Dil Ko Choo Liya ...note pg 72!! - Page 5

Awesome update!!

lovely update!

Awesome update !
Loved it !
Now what has Heer seen on the floor !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

Hi Surya,

seriously us ki wajah se Premeer romance is cutted

hey surya,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,wow great update yaar.......feel sorry for DEV .......................uopdate soon.................

Surya - again realistic & marvellous update ……😊 ⭐️

whole update completed with pure & natural human emotions & feelings. each thought & behaviour of characters u portrayed in this update was natural & real which simply owns by common man in sme moments of their life on sme unknown times….😛

Well ,Devank – a man who suffers hidden pain for an untold love & u made the rude look till now he received from the readers turned to a much softened ,understading gaze …nicely sketched hauntings of Dev & plans he making to leave his past with her new life …Kiran nice BIL.who scanned in & out of Dev & his conclusion-its good that there smeone who read the broken heart…😭.ever lasting memories of ones life –cherishing chilhood & Dev got his pari at that age ….park scene were he comes to term up with unknown feel in his mind…& he can not always love his pari like earlier -its ur responsibility to find one for him soon….bcoz he have no confifidence on his heart or head….😕

Prem a man with all good qualities ❤️…how cunnigly he trapped Dev to the doctor & for friends rejoining how he teasing Dev…that whole dialogue of prem was superb –its real friends talk…😃

I loved this Heer ❤️…in seconds she realizes its not her Prem by hearing heart beats & heat from the lying body - very good wife…the moment she understoods its her sonu again in seconds she changed to true friend with all authority for pouting ,scolding & its too good they went back to their childhood days talks …..😊

Surya…I know Dev's view simply locks in Heer's figure & for little masala in his eyes…but the description u given there - where where his anticipated eyes stopped….his burning feelings….😡😡😡

Nice couple..their cute moments….Heer with her husband & her dear friend really enjoying the evng chit chat…& her question …me loved the saree u given for Heer …hmmm..really breath taking one for loving ends…..😉

Surya… place oneself in peak of mountain is not that painfull instead to stand in the top of needle…then why u given such heartbreaking moment to Dev…🤢 why u given that innocent open laugh to Heer? Why u given her that skipping from handrest to Prem's lap….. Premeer moments really appreciating their tiny bit of romance & melting in each others care & all…❤️ 😊 but the painfull eye which is souring …its really heartwrenchig…😭 first time my sympathy goes with Dev…& am not wish to use him Devank or devil from here onwards…

Song u taken nicely goes along with the situation 👍🏼 & u covered it with four days - wonderfull…⭐️. Dev's pain & Premeer in their self made heaven … superb…😊

Wht this Heer frozen in her position -is that drugs or smething personal relate to her 😕.

Waiting eagerly for next update -on third thread starting u given an outstanding update👏 ⭐️ 👏.

Hey di im here.......
first of all congrats on the start of the 3rd thread..... 🥳

here r my comments for the last few chapters....

CHAPTER 76
Awesome shocking update 😲
Prem's words to heer was sooo heart felt...
Loved the sweet premeer moment.
Veera's dilemma was very well expressed.....
Inder-asha scene was shocking but happy.......
Loved the way Inder proposed asha nd how asha supported him as always.....
Balraj-veera scenes wer very touching....
I was so relieved wen all the confusions wer cleared nd everything is back to normal now......huh
Awww veera blushing nd g3 lallu teasing them was very sweet.....
So finally balraj can live peacefully without the tension of losing veera.....
Superb update di ⭐️ 👍🏼

CHAPTER 77
Prem really knows to handle any kind of situation.....
Premeer-ash scene was nice....
The sweet little moment of heer-gauri was a lso nice....
Loved the way preet broke the gud news to heer...
The small gestures of prem gives a lot of strength to heer...
Veera-heer scene was really touching....
And the game scene of premeer was sweet 😳
The trio is really naughty nd never misses a chance to tease premeer.....
Prem's restlesness was really sweet...
Dev's situation nd suffering was very well written 👍🏼
Heer's feeling nd situation was so well expressed 👏
Any1 who reads it can actually feel it 😆
Prem is already ready with the naik 😉
Clever boy 😆
He is really a sweet heart 😃
Nd now comes THE SUHAAG RAAT..........
I really have no words to say di......
It was so pure nd the best suhaag raat i've ever read on IF
⭐️ 🤗
I loved it to the core especially the bacha part 😳 😳 😉
I really cant stop phreaming 😍 😍 😍
A big hug from me for this mind blowing amazing update
🤗 🤗 🤗
Thanks a lot for making the update upto the mark nd even better 😃 👏

CHAPTER 78
Mind blowing update di ⭐️ ⭐️
Wat a superb start di ❤️
Loved the naughty prem nd shy heer 😉 😳
Beautifully written 👏
I feel really bad for dev....
OMG he is using drugs 😲
Pls introduce sum girl opssite him nd get them together soon.......
Aww premeer scene was lovely....
Loved the way heer took care of prem....
Dev's uneasiness was vey well written....
Prem-dev scene was nice...
Im happy that dev is leaving though for few days...
Woooow prem is a gr8 SIL
He fully understands every1s feelings nd makes all of them happy ⭐️
This was another wonderful update 😛

CHAPTER 79
Aww loved the sweet little scen of veera nd the kids...
Preet-heer r really behaving like small kids 😆
Prem manaofying meher was sooo cute nd they share a gr8 bond...
Premeer scenes wer phabulous 😳 😳 😉
Woow meet topped their exams 😛
Heer is a typical caring wife,loved it.......
The game scenes wer nice....
So preet wants to take up neuroscience........
Preet's comment on meher was very sweet 😛
I cud imagine premeer in those outfits....
Diiiiii im shocked 😲
I want to smack that man whoever it is 😡
Anyways amazing shocking update 🤗

CHAPTER 80
Oh Adi looking for ash was soo sweet......
I liked Sneha's comment on Adi nd Ash's reply to it 😆
Arghhh Anushka is sooo irritating 😡 😡
Poor ash but gud that she pulled dev to dance...
Oh so that man is Anushka's friend 😡
Each nd every1s reaction to the intruder's statement was superbly written 👍🏼
I loved the way how prem responded to that man 😃
Omg prem nd anushak's marriage certificate copy 😲😲😡
How cud dev mistrust his best friend prem 😲
Gud that nihal took them inside so that the function wont get spoiled....
This anushka is really cheap....chi....
Heer slapped dev 😲 😲
But i actually loved the way heer replied to dev nd supported her prem 👍🏼 👏
Now prem will face every problem with confidence as heer's support nd trust is there with him 😃
The way all the confusions wer cleared was sooo amazing
👏 👍🏼
Prem consoling dev was touching...
Finally all the problems r over nd anuska nd her friend in jail....yipppeee........ 🥳
This was the most shocking update u've ever written....
Shock after shock....huh now im relieved 😉
But phantastic job di 🤗 🤗 🤗

CHAPTER 81
Prem consoling heer was very touching...
Each nd every line he said was soo relieving...
So today is pooja in premeer's new home...hmmm...
Loved the cute li'l premeer scene 😳
Veera nd g3 r really caring...
Glad that the pooja went well 😃
Oh so dev will be back only after 3 days.....
Till then premeer can enjoy 😉
Ab to prem will be very very naughty 😉 😳
Loved both the sharth prem gave heer 😉
Even i was a lil surprised wen i read the 2nd sharth 😆 😛
Loved the last line prem said 😳 😍 😉

CHAPTER 82
Whoa di wat an amzing update 👏
Prem really knows to act well 😉
Even i was shocked wen i read his reaction to heer....
So meet also joined hands with prem to give heer a surprise....
Well the date was really worth reading 😳 😳 😍
Haye a romantic husband like prem wud be every girls dream 😉 😆 😳
I have a feeling that its not prem nd its dev who saved heer from falling 😕
Mind blowing update di 😛 ⭐️ 🤗

CHAPTER 83
Oh so Kiran nd sia knows abt dev's love....
So my guess was ryt
Its dev nd not prem......
Loved the caring friend in prem 😃
The song sequence was very well written nd this is 1 of my fav songs 👍🏼
I think heer got a syringe or drugs wat dev uses while cleaning his room.....
Cant wait to read the next part.....

Nd i've finally commented for chapters 76-83........
Thanks a lot for all these lovely updates nd a big hug from me 🤗 🤗 🤗
Im soooo happy nd relieved that i've finally read all ur updates nd commented for them......huh....
Now tym to leave......
Bye di tc........

R u surprised?? I am commenting after reading 83 parts???😆😆😆

Well I am... Surya.. you are awesome!! I love the way you write.. I can see the thigs literally happening in front of me.. and you know what I hate the character Dev... no doubt he's a gud man.. but a dangling kabab mein haddi 🥱.. But I m surprised I really felt sad bout him in your Kaise Batayen sequence. I think he'll be doping himself more now !!! poor chap..
Gr8 update yaar! I loved it a lot 😃