SS: The Rape Child - Note Feb 26 2012 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
hey !!!!
awesome updates !!!⭐️
i loved its starting !!!!👏
the prologue was horrible !!!😡
that rishabh issss a dog😡
part 1
awesome ⭐️
very emotional but told the whole story !!😭
the pain and relationships of prem 😭
nice , preet loves prem
prem is still the caring bacha
he doesnt want to give tears
he cried in silence
part 2
awesome update !!
loved preet's care for prem !!
and kiran is also very supporting !!
prem is soo adorable ......
he doesnt want his mother to be sad !!
well hope that he will get a job...........👍🏼
oweee..........
a girl entered !!!
that must be heer !!!😕
waiting !!
update soon
and pm me 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
awesme update......poor prem i felt sorry 4 him......kulraj is also right....but she shud understand that prem is innocent and nt like reshabh.......glad that reshab is no more.......oh that girl must be heer.....kiran and preet are soo sweet......thanks 4 pm......update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
awsome update..
Aww..Poor prem...😔
I guess the girl is heer...
Waiting for the next part.
Update soon...
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
I love part 2 and am really glad heer has come...
Just hope kulraj doesn't try getting heer-preet together since she isn't as fond of prem.
Please continue soon love the story and concept 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome and very nice updates... feeling really sad for prem. good that heer has entered, waiting to read about her.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Beautiful.. I feel bad for both Kulraj and Prem. I love Preet and Kiran's characters!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
kali....that was an awsome update.....
loved it very much.....
prem ...how understanding he is....loved theway how he proclaimed kiran' s properties as Preeth's...in his mind...
the dad -son relation is mindblowing.....
and for kulraj.....she is living in a hell with such a brutal memory engraved in mind....
and her fear for Prem .....may be base less but her past is doing the decisions for her ...
and its heer...😆...
continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey very nice story....i like it soooo mucchhhh...i must say kali....u r an awesome writer....wud u please pm me too when u update....it ll b gr8 for me....hehe...
Edited by Parth Garewal - 15 years ago
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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! I will update soon!
:: Kali ::
Edited by -Kali- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
So sorry guys for the super late update. But have been very busy lately. I hope I didn't disappoint you all. Hope this update makes you happy! Thanks a lot for being patient.
Part Three

After parking the car behind her mansion, Kulraj took the girl inside the house with the help of one of her servants. Knowing the seriousness of the situation, Kulraj decided to take the girl into Prem's room which was the only room downstairs. Kulraj carefully dragged the injured girl into Prem room and gently laid her on the bed.

After laying her down comfortably, Kulraj sat next to her and attended her deep wound on her forehead. The servant brought her the first aid kit and assisted Kulraj into clearing the scratches that had formed on her hands, elbows, and feet.

With clean alcohol wipes, Kulraj cleared all the blood stains that had formed on her forehead.

::

After placing a clean white bandage on the girl's forehead, Kulraj decided to just sit next to her until she woke up.

Kulraj sat by her side and gently stroked the girl's hair. She didn't know why, but she felt as if she knew this girl. As Kulraj watched the cute yet beautiful features on her face, she felt as if she remembered her childhood best friend, Teji, who was more then just a sister to her.

Smiling at the girl, she patted her forehead and paid a silent thank you to her. This girl had saved her life and almost sacrificed her own life. As she was admiring the sweet face, she noticed a shiny, heart-shaped locket hanging around her neck. Taking the locket in her fingers, Kulraj opened and saw two pictures inside the locket.

A shockwave hit her when she realized that she was right when she thought that this girl resembled Teji. This girl had to be none other then Heer, her Heer, the girl that she had been looking for all these years. After she heard about Teji's and her husband's tragic death in a severe car crash, Kulraj has been in search of this girl. When Kulraj found out about their death, her heart had gone out to Teji's one and only daughter Heer. Heer was only seven at the time.

For years she had tried to find out where she was but there was no hope. Kiran and Kulraj had left to stone behind in finding Heer, however they never found her. And now, fate had brought her right into her house. Kulraj looked at her innocent face and tears welled up in her eyes. This little girl had managed to grow up all on her own. And then, looking at her, she remembered Prem. Yes her Prem, who had also grown up all on his own.

Kulraj didn't know why, but as she looked at Heer, her heart instantly reminded her of Prem. Was it the pain that both of them had been through that had her thinking about them? She didn't know.

But she did know that now Heer was her responsibility. Heer now had a mother who would be there for her no matter what.

After placing a soft kiss of Heer's forehead, Kulraj decided to head to the kitchen and prepare something for her to eat.

::

The interview went out great for him. His manager was instantly impressed by his profile and his qualifications. But what impressed him most was Prem's attitude into giving his best to whatever he was held accountable for.

Prem was on cloud nine when he manager announced that he was chosen as the Chief Engineering officer for one of the city projects. After thanking his manager, Prem decided to go to the mandir and thank the God for appreciating his efforts.

On his way back home, Prem decided to pick up Preet from his college. Prem called him and asked informed him that he will be there in 15 minutes.

::

Preet came hustling out of the college entrance and jumped into his PB's car which Prem had gotten as a gift from Kiran on his graduation day.

Seeing a broad smile on his baby brother's face, Prem couldn't help but smile back at him.

"Kaise thi exam? You're gonna top right?" Prem asked his brother with a sweet smile.

"Top? You crazy bro. Mai thodi na Prem Juneja hu joh hare ek exam mai top karta tha!" Preet praised his brother.

"Lekin tu uska bhai toh hai. Aur tu mujhse kahi aage jayega. Main jaanta hu ke exam acche gaya hai. Verna yeh muskyrahat ke jag ek phoola hua cheraa dekhne ko milta." Prem patted Preet's cheek affectionately.

Preet smiled in response as he knew he did well in the exam.

"Toh phir meri treat?" Preet asked.

Knowing that this was going to pop up, Prem simply rolled his eyes and asked.

"Kya chahiye tujhe? Kuch bhi mangle." Prem said.

Preet thought for a while and then answered.

"Abhi kuch nahi chahiye. Jab chahiye gaa, tab batouga. For now, I will be happy with a cup from Starbucks." Preet smiled cheekily.

Prem smiled back and started his car.

"Then Starbucks it is." Prem said before he drove off.

::

As Prem was driving, Preet finally got the chance to ask him about his interview.

"Interview kaisa tha? Job milli?" On one side, Preet wanted to hear that he didn't get the job so that his Pappa can get him to join their own business. But then who was he kidding. His brother was a genius. Anyone would beg Prem to work for them.

"Haa. milgayi. I start from tomorrow itself." Prem said as his eyes concentrated on the road.

"Matlab abb jab aap ko naukri miljaye gi aur paise milenge, tab aap hum se dur chale joage?" Preet asked all depressed.

Prem noticed the sadness in his voice. With his right hand, he gently ruffled his hair and took a quick glance at Preet with a smile.

"Mai sirf uss ghar mai nahi rahunga. Yehi kahi paas me rahunga. Iska matlab yeh nahi ke mai tujse dur hunga. Jab chahe tu mujhse mil sakta hai. Isse Maa bhi khush hongi aur tu bhi." Prem said softly.

"Lekin mai aapko nahi jaane dunga!" Preet yelled.

"Preet..."Prem said calmly.

"Kya Preet? Aap meri baat kabhi nahi maante." Preet gave him an angry look.

Prem simply smiled knowing that what he had planned was best for each and every one of them.

Prem made up to Preet with his favorite coffee and both off them headed home with a mission in mind. Prem would work his best and provide for himself as soon as possible while Preet would do EVERYTHING to keep his brother with him.

::

They both returned home at around 6:30 in the evening after roaming around the town. Prem and Preet decided to freshen up before they both have a little snack. Both of them went to their individual rooms.

As Prem entered his room, which was a little dark as the lights weren't on and the only brightness in the room was because of the light rays of the setting sun softly hitting the walls in his room.

Prem took off his blazers and placed them into his closet. After loosening his tie and taking it off, Prem went into the bathroom to freshen up.

After washing his face with cold water, Prem came out of his room while wiping his face with a soft towel. He was wiping his face when his gaze fell on a thin figuring breathing silently on his bed. For a while, he felt as if he was imagining something. But the instant he saw the girl's face, his heart skipped a beat. At first sight, his heart felt something of her. For a girl who was a complete stranger to him.

He slowly approached his steps towards his bed and glanced over her sleeping figure. Dressed in a simple white salwar suit which hugged her figure sensually, he noticed that there was red blood stains printed into the fabric of her suit. Prem kneel down gently and noticed the white cloth bandage that was wrapped around her head and tiny bandages on her elbow and hand.

He continuously glanced at her face as his eyes refused to see anything other then her. Her lotus shaped eyes were securely closed. Her pink soft lips were sealed together. A slight frown on her face was reflecting the pain that she was feeling at the moment. Her creamy complexion was making his hands itch to touch her.

Seeing her hand make a move, he instantly got up and stood a little distance away. He watched her as she come into conscience and slowly drifted open her dusty brown eyes. The sparkle in her eyes seeped into him and in just one look, he had fallen for her. It was a heart felt attraction that he felt for her. Wait attraction wasn't the word. The word was love'yes love. He was in love with this girl at first sight. And seeing her in such a condition, it hurt him to not have to the strength to take her pain away from her.

::

Opening up her eyes, she saw that she was in someone's room. And the comfort and the atmosphere in the room made her feel safe and protected.

But her vision seemed to be slightly blurred. Her eyes gazed around the empty room. As she cruched up into a sitting position on the bed, she noticed a small photo frame resting on the side table.

Putting the pillow behind her back to give her support as she sat up, she felt her head throw out a paining ache. But she couldn't help it. She needed to know where she was and what she was doing in someone's room.

Her curiosity led her to pick up the photo frame and bring it face to face with herself.

::

He rushed out of the room before she noticed him there. He didn't want her to have any weird thoughts. For one, he had no idea who she was. Two, he could see that either Kiran or Kulraj had brought her home because of her condition but he didn't know why. And three, he had instantly fallen for her.

For the first time in his life, he had felt for himself that there was someone out there that he could fall in love with.

He was looking around for Kiran when he saw Kulraj come out of the kitchen, holding onto a bowl of hot soup. As he noticed her coming towards her room, he walked out of the way without having her noticed him.

::

Never in her life had she seen such gorgeous eyes. A sublimed mixture of chocolate brown and gold had her heart captured for a lifetime. Heer just couldn't take her eyes off of his picture in the frame.

His precisely cut, pitch black hair only doubled the innocence that she saw inside him. But his confident smile and glittering expression made her feel that the man in the picture was a strong man. Not just the physical strong that he was with the hard muscles that she could see in his upper half of his body in the picture, covered by the blue sherwani.

The strong man that she was taking about was strong enough to hold his emotions together. The smile that he had playing on his lips was a completely fake one. His eyes just gave everything away. No matter how wide his smile was and how glittering his eyes were, Heer knew that there was a pain that reflected off of his face.

Just a glance at his picture and she was drowning into his eyes. Who was he? And what was she doing in his room? These questions kept roaming around in her mind.

::

Hearing the slight knock at the door, Heer jerked out of her thoughts and quickly placed the frame back into its original position.

Then her gaze fell on a slight figure dressed in a simple blue saree. As she looked closely, she recognized the lady that she had grown up knowing as "Choti Maa."

::

Kulraj was all smiles as she looked at the Heer. And in an instance, both of them were in tears. Kulraj walked up to Heer, placed the bowl on the side table and instantly pulled the girl into a motherly hug.

Prem and tagged along with Preet to his room and now both of them were standing at the door, admiring the scene in front of them.

::

"Aap theek toh haina Choti Maa?" Heer asked softly and politely as they both broke out from the hug.

Kulraj caressed her cheek.

'Thank you so much beta. Aaj agar tu nahi hoti toh mera inta bada accident ho jaata." Kulraj said.

::

For a second his heart stopped. Accident? His mom was about to have an accident? And this girl saved his mom by sacrificing her own life?

Prem stared at the sweet girl. He felt his heart thank her for doing him such a huge favor. His Maa was his life. And this girl had saved his life. No wonder he had fallen for her at first sight.

There goes the update. I know it wasn't all that good but I tried to make it as good as possible for now. Next part will have a lot of Premeer scenes. So stay tuned. And leave me some awesome comments for this update please!😃
Edited by -Kali- - 15 years ago

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