FF ~~Falling for you~~ Part 8 pg38 Updated 2/10/11

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Heer's POV
Aaah! I screamed running down the road. What could I do when this ugly, gigantic and horrendous bulldog was chasing after me. Why was everyone just staring and not helping me. Oh i was getting so angry! it felt like my heart was about to fall out.i was running out of breath. Suddenly a young man or boy should i say grabbed hold of me and pulled me to the side. He had brown eyes, a muscular body and a grin on his face. Just then...
i know this is stupid but i wrote it before and it got deleted. Anyway its my first piece of writing what do you think?
part 1 pg. 2
part 2 pg.4
note pg.5
part 3 pg.8
part 4 pg.11
part 5 pg.20
part 6 pg. 24
part 7 pg.31
part 8 pg. 38
Edited by ...Pwincess... - 13 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice yaar
will it be a part of some sort of ff , os or ss
do write it
it seems to be funny
nice
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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting
do cont
all d best with it😃
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intresting!!! do continue..and Pm me!!
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cool 😊 please continue soon
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its really nice
make it as ss or ff
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thanx to ;
for pressing the like buttonand/or commenting
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Part 1

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaah! I screamed running down the road. What could I do when this ugly, gigantic and horrendous bulldog was chasing after me. Why was everyone just staring and not helping me. Oh i was getting so angry! it felt like my heart was about to fall out.i was running out of breath. Suddenly a young man or boy should i say grabbed hol of me and pulled me to the side. He had brown eyes, a muscular body and a grin on his face. he pulled me........i was sooo close to him that i could feel his breath on my face..i was just lost in his eyes...just then i broke the silence..as he was my best friend and i didnt want to be embarassed because of my stupid act of starring 😕..
(end of pov)
"prem whats this you pulled me so hard what if i got hurt?said Heer trying to hide her confused state!!
"Oh so first i save you from that mad dog and on top of that i have to listen to your talks..Heer tum bhi na.."said Prem trying to show his anger..
heer' awwwww prems getting angry
there was no reply from prem so heer continued....
"you know you look cute when your angry. ok fine thankyou. happy now?
yeah said Prem. "come, lets get something to eat to get your energy back and im starving.
they went to a restaurant and ordered some food.
Prem' you know youre not good at making friends...
heer looked at him
...you know with DOGS!!!
Heer' Hahaha, its not funny. i wasnt making friends, that dog was staring at me and barking and i got scared so i ran and it started to chase me.
Prem' well what were you doing here?
heer' thanx for reminding me, i came to shop for college i need to buy so much stuff, like clothes, books and bags etc. and now you have to come too.
prem' me? no way! you always take so long and i have to wait and comment on your clothes
heer' you have to come. plzzzzzzzzz. she said with a pupy dog face
prem melted and said fine. he knew he was going to regret it but he loved heers laugh. it was so cute and innocent.
after a decade they went home🥱 (well it felt like that to prem). not caring about what their future had in store for them....
A special thanx to Noor
and everyone who read this
bye
Edited by pwincess1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey awesome!!! Phabolous..
Welcome dear!!
just edit title of ur thread..write "update on page 2"!!
Edited by Noor_PremHeer - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome..............
prem is heers bst frnd...........loved it update soon

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