. She stopped asking about Heer.
Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
newt2007 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Shot 7

One morning, after dropping Chahat in school, Prem decided to visit mill. He thought of staying with Heer using helping her in mill as a lame excuse. He got out of the car with a smile 'Heer, now you can't hide from me.' He was thinking how she will react to his decision now. He saw workers running in panic. Prem saw smoke coming out of godown. His heart raced to Heer and started beating fast. Prem ran towards the godown. He pushed the crowd and moved forward. One man 'shab, Heer beti is inside.' Prem forgot to breath for a second.

Without wasting a second, he ran inside. There is no flame but the smoke blurred his vision. He don't have time to investigate now. He has to find Heer in this dense smoke. He took his handkerchief and tied covering his nose and mouth. He wandered and shouted 'Heer.' His fear increased when he didn't receive any reply. He shouted several times. After few minutes he heard a coughing sound. He stepped towards that direction and bumped on to someone. He grabbed the person in his hand.

As soon as his hand touched the person, he clearly understood its Heer. He breathed a releif. He walked out guesing the entrance. Luckily he is able to walk in the correct direction. He came out of the godown with fainted Heer. He knelt on the ground hugging Heer. he pat her cheek fearfully. He got tensed when he didn't get any response from her. He cried shouting her name 'Heer, open your eyes.'

Someone sprinkled water on her face. she murmured something and fainted again. He grabbed her in his hand and rushed to his car. He took her to the hospital.

Eventhough Doctor said she will be alright in few hours, Prem is restless. After and hour, Doctor discharged Heer. Prem and Heer went home. she felt dizzy and struggled to walk even then she refused his help. With the help of some female servants she went into her room. Teji sat with Heer and helped her. Chahat cried 'papa, what happened to mamma?' Prem carried her out of the room 'mamma has fever. She will be okay by t'row morning.' Chahat puting her hands around his neck tightly. He kissed her.

In the night, after dinner Prem entered Heer room to check her before going to bed. Chahat is sitting in the bed and playing with teddy. Prem sat next to her 'where is mamma?' Chahat pointed washroom 'she went in long before. She didn't come out. i don't know what she is doing inside?' Prem tensely went to knock the washroom door. but it opened. He saw her holding the sink vomiting. She is about to lose her balance due to weakness, Prem held her in his hand. He washed her face and carried her out of the washroom. He placed her on the bed.

Chahat fearfully cried 'mamma.' Hearing Chahat's voice Teji rushed to the room. Heer opened her eyes. Prem gave her water. He placed pillow under her head comfortably. Chahat sat next to Heer. Heer whispered 'I'm okay beta.' Prem 'Bua, I'll take care of Heer. you go and sleep.' He saw Chahat who is with worried face staring at Heer. Prem 'Chahat beta, mamma is fine. You go and sleep with Dadi ma.' Teji and Chahat went out of the room.

Heer wanted to send Prem out of the room but she doesn't have strength to argue with him now. She silently closed her eyes. But coninuos cough didn't allow her to sleep. Prem sat next to her leaning on the board. He pulled her up so that she can keep her head on his bosom. She felt easy and comfortable. Again she tried to lie down flat but cough disturbed her again. When Prem pulled her on to him she didn't protest.

Morning Heer opened her eyes and saw herself comfortably on Prem's chest. He is uncomfortably leaning on the board and sleeping. She tried to get up. Sensing her movement he opened his eyes and tightened his grip around her. She stayed quiet. When he touched her for the first time before 4 years, she is not in the situation to enjoy his touch. Even though he did it for his pleasure and she tolerated for money to save her Mausi, she can surely say that he is a very caring person. Some how today she wanted to stay in his hand. One side she is tired on the other side she is comfortable in his arms. she closed her eyes.

Prem felt relieved when Heer didn't jump out of his hand. He looked at her face. He pushed the strand of hair from her face lovingly 'how are you feeling now?' Heer opened her eyes 'better.' She got up. Chahat came in 'how are you mamma?' she kissed her. Heer 'I'm fine beta.' She kissed her back. Prem still leaning on his back on the board is admiring mother-daughter cute moment. Chahat crawled to Prem and lyed on his chest. 'good morning papa.' Prem kissed her forehead 'good morning beta.' He adjusted himself to give her comfortable space on his chest. He gently stroked her hair hugging her.

Heer without disturbing them went to washroom. Until Heer came out of the washroom Prem and Chahat remaind in the same posture with their eyes closed. Prem 'beta, get ready. Papa take you to school.' Chahat went to wash room. when Heer followed her, Chahat 'mamma, today I'll manage on my own.' Heer hesitated. Prem 'Heer, you bring her dress.' He went to give shower to Chahat.

Prem and Chahat were playing splashing water on each other. after 30 minutes Prem and Chahat came out of the washroom. Prem fully wet standing with a smile. Chahat is jumping up and down clapping her hands. 'mamma see. Papa is fully wet.' Prem 'okay. You get ready.' He is about to walk out of the room. Heer stopped 'you take shower. I'll go and bring your dress.' Prem 'but' he agreed.

Prem got ready as Heer brought his suit from his room. Teji saw Prem adjusting his shirt sleeves coming out of Heer room. Chahat ran towards dinnig table. Heer came behind them. Teji 'how are you feeling beta?' Heer 'fine Chachi. But I don't feel like eating.' Teji 'I'll prepare juice for you.' she went to kitchen. Heer followed her.

After breakfast, Prem and Chahat went out. Prem strictly ordered Teji not to send Heer to mill. Prem was looking the new hotel and all the other field works. In between they also purchased a new hotel in Delhi. For that Prem went to Delhi.

After one week, Prem returned to Ambala exhausted. After that day, Prem thought he may get chance to move closer with Heer. but he was told to go to Delhi by Lalit. He harldy had time to think about anything. but Chahat daily called him to update everything.

Prem got out of the car in front of Juneja mansion. He leaned on the wall after pressing the door bell. It is 11:48 in the midnight. He is tired and get tensed when the servant took time to open the door. he is about to press the bell again when the door opened. He is surprised to see the entire house in dark. 'why its dark?' he stepped in. the light came and he stood forgetting himself for a second.

Living room is fully decorated with his favorite flowers and balloons. Entire family standing and singing 'Happpy Birthday.' he even forgot his birthday in his busy schedule. He walked in as the family members came towards him. He kept his things down. Chahat handed him a bunch of flowers 'happy birthday papa.' Prem picked her up and kissed her cheek 'thanks beta.'

He let Chahat down and took blessings from Teji, Gaya3 and Lalit. Prem 'when did you both came dad?' Lalit 'just now.' Prem 'who gave this idea?' Teji 'Heer.' He turned to Heer who is standing silently beside them. She smiled and handed him a small gift box wrapped in red 'Happy birthday.' Prem took the box from her hand 'thanks Heer.' Chahat 'papa, open the box. What is inside?' Prem opened the box and stared at the item for a second.

Gay3 'what is that Prem?' Prem slowly lifted the small sindoor daani out of the box. Heer looked down when Prem eyes met hers. Chahat innocently 'what mamma? Don't you get a nice gift? What papa will do with this? This is girls item.' Gay3 'this is the perfect gift beta.' Lalit, Gaya3 and Teji are happy and understood the meaning of the gift.

Prem stepped towards Heer. He took a pinch of sindoor and filled her maang. He slipped her hands around her shoulder and pulled towards him. He kissed her forehead 'thanks Heer.' she leaned on to him. He gently hugged her. Chahat ran to them. He gave the sindoor daani to Heer and picked up Chahat and kissed her. He put his hand around Heer again pulling closer. Chahat kissed them.

Lalit, Gay3 and Teji watched them with tears. After few minutes Lalit 'come on celebrate this occasion.' Prem cut the cake and fed Heer and Chahat. then he gave to Gaya3, Teji and Lalit. Prem and Heer took blessings from elders. Gay3 asked Prem to take Heer and Chahat to his room. Prem is surprised. Teji 'Heer is already your wife.' Lalit 'we'll fix a date to declare it to world.' Prem and Heer with Chahat went to their room.

Chahat slept as soon as she hit the bed. Prem went to change. Heer sat quietly on the bed. Prem changed into kurta came to Heer. He sat next to Heer. he took her hands 'thanks Heer.' He cupped his face with her palm. Heer looked at him 'I'm sorry Prem.' Prem shook his head 'I did the mistake and deserves punishment for making you struggle for past 4 years.' Heer 'for that only I agreed to marry you.' she laughed. Prem 'i like this punishment.' hugged her. Heer 'don't you want to give me punishment for hurting you for past one month?' Prem shook his head 'yes. sure.' Heer 'I'm ready to accept.' Prem leaned forward 'you have to' he paused 'to tell your love.' Heer smiled shyly 'I love you.' Prem sadly 'not enough.' She kissed his cheek 'I love you.' Prem shook his head negatively with a teasing smile 'i want it in a ramantic way'.

She put her hand around his neck and leaned closer to his face. Prem is quiet. She adjusted herself to reach his face. she brushed her lips on his. He is surprised and happy about her move. Without wasting a second he responded to her move. He tasted those beautiful lips with all his love for her. She buried her face into his chest and giggled 'thanks for your punishment.' Prem caressing her cheek 'many more punishments are coming dear.' He hugged her tight never want to leave her anymore.

** ** **

Prem never thought they will again meet in this world. When Prem saw her for the first time he disposed her. Heer never wanted to live with him even after he kept sindoor on her maang. as a human being they disposed their relation.

When Heer came to Teji for shelter she never thought Prem will again come into her way. He sent the note to Prem so that he won't blame her later for hiding Chahat's birth. It luckily landed in Gay3's hand and she took it in positive way. That was God's plan to bring Prem and Heer together.

Our thoughts are not God's. We can't read God's plan.

God proposes the things Man disposed.

** END **
Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
newt2007 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Friends

hope you all enjoyed this SS.
Thanks for those who took time to leave your comments.
Thank you friends who pressed LIKE button. hope to get comments when you get time or for mu other FF or SS.
Thank you silent readers.
Selvy
Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
sweta2005 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 14 years ago

awesomeeeee eeee too good lovelyyyyyyyy ss loved it immenselyyyyyyyyyyyy

Edited by sweta2005 - 14 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".