Short Story: A Special Day? Pg: 1,2,4,6 (Complete)

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haajoo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

u r not going to end the SS here

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haajoo

@haajoo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

sweety plsssssssssssssssssssss

dontttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

otherwise mein ne puraa page bhar dena hin plssssssssssssssssssss de

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

beautiful update.........

aw preet scnes were awsum.....

prem got his b'day gift frm heer as the bst gift....cho chweet...

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rishi

@Rishi87

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

awesome update

u are a very good writer naina. the five couple how they were enjoying there night with there respective partners was really a good one and how preet followed by his two brothers caught by there wives were fun mixed cuteness

obviously premeer romance was superb and little chahat is soooooooo cute in the last part with her father

such a nice ss ended so soon and now i want to know premeer is going to give birth to a baby girl or a boy or again its a twin😆

anyways keep up ur good work and loved ur ss alot.

Edited by Rishi87 - 15 years ago

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kmh2rockzz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

hey nyc part dear
really awesme
thnxxxxxxx 4 pm

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sinak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Awesome. Loved the women hitting their husbands.

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Swathy

@SwathyS

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

loved it yaar
it was short but sweet story
i read the whole update smiling like an idiot it brought back all the sweet ph scenes and preets pranks back to my mind

thank you for this ss

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

So it finally ended !
Update was Awesome !
The story was lovely !
Prem got his best birthday gift from his Heer !
Perfect ending !
Do write more !
Thnx for pm !

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...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

lovely update! loved the way you ended it....and heer's gift!

keep writing.....

thanks for the pm

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Jyothi N

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Hi naina it was short story but i wish it has not ended, really enjoyed reading..... Premeer romance was amazing, Jab hamara heer samne ajathi toh automatically prem naughty banjatha hai, i loved the coversations between preeth meher harman maya, loved their fight. Prem ko toh romance karne ke bahane chahiye and always get his way, i think heer give best gift of his life on his birthday, this was wonderful gift can any wife give to her husband, prem ka surprised birthday party show mai toh kabi nahi hua uski family uske liye surprise de isse achi bath aur kya hosakthi hai ? I am running short of time, naina ur amazing writer wt a perfect ending, thanks for pm,now looking forward to ur ss

Edited by premheer19 - 15 years ago

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