SS: The Rape Child - Note Feb 26 2012

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Hey Guys! Okay so I know that I have like two updates pending for you guys. One for Yaadein and one for my OS. But I just got a really cool idea for this SS on Premeer and I didn't want to let go of it. I still have the entire plot figured out but I'm working on it. Here's just a glimpse of the Character Sketch.

The Rape Child
Kiran Juneja: An eminent CEO of Juneja Industries. Age: 50 yrs. He is a kind man who supports his wife and his children at all times. His only wish in life is to convince his wife into accepting Prem as her son.
Kulraj Juneja: She is Kiran's beautiful wife. Age: 48 yrs. Her life had been beyond beautiful when she got married to the love of her life, Kiran. However, one years into their marriage, Kiran had to go on a business trip out of town. That's when her whole world shattered into pieces. She became the victim of a devil who brutally raped her. The result of the rape was not just her broken life, but a rape child...Prem.
Prem Juneja: Age 24 yrs.Since the day he was born, he has been neglected by his very own mother. When he found out the reason behind his existence, his whole world turned upside down. As much as his Dad and his Preet loved him, his own mother despised the very sight of him.
Preet Juneja: Age 22 yrs. He loves his Prem Bhaiya the most in the entire world. That's why he acts bad and pulls pranks on everyone to look bad in front of his mom. This way, Kulraj would feel proud to know how good his PB is in front of him. He wanted his mom to neglect him and give her love to Prem. His brother deserved his mom's love at any cost.
Heer Mann: Age 22 yrs. An orphan who finds her very first friend in Prem. At first sight, she fell for him...she fell real hard for him. But certain circumstances ruin everything in her life. Being the daughter of Kulraj's best friend, she has always gotten the love of Kulraj. But being an independent girl, she has taken responsibility of her own survival.
Index
Page One: Character Sketch
Page Four: Prologue
Page Seven: Part One
Page Eleven: Part Two
Page Fifteen: Part Three
Page Nineteen: Part Four
Page Twenty-Three: Part Five
Page Twenty-Eight: Part Six
~Page Thirty-Five: Part Seven~
Okay so that's all for the Characters. For now, it a simple SS but depending on the responses and all, I might turn it into a FF. I will try to post the first part soon. Please let me know on what you think about the concept.
*This concept is not to hurt anyone's feelings. It's just a story that I made up knowing that there are so many women in this world who become victims of such disasters. The story is based on Premeer and the constant struggle that Prem has to go through for being a rape child.*
Please leave your comments and let me know if anything about this story bothers you as an individual. I will surely make the necessary amends. Thank You for reading!
p.s. I will try my best to update Yaadein as soon as possible. My OS might take some time.
p.s. Let me know if you want the pms.
~*~ Kali ~*~
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awesome pl
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hey nice concept !!!!!1⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ waiting for the update !!!!!!!!!
intresting !!!!!!!
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m there i thnk in the pm list dont u dare remove me m up to read next


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awesome concept
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really nice concept. update soon
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hey i like the concept.....
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hey...
that's an amazing... concept...
it's very interesting...
pls update the first part soon... :D
and do add me to ur pm list... :D
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awesome concept !!

luking forward to ur first update ..

thanks for ur pm.

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