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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
So Prem Heer equation is improving !
And Heer is falling for Prem !
She listens him and even prepared special gift for him !
Seems very interesting !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Shot 1 loved it!!
Cant wait to read more!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
Loved the update!!
Please do pm me when u update!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Outstanding update…..👏

PHSR- nice combination of names & PH jodi to form soon…

Heer obeying Prems words –its magical power of souls….

Heer a talented girl made hand made crafts of her own choice …..

Best one she gifted to Prem & his response- really pathetic….

Gayatri nice mother & Prem obeying RS …..

Again Prem's face made Heer to melt & forgive him…..

Wonderful update….Continue the good work soon….😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
just read it..love it!!! continune soon and pm me... so prem and sanju are fixed or not?/im confused..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
nice update
premeer kab honge paas
waiting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
hey

great part, i wonder why prem still isnt intersted in heer...its very unusual lol
do continue soon though

Maheen xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shot 3

Diwali.

All three families decided to gather to celebrate. It is again planned to celebrate in Prem's house, as it is their turn. Rajveer and Sanjana again invited Heer for the function at home. Heer 'we never celebrate after my sister's death.' Rajveer and Sanjana mouth shut hearing this. They don't know how to convince Heer.
Rajveer is not ready to give up. Again he asked Prem's help. Prem got mad 'why Rajveer? All these years we celebrated alone. Why always asking me to beg her?' Rajveer 'Prem, please. you are my friend. can't you do this for your friend?' Prem looked at him 'you are irritating me Rajveer.' Rajveer pleaded. Prem 'okay.'
Prem went to Heer who is sitting with Sanjana in the canteen. Heer is busy taking notes while Sanjana is looking around with a bored face. Prem sat opposite to them. 'Sanjana, Rajveer is calling you. He needs your help.' Sanjana got irritated 'that guy really makes me mad.' She got up and left the place. Before leaving she didn't forget to give a look to Prem. Actually she doesn't want to leave Prem with Heer but she know he is there to convince her again for Rajveer.

Prem drinking water 'Heer, what are you doing?' Heer without looking up from her book. 'sleeping.' Prem choked the water. He coughed. Heer looked up with shock 'im sorry.' Prem signed him 'I'm okay.' He smiled 'I thought you are eating.' Heer laughed 'I'm writing that you know still you are asking me.' She continued writing. Prem 'I asked you what are you writing? Okay leave that.'

Heer 'I know you are here to invite me to the party.' Prem 'how do you know that?' Heer 'from the day 1 this is the one thing happening regularly. Rajveer and Sanjana request first then you will come to convince me.' Prem 'my job became easy now. You come. Okay.' Heer strictly 'no this time I'm not accepting your invitation.' Prem shocked 'why Heer?' Heer 'no Prem. Everytime your gatherings ends in some fight. I don't want that to happen this time.' Prem 'nothing like that. You come.' Heer shook her head 'no. sorry Prem.' Still she is busy writing.

Prem pulled her pen out of her hand. Heer without looking up 'Prem, please give me the pen.' Prem 'look at my face and say no.' Heer looked up his face. She is about to open her mouth to say 'no' but she stopped. His eyes made her say 'okay. I'm coming.' Prem 'thanks. Thanks Heer.' He jumped out of the chair happily. He ran to Rajveer and showed his thumbs up.

Balraj and Teji are not interested in celebrating Diwali. So they stayed at home. Teji wanted to pull Heer out of her nest. She believed moving out with her friends will give her some change of mind about her marriage . She encouraged her daughter to attend Diwali in Prem house. Teji 'beta, you go early and help his mother. You will also feel little relax.' Heer agreed.

Heer went to Prem house in the morning around 9. Gaya3 got surprised to see Heer. She lovingly invited her. Heer took blessings from Gaya3 and Lalit. Prem came down stairs talking in his mobile. 'I just got up.' He stopped when he saw Heer talking to his mother. Prem disconnected the line 'okay. Sanjana we'll meet in the evening.'

Prem rushed to Heer ' Hi, happy Diwali.' Heer smiled 'Happy Diwali Prem.' She opened a small box and handed him to take some snacks. Prem putting it in his mouth. 'not bad.' Heer face changed. Prem quickly. 'I just joked.' Heer smiled. Gaya3 smiled 'okay beta come and help me in pooja. I'm really worried now.' Prem putting his hand around her shoulder 'ma, why are you worried?' Gaya3 'I don't have a daughter to help in these matters.' Prem 'ma. I'm here to help you.' Gaya3 gently pushed him away 'who? You?' she laughed 'in the middle of work you will get one phone call and then you will spent hour in that.'

Gaya3 'Come Heer.' Prem curved his lips 'mother likes only girls because they help them in kitchen. So boring.' He went to his father.

Heer participated in pooja and she helped Gaya3 in cooking and decorating the house. She made some items. Sanjana entered the house and saw Gaya3 and Heer laughing in kitchen. Sanjana 'hi Heer. When did you came?' Heer 'morning. happy Diwali Sanjana.' Sanjana 'morning? From morning what are you doing here?' Gay3 'she helped me in cooking.' She pointed the decoration 'she did all those things.'

Sanjana is still confused 'why she came so early?' she is confused 'did Prem invited her to come early?' She went to Prem who is busy playing with his pet dog. 'Prem, why you invited her so early.' Prem 'I didn't. she came early.' He turned to Sanjana 'listen Sanjana. I invited her because you wanted her to be part of our celebration. But balming me like this is not fair.' Sanjana understood Heer must have on her own misunderstanding his invitation.

Sanjana and Rajveer family members joined them. While Ladies busy preparing arranging table for dinner, male members sat outside and enjoyed the day. Elders decided to have the dinner inside the house, youngsters decided to enjoy outside in the garden. They decided to burst crackers after the sun goes down. Spreading a sheet on the grass they sat keeping eatable in the middle they started chatting.

Prem took a pakora and ate. 'who made this?' he looked at Sanjana. She shrugged her shoulder 'no. I hate these kinds of oily stuff.' Rajveer 'must be Heer. Its nice Heer.' Prem looked at the pakora again 'not bad.' He smiled. Heer got angry. Rajveer got tensed. Prem 'I just joked Heer. Don't run away from here. These two will kill me.' He showed her fake pleading face. Heer smiled. Prem gave an angry look to Rajveer thinking 'because of you I'm begging and pleading to a girl.'

After a while, they started burst crackers. Sanjana started throwing the cracker in air for fun. Prem shouted 'Sanjana, don't do that.' But she didn't listen. Rajveer and Prem are on the one side having fun with crackers.

Suddenly a cracker fell on the table which had many more crackers. Crackers started firing in all directions. Heer went near the table to pick up one caught in the middle. She screamed in fear. She closed her eyes. Closing her ears with her hands she screamed.

Hearing the serial crakers sound, Prem and Rajveer started running away. Servants too started shouting in fear. Prem saw servant pointing one direction and shouting. He turned to the direction and saw Heer standing in the middle and screaming in fear. Sanjana and Rajveer in fear ran away. Prem looked around found the sheet on the grass. He pulled it and ran towards Heer. Covering her with the sheet he held her tight closer 'Heer. Don't worry.' Holding her tight with him came out of that place. Heer in fear clutched his shirt tightly. Her body shivered in fear.

Hearing the sound and scream elders came out. They saw Prem holding Heer tightly with and coming out of the burning crackers. Sanjana's mother rushed to her and hugged her. Rajveer mother ran to her son. Prem shouted angrily towards Sanjana 'I told you not to throw in the air. See what happened now? Lucky she didn't get hurt.' Gaya3 rushed to Heer and pulled her into her hug. She took her inside the house and made her sit in the couch. She gave water. Heer came to normal after sometime. Prem looked at her with worried eyes 'are you okay Heer?' Heer shook her hand 'thanks Prem.' Heer wanted to go home. Gaya3 decided to drop her. Gaya3 and Heer went out.

Prem gave a angry look to Sanjana and Rajveer. He went to his room. Sanjana got confused 'why he is getting angry for this silly matter?' Sanjana looked at Rajveer 'because of Heer every time our gatherings ends in fight.' Rajveer 'who told you to throw like that?' Sanjana 'I was having fun.' Rajveer 'why can't you think before you do anything?' Sanjana 'first you think. Every time she creates a problem and our party ended with a fight. After she entered into our gang we never had the chance leave home peacefully.'

Even after that incident Prem and Heer are not friends. Their relationship stayed in the same level until they finish their MBA.

The last day of their college came. All are busy saying bye to their friends. Prem, Sanjana and Rajveer are the happiest persons because they are not going to miss each other. Others are in tears. Heer with a smile said bye to everyone. She came to Rajveer 'all the best.' Rajveer wished her back. Heer hugged Sanjana 'thanks. Keep in touch.' Heer looked at Prem who is busy talking to his male class mates. Heer looked back at Sanjana 'I'm leaving. See you.' Sanjana too don't want Prem to meet her urged her to leave soon.

Sanjana released a breath when Heer without telling Prem moved away. 'Rajveer, college over. Now you can't inivte her for parties at our home.' Rajveer 'she will be with me always.' Prem came and pat Rajveer 'hi, I'm going to office. I'll catch you later.' Sanjana is happy that Prem didn't ask about Heer. After some of the incidents which made Prem scold Sanjana in support of Heer gave some confusion. But she is now clear that Prem don't have any attraction towards Heer. Prem left the college.

Sanjana 'Rajveer you told something about Heer.' Rajveer 'I told my mother that I wants to marry Heer.' Sanjana laughed 'again you have to ask Prem help for convincing her to marry you.' Rajveer shook his head 'no' Sanjana 'then?' Rajveer 'this time Lalit uncle and Aunty are helping me.' Sanajna teased 'any way you want Juneja's help.' Rajveer 'yes. but I think she will agree.' Sanjana 'till now she didn't show any sign of love towards you. let see.' Rajveer 'that is why I decided to mover through parents.' Sanjana and Rajveer went home.

Elders meet. Lalit and Gaya3 played a great role in convincing Heer to marry Rajveer. They took personal effort to convince her as she is totally against marriage after her sister's death. Finally Heer agreed to marry Rajveer.

Junejas, Ramphals, Khannas are in Mann house. It's a small house. All are enjoying the proposal. Prem didn't come their as he is gone abroad for a project.

Rajveer thanked Sanjana for helping to get Heer as his partner. 'thanks Sanjana, you helped me to get Heer as my life partner today.' Sanjana 'don't think I'll be helping in the future between you and Heer. I just tolerated her for you only.' Rajveer 'just for company I asked you to help but now she became my partner.' Sanjana 'hope you stay with her without others help.' Both laughed. Sanjana in a low voice 'Rajveer, I have a doubt. Do you love her? is it love at first sight?' Rajveer 'I can't say its love. I found her as good girl that's all.' Sanjana 'Rajveer, be careful. These kinds of girls are very tricky.' Rajveer confidently 'no way. I'll keep her under my control.'

Heer heard their last part of conversation. The image of her sister burning in fire came in front of her eyes. She angrily shouted 'so you were friendly with me just to move closer. It means you manipulated our friendship.' She started blaming Rajveer and Sanjana for cheating. Elders are confused.

Heer shouted hysterically. Understanding the situation, Lalit and Gaya3 tried to convince Heer but Heer didn't listen. 'he didn't love me. Just for company he wanted my friendship.' Rajveer in anger 'you mad girl don't you how to behave.' That gave end to everything. Heer shouted non stop.

Finally Priya Khanna 'this is girl is not fit to be my DIL.' She walked away shouting at Rajveer 'you didn't listen to me. Now see. These middle class people always behave like this.' Sanjana gave a cheap look to Heer walked out with her parents.

Gaya3 stood next Heer consoling crying Heer. Balraj and Teji got disappointed. They walked out sadly.

After that incident, Rajveer realised his fault and felt guilty for his behavior towards Heer. He understood about Heer and she was always against marriage after her sister's death. He tired to reach Heer again but his parents are against his wish now. With shattered dreams he went to abroad to take over his father's business there.

Sanjana doesn't care to talk to Heer after that. She never liked Heer. She was just acted only for Rajveer.

Prem never spoke to her so he didn't bother to keep in touch with her. So their link with Heer is completely broken. Sanjana started helping her father in some project which is partnered with Juneja's. Only Prem and Sanjana met regualry.

No one remembered Heer after that incident.

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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
me... nyc one...but sad update...
h8 rajveer n sanjana.....evn prem...how cn behave lyk dat...
Edited by shahrukh_divya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
awesomeeeee too good waitinggggg for next asap

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