FF ~~Falling for you~~ Part 8 pg38 Updated 2/10/11 - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago
Preview:
Flashback
Its Heer's First day at college and Prem Has a dare which causes premeer to hate each other
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thank u for the preview😃!!!

seems interesting!!

bt i thought u willl give an update😔!!!

preview dayna mai itna tyme laga...pata nahi update mai kitna lagay gaa😛!!! heheh


plz update soonnn!!!

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Yes im updating
i've written the first part
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ff...
its awesome ...
nice preview...
pls update soon...and pls add me to pm list to...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Pwincess...

writing in progress 😳



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Pwincess...

Preview:

Flashback
Its Heer's First day at college and Prem Has a dare which causes premeer to hate each other











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Posted: 13 years ago
hey sounds interesting!
pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oblivious, snehasharma, AMMI6, PremeerKash123, sankita, repunzell, sweet_gurl93, -Vishwa-, zigzagway_sadi, sadhz, -salma-, Heerbeauty, shivangi2092, .Suhasini., Pumpkinn, sweta2005, brainychild92, Noor_PremHeer, sweet scorpio, Xxcoolchick1xX,
for liking my work 😳
and for those who commented
Firstly I'm so sorry for updating after so long
and secondly this FF used to be called "Weird Weird Love" but I changed its name Thanks to Noor.😳
Thanks to everyone who kept on commenting to try and get me to update and ive thought about the future of this FF ans shortly i'm going to fast forward it abit to when they're adults.

Part 8

Heer entered her room, in the hostel and threw herself onto the bed. She was tired after her journey from the trip. While lying down she thought of Prem and remembered the time when they had first met.

Flashback

It was Heer's first day at college and she was really nervous. She was an exchange student and didn't know anyone. She didn't know if she would fit in with the others. She quietly walked in and waited for her class to start.

When the teacher arrived Heer went and sat down in a seat that she was told to sit at. The class started and she felt a tap on her shoulder,

"Excuse me but this is my seat that you're sitting in!" said a handsome young man, with attitude.

"Well, I've been told to sit here and..." Heer couldn't finish her sentence as he interrupted her "I don't care move!" He said in an irritated tone. Heer was new, but she wasn't a girl who would tolerate someone insulting her for no reason.

"Listen! I have no interest in sitting in your place whatsoever, I was told to sit here so I did, I don't know who you are or where you're from and just because I'm new here doesn't mean I'll let you treat me like that, Understand! And you can have your place; I don't want to sit here!"

Saying that, she left from there and sat somewhere else. Prem was fuming with anger and decided to teach her a lesson.

Meanwhile, a bubbly and talkative girl came a sat down beside Heer.

"Hey, I'm Meher. What's your name?"She asked while smiling.

"Hi" she replied, "I'm Heer".

"Are you new here?" Meher asked her.

"Yes, I am" Heer replied. "I just came here for my studies from India".

"Oh, great. I'm Indian too" replied Meher. "Do you want to be friends?"

"Yeah, sure" Heer replied. The girls continued talking and found out more about each other.

"Oh, yeah before I forget, there's a party today after college and you have to come." Meher said.

"But I don't have anything to wear and there's so much work that I have to catch up on and ..." Heer explained.

"No buts, you have to come with us and that's final. We'll go shopping after college and pick a dress for you."

"Us?" Heer asked.

"Yeah, my friends Prem and Preet will be coming to the party with us too." She explained.

Heer smiled and they both got on with their work.

After college was over, both Heer and Meher went shopping for clothes. They had a lot of fun while trying on clothes and had their own little fashion show with wearing hilarious outfits. They went into one of the stores and Heer's eyes just fixed one dress. It was red and more of a prom dress but she really liked it and so bought it. Then they ate something and headed off home to get ready for the evening.

Heer had a shower, did her hair and got dressed.

Heer's Dress

"Wow, Heer you look stunning" Meher said. "All the eyes are going to be on you today" she winked. Heer smiled and they both set off to go as Preet and Prem would be waiting for them.

The Party was in a Hall near the cliff with beautiful scenery and a big river at the bottom of the cliff. All eyes were on Heer as they arrived just as Meher had said. A cheerful young man came and greeted them. It was Preet. He introduced himself to Heer and complimented her as she smiled.

Just then Heer noticed the same man coming towards them that she had argued with in the morning. He was staring at her shamelessly with a grin on his face.

"Excuse me, What on Earth are you staring at?" she said sternly, taking him out of his dream world.

"Oi, you, why would I want to look at you for?" He retaliated.

"Whatever" Heer said while rolling her eyes.

"Quit arguing" Meher said interrupting them.

"Heer this is Prem and Prem this is Heer" she's explained to them.

"Ewww, she's Heer" Prem said making Puking faces and Heer stormed off.

Prem was thinking of what to do when an idea stuck him making him smirk.

He followed her outside where he saw that she was getting teased by some boys. He was fuming with anger and started beating them up. Screams and sounds of kicking and punching were the only things that could be heard.

Just as Prem turned around, He saw one of them cornering Heer near the edge of the cliff. He ran to try and save her but it was too late she had slipped and fell in the river.

She was drowning and he had to jump in to save her. He threw off his shirt and dived in. He swam and swam till he could see her and held her hand. He picked her up in his arms and bought her to the shore. She was shivering from the cold so he put his shirt around her and hugged her tightly.

Everyone came by that time and he along with Meher and Preet took her back to her hostel to get dry and take some rest.

She thanked Prem for saving her and apologised about before. It was the start of their friendship.

End of Flashback

Heer smiled and closed her eyes and fell asleep.

Edited by ...Pwincess... - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum...!
Fb was awsum...!! too cute...!!!
luvin it..!!!
thnx for d pm! :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: divya4salmanyk

awsum...!

Fb was awsum...!! too cute...!!!
luvin it..!!!
thnx for d pm! :-)

Thanks alot 😃

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