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Few days back I came out with a concept on our Premeer forced me to write this SS - Curse or Love.
I spend hours to frame this into a SS. I expect you to spend few seconds to write more than one line comment.
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CURSE OR LOVE
Shot 1

15 years back Lalit Juneja and Gaya3 Juneja left to UK from Ambala, India. Lalit found a job an office where as Gaya3 is a nurse joined in a big hospital. They worked hard to raise his son Prem. Now Prem is working in US as a Software Engineer. Lalit and Gay3 decided to select a perfect life partner to Prem.

Prem stared at the girl who is smiling at him on his laptop. He leaned back on the couch with a smile. He looked at the message send by Lalit 'beta, we are leaving to India now. Come as early as possible.' Prem picked up his mobile and booked his ticket to India on Thursday morning flight. That is t'row. He wanted to leave now itself but before that he has to finish some of the work here to spend time with Heer.

His thoughts raced back.

~~FLASHBACK~~

Prem 10 and Heer 6. Both were holding their hands walking in the field. Heer sadly looked at Prem. 'Prem, I won't be able to see you again.' She started crying. 'please don't go Prem.' Prem wiped her tears 'Heer look at me.' Heer with teary eyes looked at him. Prem 'note this day. Exactly after 15 years I'll come back to you.' Heer with some belief on his words. Prem 'I'll take you with me.' Heer 'promise.' Prem holding his throat with his thumb and index finger 'Promise.'

Heer 'I won't talk to you if you didn't come. promise' she kept her palm on the tree which their symbol of friendship. Prem 'okay.' Both hugged and kissed each other on their cheeks.

~~END~~

Heer shyly ran out of the house picking up the photo from Teji's hand. Balraj Mann and Teji Mann are Heer's parents. Balraj had a small piece of fertile land when Lalit went to UK. Now with his hard work he is rich man in that village. All the villagers loves him as their family member. Balraj and Lalit are childhood friends. Lalit in search of job went UK with promise to Balraj that he will come back after 15 years to take Heer as his DIL. Now to fulfill his promise Lalit is returning to Ambala today.

Heer ran to the tree. She showed the picture to the tree. 'see my Prem. He is handsome. He is coming.' She jumped happily 'he is coming.' Few kids who are playing near the tree looked Heer with confusion. 'who is coming?' Heer 'my Prem. My Prem is coming.' Heer without wasting a second ran to her house.

Balraj house is busy. Decoration and other preparation works are in full swing. Servants are running around to their job.

Heer searched her dresses 'don't know Prem still love the same color'. Finally she picked up a purple color salwar. She heard Balraj and Teji greeting Lalit and Gaya3. Heer rushed outside to see Prem. Her pace slowed down as she neared the living room. She slowly hiding behind a pillar and searched for Prem.

Heer face fell sad when she couldn't find any young man in that crowd. She thought 'only Lalit Chachu and Chachi is there. where is Prem?' she started biting her dupptta and stepped to another nearest pillar with the hope of finding Prem. She turned when she felt a hand on her shoulder. 'searching for Prem.' Heer shyly smiled and turned to see Gaya3 standing behind her with a teasing smile. Heer quickly bent down to touch her feet. Gaya3 blessed her. she pat her cheek 'he will be here t'row morning.' She teasingly whispered 'he is already on the way.' Heer looked down.

Lalit shouted 'arrey where is my bahu?' Heer rushed to him to get blessing. Gaya3 teased 'she is searching for Prem.' Heer with a shy smile hide behind Teji.

Morning, Heer got ready. She wore his favorite blue color dress. She looked her image several time in the mirror. She thought 'will Prem like me?' she turned when she heard 'my princess looks beautiful.' Prem is standing there with a smile. He opened his hands. She ran into his arms. Both hugged tightly. They stood silently for a while. Prem whispered 'I'm back to take my Heer with me.' Heer 'I know.' She looked at him. He kissed her forehead 'I love you.' Heer snuggled into his arms 'I love you too.' Both wanted to hear these three words for past 15 years.

Next few days went like a jet. Prem and Heer got hardly any second to think about anything. Marriage preparations and at the same time for Heer's visa hardly gave time for them to breath. They got married.

They not even got time to spend their first night. Mostly they were travelling in the night to some places. They went to Delhi for visa process then to some temples as instructed by parents. Prem promised her to make a special night for her as soon as they reach NY. Prem decided to leave as early as possible to NY. He has very important work in the office. He decided to take Heer with him. He doesn't want to leave her alone anymore. He felt 15 years are too long for them. They spend hours packing and then rushed to the airport. As soon as they boarded the flight they both fell asleep resting their head on each other.

Flight landed in NY airport. Sun is yet to come out of its hiding place. Heer admired the new environment as Prem drove the car through the streets of NY. Prem and Heer reached their small house. In the downstairs, there is living room leading to a small Kitchen. Upstairs had 2 bedrooms. It's a small house in the middle of a small garden.

Prem opened the door and told Heer to step in putting her right leg first. Heer smiled. He dragged their luggage in. He carried her to their bedroom. She is surprised to see their picture which is taken 15 years back, the day Prem left to UK with his parents sitting prettily inside a frame near his bed.

Prem and Heer took quick shower. Prem took her down and explained the cooking systems and some of the electric items in the house. 'Heer, don't stay without switching on the heater. Its very cold here.' Prem made some sandwiches. 'I'll get some vegetables.' He rushed out and came after 30 minutes with bag full of vegetables. He rushed up to get ready for the office telling 'I usually leave around 8 in the morning'. Prem and Heer had breakfast.

He got up kissed her forehead 'sorry Heer, I have to go to the office.' Heer 'its okay.' Prem 'take care. I won't come for lunch. A lady will come to work in the garden today. She comes once in a week. You ask her if you want anything. She is a nice lady. Her name is Celina.' Heer nodded. He gave a side hug and nuzzled her cheek with his lips 'I'll catch you in the evening.' Heer shyly smiled.

Heer closed the door and sat in the couch thinking her marriage with him. The days went in a jet speed. Even then she remembered every moment they spent together. She smiled thinking his kisses he placed on her cheeks escaping from elders eyes.

After some time she cleared all the things. She went upstairs and started unpacking her things. She got call from Gaya3 and Teji. She spoke to them for a while. She watched Celina cleaning the garden. She feared about language. Even though Heer speaks good English, she found hard to understand their speed. She thought they are only blowing air out of their mouth. So she didn't go down to meet Celina.

Then Heer fell asleep dreaming Prem. When she opened her eyes it was dark. She looked at the clock 'its 8 in the evening. Still Prem didn't come.' She decided to make dinner before he comes back. She thought his delay is because he took leave. 'IT people always forget the home when they sit in front of their computer.' She cooked and arranged the table for dinner and sat in the couch waiting for Prem.

Around 10 in the night, she heard a car entering the compound. She rushed to the door to open. Prem got out of the car and walked towards her. Heer with a wide smile looked at Prem. She is confused to see his angry face. When he neared her alcohol smell pushed her back. 'Prem' Prem without giving any answer walked to their room.

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Shot 2

Heer ran behind him. Prem took his kurta and went to next room and closed the door. He changed. Heer unable to understand anything just stared at his odd behavior. Heer knocked the door when he didn't open the door for long. Prem opened the door. his face showed anger 'I don't want dinner. You eat and sleep in that room.' he slammed the door on her face. Heer forgot to breathe for a second 'whats happening? Prem' she knocked the door again. 'Prem open the door. why are.'

Prem opened the door angrily 'I said don't disturb me.' Heer 'Prem why are you sleeping alone in this room. come there.' Prem 'why? Who are you?' Heer shocked 'Prem. I' Prem cut in 'Listen. I came to India for my parents. I married you for them only. I don't have any attraction on you. Just leave me alone.' He closed the door.

Heer stood silently for an hour without able to grasp the situation. She went to her room and fell on the bed in confusion. She don't even know how to react to this shock. His words came to her again and again 'what is he saying?' Confusingly she stared at the picture near their bed side. 'what happened to my Prem? He loved me until he left to office.' Several thoughts rush into her brain. She decided not to think negatively now about Prem 'may be he is tensed because of work.' She fell asleep with that conclusion.

Morning, she quickly got up and prepared his favorite paratha. Prem came down around 7.45. He sat in the table. Heer smiled 'good morning.' Prem with out opening his mouth he looked at the plate in front of him. 'what is this?' Heer fearfully 'Prem, paratha. you like.' Prem pushed the plate away. It landed on the floor with a noise and broke into pieces. Heer in shock stepped back to avoid getting hurt from the broken pieces. Prem 'I hate this paratha. I take bread and juice in the morning as my breakfast. In the night I eat outside. I hate people disturbing me when I return from the office. Hope you understand this. Its better you stay away from me.' He got up and took juice from the fridge 'you are not servant here. so no need to preapare anything for me. you can stay here as guest as long as you want.' He poured joucie in a glass. He drank the juice in one gulp 'you have enerything in this house. if you want you can leave to India. I don't have any objection.' He took few slices of bread and rushed out shouting 'don't show your face again when I return from the office.'

Heer is standing like a statue. Only tears came out of her eyes. Her heart is bleeding heavily. 'He is not my Prem. Where is my Prem?' she fell on to the floor closing her mouth. She cried like a kid. 'I read in newspapers many IT people struggle in their family life. Now I'm seeing in front of my eyes. Are they all going mad because of their work?' she confidently 'no my Prem is not like that. He will be normal after few days.'

She cleared the place and ate her breakfast. She decided to keep the same parathas for her lunch too. She heard door bell. She opened the door and saw A middle aged lady, Celina standing their with a smile 'good morning.' Heer 'good morning. Come in.' Celina walked in 'how are you feeling in NY.' Heer 'nice but not like my country.' Celina 'always motherland is best.' She sat in the couch 'had your breakfast?' Heer 'Just finished. Do you like to have something.' Celina 'no thanks. I had my breakfast.' She looked around the house. 'like Prem you are keeping the house very neat.'

Heer 'Prem prefers to keep everything perfect.' They chatted for few minutes. Celina smiled looking at the blush appearing in her face whenever she spoke about Prem. Celina 'do you want to buy anything from the shop?' Heer 'no. Prem brought vegetables y'day. thats enought for today.' Celeina 'do you have any garbage to throw out? I'll throw it.' Heer rushed to the kitchen and came out with garbage cover. The broken plate is clearly heard. Celina 'you broke anything.' Heer 'ha. I'm not used to this kind of plates. I dropped it.' Celina walked out 'it happens sometimes. Okay dear bye.' Heer 'bye.'

Heer spend the day again in confusion. She tried to digest the things happening from last night. But she failed. Entire day she struggled alone in the house. She cried then consoled again cried. She tried to sleep to forgot everything but even sleep went against her and refuse to come to her.

In the night around 11 Prem retuned. Heer heard Prem opening the door with his keys. She rushed down. Prem stopped with a anger 'did you had your dinner?' Heer shook her head 'I'm waiting for you.' Prem 'who told you to wait for me? Have your dinner and go to sleep.' Heer looked at him confusingly. Prem 'I had my dinner.' Heer is about to walk back to her room with tears. Prem held her wrist. Heer felt joy when his hands pulled her back.

Prem dragged her towards the table. He ordered angrily 'eat.' Heer 'I'm not hungry.' Prem 'eat otherwise I'll push you out of the house in the cold.' Heer is shocked and thought 'when did he changed this much harsh man?' Prem pointed the plate angrily 'umm eat.' Heer fearfully took little quantity and ate in hurry. Prem stepped towards the stairs. Heer thought of throwing into dustbin. Prem 'don't throw that into dustbin. Then I'll punish you for that.' Heer is confused. Prem went to his room and closed the door.

One week passed. No change in Prem. He continued to shout at Heer. He came late in the night fully drunk. He forcefully made her to eat. Heer almost in fear looked at him. She searched love for her in his eyes. But he hardly looked at her. his shouting and anger increased day by day. Even Saturday and Sunday he spent out of the house. Heer felt as if she is living in the hell with her Prem who refuse to show his love to her.

Oneday in the night, Prem returned from office. He opened the door in the night. He shivered in the cold. He thought 'may be Heer switched off the heater and sleeping in her room.' he placed his things on the couch and headed towards the stairs.

He is shocked to see Heer sitting on the chair keeping her head on the dinning table. 'what is she doing the cold?' he ran to her. he shouted 'what are you' he stopped when he didn't see any movement from her. he touched her. 'Heer.' her body is cold. He pulled her up 'Heer.' he quickly grabbed her in his hand. Shouting Heer name several times he carried her to the bedroom. He placed her on the bed. Pulled the comforter over her. switched on the heater. He sat next to her started rubbing her palm. Tears ran down his cheeks 'Heer.' he pat her cheek.

He rushed down and brought little heated oil and hot water. He rubbed the oil in her palm. He hugged her. He dipped the cloth in hot water and placed on her forehead. He did what ever came to his mind to keep her warm. He hugged her tightly under the comforter. Soon her body started warming up. She moaned in her sleep. He kissed her forehead with a smile.

Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Shot 3

Morning Heer opened her eyes and saw herself on the bed. 'how do I came here?' she remember sitting in the table. She is confused. She got up and rushed down. Its 9 in the morning. Prem already left to the office. Food item are dumped inside the fridge and Dinning table is neatly cleaned. She switched on the heater. 'its working now. How?' She sat on the couch holding her head to recollect what happened in the night.

While she was waiting for Prem suddenly the heater stopped. She didn't try to check what happened or didn't want to go to another room. she is totally depressed by the changes of Prem. She sat quietly. The room became chill. She started shivering even then she didn't want to go to next room. she want to die. She thought 'instead of living with my own Prem in the hell. Its better to die.' She is confused 'is he in love with someone? Did he married me for his parents?' she leaned on the table 'but he is happy until we reach here. he was okay until he went to office. what happened in the office?' she drifted into sleep.

After a while she opened her eyes and saw Prem hugging her tightly and sleeping. There is a cloth on her forehead and she felt some oil on her palm. So she understood she must have shivered in the cold. Prem must have done something to make her body heat. She drifted back to sleep. When she got up in the morning Prem is not near her on the bed.

She thought 'But he didn't remove her dress. So nothing else happened.' She is disappointed 'even in that moment he didn't try to make love to save my life. He hates me.' She got up something struck her mind. She sat back on the couch 'if he really hates me then why he has to carry me to the room.' she smiled 'he loves me.' She came to conclusion 'he is hiding something. What is it? How to find the truth behind his behavior.' She got up and rushed to his room in search of some clue for the change of his behavior.

With the hope of finding the truth Heer started searching his room. She is confident that Prem will return only in the night. So she searched slowly and carefully without missing single place. Around 2 in the afternoon, she sat on the bed with a disappointment. She searched every corner of the room but didn't get any clue.

She stared at the bed lamp blankly. 'I didn't get anything. Is he really hates me. What clue I'll get in this room.' She looked around 'why I'm searching this room now?' she shook her head 'its sure. He is in love with someone that is why he is hating me.' She concluded 'I spoiled his happiness.' But her heart refuse to accept the fact that Prem is not in love with her.

Her eyes fell on the draw in the table. She pulled open the drawer and a diary smiled at her. Heer is happy to get a diary. 'may be I'll get something from it.' She opened the first page. Its empty. She got disappointed and about to place the diary back in it place but something struck her mind. She opened the diary again and flipped through few more pages.

She saw his handwritten pages. Few letters dissolved in water indicating her that he wrote this with tears. His writings starts from the day they landed in NY.

~~Prem's P.O.V~~

Prem, Max and Susi are friends. Prem came to office today morning to share his happiness with his friends. But he didn't see them in their cabi. He thought they may have gone out on duty. Around 2 in the afternoon, Prem received a call from Max 'Prem Susi tried to commit suicide. She is admitted in city hospital.' Prem is shocked.

Prem rushed to the hospital. Max is sitting in front of ICU with sad face. As soon as he saw Prem 'Prem she has taken poision.' Prem confusingly 'why?' Max 'don't know. She has left the note that she is depressed. No one is responsible for her decision.' Max told him to go inside as Susi wants to meet him.

Prem entered ICU. He stood few feet away from the bed. He angrily 'are you mad to take this decision?' Susi struggling and holding her breath to say something gave an angry look to Prem even in her struggle. 'I curse you Prem.' Prem is shocked. 'I came to office to share my happiness with you and Max. but you have made me to come to the hospital. What is your problem Susi?'

Susi 'yo'..u. you '..are the pro'..blem Prem. You d'..idn't li'..sten to me. Sev'..eral times I expr'..essed my lo'..ve even afte'..r that you marri'..ed that '..coun'..try girl.' Prem angrily 'don't talk about my Heer. She is my life.' Susi 'you ignored my Love. now I curse you Prem. The day you'. both ''bec'ome one.' She paused. Prem looked at her angrily. 'I'm not bothered about your words.' Susi 'the day you both '.. become one'.. the day you loose '.. your Heer ''foreveeerr.' Prem shocked. Susi angrily 'its my curse ''.to you Prem. She won't b'..e a-liv---e a---fte--r ----th------at.' She breathed her last before Prem come out of the shock. He shouted for the doctor.

Prem came out of ICU. Max touched his shoulder. He sensed that she is dead from Prem's sad face and the doctors running inside. Max thought he is sad because of Susi's death. Actually Prem is now worried about Heer. The curse which Susi gave before her last breath sent fear into his brain. He cried without knowing how to protect to his Heer. He can't loose her. He won't be alive without her. He can't cheat her by staying away. He came to conclusion to put drama of ignorance and torture to her. He thought that may force her to go for divorce. He felt that is the right decision.

Another few hours went calling Susi relatives and informing about her death. Since the note has been written neatly about no one is responsible for her death, police closed the case as it as suicide in depressed state.

Prem went to park. He several times recollected his plan. Around 9.30 he went to a bar and bought one alcohol bottle. He headed towards the house. He splashed some alcohol on his face so that he will look like drunkard.

When he saw Heer standing in the door with a smile, he wanted to hug her tightly. Controlling his love he crossed and giving some confused and angry words to her.

Heer asked him to have dinner. With heavy heart he closed the door on her face saying their marriage is just for his parents. He fell on the bed with tears 'sorry Heer, I have to do this to see you alive in this world. Please Heer hate me and move away from me. I want you to see your happy face.'

Morning, he got up and put some scene to confuse Heer again. When he pushed the plate down, it almost hit the Heer's leg. His heart felt pain. But before it hurts her she stepped back. He is relieved. On the way to office, he called Celina 'Celina, my Heer is at home alone. Please go there and check if she needs anything. She is very shy girl.' Celina 'okay Prem.' Prem 'you talk little slower. She will find difficult to understand your faster accent.' Celina 'I know. Don't worry. I'll take care of her.'

In the night, Prem returned with same drama. When he heard Heer waiting for him for dinner, he got tensed. He feared that may spoil her health. He behaved harshly and made her eat the dinner. Days passed Heer started fearing for Prem. Even then Prem noticed Heer is not getting angry on him. her love for him is visible in her eyes. So he spent weekends also out of the house to avoid her presence. He thought that may put Heer under more confusion. He is ready to accept whatever blame she places on him.

When Prem entered the house he saw Heer lying on the dinning table in unconscious state. Heater must have stopped due to some problem. She must have sat in the cold. Prem felt his life moving out of him when she refused respond to him. Prem carried her to the room. He tried to make her body warm. He is very well sure that physical contact will surely help to get her body warm immediately. But he is not ready risk her life. So he tried all the way to make her body warm. He breathed relief when her body started gaining some heart. Hugging her tightly he too fell asleep.

In the middle of the night he felt some movement from her. She snuggled closer. He feared that may trigger his hormone. So he silently got out of the bed as soon as she closed her eyes.

~~END~~

Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Shot 4

Heer now understood not only the reason for his behavior and the love he has on her. She wiped her tears. 'Prem, I love you.' she placed the diary back on the old place. She came out of the room. she went to her room. she stood near the window. The curse didn't hurt her but the pain Prem is going through to save her life gave her pain.

She sat inside her room on the window. She thought how to make Prem forget that curse. She thought of talking to him. But she disposed that decision knowing that won't give any comfort to him. thought of talking to his parents but pushed that out thinking he may get angry and openly push her out of his life. Nothing seems to be comfortable way for her to bring Prem out of this confusion.

She got up when she heard car pulling into the compound. She went down thinking 'Prem, I won't allow you to suffer like this anymore. You are doing all this to save your Heer. now its my time to save my Prem. I won't leave you at any cost.' She took a plate. She took food and sat in the Couch switching on the TV.

Prem opened the door and entered the house. He saw Heer eating her dinner watching TV. Prem silently walked to his room. Heer didn't pay attention to him. She didn't miss to notice his relieved face. After a while Heer cleared the dishes and went to her room. she didn't thought about anything. soon she drifted into sleep.

In the middle of the night, Heer felt some weight on her forehead. Without making any movement she stayed quiet. Prem gently stroked her hair for few seconds and left the room after leaving a loving kiss on her forehead. Heer thought 'from t'row you don't have to show your love in the night like a theif.' She smiled and closed her eyes with peace.

Morning Heer got up early. Today is Saturday. So he will surely go out of the house to escape from me. She wore his favorite color salwar. She went down and prepared sandwiches. She kept neatly on the table. She waited until he came down. As she expected he came down wearing his t-shirt. Heer innocently 'Prem, have your breakfast.'

Prem angrily gave a look to her and stepped towards the door. Heer 'Prem if you continue to do like this then you won't find me alive when you return.' Prem angrily 'I'm not bothered about you at all.'

Heer with tears ran to her room. Prem placed his hand on the door to open turned in fear when her lines again came into his mind. He dropped his things down on the floor and ran behind her. He pushed the door open. He frezeed for a second. He almost lost his life.

Heer covering her face with a plastic cover struggling to breath. Prem quickly rushed to her and knelt before her. Prem pulled the cover out of her face and hugged her tightly. 'Heer I'll die if something happens to you. why are you dong like this?' he kissed her face lovingly. Heer angrily pushed him away 'you are a liar.' Heer pulled the cover and about to put on her face. Prem shocked 'no Heer. I love you more than my life.' He pulled the cover out of her hand. Heer 'please Prem, atleast allow me to die peacefully.' Prem cupped her face 'Heer please believe me. I love you.' Heer like a kid 'then tell me why you behaving harshly with me.'

Prem came to present and got up. He tried to move away. Heer 'its better for me to die. So that you can live happily in this world.' She is about to crawled towards the cover which is lying on the floor. Prem pulled her up holding her and pushed her on to the bed. Heer shouted 'allow me either to live or die. Why are you not allowing me to do both?' she cried covering her face.

She quickly got out of the bed and ran towards the cover again. Prem stopped her and pulled her closer. She landed on his chest. He hugged her tightly. 'Please Heer, listen to me. I'll give you divorce you go back to India and marry some one.' Heer looked at him with shocked 'instead of leaving you I can die Prem. I know why are you talking like this,' Prem looked at her with shock. 'Please Heer listen to me. I can't give you happiness.' Heer 'i won't be happy if i stay away from you.' Prem 'try to understand me Heer.' Heer 'why Prem? why you want to push me out of your life? can you live happily without me.' Prem 'i can.' he turned his face away to hide his emotion. Heer 'okay Prem. i'll agree.' Prem is happy. 'i'll book the ticket.' Heer 'no need. won't need passenger ticket.' Prem confused. Heer smiled 'they won't give seat for a dead body.' Prem is shocked. 'Heer' tears came out of his eyes. Heer 'you can't see me as a dead body right.' Prem 'Heer, i'm trying to give happiness to you Heer. if you stay with me you won't be able to live happily Heer.'

Heer cupped his face 'Prem, I know you love me more than anything in this world. That is why you are fearing that something will happen to me.' Prem confused. Heer 'I know everything.' She shook her head 'I read your diary.' Prem is shocked.

Heer 'Prem, do you believe in God?' Prem shook his head 'yes.' Heer 'then do you think Curse is bigger than God?' Prem is silent. Heer 'God won't allow anything happen to me because God know about your love on me.' Prem 'even then Heer I can't risk your life.' He turned his face away to hide his tears.

Heer turned his face to face hers. 'Prem, We loved each other from the day we know this world. We became one when the day we started loving each other. Oneness doesn't mean that we have to have physical intimate relationship.' Prem even though felt her words are having truth, his mind didn't allow him to take risk of loosing Heer. 'no Heer. I can't take risk in this matter.'

Heer 'okay I'm coming in you way.' Prem looked at her confident face. Heer 'for you oneness means physical relation.' Prem is silent. Heer 'we don't have to have any physical relation until your mind gets cleared in this matter.' Prem felt her decision seems to be wise. Heer 'that doesn't mean that we have to get separated. We can stay as husband wife without any physical relation.' She pulled his nose. 'no need to torture yourself. Understand.' In sad voice 'by doing this you are killing you and me. Don't think you are giving happiness to me.' Prem shook his head positively. He hugged her 'sorry Heer.' Heer 'Prem, I want a promise from you.' Prem looked at her confusingly.

Heer 'please in future don't hide anything. it hurts me.' Prem 'I won't. promise.' she smiled. 'Come on give me a kiss.' Prem kissed her cheek. She gently hit his chest. Prem confused. 'Prem, is this kiss?' Prem 'then what.' Heer pressed 'KISS Prem KISS.' Prem confusingly looked at her. Heer pressed her lips on his. Prem eyes wide open. Initially he feared as her kissed deepened into her mouth. He forgot everything and responded for a loving and passionate kiss.

She buried her face into his chest. He hugged her tightly not want to leave her. Heer 'Prem, I'm hungry.' Prem 'come I too didn't eat anything in the night.' Heer looked at him angrily 'you made me eat every night but you slept without eating.' Prem shook his head like a kid. Heer 'come,' she dragged him down. Prem 'wait.' Heer got cinfused. Prem 'let me change my dress.' Heer went down to kitchen. Prem joined her few minutes after changing into his kurta.

Prem came to kitchen 'want my help?' Heer 'yes. You sit on this counter.' Prem 'why?' Heer 'you sit. I'll tell you.' Prem sat on the counter playing with the tomato. Heer decided to make his favorite dishes and she started cutting vegetable standing near him. Prem busy catching the tomato looked at Heer when she leaned on to him. She kissed his cheek and moved away to the prepare the dish.

She came to him in between to kiss his cheek. She covered the vessel and kept it in low fire. She came to him. She hugged him tightly keeping her head on his chest. He stroked her hair kissing her forehead.

They had breakfast. Heer removed all the left over foods from the fridge and dumped into the dustbin. Prem 'why are you wasting Heer?' Heer 'I don't want to remember any of the things happened in the past one week.' Prem understood her. He has given her pain. He helped her to clean the fridge and kitchen. He kept the dishes inside the dish washer. She dumped their cloth into washing machine.

Both settled in the living room with some snacks. They watched TV cuddling together. Prem whispered 'eat less otherwise you'll became fat. Here all the foods have high fat.' Heer confidently 'I won't.'Prem looked at her confusingly. Heer 'I know if I put weight then how will you carry me to upstairs?' she giggled. Prem 'so you want me to carry you to our room.' Heer shook her head like a kid. 'so you will also get some exercise.' Prem pouted. She kissed his cheek 'can't you do that for me.' He kissed her cheek 'sure. I'll do anything for my Heer.'

Prem 'okay get ready. I'll take you out.' Heer 'where?' Prem 'here there are many places. Lets start visiting one by one.' Heer got excited. She always wanted to visit US. Now with Prem gave her double joy. They went out for shopping. Prem bought many western outfit for Heer. Holding hands they roamed around. They went to hotel for dinner. They returned late in the night.

Prem lyed on the bed. Heer snuggled into his arms. He kissed her forehead. 'good night.' Heer kissed her cheek 'good night.' Both slept hugging with the peace of mind which they missed for past one week.

Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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#5

Shot 5

Sunday morning, Prem is watching TV. Heer with a coffee mug sat in front of him. He took one cup. She leaned her back on his chest and he wrapped his hand around her waist. Keeping his chin on her shoulder he kissed her cheek. Both silently drinking the coffee. Heer broke the silence 'is there any church near this place?' Prem 'why suddenly to church?' Heer 'I felt so.' Prem felt fear in her words. Prem 'one in the next street. Want to go there.' Heer 'when I was in the college I use to go to chapel whenever I feel lonely or confused.' Prem 'I'll take you there.'

Prem and Heer went to the church. Heer has already attended Chapel service in her college so she didn't find any difference. But Prem felt everything odd. They were standing near the door with confusion. People are clapping and singing a song happily. Seeing their confusion, a young man came forward and guided them to empty chairs. Prem and Heer sat in a place.

Pastor started preaching the sermon. The sermon was about curse. Prem got tensed. Heer held his hand. Prem and Heer silently heard the sermon with the hope of getting some answers for his confusion.

As the pastor explaining about curses and its reactions, Prem felt nervous as he didn't get any answer for his confusion. As the pastor moved to his next part of the sermon How to overcome the curses, Prem felt some hope that there is some way out. Finally Pastor explained 'there are some curses won't work out even if they are said aloud. Because it's a meaningless curse.' Prem face brightened up. Pastor 'some people curse some 'X' thinking they have done great damage to their life. But those curses are not fulfilled because that 'X' is not responsible for the damage.' At the end of the sermon, Prem got the answer for all his confusion. Prem smiled happily when the pastor prounced the final prayer.

Heer looked at Prem as he is smiling widely now. He looked at Heer with happy smile. Heer leaned on to his upper arm holding his hand tightly. Heer 'Prem, that is meaningless curse.' Prem shook his head in agreement.

Pastor came to them 'welcome, I'm seeing you both for the first time.' Prem shook his hand 'yes.' Heer shook hand with him 'we are newly married pray for us.' Pastor smiled cheerfully. Heer sincerely closed her eyes holding Prem's hand. Looking at Heer he too closed his eyes. Pastor prayed for their family blessings shortly. After prayer he kept his hand on Heer's head 'you are going to receive double happiness. God bless you.' Heer got excited even though she didn't understand the meaning of double happiness. Pastor placed his hand on Prem's head 'Don't be afraid. God is with you and your family.' Prem felt a heavy stone running out of his heart. His heart filled with unknown happiness. Pastor shook hands with them with a smile. He moved to meet the next family.

Heer tugged her hand into his. Both walked out of the church with happy face. Prem 'Heer, How did he know about our confusion?' Heer 'he doesn't know anything but God knows our heart.' Prem is happy to get a happy message through the pastor.

In the Night, Heer got into the bed changing into her night suit. She kept her head on his chest. Prem pulled the comforter over them. Both were silent. Heer slowly started unbuttoning his shirt. She started kissing his chest. Prem wanted stop her. But his heart 'Don't stop her. She needs your love.' Prem started kissing her face then he pushed her night suit slowly away from her shoulder to press kiss on her shoulder. Slowly the heat of love started rising up in them. Both started respond to each other in love. Finally they became one.

Morning, sun appeared showering blessings to Premeer through the window. Heer opened her eyes and saw Prem already with a wide opened eyes staring at her lovingly. Prem actually after making love with Heer many times checked whether she is fine. Even though after hearing the sermon he felt relaxed, heart feared about the curse. She moved up on his chest. She rested her cheek on his and whispered 'I love you Prem.' Prem caressing her cheek 'I love you dear.' He rolled over her and started kissing her on the neck. she giggled as his lips roamed on her throat.

Heer 'Prem you are getting late.' Prem 'I want to stay with you always.' Heer ruffled his hair 'next week sure.' Prem shook his head like a kid 'no.' he kept his head on her chest. She gently combed her hair with his fingers.

After a while both got freshen up and went down. Heer quickly made breakfast for Prem. Prem sat in the table. Heer dropped a glass inside the kitchen. Prem rushed in with fear 'Heer, what happened?' Heer took the brush to push the broken glasses 'nothing Prem. I dropped it unconsciously.' Prem took the brush from her hand. 'you stay there.' He cleaned the pieces. He carried her out of the kitchen. 'Prem, this is too much.' She laughed Prem gave angry look 'I lost my life in a second. You are making fun of me.' Heer 'Prem, I won't leave you just like that. You left me alone for 15 years. Until I punish you for that I won't leave you so easily.' she laughed putting her hand around his neck. She bit his ears gently. 'let me down.' He made her stand and kissed her cheek.

Prem 'you sit I'll bring everything here.' Heer pushed Prem to sit in the chair. 'Premmm.' He sat half heartedly. Heer served breakfast. Both ate. Prem got up to leave. He pressed his lips on hers. Both went for a slow and passionate kiss. He went to office after giving a tight to her.

Heer spend the day doing some clearing work in the kitchen. She went upstairs and changed the sheets and dumped all the dirty cloths into washing machine. Last two days she didn't even clean the room as she spent the entire day snuggling into Prem's hands. After having lunch slept for an hour. Then she went to kitchen to prepare some snacks for him. Through out the day she recollect their night several times and smiled.

She rushed to open the door when she heard the car sound. Before she reaches the door from upstairs, Prem opened the door. He kept his things on the couch and ran to her. He hugged her tightly kissing her face. 'I missed you dear.' Heer whispered 'me too.' She kissed him. After a brief loving kissing session, Heer 'Prem, you go and change. I'll bring snacks for you.' Prem kissed her forehead before running upstairs. Heer placed snacks and tea on the tray and headed towards their room.

Prem is still in the washroom so she placed the tray on the table and stood near the window watching outside. Prem came out and hugged her from back. He nuzzled her shoulder with his lips. Heer resting her head back on his shoulder enjoyed his touch. Heer caressing his cheek with her palm 'snacks and tea are cold.' Prem 'no problem until you are hot.' Heer kissed his head and pushed him to have snacks 'I made this for you.' she put one parkora into his mouth. Prem biting 'its nice.' Prem took her hand 'made by my Heer with love. That is why?' Heer smiled and leaned on to his shoulder.

Days passed, a month later. Prem is working in his laptop. Heer is leaning on his shoulder reading a book. Prem mobile which is on the couch started ringing. Prem is about to get up but Heer stopped him 'you stay. I'll bring that for you.' Heer got up and took the mobile and handed to Prem. As he started talking to Max who is the one called, She saw his coat lying on the couch. She took it to hang it inside the closet. She turned after placing inside the closet. She felt dizzy.

She closed her eyes once and opened it. Unable to stand she stretched her hands for support. Prem who lifted his head from the laptop saw Heer struggling. He dropped the mobile and rushed to Heer to grab her in his hand before she hit the ground. He pat her cheek. 'Heer.' Heer 'Prem, I just felt dizzy that's all.' She tried to get up. But again she felt dizzy. He placed her on the bed.

Prem heard max calling from the other end in the phone. Prem took the phone. Max 'Prem, what happened?' Prem 'she fainted. I don't know what to do?' Max repeated 'fainted why?' hearing that word Max's wife signed him to give the phone to Heer. Max 'Linda wants to talk to Heer.' Prem confusingly kept the mobile to near to Heer's ear.

Linda asked few questions to Heer. Heer answered 'yes' no.. more than 20 days.. Today morning twice.' As she answered Linda's questions Heer's face started brighten up. Finally Linda asked her to give the mobile to Prem. Prem confusingly kept the mobile in his ears.

Linda 'Congrats Prem.' Prem 'for what?' Prem 'your wife is pregnant. Take her to doctor for check up.' Prem 'is it?' He looked at Heer who is blushing now. He moved closer to her. She cuddled into his hands. Sensing that Prem and Heer needs time to celebrate their happiness, Linda disconnected the line silently.

Prem kissed Heer cheeks and all over her face. 'congrats.' He kissed her forehead. She kissed his cheeks 'congrats. thanks Prem.' He is about to call his mother, Heer stopped him. 'we'll inform them after getting confirmation from doctor.' Prem agreed. He fixed appoint for her checkup.

Next morning, Heer's pregnancy confirmed. Prem and Heer are happy. They informed the happy news to their parents. Max and Linda visited them to share their happiness.

Next 8 months, Prem took care of Heer. when parents expressed their willingness to coming to NY, Prem refused fearing he may have to stay away from Heer. Linda too visited Heer now and then during day time. When Premeer find out Heer is carrying twins their joy doubled. Heer remembered the Pastor's blessing. Now she understood what he meant by double happiness.

Finally the day they waited for 9 months came. Prem holding their babies in his hand sat next to Heer. Heer leaned on to his shoulder. He kissed her forehead. Prem 'God is with us.' Heer smiled and kissed his cheek.

Their love crushed the curse.

~~END~~
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Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesomeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggg for next asap.

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Edited by sweta2005 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#7
Res..

Ok Unres.....

What a story yaar !! 👏
Too good ! 👏
I now totally believe that Love is greater than curse !
Very nice ! ⭐️ ⭐️
I loved it ! 😃
Do write more ! 😃
Edited by crystall - 14 years ago
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It was awesome ss selvy 👏 👏 👏. Good job, i ve only one thing to say that u r MASTER STORY TELLER of desh forum. I really enjoyed reading 😊. Thanks for pm. Continue writting.................
Edited by premheer19 - 14 years ago
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Loved it. Their love really crushed the curse
Edited by sinak - 14 years ago
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loveyly....do write more like this

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