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hey uve git a very good concept i must say....i fell for ure concept at the start...and u write well too..i feel very sad for prem,he looks like a very well bred boy whose been his mum's fav..he behaves such..i must say he developed into a lovely human all on his own...thats what i love in ure story...coz we rarely see it in real life...same goes with heer,well according to the 3rd chapt. she looks very well mannered..will have to wait more to judge her properly though......and the biggest part is i love the *love at first sight* concept on premeer...hope heer too falls for him soon...
the way u described kulraj's agony and regression of not giving the love to prem which he deserved while glancing at a photo phrame, was like soo moving,i nearly cried..well done..and loved the pic too...
plz add me to ure pm list..im really looking forward to ure updates..and plz dont delay i cant wait for long!!😉..and hope kulraj realizes it soon and forgives his son,i know that wont be easy...
hey uve git a very good concept i must say....i fell for ure concept at the start...and u write well too..i feel very sad for prem,he looks like a very well bred boy whose been his mum's fav..he behaves such..i must say he developed into a lovely human all on his own...thats what i love in ure story...coz we rarely see it in real life...same goes with heer,well according to the 3rd chapt. she looks very well mannered..will have to wait more to judge her properly though......and the biggest part is i love the *love at first sight* concept on premeer...hope heer too falls for him soon...
the way u described kulraj's agony and regression of not giving the love to prem which he deserved while glancing at a photo phrame, was like soo moving,i nearly cried..well done..and loved the pic too...
plz add me to ure pm list..im really looking forward to ure updates..and plz dont delay i cant wait for long!!😉..and hope kulraj realizes it soon and forgives his son,i know that wont be easy...
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