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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
awesome first shot !!
very much unique..liked it..
thanks for pm.
Happy Friendship Day !! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
Awesome update !
Loved it !
The best part was at the end Prem remembering Heer !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
nice character sketch!
looking forward to read this SS!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
shot 1:
awesom!
the way you describe heer is too good!
i hope prem nd heer's love story starts soon!
first day in college was nice!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Rishi87

awesome

rajveer is dreaming too much 😆
Pointing her seat next to her 'this is going to be empty for next 3 years.'
MBA is 2 years u made a mistake dear

thanks for pointing the mistake
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks friends for your comments.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shot 2

Even though Heer is in their gang Prem never spoke any word to her. Prem either spent time in his mobile or chatting with Sanjana and Rajveer. Prem and Heer rarely looked at each other face. Sanjana is the one talking to Heer non stop that too for Rajveer to maintain relationship. Rajveer too slowly joined them later. Heer all through their conversations keep herself quiet and listen carefully. She spent her time either reading a book or studying in the library.

When Prem, Sanjana and Rajveer talk about sports, crime etc., Heer will simply sitting with them without participating in conversation. When Prem talks about business, she will show more interest in it. She never came out with any debate or discussion. Prem never cared about her presence. Rajveer tried to be friendly with her. Heer, either accepted his friendship nor ignored.

Their classmates started calling them as 'PHSR' instead of 'PSR' which they used to call before. Rajveer 'why can't you call us PSRH?' one friend 'it doesn't look nice.' Even though its just a name Sanjana felt Heer may come in between her and Prem relationship. Prem and Heer didn't care about that.

Whenever these 3 offered to drop her at home, Heer politely rejected and preferred to go by bus. All 3 are always confused about her behavior. She stayed with them but never tried to mingle with them. She never invited them to her home. She never spoke anything about her family.

Gaya3 always kept family away from business. She never allowed Lalit to invite his business friends or clients to family parties. Following this tradition Prem, Rajveer and Sanjana family used to celebrate their birthdays together. No others are invited other than their family members. All 3 celebrate their birthday on a common day to have as their birthdays falls on same month.

Rajveer invited Heer for their b'day celebration. Heer 'I'm not interested in parties. Please don't compel me.' Sanjana too tried on her behalf but no use. Heer told the same answer.
Rajveer approached Prem 'Prem, please for me you invite her.' Prem angrily 'Rajveer you are mad. Why can't you just leave her if she is not interested? You are running behind her as if she is Ms. Universe.' Rajveer shouted 'ha you and Sanjana will enjoy the party. You both don't even bother to talk to me. What I'll do alone. I need a partner to spend time. Share my thoughts.' Prem felt his explanation had meaning. Poor guy always stood alone because of Sanjana who always kept Prem with her. Prem 'where is she now?' Rajveer happily 'she is in the library.'
Prem went to library and saw her closing the books to leave. Prem sat nt to her. 'hai.' Heer got surprised to see Prem. Heer picking up the books 'hi.' Prem 'Heer, sit. I want to talk to you.' Heer sat down. Prem 'this Saturday evening in our house we, that is me, Sanjana and Rajveer are celebrating our birthday. I came to invite you.' Heer 'sorry Prem, I already told that to Sanjana and Rajveer.' Prem 'I know.' Heer 'I don't like parties Prem.' Prem 'it won't be like party. Its just an get together. Only our parents.' Heer 'my parents too won't like.' Prem cut in 'you come. Please for me.' He pleaded. His face made her 'okay. But just for one hour. Not more than that.' Prem 'okay. Its fine. Do you want me to pick you up.' Heer 'no. I'll manage.' Prem got up 'thanks Heer. Thank you very much.' He ran out.

Rajveer got excited. Sanjana got confused. 'Prem, we tried but she didn't agree. But how you.' Prem lifted his collar 'for that we should have some luck in our face.' he smiled proudly. Rajveer 'anyway. Thanks Prem.' Prem shook his head 'Rajveer,I don't think you will succeed in this process.' He gave a sad smile.

Heer went home. She is confused what to present to them. She looked through recently she painted things. She remembered a wax carving she did two days back. She took out that. She did some measuring. She pulled out two paintings. She rushed out to a shop. She selected a glass tumbler and a plastic lid for that. She bought some glass paper to cover the paintings.

She carefully melted the wax carving at the bottom and pasted on the plastic lid. Then she covered with the glass tumbler. She melts the edges with lighter and sealed. She went to a room and came out with a card board. She made one box. She kept the item inside and filled the box with some waste paper cutting of different color to keep the item safe. She wrapped the box with a white paper. She randomly wrote Happy birthday in different style. She did some paints on it look like a gift wrapper. She places label and wrote Prem's.

Then she took the other two paintings. She painted the edged with golden color to give frame appearance. She covered with thin glass sheet and placed in a box and did same as above. She named the one painting for Sanjana and other for Rajveer. Simply she created and packed the gift with the items she had in her house.

This time they are celebrating in Prem's house. Heer entered the house. She looked around. Room decorated with simple flowers. One side Prem, Sanjana and Rajveer are chatting. Otherside male members busy discussing something. Gaya3 who came out of kitchen with some items in her hand saw Heer standing in the entrance. She sensed she must be Heer. Sanjana rushed to Heer 'come Heer. We are waiting for you only.' Heer 'I'm sorry. I'm late.' Sanjana 'its okay.'

Sanjana took her in. first she intoruduced her parents then Rajveer's. Heer joining her hand said 'namastae Aunti Uncle.' Sanjana 'Prem's Dad and Mom.' Heer moved forward and touched their feet. Lalit and Gaya3 blessed her. Priya 'you didn't touch our feet.' Heer fearfully 'eventhough you both are wearing saree, you both looks modern. So I thought you won't like this tradition.' Anushia 'good that you didn't touch our feet.' She laughed 'we are not that much old.' She told in western style. Heer smiled. Lalit shook his head with a smile 'very intelligent.'

Gaya3 'okay come on children.' She led them near the cake. It's a huge cake. All Prem, Sanjana and Rajveer stood before the cake. Each one lit one candle. Then blew it together. Rest of the member clapped. They all sang birthday song while Prem, Sanjana and Rajveer cut the cake. Prem gave the first piece to his mother and father. Then he stuffed one big piece into Sanjana and Rajveer. Unable to eat that big cake, Sanjana got angry and started chasing him. both were running around.

Rajveer offered a small piece to Heer. She took it in her hand. Ladies distributed the cake and snacks. Prem, Sanjana and Rajveer exchanged their gifts. Different items in gold.

Heer took out one pack and handed to Rajveer. Rajveer is so happy that she gave the present first to her. He immediately opened it and got disappointed but 'nice Heer.' Prem looking at his disappointed face smiled in his heart 'poor boy.'

Then she took another one and handed to Sanjana. She too opened it and said a simple thanks with a smile. Prem again thought 'for Rajveer she too acts nicely.'

She pulled out the other one from the bag. Elders are egarly watching as it looked in different shape. Prem gave a fake smile. Prem turned around and saw the label 'Prem's' he shook his head 'nice.' Gaya3 'open it Prem.' Prem for his mother opened the wrapper and pulled out the item, wax carving of two birds sitting on the wood. He turned the item several direction and simply commented 'not bad. Thanks.' Even though his words hurt Heer, she kept quiet.

Prem pointing the gifts 'so you have business in your hand.' Heer got angry and moved out of the party. Prem ignored. Rajveer got angry 'Prem, you made her angry.' Prem 'I'm not bothered. For you I invited her. now my work is over.' Rajveer 'go and ask sorry.' Prem 'no way.' Sanjana 'Prem, we too didn't like the gift. Why you commented openly.' Prem 'its my habbit.' Rajveer 'you shouldn't have told like that.'

Prem 'look Rajveer, Sanjana is with us for more than 20 years. But she never created any misunderstanding between us. But Heer, she just came into our gang and she started creating drift between us. For her you are fighting with me.' Sanjana felt proud that Prem thinking very high about her.

Prem 'Rajveer, she is a moody type of girl. Unfit for you. Don't chase behind her. won't worth.' Rajveer just left the place in anger. Sanjana followed her. Elders got disappointed and dispersed. This is the first time their birthday party ended without any dance.

Prem went to his room ignoring them. Sanjana took her gifts and walked to her house. She dumped the painting in a store room. Rajveer kept the painting in his room but he didn't understand why she gave that to him.

Gaya3 saw Prem's gift in the living room. Prem took others gift but left this on the table. she took it in her hands. 'nice. Lalit see. How nicely she carved and packed it inside an ordinary glass tumbler. Really she is a wonderful artist. Even the paintings were also very good.' her eyes fell on the wrapper 'even this she made it with her hand'. she read 'Prem's' she smiled 'really she is a gifted girl.' Gaya3 took Prem's gift to him. he is already sleeping in his room. Gaya3 kept that in his study table and went down.

Next day, Prem went to college and saw Rajveer turning his face away when he sat next to him. Sanjana turned back 'Prem, you have to ask sorry to Heer.' Prem shook his head 'no way.' Rajveer pleaded him. Prem agreed.

Heer came to calss. Sanjana and Rajveer looked at Prem. Prem signed them to be quiet. After the classes are over, Heer went to library. Prem asked Sanjana and Rajveer to go home 't'row she'll be okay. You both go home.' Rajveer and Sanjana went home. Prem went to library 'Heer, I want to talk to you.' Heer picking up a book 'about what?' Prem 'come out I want to talk to you.' his face again made her agree.

Heer kept the book and followed Prem out of the library. He asked him to get into the car. Heer hesitated 'Prem, I have to go home in another 30 minutes.' Prem 'I promise. I'll take only 10 minutes.' Heer got into the car. Prem started the car and drove to a place. He parked the car.

Its looked very lonely and there is no traffic. Prem looked at Heer 'Heer, sorry. I didn't mean to hurt you.' Heer 'its okay Prem.' Prem not convinced 'Heer actually you have a wonderful talent. So just I gave you a suggestion. Already you are doing MBA and business in hand will help you. that is why? I gave a suggestion to you but my communitcation tone is wrong.' he spoke in a fast and funny manner which made Heer laugh. Prem smiled 'this this I wanted. You forgave me.' Heer controlling her laugh 'ha.' She shook her head. 'okay 'I'm leaving.' Prem 'I'll drop you.' Heer 'if you drop today you have to drop me daily. Is the deal okay.' Prem shook his head 'not possible.' Heer smiled 'I just joked.' She about to open the door. Prem 'Heer, I'll drop you in the main road. This road seems to be lonely.' Heer agreed. Prem dropped her near a bus stop. She got of the car 'bye Prem.' Prem 'bye.'

He drove away thinking 'Prem really you have some luck on your face. every time she beleives your words.' he smiled. He took his mobile to inform to Rajveer. Heer stood looking at the direction of his car until it disappeared from her sight.

It became regular for Prem to convince Heer everytime. Sanjana wondered how come Heer accepts when it comes from Prem. Rajveer is happy that Prem is understanding his feelings and helping him.

Ramphal's are not happy about Heer's presence in family functions. Even though Prem not seems to be clsoe with Heer, they thought Heer already attracted Gaya3. Khanna's understood their son is falling for Heer. Juneja's as usual showed their love to Heer as they are giving to Sanjana and Rajveer.

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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
me... wow heer meltin for prem....seems interestin...
nyc update...wa8in for prem to fall for heer...
Edited by shahrukh_divya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
awwww awesummina rush selvy big comments next time pukkaaa
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
nice...
so heer falling for prem.....nice...
i hope that prem also started feeling something for heer!
continue soon!

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