FF ~~Falling for you~~ Part 8 pg38 Updated 2/10/11

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#251

hi.. great to see u after so many days...

also happy coz it a

after all u updated... so really really really thank u...

so talking abt the update... it was so...enjoyable... so cute...

the update was fab... i loved the flash back...

it was like omg heer and prem fighting my goodness????

the best buddies use to fight...

that too on the first day itself...

and prem jumped for heer... wow...

so... what to say..

????

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the update was fab/... as so ever...

it was...

u truely deserve... a hatss off...

u truely rock...

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he was drowning and he had to jump in to save her. He threw off his shirt and dived in. He swam and swam till he could see her and held her hand. He picked her up in his arms and bought her to the shore. She was shivering from the cold so he put his shirt around her and hugged her tightly.

Everyone came by that time and he along with Meher and Preet took her back to her hostel to get dry and take some rest.

She thanked Prem for saving her and apologised about before. It was the start of their friendship.

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It was awesome...

thank you for a wonderful update... also thank you fr the pm...

Edited by vrushika - 14 years ago

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Scribbler M

@Scribbler184

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#252

Aww...the Flashback was too cute...Loved it.

That was really awesome.

I really loved it. So cute.

Update soon. 😃

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#253

superbbb👏!!!

loved the flashback...and since day first prem is protecting heer...awww😍!!!!

thank u for the PM

do update soon!!!

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kiran

@kiran_28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#254

soo sweet!
luv fb scenes
pls cont soon
thanx 4 adding me in ur PM list

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priya

@JugniPH

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#255

aww..the flashback is soo cute...

totally loved ur update...

pls gives us the next part soon...

thnx for the pm

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Rehma

@Miracle_leo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#256

Awesome update loved it to the core,thanks for pm.

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#257

😆Nabz intro paragraph on page 1 is very catchy 👍🏼

I'm new and caught up with previous chapters today. I liked them all!

Intro scene between friends is awesome👍🏼 Dialogues are really well written!

It was really funny Prem saying to Heer "you're not good at making friends...Dogs"😆

Prem Heer and Preet Meher being friends in same college is fun concept!!

Heer screaming "bogie" and ev.one following her was hilarious 😆 I could easily imagine that happening in history class (omg why history is always a bore 🤔)

Trip was really fun. Enjoyed all the scenes you've created😎

In the woods, teasing between friends, pranks, Prem helping Heer and Preet reassuring Meher , looked realistic.👍🏼

Teachers taking revenge because Heer & others messed up in class. was hilarious too😆 They even used one of the students to do that 😲

I loved surprise b'day party the best😛 Dialogues, scenes and all the characters you've included in that scene were really fun 👍🏼 It's really nice your friends took part in this FF!

I liked how you made it a surprise, everyone did their part very well! The cakes, gifts and awards are all fun!! Highlight of the party was Annwesha get to give PH -best couple award 😍😆

To end the trip, playing cricket match was nice

Heer is so kind, sharing her food always 😛

Flashback was well written too! Wow Prem & Heer fought on 1st day wow 😲😆

Meher is such a sweet heart, so helpful and friendly 😛

I loved Heer's dress you shared. It's really pretty 😎 Too bad she fell in the water & it got messed up.😔

Prem beating up teasing gang is filmy - I would think talking or arguing would make more sense in here though. However, it's nice this made Prem Heer closer and made them best friends from that day on wards!

If you're going to take leap - I'll miss the college masti between friends 😒 but it's fine however you like to write.

Hope you'll be interested to continue and complete the story.

Great job so far Nabz! All the best for next update 🤗

Choc. cup cakes, as good as muffins. Share with Prem in this story. if you like. 😆